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高考英语读后续写语篇练习一场误会:从误解到理解的旅程1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文I’vealwayspridedmyselfonbeingapoliteandwell-manneredgentleman,dislikinganybehaviorthatlacksproperpoliteness.However,inanunexpectedturnofevents,IfoundmyselfbecomingtheverypersonIhaveastrongdislikefor.IthappenedduringawaitforatrainattheSouthamptonstation.Oneafternoon,IwaswaitingforthetraintoLondon,andthestationwascrowdedwithtravelers.Withsometimetospare,Idecidedtogointoaconveniencestoretograbapackofpotatochips,whichIputintomybackpack.Withabitoftimebeforethetrain’sdeparture,Itookoutabook,foundaseat,andabsorbedmyselfinreading.4续写原文Afterawhile,Inoticedawomanbesidemecasuallyhelpingherselftomybagofchips,showingcompletedisrespect.Iwasshockedbyherrudeness.Withoutanyacknowledgmentorpermission,shehaddivedintomysnack.WhileIhadtheurgetoexpressmydissatisfaction,Iheldback.Islightlyshiftedthebaginherdirection,hopingshe’dtakeiteasy.Tomysurprise,thewomanremainedunbotheredbythesituationandwentonpullingoutachipfromthepack,givingmeasmile.HeractionsweresodaringthatIwasleftindisbelief.Atthatmoment,Istruggledwithconflictingemotions.Ononehand,Ifeltliketalkingtoherdirectlyaboutheractions,butontheother,Iresistedtheurge,maintainingmycalmness.5续写原文Thenthebroadcastannounced,“Passengers,pleaseboardthetrain.”Iabsentmindedly(茫然地)threwmybookintomybackpack,grabbedtheemptypotatochipwrapperthathadbeenshared,droppeditintotherubbishbin,andheadedstraightfortheticketgate.SoonIfoundmyseatonthetrain.Unexpectedly,thewoman’sseatwasdirectlyoppositemine.Feelingupset,Ireachedintomybackpackintendingtocontinuemyreadingsoastocalmmyselfdown.6段首句Paragraph1:Tomyastonishment,Idiscoveredmyunopenedbagofchipsrestingsafelyinside.Paragraph2:“Noworries,”thewomansaidwithasmile.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9一向以礼貌著称的“我”在南安普顿车站等车时,看到旁边一位女士未经允许吃“我”的薯片,虽不满但隐忍未发。上车后,“我”却发现自己的薯片完好无损,这才意识到误会了女士。此时面对女士,“我”会作何反应?女士又会如何回应?点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:Tomyastonishment,Idiscoveredmyunopenedbagofchipsrestingsafelyinside.令我震惊的是,我发现那袋未开封的薯片正安然无恙地躺在背包里。刹那间,我如遭雷击,意识到自己犯下了大错。我一直错怪了这位女士,还在心里对她的行为不满。我的脸瞬间涨得通红,满是羞愧。我缓缓抬起头,目光触及女士的那一刻,恨不得找个地缝钻进去。我深吸一口气,鼓足勇气说道:“实在太抱歉,我之前一直以为您吃的是我的薯片,是我误会您了。”说完,我局促不安地搓着手,不敢直视她的眼睛。11续写思路分析Para2:“Noworries,”thewomansaidwithasmile.“没关系的。”女士微笑着回应。她的眼神中没有一丝责怪,只有理解与包容。“我看到你看书那么入迷,想着分享薯片也无妨,本应该先问问你的。”她的这番话,让我更加无地自容。我连忙把那袋未开封的薯片递到她面前,真诚地说:“这次咱们一起吃吧,是我太小心眼了。”女士欣然接受,我们愉快地分享着薯片,还聊起了各自的旅程。这场误会不仅没有引发不愉快,反而让我们结识了彼此,让原本平淡的旅途增添了一份温暖与美好。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Tomyastonishment,Idiscoveredmyunopenedbagofchipsrestingsafelyinside.Inaninstant,astrongsenseofshockhitme,andIrealizedthatIhadmadeahugemistake.Ihadbeenwronglyblamingthisladyallalongandfeelingdissatisfiedwithheractionsinmyheart.Myfaceturnedredwithshameimmediately.Islowlyraisedmyhead,andwhenmyeyesmetthelady's,Ifeltextremelyembarrassed.Itookadeepbreathandsummonedupmycouragetosay,"I'mreallysorry.Ithoughtyouwereeatingmychipsbefore.Imisunderstoodyou."Afterthat,Irubbedmyhandsnervously,notdaringtolookherintheeye.14范文呈现"Noworries,"thewomansaidwithasmile.Therewasnoblameinhereyes,onlyunderstandingandtolerance."Isawyouweresoabsorbedinreading,andIthoughtsharingthechipswouldbeokay.Ishouldhaveaskedyoufirst,though."Herwordsmademefeelevenmoreashamed.Iquicklyhandedtheunopenedbagofchipstoherandsaidsincerely,"Let'ssharethemthistime.Iwastoonarrow-minded."Theladyaccepteditgladly.Wesharedthechipshappilyandchattedaboutourrespectivejourneys.Thismisunderstandingnotonlydidn'tcauseanyunpleasantnessbutalsobroughtuscloser,addingwarmthandbeautytotheotherwiseordinaryjourney.15升级版范文呈现Tomyutterastonishment,Iunearthedmyunopenedbagofchipsnestledsnuglywithinmybackpack.Awaveofshockcoursedthroughme,hittingmelikeaboltfromtheblue,astherealizationofmycolossalblunderdawned.Ihadunjustlyaccusedthiskind-heartedwoman,silentlyseethingwithdiscontentoverhersupposedactions.MycheeksflushedscarletwithshameasIslowlyliftedmygazetomeethers.Summoningeveryounceofcourage,Istammered,"I'mtrulysorry.Iwronglyassumedyouweremunchingonmychips.Itwasadreadfulmisunderstanding."Myhandsfidgetednervously,betrayingmydiscomfort,andIavertedmyeyes,unabletobeartheweightofhergaze.16升级版范文呈现"Noworries,"thewomanrepliedwithawarmsmile,hereyesradiatingnothingbutunderstandingandcompassion."Observingyourdeepimmersioninthebook,Ithoughtsharingasnackmightbeapleasantgesture.Alas,Ishouldhavesoughtyourpermissionfirst."Herwords,farfromstinging,onlydeepenedmysenseofremorse.Withouthesitation,Iprofferedtheunopenedbagofchips,statingearnestly,"Let'ssharethemnow.Iwasbeingoverlyhastyandjudgmental."Thewomangraciouslyaccepted,andwesoonfoundourselvesengagedinadelightfulconversation,sharingtalesof
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