2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：从+“山羊”+到河流：伊娃的游泳蜕变+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习从“山羊”到河流：伊娃的游泳蜕变1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Evaknewshe’dhavetoswimonthe“goat”again.Thethoughtmadeherwanttoturnherbicyclearoundandheadhome,butshedidn’t.ShekeptridingalongtherivertowardMrKovar’shouseforherswimminglesson.Eva’stownhadnopublicpools.Theuniversityhadapool,butitwasonlyforswimteams.Evahadseenthepoolwhenherbrothershadbeenontheschoolswimteam,andsheiseagertoswiminitsbluewater.Butnow,Evaandtheotherstudentshadtolearntoswimbylyingonapieceofwoodfixedonasawhorse(锯木架).Thesawhorselookedlikeagoat.AfterEvareachedMrKovar’shouse,hebeganhisclass.“TellmethebasicswimmingwayIhaveaughtyou!”MrKovarsaid.“Lieonmyfront;swingonearmovermyhead,andthentheotherarm.Meanwhile,kickthewater,”Evareplied.MrKovarsaid,“OK.Now,practice.Onehundredstrokes(划水)!”Evaclimbedontothesawhorseandlayonherstomachbuttherewasnowateraround.4续写原文MrKovarwalkedaroundEvaasshepracticedherstrokes.“Fingerstogether,”hesaidandtappedherhand.Nexthetappedherhead,saying,“Breatheonlywhenyouturnyourhead.”FindingMrKovaroftenlookedunsatisfied,Evabecamenervous.“Thirty-seven,thirty-eight,”MrKovarsaid,countingherstrokes.Weekafterweek,MrKovarcountedandtapped.Eachweek,Evatriedtobreakherrecordforfewesttaps.Oneday,MrKovarsaid,“You’rereadytoswiminthewater.”“Theuniversitypool?”Evaaskedhappily.MrKovarsaid,“Youcannotswimthereunlessyou’reonateam.Youcannotbeonateamunlessyoupassmyclass.IcannotpassyouuntilIseeyouswiminthewater.Youmustfirstswimintheriver.”“Isitsafe?”Evaasked.Theriverwascoldandmuddy.“It’ssafeifyou’reagoodswimmer,”saidMrKovar.ThenextdayEvaandhermothermetMrKovarattheriver.5段首句Paragraph1：WhenMrKovargavethesignal,Evarushedintothebrownwater.Paragraph2：SeeingEva’sexcellentswimming,MrKovaraskedhertoswimbacktothebank.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8伊娃所在的城镇没有公共泳池，大学泳池只对游泳队开放。她只能在科瓦尔先生家，借助像“山羊”的锯木架练习游泳。在科瓦尔先生的指导下，伊娃不断练习划水动作，每周都努力减少被纠正的次数。终于，科瓦尔先生认为她可以下水了，但不是在大学泳池，而是在冰冷泥泞的河里。伊娃带着对游泳的热爱和对未知水域的担忧，迎来了新的挑战。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：WhenMrKovargavethesignal,Evarushedintothebrownwater.当科瓦尔先生发出信号，伊娃一头扎进那浑浊的棕色河水中。刺骨的寒冷瞬间包裹住她的身体，让她忍不住打了个寒颤。但伊娃迅速调整状态，脑海中回想着科瓦尔先生的教导，拼尽全力开始游动。她紧紧并拢手指，双臂有节奏地摆动，按照老师说的，转头进行呼吸。河水的水流不断冲击着她，试图阻碍她前进，可伊娃没有丝毫退缩。她专注于每一次划水，在心里默默计数，就如同在“山羊”上练习时一样。10续写思路分析Para2：SeeingEva’sexcellentswimming,MrKovaraskedhertoswimbacktothebank.看到伊娃出色的游泳表现，科瓦尔先生让她游回岸边。伊娃熟练地调整方向，轻松地朝着岸边游去。当她终于踏上河岸时，全身湿漉漉的，头发上还挂着水珠。科瓦尔先生脸上露出了满意的笑容，对伊娃说道：“你做得很棒，完全掌握了游泳技巧。现在，你已经有资格参加游泳队的选拔了。”伊娃听后，兴奋得跳了起来，她的努力终于得到了回报。这次在河里的游泳经历，不仅让她学会了游泳，更让她变得勇敢和自信。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现WhenMrKovargavethesignal,Evarushedintothebrownwater.Thecoldnessoftheriverimmediatelyengulfedher,makinghershiverinvoluntarily.However,shequicklygatheredherselfandstartedswimmingwithgreatdetermination.SherememberedMrKovar'steachingsclearly:keepherfingerstogether,swingherarmsrhythmically,andturnherheadtobreathe.Therivercurrentpushedagainstherforcefully,butshedidn'tyield.Sheconcentratedoneachstroke,countingtheminhermindjustasshedidonthe"goat".Witheverymovement,shewasprovingherabilityandcourage.13范文呈现SeeingEva'sexcellentswimming,MrKovaraskedhertoswimbacktothebank.Evaskillfullychangedherdirectionandmadeherwaybackwithease.Whenshefinallysteppedontotheshore,herwholebodywaswetandwaterdropletswerehangingfromherhair.MrKovarsmiledwithsatisfactionandsaidtoEva,"You'vedoneanexcellentjob.You'vefullymasteredtheswimmingskills.Now,you'reeligibletotryoutfortheswimteam."Evajumpedwithexcitementuponhearingthis.Herhardworkhadfinallypaidoff.Thisexperienceofswimmingintherivernotonlytaughtherhowtoswimbutalsomadeherbraverandmoreconfident.14升级版范文呈现WhenMrKovargavethesignal,Evaplungedhead-firstintothemurkybrownwater.Awaveoffrigidcoldinstantlyenvelopedher,causinganinvoluntaryshudder.Yet,withremarkablecomposure,sheralliedherresolveandlaunchedintoadeterminedswim.EveryinstructionfromMrKovarechoedvividlyinhermind:fingerstightlytogether,armssweepinginarhythmicarc,andheadturningpreciselyforabreath.Therivercurrent,aformidableforce,pushedrelentlesslyagainsther,butsheremainedundeterred.Withlaser-likefocus,shecountedeachstroke,justasshehadonthe"goat",eachmovementatestamenttohergrowingprowessandunwaveringcourage.15升级版范文呈现ObservingEva'soutstandingswimmingdisplay,MrKovarsignaledforhertoreturntothebank.Withpracticedease,Evaadjustedhercourseandglidedbacktowardstheshore.Asshefinallysteppedontotheland,water-loggedandglisteningwithdroplets,MrKovar'sfacebrokeintoasatisfiedsmile."You'veexcelled,Eva,"hecommended."You'vetrulymasteredtheartofswimming.Now,you'reeligibletovieforaspotontheswimteam."Atthesewords,Eva'seyessparkledwithexcitement,andsheleapedwithjoy.