2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：岁月相伴：与邻居大卫的难忘情谊+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习岁月相伴：与邻居大卫的难忘情谊1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhenIwasaroundsixyearsold,wehadaneighbor,David,whowasrestoringanold40’sFordinhisgarage,andIwasacuriouskid,soIwouldgoacrossthestreetandvisithimasoftenasIcould.HewasthefirstpersontointroducemetoGo-Johandsoap,whichIthoughthadanunpleasantsmell.Heandhiswifeoccasionallyinvitedmetohavesupperwiththem,anditwastherethatIwouldlearnaboutburgerswithFrenchdressing.Eventually,hemovedaway.4续写原文Afewyearsago,IranintoDavidagain.Hewenttothesamerestauranttohavebreakfast.Davidretiredandstillhadthat1940Fordandalsoamid-fortiestruckwhichhewouldalwaysdrive,oneortheother,tobreakfast.DavidandIenjoyedmanyconversationsaboutlife,cars,andcarshows.Irememberjustafewyearsago,hewassittingatalocalpizzajointwithhisdaughter,andIsatnexttohimtohaveaconversation.Iasked,“Where’syourwife?”Towhichhisfacewentblank,andhisdaughtertoldmehermomhadpassedaway.Atthatmoment,myheartachedbecause,afterhavinglostmywife,Iknewthatpainalltoowell.Fromthenon,InoticedwhenDavidcametobreakfast,hehadhiswife’sdogwithhim.Yep,hehadthatdogwithhimalways.Evenatcarshows,theyhadaclosebondwhichIunderstood.5续写原文Ilookedforwardtocarshowseason.WhenIsawhimattheshows,italwaysputanemotionaltearinmyeyewatchinghimandthatdog.Iwantedtogetapictureofhimandhisdog,butIwasalwaysinahurryandkeptsayingIwouldgetitatthenextshow.However,withCOVID-19andallthefearout,carshowsweregettingcanceled,andDavidwasn’tatbreakfastmuchanymorebecausehedidn’twanttocatchit.6段首句Paragraph1：Aboutaweekago,whengoingtopickupmybreakfast,IaskedmywaitressTanya“HaveyouseenDavidlately?”Paragraph2：David’sdeathhasreallyremindedmetothemeaningoflife.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9“我”六岁左右时，邻居大卫在车库修复一辆40年代的福特汽车，“我”常去拜访他，还在他家接触到新事物。后来大卫搬走，几年前“我”又与他重逢，我们常聊生活、汽车和车展。大卫的妻子去世后，他总带着妻子的狗。因新冠疫情，车展取消，大卫也不常来吃早餐了。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Aboutaweekago,whengoingtopickupmybreakfast,IaskedmywaitressTanya“HaveyouseenDavidlately?”大约一周前，我去取早餐时，问服务员坦尼娅：“你最近见过大卫吗？”坦尼娅的神情瞬间变得凝重起来，她轻轻地叹了口气说：“大卫他……已经走了。”听到这句话，我感觉仿佛被一道晴天霹雳击中，整个人都僵在了原地。脑海中瞬间浮现出与大卫相处的点点滴滴，那些一起聊汽车的欢乐时光，那些在车展上的相遇，还有他带着妻子的狗时的温馨画面。我怎么也想不到，那个总是热情和我交谈的大卫，就这样突然离开了。我的心里空落落的，充满了无尽的惋惜和不舍。我后悔自己总是因为匆忙而没给大卫和他的狗拍张照片，那些本可以留下的美好回忆，如今却成了遗憾。11续写思路分析Para2：David’sdeathhasreallyremindedmetothemeaningoflife.大卫的去世让我深刻地反思生命的意义。他的一生，有热爱的汽车，有相濡以沫的妻子，即便妻子离去后，他也带着对她的爱坚强地生活。这让我明白，生命的长度或许有限，但我们可以用爱和热情去填充它的宽度。我们总以为时间还多，很多事可以以后再做，却不知生命如此脆弱和无常。从那以后，我更加珍惜身边的人，不再把事情拖延。我会主动和朋友联系，花更多时间陪伴家人。大卫虽然离开了，但他留给我的回忆和对生命的感悟，将永远影响着我。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Aboutaweekago,whengoingtopickupmybreakfast,IaskedmywaitressTanya“HaveyouseenDavidlately?”Tanya'sexpressionturnedsadimmediately.Shetookasoftbreathandsaid,"Davidhaspassedaway."Hearingthis,Iwaslikebeingstruckbylightning.Istoodthere,frozen.MemoriesofbeingwithDavidfloodedintomymind.Thehappytimeswetalkedaboutcars,themeetingsatcarshows,andthewarmsceneswhenhewaswithhiswife'sdog.Icouldn'tbelievethatDavid,whowasalwayssoenthusiastictotalkwithme,wasgone.Myheartwasfilledwithgreatregretandloss.IregrettedthatIalwaysfailedtotakeaphotoofDavidandhisdogbecauseofbeinginahurry.Thosepreciousmemoriesthatcouldhavebeenleftbehindnowbecameregrets.14范文呈现David'sdeathhasreallyremindedmetothemeaningoflife.Hislifewasfilledwithhisbelovedcarsandhiswife.Evenafterhiswifepassedaway,hestilllivedwiththeloveforher.Thismademeunderstandthatthelengthoflifemaybelimited,butwecanfillitswidthwithloveandpassion.Wealwaysthinkthereisplentyoftimeandmanythingscanbedonelater,butwedon'tknowthatlifeissofragileandunpredictable.Sincethen,Ihavecherishedthepeoplearoundmemoreandstoppedprocrastinating.Iwillactivelycontactmyfriendsandspendmoretimewithmyfamily.AlthoughDavidhasleft,thememoriesheleftmeandtheunderstandingoflifewillalwaysinfluenceme.15升级版范文呈现Aboutaweekago,whengoingtopickupmybreakfast,IaskedmywaitressTanya“HaveyouseenDavidlately?”Instantly,Tanya'scountenancecloudedoverwithsorrow.Withagentlesigh,shemurmured,"Davidhaspassedaway."Themomentthosewordsreachedmyears,Iwasasifstruckbyaboltoflightning.Istoodrootedtothespot,mymindawhirlwithmemoriesofDavid.Thejovialconversationsaboutcars,theencountersatcarshows,andtheheart-warmingmomentswhenhewasaccompaniedbyhiswife'sdogallcamefloodingback.ItwasalmostimpossibletofathomthatDavid,theever-enthusiasticconversationalist,wasnolongerwithus.Aprofoundsenseofregretandlosswelledupwithinme.IbitterlyregrettedmyconstanthastethathadpreventedmefromcapturingaphotoofDavidandhisdog.Thosepreciousmemoriesthatcouldhavebeenpreservedhadnowslippedthroughmyfingers,leavingbehindonlyavoidofremorse.16升级版范文呈现David'sdeathhastrulymademereflectdeeplyonthemeaningoflife.Hislifewasrichwithhispassionforcarsandtheloveofhiswife.Evenafterhiswife'spassing,hecarriedon,buoyedbythelovetheyhadshared.Thisexperiencehastaughtmethatwhilethespanofourlivesmaybefinite,itistheloveandpassionweinfuseintoitthatgiveitdepthandmeaning.Alltoooften,weassu