2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：水灯节的意外与希望：莱克的心愿之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习水灯节的意外与希望：莱克的心愿之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Themomentthebellrang,Lekgrabbedhisschoolbagandracedtowardshisdestination.Whenatlasthepushedopenthedoorofhisparents’restaurant,hecouldhardlycatchhisbreath.Heranintothekitchenandreachedforapileofbananaleavesonthecounter.Ifhehurried,hemighthavetimetomakehiskrathong(水灯)beforethecelebrationstarted.TonightwasLoyKrathong(水灯节),theFestivaloftheFloatingLanterns.Inhistown,peoplewouldsendoutlightedcandlesintinyboatsalongriversandcanalssothatthepastyear’sproblemscouldsailawaywiththemandbereplacedwithwishesforthenewyear.4续写原文Ashewrappedthebananaleavesaroundabamboobasetoformhisboat,Lekthoughtabouthissister,Katia.Shewastoosicktofloatakrathongontherivertonight.PerhapsawishonLoyKrathongwouldtakeawayherillness.Maybethenshewouldbeabletolaughthewaysheusedto.Hetucked(塞)fourredflowersinsidethebananaleavesandpokedthreesticksofincensebetweentheirblossoms.Inthemiddle,heplacedatall,whitecandle.Thisweek,Lekhadpracticedlaunchingakrathongthewayhisbrother,Freddid.Fredwasexperiencedinlaunchingkrathongsandoftenlaunchedkrathongsintotheriverforeachoftheircustomers.Lekhadbalancedstonesontheflatpieceofmetalatthebottomofalongpoleandloweredthemintotheriveruntiltheirparentshadscoldedhimforstandingtooclosetothewater’sedge.5续写原文Whennightfell,LekandFredmadetheirwayoutsidethroughthecrowdstandingunderthefullmoon.Fredstoodonthejetty(突堤),loweringakrathongintothewaterwithhispole.Thecandlelightdancedontheblackriverastheboatslowlyfollowedthecurrent.AlonglineofpeoplewaitedbehindFred.ItwouldtakeforeverbeforehecouldhelpLek!Lektookmatchesandlitthecandleonhistinyboat.Heloweredhiskrathongtowardthewater,stretchingtoreachitssurface.6段首句Paragraph1：Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedgeandthekrathongdroppedfromhishandintothedarkwater.Paragraph2：FredwalkedtowardsweepingLekwithakrathonginhishand.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9放学铃声一响，莱克就急忙奔向父母的餐厅，准备在水灯节制作水灯。水灯节时人们会在小船上点上蜡烛，让其顺流而下，带走过去一年的烦恼，许下新年愿望。莱克制作水灯是希望能为生病的妹妹祈福。夜幕降临，他和哥哥弗雷德来到河边，弗雷德熟练地用杆子将水灯放入河中。莱克也准备放自己的水灯，就在这时意外发生了。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedgeandthekrathongdroppedfromhishandintothedarkwater.突然，他感觉自己在岸边摇晃起来，水灯从手中掉进了黑暗的水里。莱克的心猛地一沉，整个人都僵在了原地。他的眼睛死死地盯着那迅速消失在黑暗中的水灯，双手下意识地向前伸着，仿佛这样就能把水灯抓回来。周围的喧闹声似乎瞬间消失了，他的耳边只有自己急促的呼吸声和砰砰砰的心跳声。想到妹妹充满期待的眼神，莱克的眼眶瞬间红了，泪水不受控制地滚落下来。他满心自责，为什么自己这么不小心，这么重要的水灯，承载着对妹妹康复的全部希望，就这么没了。他呆呆地站在那里，不知道该怎么办，周围人的目光让他觉得更加难受。11续写思路分析Para2：FredwalkedtowardsweepingLekwithakrathonginhishand.弗雷德手里拿着一个水灯，朝哭泣的莱克走来。他轻轻地拍了拍莱克的肩膀，温柔地说：“别伤心，莱克，这个水灯你拿去放，它会带着你的心愿一起漂走的。”莱克抬起头，泪眼朦胧地看着弗雷德，眼中满是感激。弗雷德微笑着鼓励他，然后和他一起走到河边。弗雷德小心地协助莱克，将新的水灯缓缓放入水中。水灯稳稳地漂浮在水面上，烛光随着水流摇曳闪烁。莱克双手合十，默默地许下心愿，希望妹妹能快点好起来，像以前一样快乐地玩耍。看着远去的水灯，莱克的心里重新燃起了希望，他相信妹妹一定会康复的。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedgeandthekrathongdroppedfromhishandintothedarkwater.Lek'sheartsankinstantlyandhefrozeinplace.Hiseyeswerefixedonthekrathongthatquicklydisappearedintothedarkness.Hishandsstretchedforwardsubconsciously,asifhecouldcatchitbackinthisway.Thenoisearoundhimseemedtodisappearinaninstant.Theonlysoundsinhisearswerehisrapidbreathingandthumpingheartbeat.Thinkingofhissister'sexpectanteyes,Lek'seyesinstantlyturnedredandtearsrolleddownuncontrollably.Hewasfilledwithself-blame.Whywashesocareless?Thisimportantkrathong,whichcarriedallhishopesforhissister'srecovery,wasgone.Hestoodthereblankly,notknowingwhattodo.Theeyesofthepeoplearoundmadehimfeelevenmoreuncomfortable.14范文呈现FredwalkedtowardsweepingLekwithakrathonginhishand.HegentlypattedLekontheshoulderandsaidsoftly,"Don'tbesad,Lek.Youcanusethiskrathongtomakeawish.Itwillcarryyourwishaway."LeklookedupatFredwithtear-filledeyes,fullofgratitude.Fredsmiledandencouragedhim.Thentheywalkedtotherivertogether.FredcarefullyhelpedLekputthenewkrathongintothewater.Thekrathongfloatedsteadilyonthewater,andthecandlelightflickeredwiththecurrent.Lekputhishandstogetherandsilentlymadeawish,hopingthathissisterwouldgetbettersoonandplayhappilyasbefore.Lookingattherecedingkrathong,hoperekindledinLek'sheart.Hebelievedthathissisterwouldsurelyrecover.15升级版范文呈现Suddenly,hefelthisbodyshakingontheedgeandthekrathongdroppedfromhishandintothedarkwater.Lek'sheartplummeted,andhewasrootedtothespot.Hiseyesweregluedtothekrathongthatvanishedintothegloomintheblinkofaneye.Hishandsshotforwardinstinctively,asifthatcouldretrievethepreciousvessel.Allthesurroundinghubbubseemedtofadeintooblivion;theonlyaudiblesoundswerehisraggedbreathsandthethunderouspoundingofhisheart.Theimageofhissister'sexpectanteyesflashedacrosshismind,andLek'seyeswelledupwithtearsthatstreameddownhischeeksunchecked.Overwhelmedwithself-reproach,hecursedhisownclumsiness.Howcouldhehavebeensocareless?Thiskrathong,thebearerofallhishopesforhissister'srecovery,wasnowlost.Hestoodthere,apictureofdesolation,notknowinghowtoreact,andthecuriousstaresofonlookersonlycompoundedhismisery.16升级版范文呈现FredwalkedtowardsweepingLekwithakrathonginhishand.HelaidagentlehandonLek'sshoulderandmurmured,"Don'tbedisheartened,Lek.Here'sanotherkrathongforyou.It'llcarryyourwishestothefar-offplaces."Leklookedup,hiseyesswimmingwithtears,but