2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：沙滩上的欢乐与挑战：沙堡的故事+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习沙滩上的欢乐与挑战：沙堡的故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Onceuponatime,inthemidstofafinesummer,TomandhisyoungerbrotherJackwentonanamazingtriptoapicturesquebeachwiththeirfamily.ExcitementfilledtheairasTomandJackeagerlypackedtheirbucketsandshovels(铲子),readytoexplorethesandywondersthatawaitedthem.Themomenttheyarrivedatthebeach,theywastednotimeandrusheddirectlytowardstheshoreline.Withthewindbrushinggentlyovertheircheeks,TomandJackdugtheirhandsintothesoftgrainsofsand,laughinghappilyastheyfeltgrainsofsandpassingthroughtheirfingers.Theirlaughterwasechoingalongthecoast.4续写原文Thenthetwolittlebrothersdecidedtobuildasplendidsandcastlethatwouldleaveeveryoneinawe.Withthesoundofseabirdssinginginthebackground,theybegantheirgrandproject.Sidebyside,theycuppedtheirhands,dugintothesoftbeach,andstartedbuildingtheirdreamcastle.Withgreatcareandprecision,theysculptedandshapedthesandwiththeirfingers,craftingeachtowerandwall.Theboyswerelostintheirwork,feelingthewarmthofthesandbeneaththeirfingers.Theyseemedtohearwhisperingtalesofthedistant,mysteriousocean.5续写原文Timeseemedtostandstillastheboyspouredtheirheartsintoeverydetailoftheirsandycreation.Witheachpassingmoment,thesandcastlegrewinbothsizeandbeautyanditbegantotakeshape.Together,theypatientlydecoratedtheirdreamcastlewithseashellsandtwigs,imaginingaworldofsoldiers,princesses,andmagicalcreatures.Seeingthecastlestandproudlybeforethem,thetwolittlebrothersbreathedoutasighofrelief.Theireyesshonewithexcitement.Theywerelikearchitectswhowereappreciatingtheirmasterpiecethatexpressedtheirextraordinaryimagination.6段首句Paragraph1：However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.Paragraph2：Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9在一个美好的夏日，汤姆和弟弟杰克随家人去美丽的海滩旅行。他们带着工具兴奋地奔向沙滩，在那里尽情玩沙，之后决定建造一座令人惊叹的沙堡。兄弟俩用心雕琢，用贝壳和树枝装饰，沙堡逐渐成型。他们看着自己的杰作满心欢喜。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.然而，他们还没反应过来，海水就开始上涨了。起初，海水只是轻柔地漫过他们的脚背，带来一丝清凉。可转眼间，海风呼啸起来，海浪也变得汹涌澎湃。一个个巨大的浪头接连不断地拍打过来，如同一头头凶猛的野兽，无情地冲击着他们精心搭建的沙堡。汤姆和杰克眼睁睁地看着那些他们花费了无数心血建造的精美塔楼和坚固城墙，在海浪的肆虐下迅速崩塌，化作一堆堆散落的沙子。他们心急如焚，赶忙用手去阻挡海水，试图保住沙堡，但海浪的力量太过强大，他们的努力显得如此微不足道。望着即将消失的沙堡，他们的眼中充满了失落和沮丧，心情也如同这被海浪搅乱的沙滩一般，乱糟糟的。11续写思路分析Para2：Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.杰克点头表示同意，他们决定重建沙堡。尽管刚才的失落还萦绕在心头，但兄弟俩骨子里的坚韧让他们很快就振作起来。他们对视一眼，从彼此的眼中看到了坚定的决心。于是，他们再次弯下腰，用手捧起细腻的沙子，全神贯注地开始堆砌。这一次，他们汲取了之前的教训，不仅更加小心翼翼地塑形，还特意把沙堡建在了离海水更远的地方。他们一边忙碌着，一边互相鼓励，分享着彼此对于新沙堡的创意和想法。在温暖的阳光照耀下，兄弟俩的身影在沙滩上显得格外专注，仿佛周围的一切都与他们无关，他们的心中只有那个即将再次诞生的梦想沙堡。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.Atfirst,theseawatergentlylappedovertheirfeet,bringingatouchofcoolness.Butintheblinkofaneye,theseabreezehowled,andthewavesturnedrough.Onehugewaveafteranothercrashedontotheshore,likefiercebeasts,mercilesslypoundingthesandcastletheyhadpainstakinglybuilt.TomandJackwatchedhelplesslyastheexquisitetowersandsolidwallstheyhadspentsomucheffortonquicklycrumbledintopilesofscatteredsand.Theyweresoanxiousthattheyhurriedlyusedtheirhandstoblocktheseawater,tryingtosavethesandcastle.However,thepowerofthewaveswastoostrong,andtheireffortswereinvain.Lookingatthedisappearingsandcastle,theireyeswerefilledwithlossandfrustration,andtheirmoodwasaschaoticasthebeachdisturbedbythewaves.14范文呈现Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.Althoughthepreviouslossstilllingeredintheirhearts,thetenacityinthetwobrothersquicklymadethemcheerup.Theylookedateachotherandsawfirmdeterminationineachother'seyes.Then,theybentdownagain,cuppedtheirhandstopickupthefinesand,andstartedbuildingwithfullconcentration.Thistime,theylearnedfromtheirpreviousexperience.Notonlydidtheyshapethesandmorecarefully,buttheyalsodeliberatelybuiltthesandcastlefartherawayfromtheseawater.Astheywerebusy,theyencouragedeachotherandsharedtheircreativeideasforthenewsandcastle.Underthewarmsunlight,thefiguresofthetwobrothersonthebeachwereextremelyfocused,asifeverythingaroundthemdidn'tmatter.Intheirhearts,therewasonlythedreamsandcastlethatwasabouttobebornagain.15升级版范文呈现However,justbeforetheyknewit,theseawaterbegantorise.Initially,theseawatercaressedtheirfeetgently,impartingasenseofcoolness.Yet,inaninstant,theseabreezeroared,andthewavesturnedtumultuous.Waveuponwavecrashedontotheshore,resemblingferociousbeasts,mercilesslyassaultingthesandcastletheyhadpainstakinglyconstructed.TomandJackwatchedindismayastheelaboratetowersandsturdywallstheyhadlaboredoversoassiduouslyrapidlycrumbledintoheapsofscatteredsand.Sodesperateweretheythattheyhastilyresortedtousingtheirhandstofendofftheencroachingseawater,inafutileattempttosalvagethesandcastle.Alas,themightofthewaveswasinsurmountable,renderingtheireffortsfruitless.Gazingatthevanishingsandcastle,theireyesweresuffusedwithdejectionanddisappointment,andtheirspiritswereasdisarrayedasthebeachbuffetedbythetempestuouswaves.16升级版范文呈现Jacknoddedhisheadinagreementandtheydeterminedtorebuildit.Despitethelingeringsenseofloss,theindomitablespiritwithinthetwobrothersquicklybuoyedthemup.Theyexchangedaglance,andineachother'seyes,theybeheldunwaveringresolve.Subsequently,theystoopedoncemore,scoopingupthefinesandwiththeirhands,andsetaboutrebuildingwithunwaveringconcentration.Thistime,they