2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习：海滩上的暖心生日：威廉的惊喜派对+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习海滩上的暖心生日：威廉的惊喜派对1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Astheafternoonsunbathedthelocalbeachwithitswarm,goldenrays,four-year-oldWilliamsatonthebeachwithamixofexpectationandconfusion.Hisdad,Steven,satbyhisside.TheywerewaitingforWilliam’sfriendstoarriveandcelebratehislong-awaitedbirthdayparty.William’swideeyes,filledwithhopeandhappiness,staredattheshoreline,lookingforfamiliarfaces.Hekeptaskinghisdadwhereeveryonewas,andStevenjusttoldhim“they’recomingsoon,”tryingtoeasehisson’sgrowingimpatience.Butthelongertheywaited,themorehopelessWilliambecame.Hewasextremelydisappointedwhenthetwoinvitedfamiliescalledandsaidtheycouldn’tmakeittothecelebrationbecauseofunexpectedsituations.4续写原文Stevenwatchedhisson,whohadbeeneagerlyexpectinghisspecialdayforwhatseemedlikeages.Thisyear,Williamhadbeenmoreawarethaneverofhisupcomingbirthday,askingthroughoutthemonthwhenhisbirthdaywas,eagerlyexpectingagoodtime.Feelingasenseofguiltforhisson’sdisappointment,Stevendecidedtoturntosocialmediaforhelp.HepostedalovelypictureofhimandWilliamonthebeach.Theirfaceswerefilledwithamixofhopeanddisappointment.Thesincerewordswiththepictureread,“Williamwouldlovesomefriendstoplaywithonthebeach.Tocelebratehisfourthbirthday,hehasHotWheels,sandtoys,dinosaurs,andwehavesomesnacksanddrinks.Anyandallwelcome.”5续写原文William’swishforcompanionshipproducedastrongresponsefromthelocalpeople.Theyfloodedthepostwithmessagesofsupport,birthdaywishes,andofferstojointhecelebration.TheyweredeterminedtomakeWilliam’sdayspecial.“Goingthere.Seeyousoon,”onewarm-heartedlocalcommentedonthepost,promisingtobringherfamilyalong.Themessagearousedthesamefeelingfrommanyothers,whowerequicktofollowsuit.6段首句Paragraph1：Soon,thebeachwasfilledwithscenesofjoy.Paragraph2：Afterhoursoflaughterandgames,thesunbegantoset.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9阳光明媚的午后，四岁的威廉和爸爸史蒂文在海滩等待朋友来参加生日派对，可邀请的家庭纷纷爽约，威廉满心失望。史蒂文为不让儿子难过，在社交媒体求助，称威廉渴望朋友陪伴过生日，还介绍了派对准备的玩具和零食。此帖引发当地人强烈回应，大家纷纷表示支持并愿意参加。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Soon,thebeachwasfilledwithscenesofjoy.很快，海滩上充满了欢乐的场景。一群小朋友如同欢快的小鸟，蹦蹦跳跳地朝着威廉跑来。他们手中捧着精心准备的小礼物，脸上绽放着灿烂而热情的笑容。威廉原本失落的眼睛瞬间瞪得大大的，眼神中满是惊喜，刚才的沮丧情绪一扫而空。孩子们迫不及待地围聚在一起，兴致勃勃地摆弄起沙滩玩具。他们比赛谁堆的沙堡更高更漂亮，小手沾满了沙子也毫不在意。大人们则在一旁亲切地交谈，分享着美味的零食和清凉的饮料。笑声、欢呼声交织在一起，在海滩上空回荡。威廉和小伙伴们还玩起了你追我赶的游戏，他们的身影在沙滩上穿梭，清脆的笑声如同美妙的音符，为这个特别的日子增添了无尽的欢乐。11续写思路分析Para2Afterhoursoflaughterandgames,thesunbegantoset.经过几个小时的欢笑和游戏，太阳开始西沉。原本湛蓝的天空渐渐被染成了橙红色，绚丽的晚霞倒映在平静的海面上，波光粼粼，美不胜收。威廉和小伙伴们围坐在沙滩上，中间摆放着一个精美的生日蛋糕，蜡烛被一一点燃，温暖的烛光映照着孩子们红扑扑的脸庞。大家一起为威廉唱起了生日歌，悠扬的歌声在海风中飘荡。威廉闭上眼睛，认真地许下了一个美好的愿望。随后，他鼓起腮帮子，用力吹灭了蜡烛。孩子们兴奋地欢呼起来，一起分享着美味的蛋糕。最后，天色渐晚，大家相互道别，威廉紧紧抱着收到的礼物，牵着爸爸的手，带着满满的快乐和珍贵的回忆，心满意足地回家了。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Soon,thebeachwasfilledwithscenesofjoy.AgroupofchildrencamerunningtowardsWilliam,jumpingandskippinglikelivelylittlebirds.Theyheldsmallgiftsintheirhands,withwarmandbrightsmilesontheirfaces.William'seyes,whichhadbeenfullofdisappointment,suddenlywidenedinsurprise,andallhispreviousfrustrationdisappeared.Thechildrenquicklygatheredaroundandeagerlyplayedwiththebeachtoys.Theycompetedtoseewhocouldbuildatallerandmorebeautifulsandcastle,notcaringthattheirlittlehandswerecoveredwithsand.Theadultschattedamicablybesidethem,sharingdelicioussnacksandcooldrinks.Laughterandcheersintertwinedandechoedoverthebeach.Williamandhislittlefriendsalsoplayedchasinggames.Theirfiguresshuttledonthebeach,andtheirclearlaughterwaslikebeautifulmusic,addingendlessjoytothisspecialday.14范文呈现Afterhoursoflaughterandgames,thesunbegantoset.Theoriginallyblueskywasgraduallydyedorange-red.Thegorgeoussunsetwasreflectedonthecalmseasurface,sparklingandextremelybeautiful.Williamandhislittlefriendssataroundonthebeach.Inthemiddlewasabeautifulbirthdaycake.Thecandleswerelitonebyone,andthewarmcandlelightshoneonthechildren'srosyfaces.EveryonesangthebirthdaysongforWilliamtogether,andthemelodioussongdriftedintheseabreeze.Williamclosedhiseyesandseriouslymadeawonderfulwish.Then,hepuffedouthischeeksandblewoutthecandleswithallhisstrength.Thechildrencheeredexcitedlyandsharedthedeliciouscaketogether.Finally,asitgotlate,everyonesaidgoodbyetoeachother.Williamhuggedthegiftshereceivedtightly,tookhisfather'shand,andwenthomecontentedly,withfullhappinessandpreciousmemories.15升级版范文呈现Soon,thebeachwasfilledwithscenesofjoy.AflockofchildrenboundedtowardsWilliam,skippingandleapinglikeexuberantlittlesparrows.Intheirhandswerecarefully-preparedsmallgifts,andtheirfaceswerewreathedinwarm,radiantsmiles.William'seyes,whichhadbeencloudedwithdisappointment,suddenlywidenedinastonishment,andalltracesofhispreviousdejectionvanishedinaninstant.Thechildrenclusteredaroundinnotime,eagerlyengagingwiththebeachtoys.Theyviedwithoneanothertobuildthetallestandmostmagnificentsandcastle,heedlessofthesandthatcakedtheirtinyhands.Theadults,meanwhile,conversedamicablynearby,sharingscrumptioussnacksandrefreshingbeverages.Laughterandcheersmeldedtogether,reverberatingacrossthebeach.Williamandhisplaymatesalsoengagedinrousingchasinggames.Theirformsflittedacrossthesand,andtheirclear-tonedlaughterresembledacharmingmelody,infusingthisspecialdaywithboundlessmerriment.16升级版范文呈现Afterhoursoflaughterandplay,thesunbeganitsdescent.Theonce-azureskywasgraduallysuffusedwithhuesoforangeandred.Theresplendentsunsetwasmirroredontheplacidseasurface,glisteningwithathousandlights,asightofindescribablebeauty.Williamandhislittlecompanionssatinacircleonthebeach.Atthecenterstoodalovelybirthdaycake,itscandlesbeinglitonebyone.Thewarmglowofthecandlesilluminatedthech