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写作专训ProjectUnit3KeepFit01佳作赏析02素材积累03写作演练目录
[经典例题](2024·乐山改编)学校正开展“我运动,我健康”主题周活动,旨在鼓励同学们踊跃参加体育锻炼,增强健康意识。为此,校报面向全校同学开展了“我最喜爱的体育运动”征文活动。请你写一篇英语短文向校报投稿,并在文中鼓励大家积极参加体育运动。内容包括:1.最喜爱乒乓球;2.强身健体,对眼睛有益;3.减少压力,放松心情;4.面对困难,绝不放弃。注意:1.词数60左右;2.包含所有提示要点,并适当发挥;3.文中不得出现真实姓名及学校。参考词汇:
stress压力;
reduce减少;
take
an
active
part
in积极参加[高分范文]My
favourite
sportI
like
sports.
I’ve
got
great
benefits
from
sports.
So
I’d
like
to
share
my
favourite
sport
here.①
My
favourite
sport
is
ping-pong.
It
brings
me
more
than
pleasure.
②
Playing
ping-pong
makes
me
strong
and
healthy.
It
is
especially
good
for
my
eyes.
③
It
also
helps
me
reduce
my
daily
stress
and
relax
myself.
So
I
never
give
up
when
I
face
difficulties.Sports
give
us
so
many
benefits.
I
hope
all
of
us
take
an
active
part
in
sports.
④
Let’s
enjoy
the
real
fun
that
sports
bring
us![名师点评]本文层次分明,要点齐全,内容全面,句子相对简洁,结构完整。①本句点明了主题,引起下文的描述,合乎情理。②动名词短语作主语,且使用了“make
+宾语+形容词(宾补)”结构,属于提分点。③使用副词also,并陈述了打乒乓球的另一益处,使短文衔接紧凑。④用祈使句作为结尾,拉进了与读者的距离。
[开头句]1.
How
often
do
you
play
ping-pong?2.
Keeping
fit
is
not
that
hard!3.
This
year,
my
goal
is
to
be
really
fit.4.
Health
is
important
in
life.[中间句]1.
The
air
is
clean,
and
I
can
hear
birds
singing.2.
I
jog
three
times
a
week
or
more.
I’m
always
full
of
energy
after
jogging.3.
But
my
favourite
way
of
keeping
fit
is
to
use
an
exercise
app
to
work
out.4.
Many
kinds
of
exercises
can
make
you
healthy.[结尾句]1.
We
have
fun
when
we
keep
fit
together.2.
We
work
as
a
team,
and
we
win
or
lose
as
a
team.3.
To
keep
fit,
let’s
exercise
often![名言警句]1.
Life
is
movement.
生命在于运动。2.
If
you
want
to
be
healthy,
exercise
every
day.若要身体健,天天来锻炼。3.
Sport
makes
a
man
healthy,
wise,
and
happy.运动使人健康、聪明、快乐。
[小试身手](2024·湖南改编)英语课上老师要求以“Sports
make
us
better”为话题展开三人一组的讨论。假定你是李华,将代表小组在全班发言,请根据以下信息写一篇60词左右的英文发言稿(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。内容包括:1.介绍你们各自喜欢的运动;2.谈谈运动对你们的影响。FrankI
like
bike
riding
best.
It
makes
me
...CindyMy
favourite
sport
is
volleyball.
I
often
play
it
with
my
friends
...Li
Hua...[思路点拨]本文属于发言稿,格式已给出,接下来应直接进入主题:描述讨论的结果,即用不同的句式描写组内成员最喜欢的运动及带来的益处。书写时用一般现在时,人称为第一和第三人称。[写作提纲][妙笔生花]Hello,
everyone.
I’m
Li
Hua
from
Group
One.
I
want
to
report
on
our
discussion.
Cindy’s
favourite
sport
is
volleyball.
She
often
plays
volleyball
with
her
friends.
By
playing
volleyball,
she
becomes
very
healthy.
Frank
loves
riding
a
bicycle
best.
By
riding
a
bicycle,
his
body
has
become
stronger
and
stronger.
I
like
playing
basketball.
If
I
have
time,
I
often
go
to
the
park
to
play
basketball
with
my
friends
at
weekends.
Playing
basketball
teaches
me
the
spirit
of
teamwork
and
never
giving
up.
I
want
to
report
on
our
discussion.
Cindy’s
favourite
sport
is
volleyball.
She
often
plays
volleyball
with
her
friends.
By
playing
volleyball,
she
becomes
very
healthy.
Frank
loves
riding
a
bicycle
best.
By
riding
a
bicycle,
his
body
has
become
stronger
and
stronger.
I
like
playing
basketball.
If
I
have
time,
I
often
go
to
the
park
to
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