2023-2024学年高中英语人教版各单元写作指导讲义

人教版必修第一册各单元写作指导

WeleUnit....................................................................................................................................1

Unit1TeenageLife...................................................................................................................4

Unit2TravellingAround...........................................................................................................8

Unit3SportsAndFitness.......................................................................................................12

Unit4NaturalDisasters..........................................................................................................15

Unit5LanguagesAroundTheWorld....................................................................................20

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学生简介

学生简介属于记叙文的一种，内容可以介绍自己，也可以介绍别人。在写这

类文章时，通常需要对人物进行由具体到抽象、由外貌特征到内在性格特征的描

写。在文章结尾通常要做一个简单的小结或概括。同时也要根据写作题目的具体

要求突出表达要点。

［基本框架］

1.开头(beginning)----介绍姓名、年龄、国籍、年级、学校等基本信息；

2.中间(body)——描述外貌、性格特征、最喜欢的科目、学习风格等；

3.结尾(ending)---介绍计划、梦想或对其评价等。

［常用词块］

warm-hearted热心肠的

active主动的，活跃的

able有才干的，能干的

attractive有魅力的

creative富7ff创造性的

confident有信心的

easy-going随和的，和善的

gentle有礼貌的

friendly友好的

hard-working勤劳的

helpful助人的，有益的

expressive善于表达的

outgoing外向的

curious好奇的

havebroadinterests兴趣广泛

bewilling/readytohelpothers乐于助人

beinterestedin对...感兴趣

bepopularwith受...欢迎

［常用语句］

1.外表

Heisverytallandhasabeard.

他个子很高，留了胡子。

Shelooksbeautifulandattractive.

她看上去美丽动人。

Myhistoryteacherisabeautifulwoman,withlonghairandbigeyes.

我的历史老师是一位美丽的女士，长着一双大眼睛，留着长发。

2.兴趣爱好

I'mcuriousabouteverything.

我对一切事物都很好奇。

Notonlydoesheshowinterestinscience,butalsohehasagiftformusic.

他不但对科学有兴趣，而且有音乐天赋。

Inmysparetime,Ireadalot.Iamalsocrazyaboutmusic.

在业余时间，我读很多书。我也非常喜欢音乐。

Beinganactiveyoungperson,Ilikesportsandoutdooractivities.

作为一个积极活跃的年轻人，我喜欢运动和户外活动。

3.梦想和理想

MydreamistostartmyownITpany.

我的梦想是成立自己的IT公司。

Iplantobeeaphysicistinthefuture.

我计划将来成为一名物理学家。

Iwishmydreamcanetrue.

我希望我的梦想成真。

Iamlookingforwardtolayingasolidfoundationformyfutureprofession,

whichisbasedonthreeyearsofhardstudyhere.

我期待在这里三年的努力学习能够为我的未来职业打好牢固的基础。

假如你是李华，进入新学校新班级，同学们互相还都不熟悉。英语课上，老

师让你们相互介绍，请你按下表提供的信息用英语写一篇自我介绍：

姓名李华年龄17性别男国籍中国

住址上海市黄浦路26号电子邮箱LH@163

1.性格外向，热心肠，喜欢交友；

其他2.爱好集邮、足球、钓鱼；

3.想成为一名工程师。

【学生习作】

,MynameisLiHua/1amahighschool

studentofseventeen.!liveatNo.26Huangpu

Road,Shanghai,ChinaandstudyinNo.21

［点评］1.①、②两句可合为

MiddleSchoolofShanghai.Ilikeplaying一句，用并列连词或同位语

footballandcollectingstampsinmysparetime

均可。

likemanyteenageboys.Besides,I'mquite

2.③句可变换词汇，同时应用

interestedinfishing.lthasbeenthreeyears

高级句式。

sinceIstartedlearningtofish.

3.④句中very可替换为more

Asanoutgoingboy,'I'mverygladto

thano

makenewfriendswithyou.I'makind-hearted

boy.Ifyouneedhelp,I'lldomybesttohelp

you.Iplantobeanengineerinthefuture.

【升格作文】

MynameisLiHua,ahighschoolstudentofseventeen.IlivealNo.26Huangpu

Road,Shanghai,ChinaandstudyinNo.21MiddleSchoolofShanghai.Inmonwith

manyteenageboys,Ilikeplayingfootballinmysparetime,andcollectingstampsis

alsomyfavorite.Besides,I'mquiteinterestedinfishing.Ithasbeenthreeyearssince

Istartedlearningtofish.

Asanoutgoingboy,I'mmorethangladtomakenewfriendswithyou.I'ma

kind-heartedboy.Ifyouneedhelp,I'lldomybesttohelpyou.Iplantobean

engineerinthefuture.

假如你是某校高一(6)班学生李华，学校英语社团(theEnglishsociety)现在要

招募新成员，你有意参加该社团。请用英文给社长Johnson写一封自荐信。

内容要点如下：

1.写信目的，愿意参加；

2.个人情况介绍(兴趣、英语情况、技能以及性格等)。

注意：1.词数80左右；

2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

［参考范文］

DearJohnson,

I'mLiHuafromClass6,Grade1.Fmgladtohearthatnewmembersarewanted

intheEnglishsociety.I'mwillingtojoinit.

I'minterestedinEnglishandhaveagoodknowledgeofit.HavinglearntEnglish

formorethantenyears,IcanmunicatewithothersinEnglishfluently.What'smore,

Ihavesomespecialskills,suchassingingsongs,tellingstoriesandmaking

speeches.Aboveall,I'measytogetalongwithandenjoyworkingwithothers.

I'mlookingforwardtobeingaccepted.

Yours,

LiHua

Unit1TeenageLife

建议信

本单元的写作项目属于应用体类别中的“建议信”。这种题目要求我们就有关

问题进行分析，并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。

［基本框架］

1.开头(beginning)-----开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点(stateyouridea)。

2.主体(body)——对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的

建议(reasonsandevidence)0

3.结尾(ending)----呼应开头，重申观点(restateyouropinion)0

［常用词块］

beworriedabout担心

followtheadvice遵从建议

overethedifficulty克服困难

［常用语句］

★精彩开头

1.I'msorryyouhavetroublein...

2.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvicewithyou.

3.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout...

4.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewson/concerning...

5.Youhaveaskedforsomeadviceconcerning...andIwilltrytogiveyoumy

suggestions.

★正文佳句

I.Ithinkitwouldbeagoodideaif...

2.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewiseto...

3.Isuggestthatyoushould...

4.Inmyopinion,you'dbetter...

5.Iadviseyouto...

6.IfIwereyou,Iwould...

7.Whynot...?/Whydon'tyou...?

8.Howabout...?Whatabout...?

★余味结尾

1.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/tipspractical/useful/helpful.

2.Iwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyouinmoredetail.

3.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.

假如你是李华，最近收到了你的美国朋友Jane的来信。她在信中说，她刚

进入高中，不能适应新的环境，不知如何去结交新朋友，因而情绪低落。请你给

她写一封回信，信的内容应包括如下要点：

1.向Jane表示问候和安慰。

2.针对她的问题提出以下建议：

(1)同学遇到麻烦时，要去帮助他们；

(2)放学后邀请同学一起参加活动；

(3)其他建议。

注意：1.词数80左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;

2.信的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

DearJane,

Iamreallysorrytohearthatyoufeelbadafterenteringhighsc

Yourstruly,

LiHua

【学生习作】

DearJane,

Iamreallysorrvtohearthatvoufeelbadafterenterin2hieh

school.I'dliketogiveyousomesuggestionsaboutit.

［点评］1.句可加

Infactyourclassmatesarealsonewstudentsandfacingthe

上定语从句构成复

sameproblem,soyoudon'thavetoworrytoomuchabout

合句。

it.'Youcandosomethingtochangethissituation.Firstly,

2.句可由并列句改

helpyourclassmateswhentheyareintrouble.2Then,tryto

成复合句。

invitesomeofyourclassmatestotakepartinsome

3.可升级该短语，

activitiestogetherafterschool,andthiswillhelpyou

understandeachotherbetter.Finally,inmyopinion,often

municatewithyourclassmatesaboutyourlifeandstudy.

Ibelieveyouwillmakemanynewfriendsandhaveahappy

schoollifethere.

Yourstruly,

LiHua

【升格作文】

DearJane,

Iamreallysorrytohearihalyoufeelbadafterenleringhighschool.I'dliketo

giveyousomesuggestionsaboutit.

Infactyourclassmatesarcalsonewstudentsandfacingthesameproblem,so

youdon'thavetoworrytoomuchaboutit.Thereisalsosomethingthatyoucandoto

changethissituation.Firstly,helpyourclassmateswhentheyareintrouble.Then.try

toinvitesomeofyourclassmatestotakepartinsomeactivitiestogetherafterschool,

whichwillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbcttcr.Finally»asfarasIamconcerned,

oftenmunicatewithyourclassmatesaboutyourlifeandstudy.

Ibelieveyouwillmakemanynewfriendsandhaveahappyschoollifethere.

Yourstruly,

LiHua

为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开设了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。

假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,收到一封署名为“Worried”的同学的求助信。该同

学在信中向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了

影响。请你用英文给该同学写一封回信，内容要点如下：

1.表示理解并给予安慰；

2.提出建议并说明理由。

注意：

I.词数8。左右：

2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；

3.信的开头和结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：lemper”.脾气；情绪

Hi“Worried”,

I'msorrytoknowthat

Yours,

Jamie

［参考范文］

Hi-Worried”,

I'msoirytoknowihatyou'rehavingsuchabadtimeal［hemoment.Thetruth

isthateveryonehasoneofthoseperiodswhenthingsseemtobegoingwrong,soyou

don'thavetoworrytoomuch.Theimportantthingistolearntocontrolyourtemper

sothatyoumaynotdoorsayanythingyou'llregret.Herearethreeusefultips.

First,talktosomeoneyoutrustabouthowyoufeel.Thisisagoodwaytolet

yourangeroutwithouthurtingothersoryourself.Second,gooutdoorsandplayteam

gameswithyourfriendsasphysicalexerciseisaneffectivewaytogetridofanger.

Third,remainoptimisticaboutyourfuture.Suchapositiveattitudetowardslifecan

behelpfulinliftingyourspirits.

Ihopeyou'llsoonfeelcalmerandcarryonasusual.

Yours,

Jamie

Unit2TravellingAround

旅行计划

本单元的写作项后属于说明文类别中的“说明旅行计划类''的书信，这种题目

要求我们针对旅行的地点、时间和出行方式等进行准确的描述，学生应该注意描

述的重点和顺序。在写作过程中力争做到：紧扣主题；句子结构完整；信息内容

准确；篇章结构连贯。

［基本框架］

（-）Para.l.——突出重点，开门见山，直接描述旅行的主要目的。

（二）Para.2.——介绍旅行中的其他计划和安排。

（三）Para.3.——交代出行方式及原因。

（四）Paa4.——总结此次旅行的心得体会。

［常用词块］

1.takeadvantageof利用

2.makeareservation预订

3.takeatour游览

4.setout/off出发

5.leavefor动身去某地

6.enjoythescenery欣赏风景

7.aseven-dayirip七日游

8.broadenone'shorizons开阔眼界

9.aroundthecorner即将来临

10.experienceadifferentculture体验不同的文化

［常用语句］

★精彩开头

1.I'mwritingtosharemytravelplanto...withyou.

2.Overtheholiday,myparentsandIareplanningtogo...

3.I'mwritingtotellyoumytravelplanto...

4.Youhaveaskedforsomeinformationabout/concerningmytravelto...

5.Weareplanningtomakeatripto...

★正文佳句

1.Wearelookingforwardto...

2.Weareanxioustodo...

3.ItisanamazingsightthatIhaveeverseen.

4.Wecan'thelpgoing...

5.Ihaveheardthat...

6.Thereisnodoubtthat...

7.We'llgotothedestinationbytrain/air/bus...

★余味结尾

i.Ithinkthat'sallfornow.

2.Sp.isreallyworthyourvisiting.Lookingforwardtoyouring.

3.I'llneverforgettheplace...

4.I'lltravelhereagainifIhavetimeinthefuture.

5.Ihopeyouwillhaveatripwithme...

6.Inaword,thetravelmakesme...

假定你是李华，受你的邀请，你的英国笔友Tony在即将来临的暑假要来你

所在城市大连游玩，请你根据下列提示信息拟一份旅游计划，以便朋友到来时做

到各方面有条不紊。

1.去机场接机；

2.游玩大连市区；

3.去海滩看海，等等。

要求：1.可以适当添加信息，以使行文连贯；

2.词数80左右。

【学生习作】

TravellingtoDalian

1Summerholidayising.Ihaveagoodplan

forit.MybestfriendTonywhoisfromBritainwill

spendtheholidaywithme.Tonyis17yearsoldand

［点评］1.①②句可合为

helikesChinaverymuch.Oneweekago,Iwrote

一句。

himaletterandinvitedhimtoetoDalianforthe

2③.句可改为含非谓语动

holiday.Tomyjoy,Tonyhasacceptedmyinvitation

词的句子。

andwillflytoDaliannextweek.Iwillgotothe

3.④⑤句可省略主语合为

airporttopickhimup.1ThenI'llshowhimaround

一句话。

thecity.We'llgotothebeachtowatchthesea

first.Atlast,we'llvisitsomeinterestingplaces.Tony

willliveinmyhouseduringtheholiday.Ihopewe'll

haveagoodtime.

【升格作文】

SummerholidayisingandIhaveagoodplanforit.MybestfriendTonywhois

fromBritainwillspendtheholidaywithme.Tonyis17yearsoldandhelikesChina

verymuch.Oneweekago,IwrotehimaletterinvitinghimtoetoDalianforthe

holiday.lbmyjoy,TonyhasacceptedmyinvitationandwillflytoDaliannextweek.I

willgototheairporttopickhimup.ThenI'llshowhimaroundthecityandgotothe

beachtowatchthesea.

Atlast,wellvisitsomeinterestingplaccs.Tonywillliveinmyhouseduringthe

holiday.Ihopewe'llhaveagoodtime.

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Ben寒假想来北京旅游，请你帮他制订一个

旅游计划。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封信。内容如下：

1.时长：15天；

2.活动：参观北京的一些知名旅游景点、欣赏中国国粹京剧、在北京胡同

和当地人一起欢度春节；

3.你的建议。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；

3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：京剧Pekingopera胡同hutong

DearBen,

I'mgladthatyouareingtoBeijingforyourwintervacation.I'dliketomakea

travelplanforyou.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

［参考范文］

DearBen,

I'mgladthatyouarcingtoBeijingforyourwintervacation.I'dliketomakea

travelplanforyou.

IthinkthebesttimetoexperienceChinesecustomsistheSpringFestival,soyou

canarrangeyourtripthen.IfyouwanttoknowhowweChinesecelebratetheSpring

Festival,you'dbetterlivewithalocalfamilyinBeijinghutong.Andyoucan'tmiss

Pekingopera,whichisanimportantpartofChineseculture.ApartfromtheChinese

culture,therearcmanyplacesofinterestinBeijingandyouwillfinditworthwhileto

visitthem,suchasthePalaceMuseum,theSummerPalaceandtheGreatWall.

Inaddition,IadviseyoutoinviteafriendwhocanspeakChinesefluentlyto

travelwithyou.

Bestwishes!

Yours,

LiHua

Unit3SportsAndFitness

个人健康手册

本单元的写作任务是写一篇健康报告手册。使用恰当的描绘性语言，准确地

表达出自己或他人在过去及现在的健康状况。

［基本框架］

1.开头(beginning)----讲述过去的健康状况

转折点

2.主体(body)—1通过某种方式后的改变

3.结尾(ending)----总结

［常用词块］

greenfood绿色食品

healthyfood/diet健康饮食

goodlivinghabits良好的生活习惯

over-weight肥胖的

builduponc*sbody强身健体

enoughsleep充足的睡眠

takeexercise进行运动

loseweight减肥

begoodfor/dogoodto对...有益处

goonadiet节食

forma...eatinghabit养成一个...的饮食习惯

beingood/poorhealth身体健康/不健康

［常用语句］

★精彩开头

I.Istartedtakingexercisetwoyearsagoandhavebeenaddictedtoit.

2.Untillastyear,Iwastryingtodo...

3.Ifallinthebadhabitofdoing...threeyearsago.

4.Unluckily1findIhavebeenaddictedto...

5.Ihavebeenannoyedaboutthequestionthat...

6.IwasanxiousthatIcouldnotconcentrateon...

★正文佳句

I.IwastakenofftheschoolfootballteambecauseIwasunfit.

2.Itwastimeforsb.todosth.

3.Iprefertodosth.ratherthando...

4.Iwoulddosth.insteadofdoingsth.

5.IfIfeelnervousorstressed,I'lldosomething...ratherthandosth.

6.Ratherthandosth.,Iwouldprefertodosth.

★余味结尾

1.Finally,Istoppeddoingsth....

2.AtlastIbecamebothhealthierandhappierbydoing...

3.IfIweakenanddosth.,Iwon'tgiveitup.

4.I'lltryagain,andIwillsucceedintheend.

5.IhopeIwillliveashealthyandhappyalifeastheydo.

6.I'mdeterminednottodothethinganylonger.

假定你是李华。过去，由于一些不健康的生活习惯，你的健康出现了问题。

之后，你改变了生活方式，现在又恢复了健康。请你根据此经历写一篇英语短文,

内容包括：

I.以前不健康的生活习惯：不吃早饭，经常熬夜，很少锻炼；

2.导致的问题：肥胖，易生病；

3.解决的办法：保持均衡饮食，积极锻炼，早睡早起；

4.给其他同学的建议：尽快改掉不健康的生活习惯，以保持身体健康。

注意：

1.词数80左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【学生习作】

Inthepast,Iformedsomeunhealthyliving

habits.Forexample,Ioftenskippedbreakfast.'Ioften

stayeduplateandtooklittlephysicalexercise.Asa

result,Ibecametoofatandoftenfellill.［点评11.①句前可加

Tokeepfit,Ideterminedtogetoutofthesebad衔接词。

habits.Firstly,Ibegantohaveabalanceddiet.Secondly,2.②句可转变为高级

Itookexerciseactivelyeveryday.Lastly,Ideveloped结构或句式。

thehabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly.®3.②句

Aftertwomonths,Irecovered.suggest用法错误。

Isuggestotherstudentstogetoutoftheir

unhealthylivinghabitsassoonaspossible,because

healthismorevaluablethananythingelse.

【升格作文】

Inthepast,Iformedsomeunhealthylivinghabits.Forexample,Ioftenskipped

breakfast.Besides,Ioftenstayeduplateandtooklittlephysicalexercise.Asa

result,Ibecametoofatandoftenfellill.

Tokeepfit,Ideterminedtogetoutofthesebadhabits.Firstly,Ibegantohavea

balanceddiet.Secondly,Itookexerciseactivelyeveryday.Lastly,Ideveloped

thehabitofgoingtobedearlyandgettingupearly.Withtwomonthspassing,I

recovered.

Isuggestotherstudentsgetoutoftheirunhealthylivinghabitsassoonas

possible,becausehealthismorevaluablethananythingelse.

假设你是Linda的同学，Linda现在正感到生活不快乐，不健康，有压力，

可乂不知道如何改变自己的生活方式，于是在班级的健康手册上向同学们寻求建

议。

下面是你为Linda提的几点建议，请按照以下内容写一份健康手册(80词左

右)：

1.你总是让自己像别人；

2.你担心的东西太多但是不愿意尝试改变；

3.你应该相信，正确的思维方式能够改变你的生活；

4.你要有足够的睡眠,至少8小时，这样才能精力充沛(energetic)、学习积

极(active)。多锻炼是非常重要的；

5.学习之余听听音乐可以减轻压力。尽可能地微笑，它会帮助你快乐、忘

记烦恼。

［参考范文］

Youwerenotfeelingwellinlifebecauseyouweretryingtolooklikeothers.You

worriedabouttoomanythingsbutyoudidn'ttrytochange.

Arightwayofthinkingcanmakeadifferencetoyourlife.Youshouldforma

healthylifestyle.Asayoungstudent,youneedtogetenoughsleepforatleast8hours

everydaysothatyouwillbeactiveandenergeticatschool.Doingmoreexerciseis

alsoveryimportant.ltcanreduceyourstresstolistentomusicsometimesafter

studying.Oftensmilingasoftenaspossiblecanhelpyoustayhappyandforgetyour

troubles.

Unit4NaturalDisasters

概要写作

概要写作，简言之就是对所读过的文章简要概括，写出文章的中心大意，也

可称之为摘要。所选材料体裁没有限制，以说明文、议论文和记叙文为主。所需

阅读的短文词数在350以内。

［写作流程］

第一步：归纳主旨大意（含段落大意）

概要写作的第一步便是阅读并抓取主题，进而提取主旨大意，即有关该主题

的主要内容或作者在该主题上的观点或主张。

阅读语篇时，根据文章不同的文体可采取以下方法：

圈出记叙文的六要素（who,when,where,what,how,why）,

记叙文

如果是夹叙夹议文，还要写出故事给读者带来的后示或寓意。

说明文找出文章要说明的对象、观点或建议。

议论文提取议论文的三要素（论点、论据、论证）。

第二步：提炼关键词

1.结合主旨大意，细读段落，找出每个段落的主旨句和关键词，区别段落

中哪些是mainideas,哪些是supportingideas,examples和additionalinformation□

通常是在相对重要的句子中提炼关键词。正确的关键词和关键句是概要写作最重

要的内容和依据。

2.消减事例，尽量减少实事并省略细节.

第三步：合并和改写

1.合并信息首先需要对信息进行分类、整合，找到信息之间的联系，再将

联系紧密的信息合并在一起。同一层级的主旨句不宜合并在一起，但如果联系紧

密，且没有支持的细节信息，可以考虑合并。

2.在核心信息的基础上进行语言表达形式的改写，对原文的语言表达形式

尽可能实现大规模的改变（改词、换句型等）。

第四步：核查成文

核查连贯性，优先考虑使用最短连接词（but,then,later,finally,besides,

thus,therefore,yet,however）；核查标点和语法；核查词数。

［常用语句］

1.表示文章的内容以及研究目的

Thispaperisaimedat/covers/mainlydealswith...

Thearticlefocusesonthetopicof...

Thisarticle/passagemainlytells(astory)about...

Thispassagemainlydealswith/discusses/explores...

Thisessaypresentsknowledgethat...

Thispaperprovides/givesanoverviewof...

Inthispassage(about...),theauthor...

Theauthorbegantheessay/passagebytelling/

presenting...

First/Firslly/Inthebeginning/Inthefirstpart,theauthorargues/explains/

mentions/states/pointsout(that)...

2.表示研究的结论

Theresultshowedthat...

Theauthorfoundthat...

Itwasconcludedthat...

Finally/Asaconclusion,theauthorconcludes/adds/strcsscsthat...

Finally,theauthorsummarizesthat...

3.表示观点或建议

Theauthorsuggests/considersthat...

Asfarastheauthorisconcerned,...

Intheauthor'sview,...

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Yourattitudeplaysabigpartinyoureverydaylifeandcaninfluencehowyour

lifemayturnoutinthefuture.Ifyouhaveagoodattitude,you'llbethekindofperson

whoworkshardandyou'lllivethekindoflifemanywouldadmire.Herearcsome

tipswhichcanhelpyouimproveyouraltitude.

Spendtimewiththosewhoshareyourpositiveauitude.Thisisamustifyou

wanttoimproveyourattitude.Thepeopleyousurroundyourselfwithmostofthe

timewillreflectuponyourlife.Soalwaysmakesurethatthesepeopleshareyour

positiveattitudeandliftyou.

Whenyoutakeaction,alwaystakestepstoactwithapurpose,sothatyour

actionsarcinlinewithyourvalues.Forexample,WaltDisney'smainpurposeisto

“makepeoplehappy”.Sonexttimeyouact,thinkofyourpurposeand

improveyourattitudewhiledoingso!

Beingpolitewhengivenhelporaskingforitisn'tahardthing,yetsooftenwe

forgetthesesimplewords,especiallywiththoseclosesttous.Ifyouwanttoimprove

yourattitude,use“please”and"thankyou,,everytimeyou'regiventheopportunity.

Ifyouwanttoimproveyourattitudetolifeandtothosearoundyou,stopparing

yourselfwithothers.It'shumantopareourliveswithothers',butwhenwedoittoo

oftenwecandrag（拖）ourselvesdown.Sospareyourselftheworryandstopparing,

onlyfocus（集中）onyourownlifeandyou'llbemuchhappierintheprocess.

Gratefulnessisoneofthemostpowerfulattitudesinyourlife.If*youwanta

betterlife,givethanksforallthatyouhaveeachandeveryday.Gradually,you'll

receivemorethingstobethankfulfor!

Sohow'syourattitudetoday?Doesitneedalittlefinetuning?

【学生习作】

Yourattitudecaninfluenceyourfuture.（要点［点评］

l）Ifyouwanttoimproveyourattitude,youmust1.要点1、2概括不够全面。

staywiththepersonswithapositiveattitudeand2.要点2可变换句式，避免

actwithapurpose.（要点2）Inaddition,youshould重复使用you

notpareyourselfwithothers.（要点3）Lastly,must/should...o

givingthanksforwhatyouhavewillimproveyour3.要点3可使用同义词替换

attitude.（要点4）givethanksfor。

【升格作文】

Yourattitude,whichmayinfluenceyourfuture,playsanimportantroleinyour

dailylife.（要，点；1）Toimproveyourattitude,youshouldbewiththepersonswitha

positiveattitudeandactwithanexactgoal.（要点2）Inaddition,itdoesn'tmakesense

topareyourselfwithothers.（要点3）Lastly,usingpolitewordslike“please”

and“thankyou”oftenandlearningtobegratefulforwhateveryouhavewill

contributetoimprovingyouraltilude.（要点4）

阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Gettingridofdirt,intheopinionofmostpeople,isagoodthing.However,there

isnothingfixedaboutattitudestodirt.

Intheearly16thcentury,peoplethoughtthatdirtontheskinwasameansto

blockoutdisease,asmedicalopinionhaditthatwashingoffdirtwithhotwatercould

openuptheskinandletillsin.Aparticulardangerwasthoughttolieinpublic

baths.By1538,theFrenchkinghadclosedthebathhousesinhiskingdom.Sodidthe

kingofEnglandin1546.ThusbeganalongtimewhentherichandthepoorinEurope

livedwithdirtinafriendlyway.HenryIV,KingofFrance,wasfamouslydirty.Upon

learningthatanoblemanhadtakenabath,thekingorderedthat,toavoidtheattackof

disease,thenoblemanshouldnotgoout.

Thoughthebeliefinthemerit（好处）ofdirtwaslong-lived,dirthasnolonger

beenregardedasaniceneighboreversincethe18thcentury.Scientificallyspeaking,

cleaningawaydirtisgoodtohealth.Cleanwatersupplyandhandwashingare

practicalmeansofpreventingdisease.Yet,itseemsthatstandardsofcleanlinesshave

movedbeyondsciencesinceWorldWarII.Advertisementsrepeatedlyselltheidea：

clothesneedtobewhiterthanwhite,clothseversofter,surfacestoshine.Hasthehate

fordirt,however,gonetoofar?

Attitudestodirtstilldifferhugelynowadays.Manyfirst-timeparentsnervously

trytowarntheirchildrenofftouchingdirt,whichmightberesponsiblefbrthespread

ofdisease.Onthecontrary,MaryRuebush,anAmericanimmunologist（免疫学家），

encourageschildrentoplayinthedirttobuildupastrongimmunesystem.Andthe

latter（后者）positionisgainingsomeground.

［参考范文］

Peoplehavemixedopinionstowardsdirtonourskin.（要点l）Foralongtimein

history,peopleofsomeEuropeancountries,suchasFrance,believedthatdirt

protectedpeoplefromgettingill.（要点2）However,peoplebegantochangetheir

attitudestodirtabout200yearsago.Peoplehavebeentoldthatwashingdirtoffour

bodycankeepushealthy.（要点3）.Somescientistsbelievethatexposuretosomedirt

mayhelpourimmunesystem,though.(要点4)

Unit5LanguagesAroundTheWorld

咨询博客

本单元的写作项目是写一则博客，咨询英语学习方面的问题。

［基本框架］

1.开头(beginning)提出问题

2.主体(body)询问具体问题

3.结尾(ending)表明迫切心情和感谢

［常用词块］

1.developone'sinterest培养某人的兴趣

2.improveone'sreadingability提高某人的阅读能力

3.formthe/ahabitofreadi