2021高考英语学案：短文改错练习(3)及答案解析

2021高考英语学案：短文改错练习（3）及答案解析【英语卷(解析)·2021届河南省顶级名校高三入学定位考试（202208）】AOnce,amangotonabustoNewYork.Becausehedidnotwanttopay,sohehidinthetoilet.Butapassengersawher.Shetappedthepersoninfrontofherontheshoulderandsay,“There’sabumintoilet.Tellthebusdriver.”Themessagewaspassingonfrompersontoperson.Butsomewherealongtheway,itwaschanged.Thebusdrivertoldthattherewasabombinthetoilet.Heimmediatestoppedthebusandtelephonedthepolice.Whenthepolicecame,theytoldthepassengerstogetoffthebusorstayfaraway.Thentheyclosedthehighway.Asaresult,atrafficjamof15milelongwassooncaused.Inthehelpofadog,thepolicesearchedfortwohours.Ofcoursetheyfoundnotomb.【答案】【学问点】E1短文改错记叙文【思路点拨】该题重点考查基础学问的应用，留意名词单复数，动词人称，形容词和副词的变化，时态、语态等基础学问。【答案解析】76.so去掉。because为从属连词，不与并联连词so连用，故去掉so。77.her→him前文叙述的aman，故此处用him。78.say→said并列的谓语动词应用同样的时态，此句前谓语动词用过去时，此处也应用过去时，故say改为said。79.toilet前加the此处toilet是双方都明白的，故用定冠词the修饰。80.passing→passed句中的主语message为pass的动作承受者，故passing改为passed。81.wastoldtell后跟双宾的及物动词，tellsbthat-clause，tell后无间接宾语，故用被动语态。82.immediate→immediately。副词修饰动词stopped，故immediate改为immediately。83.or→and。并列的不定式，表示确定含义用and连接。84.mile→miles15修饰mile，故应用复数形式。85.in→with。在某人的挂念之下withone’shelp或者withthehelpofsb。【英语卷(解析)·2021届河北省唐山市高三9月模拟考试（202209）WORD版】第一节短文改错（共10小题：每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。留意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词。2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。ItwasayearagowhenJoshuagotabikeforChristmas,butherodeiteveryday．Onemorning,hesuddenlyfoundthebikegone．Rantohisfrontyard,hesawamanloadingitintohiscar．Heshouted,butthemandriveoff．AsadevotedChristian,hetoldhisdadherealforgavethethief．What'smore,hewantedthethiefknowhewasforgiven．Sothenextday,hepostedthemessageonaposter-boardandputitinthefrontyard．"Tothepersonwhostolemybike:Youhurtmyfeeling．ButIamaChristianandIforgivehim!"Whenheleftforhomethenextmorning,attheendofthedriveway,thebikewasbackwithnewbrakes．【答案】【学问点】E1短文改错记叙文【文章综述】本文叙述一个和善的人用爱心感动盗贼的故事【答案解析】when–that考查强调句。句意：一年前由于圣诞节周华得了一辆自行车。强调一年前。but—and考查连词。句意：一年前由于圣诞节周华得了一辆自行，并且每天都骑着它。两个句子之间是并列关系。Ran—Running考查非谓语动词。句意：他跑到前院，看到一个男人正在把他的自行车装到他的车上。两个句子共用一个主语，he与run之间是主动关系。drive—drove考查动词的时态。句意：他叫喊但那个男人开车跑了。But连接的两个句子时态保持全都。real---really考查副词句意：作为一个虔诚的基督徒，他告知父亲他真的原谅了那个小偷。thethief后面加to考查动词用法。Wantsbtodo想让某人做某事。themessage—a考查冠词。句意：因此其次天，他前院的海报上写一个短信；由于第一次提到故用a.feeling---feelings考查名词。句意：你损害我的感情。Feelings表示感情。him—you考查代词。句意：但我是个基督徒，我原谅你。leftfor去掉for考查动词。句意：当他其次天早上离开家时。LeaveAforB离开A地去B地。短文改错

Iwasahighschoolstudentthen,fromlow-income76._______family.SoIhavetoworktosupportmyfamily.My 77.__________firstonejobwastocleantablesinasmallrestaurant. 78.__________Istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousabout 79.__________thenewworld.IworkedharderbecauseIwasafraidof 80.__________losingthejob.Atnight,Iwassometimesverytiredtodo 81.__________myhomework.AndIcametounderstandthatwasnot 82.__________easytoearnmoney,andknowledgecouldchange 83.__________mylife.SowhatIlearnedfromthejob,inahard 84.__________way,wasmuchmoreimportantaswhatIearned. 85.__________【参考答案】Iwasahighschoolstudentthen,from∧low-income 76.____a______family.SoIhavetoworktosupportmyfamily.My 77.___had____firstonejobwastocleantablesinasmallrestaurant. 78.____去掉one___Istillremembergoingthereearlyandfeltanxiousabout 79.____feeling______thenewworld.IworkedharderbecauseIwasafraidof 80.___hard_______losingthejob.Atnight,Iwassometimesverytiredtodo 81.____too______myhomework.AndIcametounderstandthat∧wasnot 82.____it______easytoearnmoney,and∧knowledgecouldchange 83.___that____mylife.SowhatIlearnedfromthejob,inahard 84.____√______way,wasmuchmoreimportantaswhatIearned. 85.___than____MycousinXiaoHongandIwentontriptomyuncle’s76._____________lastSunday.Wewereridingalongahillsidethensuddenly77._____________somebigstoneswererolleddownandknockedusoffourbikes.78._________XiaoHong’slegsgotserioushurtandsodidmine.We79._____________couldn’tmoveabit.Fortunately,Isawsomefarmersahead.80.____________Wavingourhand,wecriedforhelplikecrazy.Onhearing81.____________us,theyruntothespotasfastastheycould.Thanksto82___________theirhelp,wewereallsenttoanearbyhospitalandreceived83.____________medicaltreatmentintime.Althoughwedonotknowabouttheir84.________names,wefelltheylikeourdearbigbrothersandsisters.85._______【参考答案】76.on︿a77.then→when78were去掉79serious→seriously80.正确81.hand→hands82.run→ran83.all→both84.about去掉85.they︿are短文改错Oneday,Iwascookinginthekitchenas 76．_______________thetelephonerang.Iwenttoanswerimmediately. 77．_______________Shewasmyclosefriend,Lisa.Whenweweretalking 78．_______________onaphone,thefirealarmsounded.Iranbacktothe 79．_______________kitchen.Theroomfullofsmokeandbeefwasbadly 80．_______________burnt.Iquicklyturnedoffthegas,openingallthe 81．_______________windows,andthenwentoutofthehouse.Withmy 82．_______________surprise,twofireengineswereoutsidemyhouse.I 83．_______________wasratherworried.Itoldaboutthefirementhatit 84．_______________wasmycarelesscookingwhichcausedtheheavysmoke. 85．_______________【参考答案】76．as→When77．answer后加it78．She→It79．a→the80．room后加was81．opening→opened82．With→To83．√84．去掉about85．which→that此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出推断：如无错误，在答题卡该行右边横线上画一个勾（J）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列状况改正：此行多一个词：在答题卡短文上把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉，在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在答题卡短文的缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一个词：在答题卡短文错的词下划一横线，并在答题卡该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。留意：原行没有错的不要改。George,It'sbeenaweekafterweleftyourfamilyandwearenow76._______backhome.Thankyouverymuchforshowingthemaround77.______yourcityandprovidingusforthewonderfulmeals.After78._______wesaidgoodbyetoyou,wewenttoWashingtonwherewestayedforthreedays.Mybrotherwassomuchfond80._______ofthemuseumstherethathebeggedmyparentstostaying81．________anothercoupleofday.However,myfatherhadtoreturnto82.________workonMondaysoweflybacklastSaturdayafternoon.It83．________wasreallyaniceexperience.Ifyou'dliketomaketripto84._______ourcitysomeday,Iwillbebetterthanhappytobeyourguide.85._______Yours,Mike【参考答案】76.after---since77.them---us78.for---with79.正确80.去掉much81.staying---stay82.day----days83.fly---flew84.trip前a85.better----more(2021·甘肃省部分学校其次次联考)I'maseniorstudentfromChina,agingseventeen.WhilesurfingtheInternet,IhavefoundthatyourorganizationwillholdasummercampinSingapore.Withgreatlyinterest,I'dliketoapplyforthem.I'manoutgoinggirlwholikecommunicatingwithothers.IcouldspeakEnglishwell.MywrittenEnglishisexcellent,either.Iwishtojoinintheactivities.Foronething,I'mwillingtointroduceChinatootherstudentsfromalloverworld;foranother,Iexpecttolearnfrommoreaboutothercountries.Inaddition,I'dliketomakefriend.ThechanceissopreciousasI'mreallylookingforwardtoyourapproval.答案：I'maseniorstudentfromChina,eq\o(aging,\s\do14(aged))seventeen.WhilesurfingtheInternet,IhavefoundthatyourorganizationwillholdasummercampinSingapore.Witheq\o(greatly,\s\do14(great))interest,I'dliketoapplyforeq\o(them,\s\do14(it)).I'manoutgoinggirlwhoeq\o(like,\s\do14(likes))communicatingwithothers.Ieq\o(could,\s\do14(can))speakEnglishwell.MywrittenEnglishisexcellent,eq\o(either,\s\do14(too)).Iwishtojoinintheactivities.Foronething,I'mwillingtointroduceChinatootherstudentsfromallovereq\o(∧,\s\do14(the))world;foranother,Iexpecttolearneq\o(from,＼)moreaboutothercountries.Inaddition,I'dliketomakeeq\o(friend,\s\do14(friends)).Thechanceissopreciouseq\o(as,\s\do14(that))I'mreallylookingforwardtoyourapproval. IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinTianjinyet.Iwasthen 76.inaschoolforstudentsfromTibet.Aswewerealllefthome 77.atearlyage,wemetlotsofproblemsinourdailylife.We78.hadtodothewashing,cleaningandshoppingbyus.However, 79.weseldomfeltlonelyorhelplessly.Weenjoyedourhappylife. 80. Atweekends,wewouldplaybasketball,swimminginthepool 81.orgoforapicnic.Wewerelivinginabigfamily.Wetreat 82.eachotherasbrothersandsisters.Ifanyoneofushadany 83.difficultyinourlifeandstudy,theotherwouldhelphimout. 84. Ithasbeenfiveyearswhenwegraduated,butthosememories 85.areassweetaseverbefore.【参考答案】IstillremembermymiddleschoollifeinTianjinyet.Iwasthen76.yetinaschoolforstudentsfromTibet.Aswewerealllefthome77.wereat∧earlyage,wemetlotsofproblemsinourdailylife.We78.anhadtodothewashing,cleaningandshoppingbyus.However, 79.ourselvesweseldomfeltlonelyorhelplessly.Weenjoyedourhappylife. 80.helplessAtweekends,wewouldplaybasketball,swimminginthepool 81.swimorgoforapicnic.Wewerelivinginabigfamily.Wetreat 82.treatedeachotherasbrothersandsisters.Ifanyoneofushadany 83.√difficultyinourlifeandstudy,th