07 和谐交往- 把脉2021年中考英语作文热点【学科网名师堂】

07-和谐交往（一）与父母相处伴随着身心的日益发展，如何与父母相处是初中生必须要面对和解决的问题，这个话题经常会出现在平时的写作中。

【预测题目】假如你是HanMei，下面是一封你的笔友Alice给你发来的e-mail，请你根据e-mail的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。提示词语：listento，mother’slove，careabout，communicatewith，getalongwith，smile写作要求：1.语句通顺，书写工整;2.可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥;3.词数在100左右.

满分优秀范文：DearAlice，Asateenager,Imetthesameproblemasyou.ButnowIcangetalongbetterwithmymother.Herearesomeideasforyou.Yourmothertalksmuch,becauseshecaresaboutyou.Maybeit’snotagoodway,butitshowsyourmother’slove.SoIthinkyoushouldlistentoher.Ifyouropinionsaredifferentfromyourmother’s，youcancommunicatewithher,andtellherwhatyouarethinkingabout.Ifyourmotherdoesn’ttakeyouradvice，justkeepsilentandgiveherasmile.IhopewhatIsayherecanhelpyoualot.YoursHanMei（二）爱心真善美是每个时代都会倡导的主题。一个充满爱心的人无论走到哪里，都会像火光一样，温暖和照亮他/她周围的世界！

【预测题目】假设你是李明，你们学校正在举办主题为“付出既是收获”的征文活动，请你联系自己平时的爱心行为和感受写一篇文章投稿。

要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名等相关信息。

2.80—100词。标题和文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

GivingisReceivingI’mastudentfromGreenMiddleSchool.MynameisLiMing.

满分优秀范文：GivingisReceivingI’mastudentfromGreenMiddleSchool.MynameisLiMing.IlikehelpingothersbecauseIthinkitmakesmeveryhappy.Ioftenhelpmyclassmateswiththeirschoolwork.SometimesIhelpcleanupcityparks.Igototheoldpeople’shomeanddosomecleaningforthemonceamonth.SoI’mprettypopularthere.Ioftenvisitthechildren’shospitaltocheerthesickkidsup.Ireadstoriesandsingsongsforthem.Iamgoodwithchildren.Ialsogivemoneytocharitiestohelppeopleintrouble.Ithinkgivingisreceiving.Helpingothersishelpingourselves.Doyouagreewithme?（三）友谊是幸福的源泉之一。请你写一篇短文，要点如下：1.叙述一件你和好朋友之间发生的事情；2.表明这件事情中你在他（她）身上学习到的品质。注意：1.词数80词左右；2.不得出现真实的人名，校名等相关信息。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MaryandIarebestfriends.Wealwaysgotoschooltogetherandshareeverythingwitheachother.Oneday,wewerereadinganewmagazineattheschoollibrary.ButIbrokethemagazine.IwassoshythatIwasafraidtotellthetruth.Marytookthemagazineandtoldtheteacherthatshebrokethebookandsaidsorry.Friendsshouldbehonest.Ifyouarehonest,yourfriendcantrustyou.MybestfriendsalwaystellsmewhenIdosomethingwrong.Ithurtssometimes,butitmakesmeabetterperson,too.【解析】试题分析：本题要求以友谊为话题作文，要求结合与好朋友之间的一件事情，表明自己学习到的品质。因此短文要用一般过去时态讲述一件与朋友相关的感人事件，并用一般现在时态说明自己从这件事上的收获、感悟。动笔前要选择好写作材料、理清头绪，写作时要注意语言及句型的选用，叙述自己的感受要注意到情真意切。写作亮点：短文第一段叙述了和好朋友之间发生的事情，第二段表明作者的感悟。层次清楚，条理分明。短文开头首先总体说明“我们”是好朋友，提出中心词：best；然后用always…together，everything几个词突出中心；接下来介绍了作者与好朋友之间互帮互助的故事，具体生动。其中用到的状语从句，宾语从句等等使文章更加生动；第二段作者围绕honest阐述，表明友谊要真诚，帮助朋友要使朋友成为更好的人。突出并且升华了主题。考点：考查话题作文。（四）随着年龄的增长，不少青少年发现越来越难与父母沟通和交流，各方面的分歧使两代人之间的关系日益紧张。请围绕该话题用英语谈谈你的看法。要求：（1）内容包括①分析这种现象产生的主要原因；②提出解决该问题的具体建议。（2）字数：60-80字（3）短文中不得出现你的真实姓名、学校名和地名。优秀满分范文"Idon'tlikemyparents.TheyalwaystellmeIshoulddothis,andshouldnotdothat.Itsometimesmakesmeangry，"saidZhangHua，amiddleschoolstudent．Almosteveryteenagerhavethesamequestion.Why?Oneofthebiggestthingsiswhensomeonebecomesaparent，he/shelikesworryingthings.Theyworryabouteverythingaboutyou，fromthetimeyouwereborn.Allthesethingsarepartofyourlife.Theywantyoutogrowuphealthilyandhappily.Sohowcanyoumakethingseasieronyourself?Justmakesureyourparentsknowwhatyou'redoing.Getthemtoknowyourfriends.Phoneifyoustaysomewhereelsesothatyourparentsdon'tcalleveryhospitalinthephonebooklookingforyourbody.Saysorrytothemwhenyoumakemistakes.Takeresponsibility(责任)forwhatyouhavedone.Talkaboutyourideaswiththem.Mostofall，trytothinkaboutwhyyourparentsdothisordothat.Someday，whenyoubecomeaparent，theymaybeabletohelpyouhowtogetonwithyourchildren.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第一人称，一般现在时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如:worryabout担心；growup长大；takeresponsibilityfor为……负责任；talkabout谈论你；getonwith和……相处等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,让文章更出彩。考点：考查提纲类作文（五）“传递爱心，服务他人”是文明社会所倡导的理念。狮子会(theLions)就是一个以此为宗旨的国际性服务团体。杨敏是狮子会的一名成员，多年来她一直乐于助人。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文，向校刊的EnglishWorld栏目投稿，简要介绍杨敏的事迹，然后谈谈你的观点和打算。

Readytohelpothers

YangMin

◆helpothersforyears

◆gototheoldpeople'shometwiceamonth(cuthair.washclothes,dosomecleaning)

◆offerpeopleumbrellasorraincoatsonrainydays

◆youropinion……

◆yourplan……

要求：1．短文内容必须包含表格所提供的要点，可适当发挥；2．文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名；3．词数：80-100（短文开头已给出，仅供选择使用，不计人总词数）。短文开头：Fromtimetotime，wearemovedbythepeopleandthingsaroundus.YangMinisoneofthepersonsIadmiremost.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________优秀满分范文Fromtimetotime,wearemovedbythepeopleandthingsaroundus.YangMinisoneofthepersonsIadmiremost.AsamemberoftheLions,shehasbeenhelpingothersformanyyears.Shegoestotheoldpeopledhometwiceamonthtocuthair,washclothesanddosomecleaningforthem.Besides,onrainydayssheofferspeopleumbrellasorraincoatsforfree.Findeeplymovedbyherstory.Fmgoingtostartwithsmallthingsaroundme.Iplantogivebooksandclothestochildreninpoorvillages.Whatsmore,Tilaskmyparentsandmorefriendstojoinme.Smallactioncanmakeabigdifference.Let5shelpthosewhoneedhelp!【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文。向校刊的EnglishWorld栏目投稿，简要介绍杨敏的事迹，然后谈谈自己的观点和打算。本文所给材料比较详细，并且给出了具体要求，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意时态语时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，字数在80至100之间。写作亮点：这篇文章语言规范，表达清楚，词汇及时态运用正确，能够把提示的内容叙述清楚，语言通顺，要点齐全，条理清楚，字数符合要求，没有拼写和语法错误，意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。考点：提纲类作文。（六）父母与子女的沟通：亲子关系是很多家庭关注的话题，也是孩子青春阶段突出的矛盾。请你写一篇相关内容的英语短文。要求：1、语言通顺。2、100个单词左右优秀满分范文HowtokeepagoodrelationshipwithparentsInmyopinion,Ihavetoomanyrulesathome.Myparentsneverallowmetogooutwithmyfriendsatnight.Theydon’tallowmetochoosemyownclothes,either.Andtheypaytoomuchattentiontomyexamresults.Ithinkmyparentsdon’tquiteunderstandme.However,Itrymybesttounderstandthem.Althoughtheydon’tallowmetomakemyowndecisionsandgivemetoomuchpressure,Iknowthatitisbecausetheyreallylovemeandwantmetohaveabrightfuture.Inordertokeepagoodrelationshipwithmyparents,Istudyhard,listentothem,talktothemasfriends,tellthemmytroubles,andhelpthemdomorehousework.（七）人际关系假如你是HanMei,下面是一封你的笔友Alice给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。提示词语：listento,mother'slove,careabout,communicatewith,getalongwith,smile写作要求：1.语句通顺，书写工整;2.可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥;3.词数在60-80左右DearHanMei,I'mafraidI'vegotabigproblemrecently.Mymothertalkstoomuchtome.Shealwaystellsme,Becarefulwhilecrossingthestreet.Putonmoreclothes.Didyoudoagoodjobatschool?andsoon.I'mannoyed(烦恼)。WhatshallIdo?Alice优秀满分范文：DearAlice,Asateenager,Imetthesameproblemasyou.ButnowIcangetalongbetterwithmymother.Herearesomeideasforyou.Yourmothertalksmuch,becauseshecaresaboutyou.Maybeit'snotagoodway,butitshowsyourmother'slove.SoIthinkyoushouldlistentoher.Ifyouropinionsaredifferentfromyourmother's,youcancommunicatewithher,andtellherwhatyouarethinkingabout.Ifyourmotherdoesn'ttakeyouradvice,justkeepsilentandgiveherasmile.IhopewhatIsayherecanhelpyoualot.（八）“和谐邻里，互助互爱”是中华民族的传统美德。最近，某社区发生的一件事在当地传为佳话：两周前，李明八十岁的父亲独自在家，他突然生病了，而李明夫妇在离家很远的学校工作。幸亏邻居张先生的帮助，老人被及时送往医院，现已脱离危险。李明十分感激。请根据上述材料，用英语写一篇短文，文章必须包括以下要点：1.简述李明父亲得救的经过；2.你对这件事的感悟（拥有好邻居很重要，……）；3.如何成为好邻居（和睦相处，……）。注意：1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；2.词数在80—100之间，已给出的文字不计入总词数。“Enjoyingaharmoniousneighborhood”isoneofourChinesetraditionalvirtues.Whathashappenedinonecommunityrecentlyisagoodexample.Twoweeksago,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wecancreateaharmoniousneighborhoodinthisway.【答案】"Enjoyingaharmoniousneighborhood"isoneofourChinesetraditionalvirtues.Whathashappenedinonecommunityrecentlyisagoodexample.Twoweeksago，LiMing'seighty-year-oldfathersuddenlyfellillathome.LiMingandhiswifeworkedinaschoolfarawayfromhome.ThankstothehelpofhisneighborMr.Zhang，theoldmanwassenttothehospitalintimeandnowhewasoutofdanger.LiMingwasquitethankfultohisneighbor.It'simportanttohaveakind-heartedneighbor.Weshouldgetonwellwithourneighbors.Whenan