Module 10 单元话题满分范文必背-2021-2022学年七年级下册单元重难点易错题精练（外研社）

Module10Aholidayjourney.单元话题满分范文必背1．假设你是李华，上周末你参加了一次郊游(outing)。请根据下面表格中的提示信息写一篇题为“Apleasantouting”的英语短文，参加英文报纸的征文比赛。Apleasantouting时间上周末参加者你和……地点北山公园(theNorthHillPark)活动骑自行车、爬山、野餐、做游戏……感受……要求：1.不要逐条翻译表格中的信息，可适当增加内容；2.词数：80—100。参考词汇：goforanouting;climbthehill;haveapicnicApleasantouting2．假定你是李华，奶奶住在乡村。去年暑假，你在奶奶家度过了一段美好的时光。请根据下面的要点提示，以“MySummerVacation”为题，写一篇约100词的英语短文，向你校英语报投稿。要点提示：1.去奶奶家使用的交通方式；2.在奶奶家所做的事情：帮奶奶做饭、喂鸡、挤牛奶、摘苹果、学骑马，等等。3.暑假感受。要求：1.所写内容应包括所提供的信息，可适当发挥；2.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．你的班级正在组织“绿色安全出行”活动征文。请你参加本次活动，以“TheBestWaytoTravel”为题，写一篇英文短文，讨论人们在生活中应该如何绿色安全出行。要点提示：1.日常生活方面2.假期出游方面3.……参考词汇：safe安全的；vacation假期要求：1.80-100词2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名TheBestWaytoTravel__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．请根据如下表格，用正确时态写篇短文来描述你的一次旅行。要求：条理清楚，语句通顺，书写规范，可适当拓展。70词左右。WhereSanyaWhenLastweekHowbybusWhoMyfriendsandIWhatgoto“TianyaHaijiao”(天涯海角）;gotoabeach...takephotos.........Doyouliketraveling?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Iwillneverforgetthisinterestingtrip.5．假如你是Kate，现在就读于北京某国际学校，上周你学校组织了一次旅行。你们游览了北京的许多名胜古迹（placeofinterest），如长城、故宫、天安门广场（Tian’anmenSquare)等。请你给你的同学Mike写一封60词左右的书信介绍一下你的这次学校旅行。DearMike,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Kate6．假如你是来自北京的李丽，下周你在哈尔滨读中学的表妹李兰要来北京旅游。请根据以下提示，给她写一封信，并告诉她在北京旅游期间做一名文明的(well-mannered)中学生。写作提示：1.欢迎李兰来北京；2.介绍北京的情况；3.对如何做一名文明的中学生提出具体建议。写作要求：1.语句通顺，条理清晰，详略得当，书写工整；2.100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearLiLan,Howareyoudoing?_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!Yours,LiLi7．假如你是李华,上周末(6月30日)你们班组织了一次短途旅行。请写一篇日记，记录下你们去了哪里，都做了什么，以及你的感受。提示词语:theGreatWall,sunny,climb,takephotos,excited提示问题:•Wheredidyougoforyourtrip?•Whatdidyoudothere?•Howdidyoufeelaboutyourtrip?June30thToday,Iwentonaschooltripwithmyclassmates._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．假设你是Jenny,上周你和家人去南京度假五天。请根据提示写一篇日记,记录南京之旅。Place南京People我和家人Howlong五天Experiences*参观夫子庙TheConfuciusTemple,秦淮河景区theQinhuaiRiverScenicspot,夜晚乘船游玩秦淮河。*品尝南京盐水鸭(Nanjingsaltedduck),鸭血粉丝汤(duckbloodandbean-starchyvermicellisoup)等各种美食,妈妈买了……Feelings*……要求:(1)要点齐全,行文连贯,可适当发挥。(2)70词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。Friday___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案：1．例文ApleasantoutingLastweekend,Iwentforanoutingwithmyclassmates.At7：30inthemorning,wemetatourschoolgate.WewenttotheNorthHillParkbybike.Ontheway,weweresoexcitedthatwesangloudly.Whenwearrivedthere,westartedtoclimbthehillatonce.Wehadapicniconthetopofthehill.Afterthat,wewalkeddownthepathandhadarest.Later,somegirlsdancedunderthetreesandsomeboysplayedgameshappily.Wedidn'tgobackuntil4：00pm.Weweretiredbutveryhappy.Whatapleasantoutingitwas!【解析】【详解】题干解读：根据题目提示内容可知，本文要求写记叙文，介绍自己一次愉快的远足，用第一人称。例文点评：例文才用第一人称描述了一次愉快的远足活动；时态采用一般过去时为主，用过去进行时描述场景；描述故事时，场景描写细致；故事发生的背景、起因和过程等叙述完整且条理清晰。高分亮点

短语：so…that;atonce;havearest;not…until…

句型：so…that…构成的结果状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；含有what的感叹句。2．例文：MySummerVacationMygrandmalivesinthecountryside.Lastsummer,Iwenttovisitherwithmyfamily.Wewenttherebytrain.Wesawmanybeautifulsceneryonthetrain.WhenIstayedatmygrandma’shome,Ihelpedhercookmealsandfedchicken.Ialsomilkedthecowandpickedapples.Ilearnedtoridehorsesandsoon.IdidmanythingsthatIhadneverdonebefore.ThoughIfeltalittletired,Iwashappy.Aftertwomonths’summerholiday,weneedtogobackhome.IhopeIwillgothereagain.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求以“MySummerVacation”为题，主要介绍在奶奶家所做的事情及暑假感受等。要包含题目中所给出的要点并适当发挥。2.写作指导：例文采用一段式；时态以一般过去时为主；例文详细介绍了暑假期间在奶奶家度过的快乐时光；要点完整，结构清晰，行文流畅。3．例文TheBestWaytoTravelAsthesituationofpollutiongetsmoreandmoreserious,weneedtoadvocategreenandsafetravel.Iwanttodiscussthisproblemintwoways.Inourdailylife,wecanwalkorridebikesbecausetheyareenvironmentallyfriendly.Ifwewanttogosomewherefaraway,wecantakepublictransportlikebuses.Whenitcomestotravelingonholidays,weshouldtryourbesttoavoiddrivingprivatecarsincaseofcausingtrafficjamorpollutingtheenvironment.I'msureourenvironmentwillbebetterifeveryonetakesaction.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文。要求根据题目提示叙述清楚并进行拓展。2.写作指导：本文时态以一般现在时为主，写作第一段总述将从两个方面行文；第二段分别从日常生活和假期出游两方面叙述应该怎么做；第三段倡议大家都行动起来。写作时注意语句通顺，语法正确，语意完整。4．例文：Doyouliketraveling?Asforme,Iliketravelingverymuch.Last

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题干解读：文章属于材料作文，主要是描述自己的一次旅行，内容按照表格中所给的信息描写，也可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。2.

写作指导：文章主要用一般过去时，人称用第一人称展开描述。主要是介绍自己的旅行情况，包括出行的交通工具、和谁一起去的以及都做了什么等。写作时语言要简单易懂，文章结构要完整，多使用简单词语表达，意思要通俗易懂。5．例文：DearMike,Howareyou?Howwasyourschooltrip?IwentonaschooltripwithmyclassmateslastweekinBeijing,China.Itwasgreat.YouknowBeijingisthecapitalofChina.Ithaslotsofplacesofinterest.LastSunday,theweatherwassunny.WewenttotheGreatWallanditwasgreatandexciting.ThenwewenttothePalaceMuseum.Itwascool!NextwevisitedTian’anmenSquare.Itwasbeautiful.Oh,Itookalotofphotosonthetrip.Allofushadgreatfunontheschooltrip!Pleasewritebacksoonandtellmeaboutyourtrip.Yours,Kate【解析】【分析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封书信，要注意书信的格式，文章主要是向朋友介绍上周的学校旅行，题中给出了旅行的相关内容，在写作中要进行运用，也可以适当增加细节，使文章更加流畅。2.写作指导：本文主要是向朋友介绍上周的学校旅行，在介绍北京的情况时，用一般现在时，介绍旅行过程时用一般过去时。第一段主要是问候朋友；第二段重点介绍北京并描述旅行过程和感受，写作时要注意连接词的使用，使文章更加有层次；最后一段表达祝愿。写作中注意时态的转换，同时保证无语法错误和单词拼写错误。6．参考范文：DearLiLan,Howareyoudoing?IheardthatyouwouldcometoBeijingnextweek.I'mgladtoseeyouthen.ButtheweatherinBeijingwouldbenotsogoodthen.Itwouldbeveryhot,andyou'dbettertakeyoursunshadewithyou.AndyouknowthatthetrafficinBeijingisalwaysheavy,soIadviseyoutotakethesubwayinsteadofthetaxi.Itisnotonlymoreconvenientbutalsofasterandcheaper.WhenitcomestotheplacesofinterestinBeijing,itisunavoidabletomentiontheGreatWall.Itisgreat.Ithinkyouwillloveit.YoushouldalsobehavewellduringyourtripinBeijing.Behaveasawell－manneredmiddleschoolstudent.Donotlittereverywhereandfollowtherules.Inaword,takecareofyourselfandhaveagoodtime.Bestwishes!Yours,LiLi【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。题目要求向即将来北京的李兰写一封信，内容主要是介绍一下北京以及告诉她要做一名文明的中学生。2.写作指导：本文可以分为三部分：第一部分先欢迎李兰来北京，然后主要介绍一下北京的情况，例如天气、交通、景点等等；第二部分可以对李兰关于如何做一名文明的中学生提出你的建议；第三部分表达对李兰美好的祝愿。人称主要采用第一人称，时态主要采用一般现在时。准确运用时态，内容要充实，句子要通顺。7．例文：June30thToday,Iwentonaschooltripwithmyclassmates.Itwassunny.wegatheredattheschoolgatea