专题六-书面表达-09-祝贺类(解析版)

体裁命题形式写作主题2022新高考I卷应用文邀请信写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈II卷应用文邀请信写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈全国卷乙卷说明文投稿利用填表调查结果给报社投稿甲卷应用文投稿以世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿2021新高考I卷应用文投稿校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送上祝福II卷应用文投稿校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送上祝福全国卷乙卷应用文发言稿以“besmartonlinelearners”为主题写一篇发言稿参赛甲卷应用文征求建议征求外国朋友建议，哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人2020全国卷I卷应用文投稿写一篇以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题投稿参赛II卷应用文日记写一篇英文短文介绍上周末采摘活动III卷应用文求助信给外教写一封信，请帮忙指导英语中，祝贺信使用的频率很高，当亲友晋升、毕业、获奖等时会写祝贺信。祝贺信的用词应亲切有礼，表达出真诚的喜悦之情。结构一般如下：①、点明祝贺事由并表示祝贺②、详述祝贺的事情并肯定对方为此付出的努力③、再次祝贺并表示祝愿素材精粹【高分句型】首段：表明写信目的I'mwritingtocongratulateyouon...../Hearingthatyou.....，I'mwritingtocongratulateyou.我写信是为了祝贺你…/获悉你……，我写信向你表示祝贺。Goodnewstravelsfast！Pleaseacceptmysincere/warmcongratulationson.....好消息传得快！请接受我对……真诚的/热烈的祝贺。主体部分：陈述对方获得成功的原因Youwouldnothaveachievedthiswithoutdiligenceandperseverance.没有勤奋和毅力，你是不可能做到这一点的。Personally，itisyourutmosteffortsto......thatleadtoyourbrilliantachievements.在我看来，正是你对…付出的最大努力给你带来辉煌成就。尾段：再次表示祝贺Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture/successfulcareer！祝你前程似锦/事业有成！I'msureatalentedpersonlikeyouwillmakegreaterachievementsandliveafullerlife.我相信像你这样有才华的人将会取得更大的成就，过上更充实的生活。佳作共赏DearMr.Johns，Goodnewstravelsfast！I'msoexcitedtohearthatyouhavebeenratedasoneofthemostpopularteachersinourschool.I'mwritingtoexpressmywarmestcongratulationstoyou.Icansincerelysaythatyoudeservethetitle.Wehaveseenhowmucheffortyouhaveputinteaching.Besides，kindandknowledgeable，youalwayshaveawayofmakingyourclasslivelyandinteresting.HowluckyIamtobeyourstudent！IhopeonedayIcanbeateacherlikeyou.Pleaseacceptmysincerestcongratulationsandbestwishes.Yoursfaithfully，LiHua*注：本书"佳作共赏"栏目中画波浪线的部分可作模板背诵。（2022·四川省内江市第六中学模拟预测）假如你是李华。最近收到笔友John的电子邮件，得知他在学校的英语竞赛（Englishcompetition）中获得一等奖。请跟据以下内容给他写封电子邮件。1.祝贺他取得的优异成绩；2.告诉他你在学习中的苦与乐；3.请他介绍他的学习方法。注意：1.词数100词左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJohn,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJohn,IamgladtoknowthatyougotthefirstprizeintheEnglishcompetitioninyourschool.Congratulations!Istronglybelievethatyourhardworkanddeterminationcontributetoyoursuccess.It'sbeentwoyearssinceIenteredtheseniorhighschool.SometimeswhenImeetwithsomedifficulties,Ifeeldepressed.ButIfeelcontentmoreoftenbecausestudyoccupiesmostofmytime,forIknowsuccessliesinhardwork.OnlybymakingeveryeffortcanIrealizemydreamofgoingtocollege.Youaresogoodatstudying,sowouldyoupleaseintroducesomeofyourlearningmethodstome?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作。要求考生向笔友John写一封信，祝贺John在英语竞赛中获得一等奖，并分享自己在学习中的苦与乐，向他求教学习方法。【详解】1.词汇积累高兴：glad→happy导致、带来：contributeto→resultin/leadto沮丧的：depressed→dejected/disheartened源自于：liein→resultfrom2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：OnlybymakingeveryeffortcanIrealizemydreamofgoingtocollege.拓展句：OnlyifIcanmakeeveryeffort,Icanrealizemydreamofgoingtocollege.【点睛】【高分句型1】Istronglybelievethatyourhardworkanddeterminationcontributetoyoursuccess.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】SometimeswhenImeetwithsomedifficulties,Ifeeldepressed.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句）（2022·山东师范大学附中模拟预测）假定你是李华。你校交换生Henry在校英语报举行的“留学生讲中国故事”征文比赛中获得一等奖，并将代表学校去市里参加比赛，他写信向你征求意见。请你给他封回信，内容包括：1．表示祝贺；2．询问备赛情况并给出建议；3．预祝成功。注意：1．写作词数应为80左右;2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearHenry,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearHenry,Hearingthatyouwonthefirstprizeintheessaycompetitionof“ForeignStudentsTellingChineseStories”heldbyourschoolEnglishnewspaper,IwassoproudofyouthatIcouldn’twaittowriteandsendmycongratulations.AsfarasIknow,youwillgotothecitytoparticipateinthecompetitiononbehalfofourschool.I’mdelightedtooffermypracticalsuggestionsonhowtoprepareforthecompetition.Igreatlysupportyouractiveparticipationinthiscompetition.Thecompetitioncallsfordailypractice,confidenceandperseverance.Whenpreparingforthecompetition,youneedtohavemuchknowledgeaboutChinesestories.Besides,youshouldhaveenoughsleepandgetfamiliarwiththecompetitionrulesandenvironment.Practicemakesperfect!Lookingforwardtoyourexcellentperformanceandbeingawardedinthecompetition.

Yours,

LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给交换生Henry回信，对他获得“留学生讲中国故事”征文比赛一等奖表示祝贺，同时询问备赛情况并给出建议，最后预祝成功。【详解】1.词汇积累比赛：competition→match建议：suggestion→advice此外：besides→what’smore参加：participatein→takepartin2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’mdelightedtooffermypracticalsuggestionsonhowtoprepareforthecompetition.拓展句：I’mdelightedtooffermypracticalsuggestionsonhowyoucanprepareforthecompetition.【点睛】【高分句型1】IwassoproudofyouthatIcouldn’twaittowriteandsendmycongratulations..(运用了so…..that…..句型)【高分句型2】Whenpreparingforthecompetition,youneedtohavemuchknowledgeaboutChinesestories.(运用了when引导的状语从句的省略)（2022·宁夏·石嘴山市第三中学模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Ann在北京冬奥会期间提供志愿者服务，并被评为优秀志愿者。请你给他写封电子邮件，表示祝贺，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.告知庆祝派对安排的相关事宜；注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearAnn,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearAnn，KnowingthatyouhaveworkedasavolunteeroftheBeijingWinterOlympicsandhavebeenselectedasanexcellentvolunteer,I'mreallyhappyforyou.AndI'dliketooffermysincerecongratulationstoyou.Tocelebrateyourachievement,IwillholdapartyforyouthisSaturdayevening.Iwillinvitesomeofourfriendsover,whohavepreparedsurprisegiftsforyouandareeagertoknowaboutyourexperiencesduringtheWinterOlympics.Inaddition,youwillenjoydeliciousChinesefoodcookedbymyself.I'msureyouwillliketheparty.Pleasearriveatmyhomeby5:00pm.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你的新西兰朋友Ann在北京冬奥会期间提供志愿者服务，并被评为优秀志愿者的事情，写封电子邮件，表示祝贺。【详解】1.词汇积累选择：selected→chosen此外：Inaddition→what’smore高兴：happy→glad/pleased渴望：beeagerto→longfor2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Inaddition,youwillenjoydeliciousChinesefoodcookedbymyself.拓展句：Inaddition,youwillenjoydeliciousChinesefood,whichwascookedbymyself.【点睛】【高分句型1】KnowingthatyouhaveworkedasavolunteeroftheBeijingWinterOlympicsandhavebeenselectedasanexcellentvolunteer,I'mreallyhappyforyou.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作原因状语。）【高分句型2】Iwillinvitesomeofourfriendsover,whohavepreparedsurprisegiftsforyouandareeagertoknowaboutyourexperiencesduringtheWinterOlympics.（运用了连词who引导的非限制性定语从句。）（2022·吉林长春·模拟预测）假定你是李华，听说英国朋友John所在的篮球队获得了学校篮球比赛的冠军。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.祝贺获奖；2.肯定付出；3.期待见面交流。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJohn,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJohn,Iamwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationsonyourwinningthefirstprizeofyourgroupinthebasketballcompetition.Asyourfriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIamatyoursuccess.Asyoutoldmebefore,therewereservealoutstandingbasketballteamscompetinginthisbasketballgame,andit’sreallyhardtowinthisgame.However,youmadeitatlast.Youandyourteammembersmusthavemadegreateffortstopractiseplayingbasketball.Yourpassionforbasketballsometimesexceedsmyimagination.Youdeservetowinthisprize!Atlast,Ihopetohaveatalkwithyousothatwecanexchangeourunderstandingtowardsbasketball.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生按要求给英国朋友John写一封电子邮件，祝贺他所在的篮球队获得了学校篮球比赛的冠军。【详解】1.词汇积累开心的：delighted→glad/cheerful出色的：outstanding→excellent/remarkable热情：passion→enthusiasm值得：deserve→beworthyof2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：However,youmadeitatlast.Youandyourteammembersmusthavemadegreateffortstopracticeplayingbasketball.拓展句：Youandyourteammembersmusthavemadegreateffortstopracticeplayingbasketball,soyoumadeitatlast.【点睛】【高分句型1】Asyourfriend,IjustwantyoutoknowhowdelightedIamatyoursuccess.(运用how引导宾语从句)【高分句型2】Atlast,Ihopetohaveatalkwithyousothatwecanexchangeourunderstandingtowardsbasketball.(运用sothat引导目的状语从句)（2022·河南·宝丰县第一高级中学模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的新西兰朋友Ann在北京冬奥会期间提供了志愿服务并且被评选为优秀志愿者。请你给她写封电子邮件表示祝贺，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.告知庆祝派对的安排。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearAnn,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearAnn,KnowingthatyouhaveworkedasavolunteeroftheBeijingWinterOlympicsandhavebeenselectedasanexcellentvolunteer,I’mreallyhappyforyou.AndI’dliketooffermysincerecongratulationstoyou.Tocelebrateyourachievement,IwillholdapartyforyouthisSaturdayevening.Iwillinvitesomeofourfriendsover,whohavepreparedsurprisegiftsforyouandareeagertoknowaboutyourexperiencesduringtheWinterOlympics.Inaddition,youwillenjoydeliciousChinesefoodcookedbymyself.I’msureyouwillliketheparty.Pleasearriveatmyhomeby5:00pm.I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给新西兰朋友Ann写封电子邮件，对她被评选为北京冬奥会优秀志愿者表示祝贺，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.告知庆祝派对的安排。【详解】1.词汇积累选择：select→choose高兴的：happy→delighted礼物：gift→present提供：offer→provide2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Tocelebrateyourachievement,IwillholdapartyforyouthisSaturdayevening.拓展句：IwillholdapartyforyouthisSaturdayevening,thepurposeofwhichistocelebrateyourachievement.【点睛】[高分句型1]KnowingthatyouhaveworkedasavolunteeroftheBeijingWinterOlympicsandhavebeenselectedasanexcellentvolunteer,I’mreallyhappyforyou.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Iwillinvitesomeofourfriendsover,whohavepreparedsurprisegiftsforyouandareeagertoknowaboutyourexperiencesduringtheWinterOlympics.(运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)（2022·全国·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友John获得了在华高中留学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.祝贺获奖；2.肯定付出；3.期待见面交流。注意：1.写作词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearJohn,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearJohn,IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeechCompetition.Itisreallygoodnewsthatyoubecamechampionofthiscompetition.IknowyouwerenotverygoodatChineseatfirst.However,youpractisedspeakingChinesealmosteveryday.Asthesayinggoes,“Nothingisimpossibleforawillingheart.”Andyoureffortspaidoffatlast!Ibelieveyoucanachievemoreinthefuture.I’mlookingforwardtoseeingyousoonandcatchinguponalltheupdates.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你的英国朋友John写一封电子邮件，祝贺他在华高中留学生中文演讲比赛一等奖。【详解】1.词汇积累想要：wouldliketo→wantto比赛：competition→match冠军：champion→winner期望：lookforwardto→expect2.句式拓展句式转换原句：IwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyouonyourwinningthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeechCompetition.拓展句：KnowingthatyouhavewonthefirstprizeintheChineseSpeechCompetition,Iwouldliketoexpressmycongratulationstoyou.【点睛】[高分句型1]Itisreallygoodnewsthatyoubecamechampionofthiscompetition.（运用了it作形式主语，that引导的主语从句）[高分句型2]Ibelieveyoucanachievemoreinthefuture.（运用了宾语从句）（2022·北京·模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Andy在你市举办的“中国成语大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。请你给他写一封电子邮件，内容包括：1.表示祝贺；2.回顾他付出的努力；3.期待交流。参考词汇：中国成语大会：ChineseIdiomContest注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearAndy,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearAndy,Learningthatyou’vewonthefirstprizeinyourgroupintheChineseIdiomContest,I’mwritingtooffermycongratulations.Itcameasnosurprisetomethatyouwonthefirstplaceinthecontest.Forseveralyears,you’veshowngreatinterestinChineseidioms,NotonlyhaveyourecitedaseaofChineseidiomswithgreatenthusiasm,butyoualsohavedivedintoChinesehistoryandlearnedaboutthestoriesbehindthem.Youdeservetheprize.Hopetohaveatalkwithyouandexchangeourexperienceoflearningidioms.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的留学生好友Andy在市举办的“中国成语大会”比赛中获得了外国选手组一等奖。要求考生给他写一封电子邮件。【详解】1.词汇积累提供：offer→provide惊奇：surprise→astonishment比赛：contest→competition热情：enthusiasm→warmth2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Learningthatyou’vewonthefirstprizeinyourgroupintheChineseIdiomContest,I’mwritingtooffermycongratulations.拓展句：WhenIlearnthatyou’vewonthefirstprizeinyourgroupintheChineseIdiomContest,I’mwritingtooffermycongratulations.【点睛】【高分句型1】Itcameasnosurprisetomethatyouwonthefirstplaceinthecontest.（运用了that引导的主语从句）【高分句型2】NotonlyhaveyourecitedaseaofChineseidiomswithgreatenthusiasm,butyoualsohavedivedintoChinesehistoryandlearnedaboutthestoriesbehindthem.（运用了notonly…butalso…不但……而且……句型，位于句首句子用部分倒装）（2022·湖南常德·模拟预测）在2022年北京冬奥会上，EileenGu（谷爱凌）获得了两金一银的好成绩，她的自信、聪慧和勤奋给我们留下了深刻印象。假设你是李华，你校外刊开设了“WhatIwanttosaytoEileenGu”专栏，请你给她写一封信，内容如下：1.对她的成就表示祝贺；2.作为同龄人她对你的影响和启迪；3.表达祝愿。注意：1.写作词数应为80左右；2.请按以下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。DearEileen,_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearEileen,Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatthe24thBeijing2022WinterOlympicswasasuccess.Itwasyouwhowontwogoldandonesilvermedals,whichcontributedtothefinalresult—Chinaattop3ofthemedallist.Iamwritingtocongratulateyouonyourachievements.Thewholenationisproudofyou.Thankyouheartedlyforwhatyouhavedonetoourcountry.Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,andIdecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.Iamimpressedbyyourconfidence,intelligenceanddiligence.Yourattitudetowardslifewillneverstopinfluencingmythoughtsandactions.Wishyouliveamorewonderfullife.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给我国选手谷爱凌（EileenGu）写一封信，祝贺她在北京冬季奥运会上赢得了两金一银的好成绩、她对你的影响和启迪以及表达对她的祝愿。【详解】1.词汇积累为……作贡献：contributeto→makeacontributionto以……为骄傲：beproudof→takepridein鼓舞：inspire→encourage决定：decideto→bedeterminedto2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,andIdecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.拓展句：Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,

whichmakesmedecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.【点睛】【高分句型1】Thankyouheartedlyforwhatyouhavedonetoourcountry.(运用了what引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Itwasyouwhowontwogoldandonesilvermedals,whichcontributedtothefinalresult—Chinaattop3ofthemedallist.(运用了强调句和which引导非限制性定语从句）（2022·北京·模拟预测）假设你是李华，请你用英文给我国选手谷爱凌（EileenGu）写一封祝贺信。她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。内容包括：1．表示祝贺；2．她在奥运会上的优异成绩；3．个人感想。注意事项：1．词数：100词左右；2．开头及结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；3．可适当增加细节使语句连贯、通顺。DearEileen,Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatthe24thBeijing2022WinterOlympicswasasuccess.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearEileen,Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthatthe24thBeijing2022WinterOlympicswasasuccess.Iamwritingtocongratulateyouonyourachievements.Thewholenationisproudofyou.Thankyouheartedlyforwhatyouhavedonetoourcountry.Theotherday,whenwatchingtheraceonTV,Iwasfullyattractedbyyourexcellentperformanceinyourevents.AndIfeltthrilledandcheeredforyouthemomentyoureachedyourgoalsskillfullyandsuccessfully.Itwasyouwhowontwogoldandonesilvermedals,whichcontributedtothefinalresult—Chinaattop3ofthemedallist.Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,andIdecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.Yourssincerely,LiHua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给我国选手谷爱凌（EileenGu）写一封祝贺信，祝贺她在第24届北京冬季奥运会上赢得两金一银奖牌，为中国队奖牌数名列前三做出了突出贡献。【详解】1.词汇积累以……为骄傲：beproudof→takepridein兴奋的：thrilled→excited实现：reach→achieve决定：decideto→bedeterminedto2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,andIdecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.拓展句：Yoursuccessandspiritinspiremegreatly,

whichmakesmedecidetofollowyoutodosomethingforourmotherland.【点睛】【高分句型1】Thankyouheartedlyforwhatyouhavedonetoourcountry.（运用了what引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Itwasyouwhowontwogoldandonesilvermedals,whichcontributedtothefinalresult—Chinaattop3ofthemedallist.（运用了强调句和which引导非限制性定语从句）（2022·四川·石室中学模拟预测）假定你是某中学学生李华。你的学长兼好友林波被北京大学录取，请你写封邮件表示祝贺。内容如下：1．表示祝贺；2．你的感受和评价；3．请教学习方法。注意：1．词数100词左右；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。DearLinBo,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】DearLinBo,How'severythinggoing?HearingthatyouhavebeenadmittedtoPekingUniversity,I’mwritingtoexpressmysincerecongratulationsonyoursuccess.You'llneverknowhowexcitedIwasthemomentIheardthegoodnews.Beingyourbestfriend,I’mmorethanproudofyou.Asamatteroffact,itcameasnosurprisetomethatyoumadeit.Youwerealwaysoneofthemostdiligentstudentsinourschool,whichleftadeepimpressiononme.Itwasallyoureffortthatpaidoff.Asaseniorthreestudent,whatworriesmeisthatmygradesareaverage.Wouldyoupleasebekindenoughtosharewithmesomeusefulmethodsoflearning,whichwillbeofsignificancetome?Again,congratulations!Iwouldbegratefulifyoucouldreplytomeandgivemesomesuggestionsatyourearliestconvenience.Yours,LiHua【解析】【导读】本篇书面表达属于书信，假定你是某中学学生李华。你的学长兼好友林波被北京大学录取，请你写封邮件表示祝贺。内容如下：1．表示祝贺；2．你的感受和评价；3．请教学习方法。【详解】1.词汇积累一……就：themoment

→assoonas自豪：beproudof→takepridein成功：makeit→succeedindoing实用的：useful→practical2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：You'llneverknowhowexcitedIwasthemomentIheardthegoodnews.拓展句：You'llneverknowhowexcitedIwasimmediatelyIheardthegoodnews.【点睛】[高分句型1]HearingthatyouhavebeenadmittedtoPekingUniversity,I’mwritingtoexpressmysincerecongratulationsonyoursuccess.(运用了现在分词作状语)[高分句型2]Youwerealwaysoneofthemostdiligentstudentsinourschool,whichleftadeepimpressiononme.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)（2022·全国·模拟预测）假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter在中国象棋网络挑战赛(TheChineseChessNetworkChallengeCompetition)中荣获一等奖。现在，请你给他写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺，要点如下：1.表示祝贺；2.赞扬对方的付出；3.向对方学习。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearPeter,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours

LiHua【答案】DearPeter,

It'swonderfulthatyouhavewonfirstprizeintheChineseChessNetworkChallengeCompetitionasaforeigner.Icouldhardlywaittoexpressmysincerecongratulationstoyou.

Inthepastfewyears,youhavespentyourabundanttimeimprovingyourskills.Itisyourdevotion,diligenceanddeterminationthatleadtoyoursuccess.Yousetagoodexampleformeandpushmetomoveforward.Asachesslover,Iwanttoinviteyoutoteachmechessskillsinordertorenewmylevel.

Pleaseletmeknowwhenyouareavailable.Bestwishestoyou.

Yours

LiHua【解析】【详解】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter在中国象棋网络挑战赛(TheChineseChessNetworkChallengeCompetition)中荣获一等奖。现在，请你给他写一封电子邮件，向他表示祝贺。【详解】1.词汇积累急切做某事：beeagertodo→couldhardlywaittodo祝贺：congratulatesb.onsth→expressone’ssincerecongratulationstosb.大量的时间：enoughtime→abundan