进阶练16 图画作文（模考满分范文10篇）-新高考英语一轮总复习（上海专用）（解析版）

PAGE1PAGE2进阶练16图画作文（满分范文）专练（解析版）学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________一、图画作文1．（2022·上海嘉定·高三专题练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.1.文体：夹叙夹议。2.首先简要描述图片内容，然后阐述你认为应该培养孩子们的何种价值观及理由。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Asillustratedinthecartoon,whenaskedwheretheywillgoonholiday,thestudentsshoutedtheirvariousoverseasdestinations,oneseeminglyfartherandmorecostlythananother.Thisvividlymanifestsatrendwhereadultsalwaysstrivetobeatotherpeoplebymeansofenjoyingamoreluxuriouslife.Whowillnotfeelsaddenedbythis?Wherechildren’soutlookonlifeisconcerned,weshouldfirstofalltrainthemtobefrugalandeconomicalineverydaylife.Meanwhile,childrenshouldbeinstructedwithsuchspiritasindependenceanddiligenceratherthanshowingoffparents’riches.Then,ifanythingcouldbecomparedbetweenchildren,itmustbewho’smademoreprogressinlearning,whoismorewillingtobehelpfulandmorereadytorespectdiscipline,teachers,parentsandclassmates.Inthefinalanalysis,childrenshouldbetaughttopursuethejustandjusticeinsteadoftheotherwayaround.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求根据下面给出的中文说明，写一篇120-150字的英语作文。1.文体：夹叙夹议。2.首先简要描述图片内容，然后阐述你认为应该培养孩子们的何种价值观及理由。【详解】1.词汇积累教育：instruct→educate打败：beat→defeat各种各样的：various→avarietyof追求：pursue→goafter2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Inthefinalanalysis,childrenshouldbetaughttopursuethejustandjusticeinsteadoftheotherwayaround.拓展句：Inthefinalanalysis,itisthejustandjusticethatchildrenshouldbetaughttopursueinsteadoftheotherwayaround.【点睛】[高分句型1]Asillustratedinthecartoon,whenaskedwheretheywillgoonholiday,thestudentsshoutedtheirvariousoverseasdestinations,oneseeminglyfartherandmorecostlythananother.(运用了状语从句的省略)[高分句型2]Thisvividlymanifestsatrendwhereadultsalwaysstrivetobeatotherpeoplebymeansofenjoyingamoreluxuriouslife.(运用了where引导定语从句)2．（2022秋·河南南阳·高三统考期末）请观察下图，描写图中人物，阐释图画的内涵，并抒发你的感悟。注意：1.词数100左右；2.题目自拟。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】参考范文：Icanseetwoboys:oneisfocusedonthelosswhiletheotheriscentredonwhatisleft.Attitudesvaryfrompersontopersontowardsthings.Theboyontheleftisfeelingterriblewhenseeingthebottlehasfallentothegroundandthere’shardlyanywaterleft.Onthecontrary,theboyontherightisobviouslyhappytoseethere’sstillsomeleft,forhisfacelightsup.Apparently,oneboyisnegativeandpessimistic,buttheotherispositiveandoptimistic.Theoverallmessagewecantakefromthepictureisthatweshouldviewthingsinapositivewayaseverycloudhasasilverlining.【导语】这是一篇图画作文。要求考生描写图中人物，阐释图画的内涵，并抒发自己的感悟。【详解】1.词汇积累因为：as→because高兴的：happy→delighted剩下：leave→remain看见：see→witness2.句型拓展同义句原句：Theoverallmessagewecantakefromthepictureisthatweshouldviewthingsinapositivewayaseverycloudhasasilverlining.拓展句：Whatwecantakefromthepictureisthatweshouldviewthingsinapositivewayaseverycloudhasasilverlining.【点睛】[高分句型1]Icanseetwoboys:oneisfocusedonthelosswhiletheotheriscentredonwhatisleft.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Theboyontheleftisfeelingterriblewhenseeingthebottlehasfallentothegroundandthere’shardlyanywaterleft.(运用了状语从句的省略)[高分句型3]Theoverallmessagewecantakefromthepictureisthatweshouldviewthingsinapositivewayaseverycloudhasasilverlining.(运用了that引导的表语从句)3．（2022春·上海·高三专题练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.请简要描述图片内容，并联系生活实际谈谈你的感想。相关词汇：crow（乌鸦）Whydon'tyoudrinkwaterasthebooktoldus?【答案】CrowdrinkwaterTherewasonlyalittlewaterinabottlewhichhadalongandnarrowneck.Afatcrowcametothebottleanddrankthewaterbyastraw.Hewasenjoyingthewaterwhenanotherthirstycrowwentby.Accustomedtothewayofdrinkingwatertaughtinbooks,thethirstycrowwasverysurprised.Heaskedthefatcrow,“Whydon’tyoudrinkwaterasthebooktoldus?”Thefatcrowreplied,“Becausethismethodcanmakemedrinkwaterfaster.”Inourdailylife,manythingswillalwayschangebeyondourimagination.Weshouldlearntoadaptflexibly.Onlybyfindingtherightwaycanwesucceed.Ifwewanttomakeprogressduringourstudy,weshouldlearntoinferratherthancompletelyfollowthefixedpatterninourstudy.【分析】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求考生简要描述图片内容，并联系生活实际谈谈自己的感想。【详解】1.词汇积累惊讶的：surprised→shocked方式：method→means更快地：faster→morequickly呆板的：fixed→inflexible2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Accustomedtothewayofdrinkingwatertaughtinbooks,thethirstycrowwasverysurprised.拓展句：Accustomedtothewayofdrinkingwaterwhichwastaughtinbooks,thethirstycrowwasverysurprised.【点睛】【高分句型1】Therewasonlyalittlewaterinabottlewhichhadalongandnarrowneck.（运用了which引导定语从句）【高分句型2】Ifwewanttomakeprogressduringourstudy,weshouldlearntoinferratherthancompletelyfollowthefixedpatterninourstudy.（运用了if引导条件状语从句）4．（2022春·上海·高三上海市洋泾中学校考期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.一家服装店的橱窗外，两只狐狸在对话：——爸爸快看，妈妈在对我笑呐！——走吧儿子，有人过来了。请简要描述这幅图片，并就其传达的信息和意义谈谈你的看法。......【答案】

Asitisdepictedinthepicture,twofoxesarelookingatafashionablecoatinfrontofaclothesshop.Theyoungfoxisespeciallygladwhenseeingthefurcollar,saying,“Daddy,mymotherissmilingtome”,whiletheoldfoxisratherworried,tellinghischildtogo,assomeonemaycometocatchthemforfur.Whatatragedy!ThefirsttimeIsawthispicture,somethingcametomymindimmediately.Foronething,itishumanbeingswhoareusinganimals’furstomakeclothing.Foranother,animalsaresadtoexperiencemisfortune.There’snodoubtthattheywishtoescapethisdestiny,buttheyaretoooftentooweaktorunaway,letalonetofightagainstthisfate.Thus,theawarenessofthesignificanceofprotectinganimalsshouldbeenhancedandsomepropermeasuresshouldbetaken.Onlyinthisway,cananimalsandhumanbeingsliveinharmony.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文。请简要描述这幅图片，并就其传达的信息和意义谈谈你的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累加强：enhance→strengthen担心的：worried→concerned高兴的：glad→pleased因此：thus→therefore2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：There’snodoubtthattheywishtoescapethisdestiny,buttheyaretoooftentooweaktorunaway,letalonetofightagainstthisfate.拓展句：Althoughtheywishtoescapethisdestiny,theyaretoooftentooweaktorunaway,letalonetofightagainstthisfate.【点睛】[高分句型1]Theyoungfoxisespeciallygladwhenseeingthefurcollar,saying,“Daddy,mymotherissmilingtome”,whiletheoldfoxisratherworried,tellinghischildtogo,assomeonemaycometocatchthemforfur.(运用了省略句和as引导原因状语从句)[高分句型2]Onlyinthisway,cananimalsandhumanbeingsliveinharmony.(运用了部分倒装)5．（2023春·上海·高二上海市南洋模范中学校考期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.下面的漫画展示的是剧场中的场景。请以此为素材写篇短文。你的作文必须包括：简要描述漫画内容；就其折射出的社会现象谈谈你的感想。（注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。）__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】OperaisthetreasureoftheChinesenation,butfewerandfewerpeoplegotoseeit.Inthecartoon,grandpaandGrandsonarewatchingaplayinatheater.Tothesameplay,twopeople’sreactionisverydifferent.Thegrandfatherislisteningtothemusicwithgreatinterest,whilethegrandsonisbowinghisheadtosleep.ThecartoonreflectsthatnowadaysyoungpeoplearenotinterestedintraditionalChineseoperaculture.IthinkyoungpeopleshouldactivelypromotetraditionalChineseculture,especiallyoperaculture.Inaddition,underthebackgroundthatcontemporaryyoungpeopledonot“catchacold”inoperaculture,Chinesetraditionaloperacultureshouldadapttothetrendoftimes,andmakeuseofnetworktechnologyandinformationmeanstoreformandinnovateoperaculture,sothatChineseoperacanenterthepublic’svisionandbelovedbythepublic.

Allinall,Chineseopera,especiallyPekingOpera,isthequintessenceofChineseculture.Thecontemporaryyouthhavetheresponsibilityandobligationtocarryitforward,passonthequintessenceofChineseculture,andmakeitpopularathomeandabroad.【分析】本篇书面表达属于看图作文，所给漫画展示的是剧场中的场景。要求考生以此为素材写篇短文。文章必须包括：简要描述漫画内容；就其折射出的社会现象谈谈你的感想。【详解】1.词汇积累对……感兴趣：beinterestedin→haveinterestin→showinterestin总之：allinall→inshort→inbrief另外，此外：inaddition→furthermore→moreover反应，回应：reaction→response→reflection2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Inthecartoon,grandpaandGrandsonarewatchingaplayinatheater.Tothesameplay,twopeople’sreactionisverydifferent.拓展句：Inthecartoon,grandpaandGrandsonarewatchingthesameplay,towhichtwopeople’sreactionisverydifferent.【点睛】[高分句型1]Thegrandfatherislisteningtothemusicwithgreatinterest,whilethegrandsonisbowinghisheadtosleep.

(运用了由并列连词while连接的并列句，前后形成鲜明对比)[高分句型2]Inaddition,underthebackgroundthatcontemporaryyoungpeopledonot“catchacold”inoperaculture,Chinesetraditionaloperacultureshouldadapttothetrendoftimes,andmakeuseofnetworktechnologyandinformationmeanstoreformandinnovateoperaculture,sothatChineseoperacanenterthepublic’svisionandbelovedbythepublic.

(运用了sothat引导的结果状语从句)6．（2022·上海·模拟预测）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.请简要描述图片内容,并结合生活或学习中的例子谈谈你对该图的理解。【答案】

Asthepictureshows,somesmallantsencounteredabigpitontheirway.Withoutpanic,theyquicklyfoundasolution.Theydecidedtoletsomesmallantsconnecttobuildabridgeatatime.Aftertheotherantspassedthebridge,theywouldpulltheremainingantsover.Theirsuccessdemonstratestheimportanceofteamwork.

Inourdailylife,somepeopleliketoworkalonewhileothersenjoyteamwork.Inmyopinion,everyonehadbetterlearntoworkwithothersbecauseteamworkisdefinitelynecessaryandimportant.Forexample,inafootballmatch,everymemberplaysdifferentrolewhichisimportant.Allmembersmustcooperatewitheachothertofightagainsttheopponentteam.Theycanonlywinwhentheydogoodteamwork,ortheywillbedefeated.

Insum,teamworkisveryimportant.Noonecouldliveindividually.Henceworkingtogethercouldmakeourlifeeasier.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画类作文。要求考生描述图片内容，结合生活或学习中的例子谈谈对图片的理解。【详解】1.词汇积累遇到：encounter→comeacross在某人看来：inone’sopinion→inone’sview重要的：important→vital总之：insum→inaword2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：

Insum,teamworkisveryimportant.拓展句：Insum,teamworkisveryimportant,whichcanhelpuscompletethetaskfasterandbetter.【点睛】[高分句型1]Asthepictureshows,somesmallantsencounteredabigpitontheirway.（运用了as引导的非限定性定语从句）[高分句型2]Inmyopinion,everyonehadbetterlearntoworkwithothersbecauseteamworkisdefinitelynecessaryandimportant.（运用了because引导的原因状语从句）7．（2022秋·广东·高三广东实验中学校考阶段练习）下面一组图片展现了现代生活方式。请根据你对这组图片的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应包含以下内容：1.描述图片的内容;2.分析该现象的原因;3.结合生活实际，谈谈你的感想。注意：1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,

以使行文连贯;

3.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Justasthepictureshowsvividly,infrontofthecomputersitsamanwhoisabsorbedincomputerwhetheratwork,athomeorinplay.Eventually,heevencannotridhimselfofthefantasyofusingthecomputerinhisdream.Manyfactorscombinetocausethephenomenon.Firstly,thecomputerfacilitatesourworkefficiencyandentertainment,makingiteasyforustocontacteachother.Secondly,itdeprivesusofopportunitiestogetclosenatureandalienatesusfromourfamiliesandfriends.Ithinkcomputerisnothingbutatool,sowecannotbeaslavetoitbutthemaster.Areasonableunderstandingoftechnologywillundoubtedlypavethewayforbetteringourlife.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图片作文。要求考生结合图片写一篇短文，内容包括：描述图片内容；分析该现象的原因以及结合生活，谈谈自己的感受。【详解】1.词汇积累沉迷于：beabsorbedin→belostin导致：cause→resultin机会：opportunity→chance我认为：Ithink→inmypointofview2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Eventually,heevencannotridhimselfofthefantasyofusingthecomputerinhisdream.拓展句：Eventually,heevencannotridhimselfofthefantasyofusingthecomputerinhisdream,whichisterrible.【点睛】【高分句型1】Justasthepictureshowsvividly,infrontofthecomputersitsamanwhoisabsorbedincomputerwhetheratwork,athomeorinplay.（运用了who引导的限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Firstly,thecomputerfacilitatesourworkefficiencyandentertainment,makingiteasyforustocontacteachother.（运用了现在分词作伴随状语）8．（2022春·上海·高三专题练习）Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-l50wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.仔细阅读下图，针对图片反映的情况，谈谈你的看法。你的内容必须包括：1.简要描述图片；

2.分析该情况产生的原因；

3.谈谈你的看法和建议。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Fromthepicturegivenabove,wecanobservethatarecruiterisgivinganoffertotheapplicantwithhighereducationaldegree.Meanwhile,anotherapplicantgraduatedfromavocationaltechnicalinstituteiswaitinginlinewithaconfusedlook.Thecartoonrevealsthatthesocietyhasbeenplacingahighervalueoneducationaldegree.Whatfactorsmightcontributetothisphenomenon?Answerstothisquestionmayinvolvemanyaspects,andhereareafewguesses.Foronething,fromthesubjectiveaspect,quiteafewemployersholdthatthehighereducationaldegreepeoplehave,themorecompetenttheywillbe.Foranother,fromtheobjectiveaspect,withtheprofessionsinmodernsocietybecomingincreasinglysegmented,employeesarerequiredtoacquirehigherdegreetofulfilltheirtasksefficiently.AsfarasIamconcerned,educationshouldnotbethesinglestandardinaninterviewtoassessapplicants’ability.Asforthecompanies,itisnotnecessarilyagoodprincipleaswell.Weshouldrealizethattheoperationalcapabilityandserviceabilitycanhelpyoutofindagoodjob.【分析】这是一篇图画作文。要求学生就图画反应的“学历歧视”问题进行简要介绍，并分析背后原因和给出自己的观点。【详解】1.词汇积累困惑的：puzzled→confused导致：leadto→contributeto就我而言：Inmyopinion→AsfarasIamconcerned完成：complete→fulfill2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：AsfarasIamconcerned,educationshouldnotbethesinglestandardinaninterviewtoassessapplicants’ability.拓展句：AsfarasIamconcerned,educationshouldnotbethesinglestandardwhichassessesapplicants’abilityinaninterview.【点睛】[高分句型1]Fromthepicturegivenabove,wecanobservethatarecruiterisgivinganoffertotheapplicantwithhighereducationaldegree.(运用了过去分词given作后置定语以及that引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Foronething,fromthesubjectiveaspect,quiteafewemployersholdthatthehighereducationaldegreepeoplehave,themorecompetenttheywillbe.(运用了that引导的宾语从句以及“the+比较级，the+比较级”句式)9．（2022秋·上海·高三上海市行知中学校考开学考试）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求写一篇文章。内容要求：描述漫画内容：分析漫画所揭示的问题；提出你的看法。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.Theson,welldressed,wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet,sweating.Itshowsacommonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies,shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.Parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandsparenoefforttopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Asaconsequence,childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.Inmyopinion,overprotectionandtoomuchcareareextremelybadforchildren’sdevelopment.Insteadofdoingeverythingforthem,parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrentoovercomedifficultiesandinspirethemtodevelopbythemselves.Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画作文，孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重，要求考生根据题目提供的漫画，写一篇文章。【详解】1.词汇积累自豪地：proudly→withpride承担：shoulder→undertake不遗余力：sparenoefforttodosth.→doone’sutmosttodosth.在我看来：inmyopinion→frommypointofview2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.拓展句：Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthree,whoarewalkingonalongredcarpet.【点睛】[高分句型1]Asaconsequence,childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.(运用了so..that引导的结果状语从句)[高分句型2]Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.(运用了部分倒装句型)10．（2022秋·上海·高三上海市大同中学校考期中）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.请写一篇短文，文章必须包括：1.描述图片2.就“低头族(phubbing)”这一现象谈谈你的看法______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________