进阶练15 图表作文（满分范文）专练-新高考英语一轮总复习（上海专用）（解析版）

PAGE1PAGE2进阶练15图表作文（满分范文）专练（解析版）学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________一、图表作文1．（2022秋·上海·高三上海市向明中学校考阶段练习）GuidedWritingDirections:

WriteanEnglishcompositionin120–150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是中华中学学生姚平，最近参加了一项研究性学习调研，课题为“父母是否以子女为荣”。通过调研你校学生及其父母，结果发现双方对此问题的看法有差异（数据如图所示）。根据图表写一份报告，在报告中，你必须：1.描述调研数据；2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。【答案】Recently，wemadeasurveyaboutwhethertheparentsagreethattheyareproudoftheirchildren．Theresultshowsthat80%ofparentsareproudoftheirchildrenwhileonly60%ofchildrenholdthesameopinion．Accordingtothesurvey，wecanconcludethatthenumberofparentswhoapprovedtheideais20%morethanofchildren．Thereseemstobetwocausesaswetriedtofigureoutwhatledtothissubtledifference．First，conservativeChineseparentsareneveraccustomedtoconveyingdirectlyhowmuchtheyareproudoftheirchildren．Thistendencytoconcealfeelingshardlyhelpschildrendevelopastrongsenseofself-confidence．Second，thecurrenteducationsystemexcessivelyemphasizesthevalueofacademicperformance，thusforcingchildrentoextensivelybelievethatonlybyachievingexcellentscorescantheymaketheirparentsproud．Thisbiasunfairlyunderminesthesignificanceoftalentsforartandsports，whicheasilyfrustrateschildrenandrendersthemmorelikelytounderestimatethemselves．Withoutthegenuineencouragementfromparentsandthereversalofexam-orientededucationalmethods，akidwouldneverendupwithapositivegrown-up．【分析】这是一篇说明文。要求考生根据图表写一份报告【详解】第一步：审题体裁：说明文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.描述调研数据；2.分析可能导致这一结果的原因。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）madeasurvey，beproudof,heldthesameopinion,figureout,beneveraccustomedto,developastrongsenseof,emphasizethevalueof,endupwith第三步：连词成句1.Recently，wemadeasurveyaboutwhethertheparentsagreethattheyareproudoftheirchildren．2.Theresultshowsthat80%ofparentsareproudoftheirchildrenwhileonly60%ofchildrenholdthesameopinion．3.Accordingtothesurvey，wecanconcludethatthenumberofparentswhoapprovedtheideais20%morethanofchildren．4.Thereseemstobetwocausesaswetriedtofigureoutwhatledtothissubtledifference．5.First，conservativeChineseparentsareneveraccustomedtoconveyingdirectlyhowmuchtheyareproudoftheirchildren．6.Thistendencytoconcealfeelingshardlyhelpschildrendevelopastrongsenseofself-confidence．根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First,Second连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】[高分句型1]Thisbiasunfairlyunderminesthesignificanceoftalentsforartandsports，whicheasilyfrustrateschildrenandrendersthemmorelikelytounderestimatethemselves．which引导的非限制性定语从句。[高分句型2]Second，thecurrenteducationsystemexcessivelyemphasizesthevalueofacademicperformance，thusforcingchildrentoextensivelybelievethatonlybyachievingexcellentscorescantheymaketheirparentsproud．现在分词作状语。2．（2022春·上海·高三上海市洋泾中学校考阶段练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.随着电脑普及率的提高，老师、家长和学生对手写字的重视程度降低了。下图是一项调查显示中学生不想改善字迹的理由。请说明该现象并发表自己的看法。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Nowadays,withthegrowingpopularityofcomputers,teachers,studentsandtheirparentsarepayinglessandlessattentiontohandwriting.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,about85.8percentofmiddleschoolstudentsthinkthattheirhandwritingispoor.Yetforvariousreasons,manystudentsdon’twanttoimprovetheirhandwriting.51.5percentofthestudentsthinkthattheycanjustuseacomputer,sothereisnoneedtowastetimeimprovingtheirhandwriting,and32.2percentbelievethattheyaresobusywiththestudythattheydonothavetimetopractice.10.9percentthinkthatpracticinghandwritingisuseless.Asthesayinggoes,writingstyleshowstheman.Beautifulandneathandwritingisbeneficial,especiallyformiddleschoolstudents.Therefore,inmyopinion,moreemphasisshouldbeplacedonthisaspectinthefuture.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求考生说明该调查显示的中学生不想改善字迹的理由的这种现象并发表自己的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累调查：survey→research各种各样的：various→allkindsof提高：improve→enhance认为：think→consider2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Beautifulandneathandwritingisbeneficial,especiallyformiddleschoolstudents.拓展句：Beautifulandneatcalligraphyisgoodforstudents,whichisespeciallyformiddleschoolstudents.【点睛】【高分句型1】10.9percentthinkthatpracticinghandwritingisuseless.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Asthesayinggoes,writingstyleshowstheman.（运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句）3．（2022·上海·上海市第二中学校考模拟预测）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.目前,网络语言（InternetSlang）在青少年中极为盛行，你校学生会在同学中就对网络语言的看法进行了调查，调查结果见下面饼状图（piechart）。请根据图中信息，用英语写一篇短文，介绍同学们的看法，并表达你自己的观点。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey.Theresultsareasfollows.Somestudentsareinfavorofitwhilesomeareopposed.35%studentsfeelitactiveandfashionabletosayInternetSlang.And33%studentsthinkitisfullofhumorandwisdom.QuarterstudentsholdtheopinionthatitismoreconvenienttouseInternetSlang.While7%studentsviewitasasimplething.TheythinkInternetSlangwasn'tusedbymostpeopleandifitisusedtoooften,itwillcausemisunderstanding.AsfarasIamconcerned,InternetSlangisadouble-edgedsword.Ifweuseitinaproperway,ouronlinecommunicationwillbemorecolorful.【分析】本篇书面表达属于议论文，要求考生就网络语言在同学中极为盛行的现象的调查结果进行阐述，并表达自己的观点。【详解】1.词汇积累越来越多：moreandmore→increasing支持：support→infavorof认为：think→holdtheopinionthat我认为：Ithink→AsfarasIamconcerned2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey.Theresultsareasfollows.拓展句：WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey,whoseresultsareasfollows.【点睛】[高分句型1]WiththeincreasingpopularityofInternetSlangamongteenagers,ourschoolhascarriedoutasurvey.(with的复合结构)[高分句型2]QuarterstudentsholdtheopinionthatitismoreconvenienttouseInternetSlang.(同位语从句)4．（2022·上海静安·统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.当今社会，短视频已成为高中生获取信息的渠道之一，日前，某网站对某地高中生使用短视频的现状作了调查，结果如下:获取短视频内容的类型受访者平均使用时间占比（该内容浏览时间/总浏览时间）辅助学习类48%娱乐休闲类31%生活技能类12%其他9%请简单描述该图表，并结合自身或他人情况，谈谈你的看法。（文中不得出现考生姓名，学校等真实信息）___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Asurveyconductedbyawebsiteisaimedatfiguringoutthesituationabouthighschoolstudents’useofshortvideosasachannelforgaininginformation.Asisclearlyshowninthetable,about48%oftheirtotalscreentimehasbeenspentoncontentsthatareofbenefittotheirstudywhiletimedistributedtovideosrelatedtoentertainmentandleisureaccountsfor31%.Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosconcerningsomeimportantlifeskills.And9%isspentonrandomcontents.AsfarasIamconcerned,itistheadvancesoftheInternetthatmakeitaccessibleforstudentstohelpwiththeirstudy,relievethemselvesofstressandimprovetheirknowledgeoflifeskillsthroughshortvideos.Thus,itisnowonderthatalargeproportionoftheirtimeisspentonshortvideos.Iamsurethatthistrendwillcontinueandlastforever.【导语】本文是一篇图表类型作文。要求考生表格展示的内容去描述某地高中使用短视频的现状。【详解】1.词汇积累旨在：beaimedat→beintendedtodo与……相关：relatedto→withregardto除此以外：inaddition→additionally提高：improve→enhance2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosconcerningsomeimportantlifeskills.拓展句：Inaddition,12%oftheirtimeistakenupbywatchingvideosthatarerelevanttosomeimportantlifeskills.【点睛】【高分句型1】Asisclearlyshowninthetable,about48%oftheirtotalscreentimehasbeenspentoncontentsthatareofbenefittotheirstudywhiletimedistributedtovideosrelatedtoentertainmentandleisureaccountsfor31%.（运用了as引导的非限制定语从句以及that引导的限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】AsfarasIamconcerned,itistheadvancesoftheInternetthatmakeitaccessibleforstudentstohelpwiththeirstudy,relievethemselvesofstressandimprovetheirknowledgeoflifeskillsthroughshortvideos.（运用了强调句型以及makeit+形容词+forsb.todosth.的结构）5．（2022·上海嘉定·高三专题练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120—150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.某校对中学生课余活动进行了调查，结果如图所示。请根据图表1提供的信息描述学生每天的课余活动，并针对图表2中任何一个数据所反映的情况谈谈你的观点。生词：图表chart_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

AsisshowninChart1,ondailybasis,themajorityofChinesemiddleschoolstudentsdevotenearly100minutestohomework,whereastheyspendlessandlesstimeonwatchingTV,enjoyingmusic,usingcomputers,physicalexerciseandhouseholdchore,roughly50,34,30,25and12minutesrespectively.I’vetosaythateitherChart1orChart2reflectsamostworryingsocialphenomenon.InChart2Ifindthatdoinghomeworktakesupalmost40%ofthechildren’soff-schooltime.Undersuchcircumstances,thestudentssimplycannotspareenoughtimeforfunthings,thuslosingtheprimetimetocultivatetheirsports,culturalandspiritualhobbies,nottosayanythingoftheirartisticdevelopment.Whenthestudentshavebecometestmachines,canweexpectthemtogrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy?Onbehalfofchildren,Isincerelyappealforlessacademicloadandmoreleisureactivities.【导语】本文是图表作文。要求考生对中学生课余活动进行的调查结果谈谈个人的观点。【详解】1.词汇积累据显示：Asisshown→Itisshownthat令人担心的：worrying→worrisome占据：takeup→occupy有趣的：fun→interesting2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Onbehalfofchildren,Isincerelyappealforlessacademicloadandmoreleisureactivities.拓展句：Onbehalfofchildren,Isincerelyappealforthefactthattherewillbelessacademicloadandmoreleisureactivities【点睛】【高分句型1】AsisshowninChart1,ondailybasis,themajorityofChinesemiddleschoolstudentsdevotenearly100minutestohomework,whereastheyspendlessandlesstimeonwatchingTV,enjoyingmusic,usingcomputers,physicalexerciseandhouseholdchore,roughly50,34,30,25and12minutesrespectively.（由as引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】I’vetosaythateitherChart1orChart2reflectsamostworryingsocialphenomenon.（由that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型3】InChart2,Ifindthatdoinghomeworktakesupalmost40%ofthechildren’soff-schooltime.（由that引导的宾语从句）【高分句型4】Whenthestudentshavebecometestmachines,canweexpectthemtogrowupmentallyandphysicallyhealthy?（由When引导的时间状语从句）6．（2022·上海嘉定·统考一模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是光明中学的学生张华。你们学校拟开设劳动课程，现给出如下方案，学校委托学生会征询大家的意见。内容高一：电器使用和维护高二：植物种植与养护高三：物品整理和收纳时间每学期最后两周，每周2整天地点理科实验专用教室给学生会写一封邮件，内容须包括：1)你认为该方案中存在的问题；2)你的建议和理由。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearStudents’Union,I’mwritingtoputforwardsomeadviceonthelaborcourseplannedbyyou.Itisofgreatbenefitforusstudentstotakealaborcoursewithanintentionofbuildingupourbodyandlearningmorelifeskills.However,accordingtotheschedule,thecontentofthelaborcourse,whichIthinkisnotappropriateforthesenior1students,issupposedtobeadjustedbecausetheyshouldbedevelopedsomebasicskillsofschoollifesothattheycanadapttotheindependentschoollifequickly.Furthermore,asfarasthetimegiventhelaborcourseisconcerned,itisnotenoughatall.Inordertopaymoreattentiontothelaborcourse,studentsshouldbeofferedmoretimetoexperiencemoreactivitiesrelatedtothelaborcourse.I’mdeeplyconvincedthataslongasyoutakemyadviceintoaccount,thislaborcoursewillbeinterestingandrewarding.Yourssincerely,ZhangHua【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给学校学生会写一封邮件，就学校拟开设劳动课程的方案提出问题，并给出建议和理由。【详解】1.词汇积累提出：putforward→comeupwith方案：schedule→plan此外：furthermore→what’smore考虑：take…intoaccount→take…intoconsideration2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’mwritingtoputforwardsomeadviceonthelaborcourseplannedbyyou.拓展句：I’mwritingtoputforwardsomeadviceonthelaborcoursewhichisplannedbyyou.【点睛】【高分句型1】Itisofgreatbenefitforusstudentstotakealaborcoursewithanintentionofbuildingupourbody,learningmorelifeskills.（运用了it作形式主语，不定式短语作真正主语）【高分句型2】However,accordingtotheschedule,thecontentofthelaborcourse,whichIthinkisnotappropriateforthesenior1,issupposedtobeadjustedbecausetheyshouldbedevelopedsomebasicskillsofschoollifesothattheycanadapttotheindependentschoollife.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句，because引导的原因状语从句以及sothat引导的目的状语从句）7．（2023·上海·上海市建平中学校考三模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章内容需涵盖：1.简要描述图表；2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代；3.你的理由。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Recently,ourschoolconductedasurveyonthetopicofwhetherteacherswillbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.10%ofrespondentswereunsure.34%saidtheythoughtteacherswouldbereplacedbyartificialintelligence,while56%saidno.Personallyspeaking,teacherswon’tbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.Intermsofeducatingpeople,teacherspossessqualitiesthatcannotbereplacedbyartificialintelligence.Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.Besides,artificialintelligenceisonlyapartialreplacementofteachers’labor,andcannotreplacetheroleofteachers.Thisisbecausealthoughrobotshavecommunicationfunctionssuchasdialogueandmovement,theyarefarfromtherichanddelicatefeelingsofhumanbeings.Thatistosay,thepossibilityofteachersbeingreplacedisverysmall,andteachersbecomeoneofthejobsthatartificialintelligenceisdifficulttoreplace.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，最近明启中学对教师是否会被人工智能取代这一话题开展了调查，调查结果如下图。假如你是该校高三学生李华，请就此话题谈谈你的看法，写一篇150-180的作文，文章内容需涵盖：1.简要描述图表；2.你认为教师是否会被人工智能取代；3.你的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累取代：replace→supersede拥有：possess→takepossessionof重要的：important→significant也就是说：thatistosay=inotherwords2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.拓展句：Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,whoknowhowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.【点睛】[高分句型1]Becauseinadditiontoteachingstudentsknowledge,teachershaveamoreimportantmission,whichistoeducatepeople.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Teachersarerichinfeelingsandwisdom,knowinghowtoimperceptiblyintotheexcellentqualityofeducation.(运用了现在分词作状语)8．（2023·上海·模拟预测）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.国际经合组织（OECD）对600,000名青少年就生活中最令他们担忧的事情进行了调查，结果如下图。请联系自身实际，谈谈最让令你担忧的事情及原因。【答案】TheORGANISATIONforEconomicCo-operationandDevelopment(OECD)asked600,000teenagerswhatworriedthemmostabouttheirlives.Itturnsoutthatfortypercentofthestudentsintheiracademicassignmentsfeelpressure;thirtypercentofthestudentsontheirrelationshipwiththeirparentsfeelalittlenervous;twenty-fivepercentofthestudentsintheirownimagemorecareabout,givingthemsomeconfusion.Theremainingfivepercentofthestudentsfeelanxiousandconcernedaboutotherthings.AsfarasIamconcerned,sometimestheproblemsthatmakemeworryaremainlyinstudy.Itmakesmefeelanxiousandconfusedandsometimeshelpless.Maybebecauseofafailureinanexam,Iwillbeinabadmood.Toimprovetheirpsychologicalquality,Ithinkwestudentsshouldbebetterimproved.Ithinkweshouldgetmorehelpfromparentsandteachers.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图表类作文。要求考生针对国际经合组织（OECD）对600,000名青少年就生活中最令他们担忧的事情进行调查的结果，联系自身实际，谈谈最让令你担忧的事情及原因。【详解】1.词汇积累压力：pressure→stress担心：beconcernedabout→beworriedabout就我而言：asfarasIamconcerned→personallyspeaking无助的：helpless→unassisted2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Maybebecauseofafailureinanexam,Iwillbeinabadmood.拓展句：ItismaybebecauseofafailureinanexamthatIwillbeinabadmood.【点睛】【高分句型1】twenty-fivepercentofthestudentsintheirownimagemorecareabout,givingthemsomeconfusion.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作伴随状语。）【高分句型2】AsfarasIamconcerned,sometimestheproblemsthatmakemeworryaremainlyinstudy.（运用了连词that引导的限制性定语从句。）9．（2021秋·上海·高三华师大二附中校考阶段练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.下面的饼状图显示了某校对学生学业成绩评价的新体制，图表所示的五个方面构成了一个学生的学业成绩。假如你是该校学生，请你以“TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool”为题用英语写一篇短文，内容包括：1.简要描述图中信息；2.谈谈你对这一新举措的看法并说明原因。图表说明：①testresults②notes③homework④classperformances⑤teamwork____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool

Inordertohelpstudentsdeveloptheirabilitiesinallfields,ourschoolnowhasaskedtheteacherstomakesomechangesinthegradingsystem.Thischartshowshowitworks.

Students’testresults,whichusedtobetheonlywaytoevaluateastudentinschool,makeuponly30%ofhisfinalscore.Instead,howastudentperformsinclass,andhowhetakesnotesanddoeshishomeworkaretakenintoaccount,eachpartofwhichmakesup20%.Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant.Ifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.

I’mallforthenewgradingsystem,whichevaluatesstudentsinallfields.Onlybyputtingthesystemintopractice,canwefullydevelopourabilitiesaswellaspotentialonthewaytoadulthoodandtrulymakepreparationsforourfuturelife.【分析】本篇书面表达属于图表作文，要求考生以“TheNewGradingSysteminOurSchool”为题写一篇短文，内容包括：简要描述图表信息以及谈谈对这一新举措的看法并说明原因。【详解】1.词汇积累评估：evaluate→assess考虑：takeintoaccount→consider重要的：important→ofimportance擅长：begoodat→dowellin2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant.Ifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.拓展句：Besides,teamworkinclassisalsoimportant,whichmeansifyouwantahigherscore,youshouldbegoodatworkingtogetherwithyourclassmates.【点睛】[高分句型1]Instead,howastudentperformsinclass,andhowhetakesnotesanddoeshishomeworkaretakenintoaccount,eachpartofwhichmakesup20%.(运用了how引导的主语从句和ofwhich引导的非限制性定语从句)[高分句型2]Onlybyputtingthesystemintopractice,canwefullydevel