进阶练14 书信作文（满分范文）专练-新高考英语一轮总复习（上海专用）（解析版）

PAGE1PAGE2进阶练14书信作文（满分范文）专练（解析版）学校:___________姓名：___________班级：___________考号：___________一、其他应用文(共0分1．（2023·上海·一模）假如你是明启中学高三学生李华，你校学生会正在征集志愿者活动方案，请在以下三项活动中选择一项：一、深入社区宣传环保知识；二、担任“奉贤博物馆”义务讲解员；三、去孤儿院为孩子们上兴趣课。请你给学生会写封邮件，内容须包括：1.你的选择及理由；2.你准备如何做。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:DearSir/Madam,Ourschoolwillholdavolunteeractivity,whichmaybechosenfromthefollowingthreeprogrammes:publicizingknowledgeofenvironmentalprotectiontocommunities,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxianMuseumandconductinginterestinglessonstokidsintheorphanage.Inmyopinoin,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxianMuseumissuitableforstudents.TherearetworeasonswhyIchoosethesecondactivity.Tostartwith,it’savaluableopportunityforstudentstohaveabetterknowledgeoftheFengxianMuseum,duringwhichtheycanbroadentheirhorizons.Besides,it’sbeneficialforstudentstoimprovetheircommunicationskillsespeciallyEnglishspeakingbecausetherearemanyforeignersvisitingit.IfI’mluckyenoughtobechosenasoneguide,Iwillcherishthegoldenopportunityandmakefullpreparations,suchassearchingmaterialsontheInternetandaskingteachersforhelp.SincerelyLiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给校学生会写封邮件在三个志愿者活动策划中选择某一项活动，并阐述选择的理由和要如何做。【详解】1.词汇积累项目：programme→project除此之外：besides→moreover珍惜：cherish→treasure寻求某人的帮助：asksbforhelp→seeksb’shelp2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：Inmyopinoin,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxianMuseumissuitableforstudents.拓展句：Inmyopinoin,beingavolunteerguidefortheFengxianMuseumissuitableforstudents,fromwhichstudentscanlearnalot.【高分句型1】Tostartwith,it’savaluableopportunityforstudentstohaveabetterknowledgeoftheFengxianMuseum,duringwhichtheycanbroadentheirhorizons.（运用了介词+which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】IfI’mluckyenoughtobechosenasoneguide,Iwillcherishthegoldenopportunityandmakefullpreparations,suchassearchingmaterialsontheInternetandaskingteachersforhelp.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）2．（2023·上海闵行·统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学的学生李华，你们学校将组织一次高三学生参观大学的活动，学生可以从“专业及课程介绍(MajorandCourseDescriptions)”;“参观图书馆、实验室(Library&LaboratoryVisiting)”;“随班学习体验(OnSpotStudying)”和“与教授面对面(DialoguewithProfessors)”四个活动中选取两个作为主要活动，特此向高三学生征求意见。请你写一封邮件给活动组织者，内容须包括：1.你最感兴趣的两个活动;2.你对这两个活动感兴趣的理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

Hearingthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,Iamveryexcitedandhappy.WhatIwanttoparticipateinarethetwoactivities,MajorandCourseDescriptionsandOnSpotStudying.Firstofall,IamfondoftheactivityMajorandCourseDescriptions,whichcanhelpmehaveadeeperunderstandingoftheuniversity'sprofessionalcoursesandclarifythedirectionformyfuturestudy.Besides,IamdeeplyinterestedintheactivityOnSpotStudying.Intheactivity,Icantrulyexperiencethelearningatmosphereoftheuniversity.Meanwhile，itoffersmeangoodchancetoknowmoreabouthowthestudentsintheuniversitytakecourseseveryday，whichwillmakemedecidewhetherIshouldchangethewaythatIlearninthemiddleschool.

Allinall,theactivityofvisitingtheuniversityisofgreathelptoourfutureplanning.Iamlookingforwardtothearrivalofthatday.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给活动组织者写一封信，说明你对学校组织的高三学生参观大学的活动中感兴趣的两个活动以及对这两个活动感兴趣的理由【详解】1.词汇积累喜欢：befondof→enjoy高兴的：happy→pleased→delighted此外：besides→what’smore机会：chance→opportunity2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Hearingthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,Iamveryexcitedandhappy.拓展句：BecauseIhearthattheschoolwillorganizeanactivityforseniorthreestudentstovisittheuniversity,Iamveryexcitedandhappy.【点睛】【高分句型1】WhatIwanttoparticipateinarethetwoactivities,MajorandCourseDescriptionsandOnSpotStudying.（运用了what引导的主语从句）【高分句型2】Meanwhile,itoffersmeangoodchancetoknowmoreabouthowthestudentsintheuniversitytakecourseseveryday，whichwillmakemedecidewhetherIshouldchangethewaythatIlearninthemiddleschool.（运用了how与whether引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句以及that引导的定语从句）3．（2023·上海黄浦·统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是海平中学高三学生李明，你所在的社区将在暑假开设面向小学生的日间托管服务，现招募社区高中生志愿者，要求每一位志愿者能根据自己的特长开设一门微课程。请写一封应聘信(信中请不要出现真实的个人信息)，信的内容须包括：1)简单的自我介绍；2)你准备开设的微课程的名称和主要内容；3)你开设这门微课程的理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearSir/Madam,IamLiMingfromClass1,Senior3ofHaipingMiddleSchool.I’mwritingtoapplyforthepositiontohelptheprimaryschoolstudentsinourcommunity.Iamverygoodatmathematics,andIoftenmakesomemicro-coursesforprimaryschoolstudents.Iplantosetupamicro-course,thenameofwhichis“Mathematicsinourdailylife”.Thiscoursemainlyintroduceshowtousemathineverydaylifesothatprimaryschoolstudentscanhaveadeeperunderstandingoftheimportanceofmathematicsthroughexamples.Thereasonwhythismicro-courseissetupisthatmanystudentsarenotinterestedinlearningmathematics.What’smore,mathematicsisrarelyusedinreallife,somanypeoplethinkthatlearningmathematicsismeaningless.Ihopethiscoursecanhelpmoreprimaryschoolstudents,andIalsohopetogetthisopportunitytoimprovemyself.Yours,LiMing【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一封应聘信应聘社区高中生志愿者，内容包括简单的自我介绍，准备开设的微课程的名称和主要内容以及开设该课程的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累计划：plan→intend而且：what’smore→moreover机会：opportunity→chance提高：improve→promote2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：I’mwritingtoapplyforthepositiontohelptheprimaryschoolstudentsinourcommunity.拓展句：I’mwritingtoapplyforthepositionwhereIcanhelptheprimaryschoolstudentsinourcommunity,【点睛】【高分句型1】Iplantosetupamicro-course,thenameofwhichis“Mathematicsinourdailylife”.（运用了“介词+which”引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Thereasonwhythismicro-courseissetupisthatmanystudentsarenotinterestedinlearningmathematics.（运用了why引导的定语从句和that引导的表语从句）4．（2023·上海长宁·统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华。学校将开设讲座“上海老洋房”，现就讲座内容征求学生的意见。请给负责的王老师写封邮件，具体提出你的建议。内容须包括：1)你对讲座内容的具体建议；2)简述你的理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMr./Ms.Wang,Learningthatourschoolisseekingforstudents’adviceconcerningthelecturerelatedtotheoldwestern-stylehousesinShanghai,Iamveryexcited.Hence,Iamwritingtosharemyviews.First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses.Thisundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeepimpressionoftheirappearance.Besides,anotheraspectshouldbeincludedintothelectureistheprofoundculturebehindthesehistoricalbuildings.Becauseitisculturalfactorsthatmakethesehousesvaluable.Lastbutnotleast,howaboutofferingtheaudiencesomeusefultipsastohowtopreservethesepreciousbuildings?Onlybyknowingthatcanweprotectthemefficiently.Asabigfanoftheseoldbuildings,Isincerelyhopeyoucouldtakemysuggestionsintoconsideration.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Respectfullyyours,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生李华的身份为学校即将举办的“上海老洋房”讲座提供建议，提出讲座应该包含什么内容，并指明提出这些建议的理由。【详解】1.词汇积累关于：about→concerning深厚的：deep→profound保护：protect→preserve考虑：consider→takesth.intoconsideration2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses.Thisundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeepimpressionoftheirappearance.拓展句：First,itisnecessarytoshowsomephotosoftheseoldhouses,whichundoubtedlywouldleaveusadeepimpressionoftheirappearance.【点睛】[高分句型1]Becauseitisculturalfactorsthatmakethesehousesvaluable.(运用了itis+被强调部分+that+其他成分的强调句句型)[高分句型2]Learningthatourschoolisseekingforstudents’adviceconcerningthelecturerelatedtotheoldwestern-stylehousesinShanghai,Iamveryexcited.(运用了that引导的表语从句)5．（2023·上海青浦·统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是浦润中学高三学生李青。你的学校即将举办“回眸五十年”纪念活动，你在学生会参与相关的准备工作，并负责向来宾介绍学校的变化，等等。请就此给你的英国好友Alan写封邮件交流你的想法。你的邮件必须包括：1.介绍纪念活动的主要内容；2.描述你所见闻的学校变化；3.简述你对学校发展的期许。(注：文中不得出现真实的姓名及学校名称。)________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearAlan,Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventcalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears”attheendofthismonth.Iwillparticipateintherelevantpreparationsasamemberofthestudentunionandberesponsibleforintroducingthechangesintheschooltoguests.Becausethiseventissoimportant,Ineedsomeadvicefromyou.Thiscommemorativeeventconsistsofthreeparts:invitingtheprincipaltogiveaspeech,leadinggueststovisittheschoolachievementexhibitionandholdingacelebrationparty,whichwillbesignificant.Asisknown,ourschoolhasundergonetremendouschangesinthepast50years.State-of-the-artteachingequipmentandevenartificialintelligencedevicestoassistinteachinghavebeenequippedinourschool.Besides,therearevariousculturalclubsandcommunitiestoenrichourleisurelife.Hopemyschoolwillbecomebetterandbetter!Yours,LiQing【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给你的英国好友Alan写封邮件介绍你学校即将举办“回眸五十年”纪念活动，内容包括纪念活动的主要内容、你所见闻的学校变化和对学校发展的期许。【详解】1.词汇积累参加：participatein→joinin此外：besides→what’smore希望：hope→wish帮助：assist→help2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventcalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears”attheendofthismonth.拓展句：Myschoolisabouttoholdacommemorativeeventwhichiscalled“LookingBackonFiftyYears”attheendofthismonth.【点睛】【高分句型1】Thiscommemorativeeventconsistsofthreeparts:invitingtheprincipaltogiveaspeech,leadinggueststovisittheschoolachievementexhibitionandholdingacelebrationparty,whichwillbesignificant.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句）【高分句型2】Becausethiseventissoimportant,Ineedsomeadvicefromyou.（运用了because引导的原因状语）6．（2023春·上海·高三上海市大同中学校考阶段练习）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是启明中学的高三学生古月胡，你校计划引入一款人工智能批改系统来辅助教师批改作业与部分试卷。有些同学表示支持，但也有部分同学表示了担忧。因此学校委托学生会征询大家对人工智能批改系统的意见。给学生会写一封邮件，内容须包括：1)你对人工智能批改系统的看法；2)你的理由。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearPresidentoftheStudentUnion,

Iamfortunatetolearnthatwiththeprogressofscienceandtechnology,ourschoolplanstointroduceanartificialintelligencegradingsystemtoassistteachersingradinghomeworkandsometestpapers.Somestudentssupportit,whileothersopposeit.Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,contributingtoachievingeducationalfairness.Moreover,itisnotonlytimelyandcost-effective,butcanalsoreceivecontinuousandpositivefeedback,whichisofgreathelptoforeignlanguagelearners.Whatisthemostimportantforusisthatthegradingsystemcanforceustopromoteourabilitytoimprovestandardizedanswers.Isincerelyhopethatthisartificialintelligencegradingsystemcanbeappliedtoourschoolassoonaspossible.Yours,GuYuehu【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会写一封邮件表达对人工智能批改系统的看法。【详解】1.词汇积累进步：progress→improvement引入：introduce→bringin帮助：assist→help支持：support→areinfavorof2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,contributingtoachievingeducationalfairness.拓展句：Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,whichcontributestoachievingeducationalfairness.【点睛】【高分句型1】Frommyperspective,thiskindofgradingsystemisnotinfluencedbysubjectiveemotions,contributingtoachievingeducationalfairness.（运用了现在分词短语contributingto充当结果状语）【高分句型2】Whatisthemostimportantforusisthatthegradingsystemcanforceustopromoteourabilitytoimprovestandardizedanswers.（运用了What引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句）7．（2023·上海浦东新·统考三模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假设你是明启中学的高三学生李华，学校拟举办“汉语文化周”活动，现在向全校师生征集活动策划案。请给学生会写一封邮件表达你的想法。你的邮件须包括以下内容：1)介绍具体活动方案；2)说明理由。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearStudentUnion,I’mwritingtosharemyideafortheupcoming“ChineseCultureWeek”eventatMingqiHighSchool.IproposethatwehostaseriesofactivitieshighlightingtraditionalChineseartsandculture.Firstly,wecouldorganizeacalligraphyworkshopwherestudentscanlearnhowtowriteChinesecharactersusingbrushandink.Thiswouldnotonlygivestudentsachancetolearnanewskill,butalsotoappreciatethebeautyandmeaningbehindChinesecharacters.Secondly.wecouldholdascreeningofaniconicChinesemovieorTVshow.Suchas“MonkeyKing”or“DreamoftheRedChamber”.ThiswouldprovidestudentswithaglimpseintoChinesehistoryandculture,andfostercross-culturalunderstanding.Finally,wecouldinviteaguestspeakertotalkabouttraditionalChinesemedicine,suchasacupunctureorherbalremedies.Thiswouldallowstudentstolearnaboutalternativeapproachestohealthcareandbroadentheirperspectivesonhealthandwellness.Ibelievethathostingtheseactivitiesduring“ChineseCultureWeek”wouldbebeneficialforseveralreasons.Firstly,itwouldhelppromoteculturaldiversityandunderstandingamongourstudentbody.Secondly,itwouldprovidestudentswithanopportunitytolearnaboutChinesecultureandhistory,whichisimportantintoday’sglobalizedworld.Lastly,itwouldbeafunandengagingwaytocelebrateourschool’scommitmenttopromotingculturalexchangeandeducation.Thankyouforconsideringmyproposal.Ilookforwardtohearingyourthoughtsonthismatter.[241words]Sincerely,LiHua【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的活动策划案。要求考生向学生会写一封邮件，表达自己对于学校拟举办的“汉语文化周”活动所设想的活动策划案。【详解】1.词汇积累首先：firstly→firstofall机会：chance→opportunity最后：finally→lastly/lastbutnotleast提高、促进：promote→enhance/improve考虑：consider→thinkabout2.句式拓展同义句转换原句：IproposethatwehostaseriesofactivitieshighlightingtraditionalChineseartsandculture.拓展句：IproposethatwehostaseriesofactivitieswhichwillhighlighttraditionalChineseartsandculture.【点睛】【高分句型1】Firstly,wecouldorganizeacalligraphyworkshopwherestudentscanlearnhowtowriteChinesecharactersusingbrushandink.（运用了where引导定语从句）【高分句型2】Secondly,itwouldprovidestudentswithanopportunitytolearnaboutChinesecultureandhistory,whichisimportantintoday’sglobalizedworld.（运用了which引导定语从句）8．（2023·上海·卢湾高级中学校考三模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.76.每年4月22日是世界地球日(WorldEarthDay)。为积极响应世界地球日活动，你校学生会开展了宣传海报的评比活动。现已初评得出如下的前三名海报，并在全校范围评选最佳海报。写封邮件给你校学生会，内容须包括：你选出的最佳海报及其简介;你的理由。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dearstudentunion,Ilikethesecondpicture.Fromthispicture,wecanknowthatoriginally,theearthhasaclearbrook,greenforest,andthebluesky.Ancienttimes,howmanypoetspraisingtheearthbeautifulenvironment!Butnowtheearthisinbadcondition.Forexample,insomeplaces,theairandwaterpollutionissoseriousthatitcausesmanydeaths.Atthesametime,manyanimalsandplantsareindangerbecauseofthedestructionoftheirhabitats.Ithinkthispictureisareminderofustoprotectourearth.Ihopewehumanbeingscanrealizetheproblem.Weshoulddosomethinggoodfortheearth,suchascleaningupbeachesandwater,pickinguprubbish,andgivespeechestocallonmorepeopletotakeaction.TodayisWorldEarthDay,andmillionsofpeoplehavecontributedtoprotectingtheenvironment.

Butcanwesavetheearthonlybyoneday’swork?Thefutureofourplanetdependsonourefforts.WhatweshoulddoistomakeeverydayEarthDay.Onlybytakinggoodcareofiteverydaycanwehopetoliveinharmonywithnature.Therefore,Ihopethispicturecanbethebestone.【详解】1.词汇积累干净的：clear→clearn同时：Atthesametime→Meanwhile照顾：takegoodcareof→lookafter号召：callon→callupon2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Atthesametime,manyanimalsandplantsareindangerbecauseofthedestructionoftheirhabitats.拓展句：Atthesametime,manyanimalsandplantsareindangerbecausetheirhabitatsaredestroyed.【点睛】【高分句型1】wecanknowthatoriginally,theearthhasaclearbrook,greenforest,thebluesky.（运用了that连接的宾语从句）【高分句型2】Weshoulddosomethinggoodfortheearth,suchascleaningupbeachesandwater,pickinguprubbish,

andgivespeechestocallonmorepeopletotakeaction.（运用了动名词短语并列作宾语）9．（2023·上海徐汇·统考二模）Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese.假如你是明启中学的李平。你的朋友Jenny来信说：随着大学申请和期末考试的临近，她十分忙碌，经常熬夜，没有时间参加喜欢的社团活动和社交生活，她感到难以平衡学业、课外活动和社会生活。请你写封邮件给她，内容包括：1.分析她面临的主要问题；2.提出相应的建议和理由。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearJenny,WordscannotexpresshowsorryIamtohearthatyoucan’tbalanceamongacademic,extra-curricularactivitiesandsociallifebecauseyoucannotadapttothebusyschoollife,likeworryingaboutschoolwork,andhavingnotimetorelax.Don’tworry.Iwillofferyousometips.Firstofall,Irecommendthatyouhaveabalanceddiet,whichcangiveyoumoreenergytostudyharderthanbefore.Inaddition,itwouldbeofgreatbenefitifyoutakeanactivepartinsomeextra-curricularactivities.Thatway,youcanmakenewfriends,whichcouldmakestressoffyourshoulder.Lastbutnotleast,Isuggestthatyouturntoyourteachersforhelpsinceteachers’encouragementandstudymethodwillalwaysliftyouup.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillfindmysuggestionspracticalandwishyougetridofthosetroublesassoonaspossible.

Yours,LiPing【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假如你是李平，你的朋友Jenny临近大学申请和期末考试。她写信向你诉说了她的困扰：感到难以平衡学业、课外活动和社会生活。请你根据以下要点给她写一封回信。【详解】1.词汇积累建议：tip→advice/suggestion表达：express→convey能够：can→beableto/becapableof此外：inaddition→besides2.句式拓展合并简单句原句：Don’tworry.Iwillofferyousometips.拓展句：Don’tworrybecauseIwillofferyousometips.【点睛】[高分句型1]WordscannotexpresshowsorryIamtohearthatyoucan’tbalanceamongacademic,extra-curricularactivitiesandsociallifebecauseyoucannotadapttothebusyschoollife,likeworryingaboutschoolwork,andhavingnotimetorelax.(运用了that引导宾语从句和because引导原因状语从句)[高分句型2]Lastbutnotleast,Isuggestthatyouturntoyourteachersforhelpsinceteachers’encouragementandstudymethodwillalwaysliftyouup.(运用了that引导宾语从句和since引导原因状语从句)10．（2023春·