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高考英语读后续写语篇练习童年好奇入林记,迷途方知母言重1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Undoubtedly,MotherNatureisalwaysattractivetokids.Inourchildhood,howoftendidweturnadeafeartoourparents’advice?Veryoften!Thus,welandedourselvesinasituationwherewegreatlyregrettedouractofnothavinglistenedtotheadviceofthewise.SuchanunforgettableexperienceIhadattheageof7gavemeaninvaluablelesson,afterwhichIdeeplyunderstoodwhymygentlemotherwasrepeatingtheboringsuggestionsandIwouldtrytotakehersuggestionsseriously.4续写原文Inmychildhood,Iwassocrazyaboutnaturethatevenplayingamongthecolorfulflowersinourgardencouldmakemyday.Ourhousewasnexttothewoodswhichhadalwaysstirredup(激起)greatcuriosityinmeinwantingtofindoutwhatwaswithin.EverytimeIsawfascinatingbutterfliesdancingfromthewoods,mycuriositygrew.Butmymotherdidn’tlikemewanderingoffonmyownandalwaysensuredthatIwaswithinhersight.Evenifsheallowedmetoexplorethesurroundingareaonmyown,itwasonlytobesomewherenearthehouse.Beingascuriousasthecat,Ialwaysdesiredtoexplorethewoods.Itseemedasifmymotherhadunderstoodmydesire,soshehadwarmedmeonlotsofoccasionsnevertoenterthewoodsalone.5续写原文“Mom,canIgooutandplayinthegarden?”Iasked.“Sure,”shewouldreplyeachtime.“Kate,youcanplayinthegardenbutyoumustpromisemeonething—onlywhenI’mwithyoucanyougointothewoods.Therearenocasesofanimalattacksonhumans,butit’sstilldangerousforalittlekidlikeyou.It’stooeasytogetlostinthewoods.”“Sure,you’vesaidthatmanytimes!”Iansweredwithoutpatienceatherrepeatedreminders.6段首句Paragraph1:However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.Paragraph2:“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9大自然对孩子总是充满吸引力,7岁的“我”便是如此。“我”家毗邻树林,“我”对树林满怀好奇,渴望探索其中。母亲虽允许“我”在花园玩耍,但反复叮嘱不能独自进入树林,担心有危险。“我”却对母亲的多次提醒感到不耐烦,最终在好奇心的驱使下,还是做出了冒险的决定。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:
However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.然而,一天早上,好奇心战胜了我。我在花园玩耍时,一只色彩斑斓的蝴蝶翩翩从树林中飞出,停在一朵花上。我目不转睛地盯着它,脑海里不断回响着母亲的告诫,但那神秘的树林实在太有吸引力了。终于,我忍不住跨过花园围栏,蹑手蹑脚地走进树林。初入树林,清新的草木香气扑面而来,我看到了许多从未见过的野花和形状奇特的石头。我兴奋地追逐着蝴蝶,越走越深。可渐渐地,周围的景色变得陌生起来,阳光透过茂密的枝叶洒下,形成一片片光斑,我开始感到害怕,意识到自己可能迷路了。11续写思路分析Para2:“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.“凯特?”在被夕阳余晖笼罩的树林深处,传来母亲的声音。我又惊又喜,大声回应:“妈妈,我在这儿!”声音带着哭腔。我朝着声音的方向拼命跑去,树枝划破了我的衣服,脚下的落叶让我差点摔倒。终于,我看到了母亲焦急的身影。母亲紧紧抱住我,眼中含着泪,说:“宝贝,你吓死妈妈了。”我愧疚地低下头,向母亲道歉。这次经历让我深刻明白,母亲的叮嘱都是为了我的安全。从那以后,我再也不敢轻易违背母亲的话,每当面对诱惑时,都会想起这次在树林里的可怕经历。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现However,curiositygotthebetterofmeonemorning.Whileplayinginthegarden,Isawabrightly-coloredbutterflyflutteringoutofthewoodsandalightingonaflower.Istaredatitintently,mymother'swarningsechoinginmymind.Buttheallureofthemysteriouswoodswasjusttoostrong.Eventually,Icouldn'tresistandsteppedoverthegardenfence,creepingintothewoods.AssoonasIentered,thefreshscentofplantsandearthhitme.IsawmanywildflowersIhadneverseenbeforeandoddly-shapedrocks.Excitedly,Ichasedafterthebutterfly,goingdeeperanddeeper.Gradually,thesurroundingsbecameunfamiliar.Thesunlightfilteredthroughthethickfoliage,creatingpatchesoflight.IbegantofeelscaredandrealizedthatImightbelost.14范文呈现“Kate?”Behindthetreescoveredbytheraysofthesettingsuncamemymother’svoice.Iwasbothsurprisedanddelighted,shouting,“Mom,I’mhere!”withacryingtone.IrantowardsthevoiceasfastasIcould.Branchesscratchedmyclothes,andthefallenleavesunderfootalmostmademefall.Finally,Isawmymother'sanxiousfigure.Shehuggedmetightly,hereyesfilledwithtears.“Honey,youscaredmetodeath,”shesaid.Ihungmyheadinshameandapologizedtoher.Thisexperiencemademedeeplyunderstandthatmymother'swarningswereallformysafety.Fromthenon,Ineverdaredtodisobeymymothereasily.WheneverIfacedtemptations,Iwouldthinkofthisterrifyingexperienceinthewoods.15升级版范文呈现However,curiosityovercamemeonefatefulmorning.AsIwasengrossedinplayinginthegarden,aresplendently-coloredbutterflyflutteredoutfromthewoods,gracefullylandingonaflower.Mesmerized,Ifixedmygazeuponit,mymother'srepeatedwarningsreverberatinginmymind.Nevertheless,theallureoftheenigmaticwoodsprovedirresistible.Withoutfurtherhesitation,Isteppedoverthegardenfenceandstealthilymademywayintothewoods.ThemomentIentered,afresh,earthyaromaofplantsassailedmynostrils.Ibeheldnumerouswildflowershithertounseenbymeandpeculiarly-shapedrocks.Inastateofexhilaration,Igavechasetothebutterfly,venturingdeeperanddeeperintothewoods.Beforelong,thesurroundingsbecameunrecognizable.Sunlight,filteringthroughthedensefoliage,createdadappledpatternoflightandshadow.Asenseoffearcreptoverme,andIsuddenlyrealizedthatIhadlostmyway.16升级版范文呈现“Kate?”Camemymother'svoice,faintlyechoingfrombehindthetreesbathedinthewarmglowofthesettingsun.Asurgeofsurpriseandjoycoursedthroughme,andIcriedout,“Mom,I’mhere!”myvoicetingedwithsobs.Isprintedtowardsthesourceofthevoice,heedlessofthebranchesthatscratchedmyclothesandtheslipperyfallenleavesthatthreatenedtotripmeup.Finally,Icaughtsi
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