高中英语读后续写练习+岁月困境中收获邻里善意之光+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习岁月困境中，收获邻里善意之光1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文StevenGreenwasahard-workingmanwhoworkedallhislifetosupporthisfamily.Heneverfinishedcollege,sohehadtotakehardlaborjobsaroundtheneighborhood.Heworkedasabuilderandacarpenterthroughtheyears.Heoftenhelpedhisneighborswheneverhewasneeded.However,ashegrewolder,hecouldnolongerdothesejobs.Hiskneesgrewweak,andhishealthconditionmadeitdifficultforhimtodohardwork.Steven’skidsdidn’tliveinthesamestateashimandcouldonlysendhimasmallsumofmoneybecausetheyalsoledapoorlife.Unfortunately,Stevenexperiencedconstantphysicalpainafteryearsofhardwork,andheneededtotakemedicineeveryday.Themoneyofferedbyhiskidswasonlyenoughforfood,andhissavingsweresmall.Realizingthatheneededmoremoney,Stevendecidedtogetajobagain.Heeventuallyfoundajobasadoorkeeper.Atfirst,hissalarywasenoughtopayforthegroceriesandthemedicineheneeded.However,duetohisadvancedage,hestartedtoneedmoremedicine,whichcostalot.4续写原文Topaythegrowingbills,Stevenbegantotakeitemsfromhishometoasecond-handstoretogetsomemoney.Oneday,ashewascarryinganoldradiotothestore,hisneighbor,Ben,sawhim.“Mr.Green,it’ssogoodtoseeyou!Howhaveyoubeen?”Benasked.“I’mdoinggreat.I’mjustsellingsomestuffathomethatIdon’tneedanymoreforsomecash.Beingweakisterriblewhenyou’reold,sotakecareofyourselfwhenyouareyoung,alright?”hesaidalmostjokingly.Bennodded.“Thanksforthetip,Mr.Green!”hesaidbeforewavinggoodbye.Thatsameday,Stevenwascookingdinnerwhenheheardthedoorbellring.Notexpectinganyone,hewalkedcuriouslytothedoor.5段首句Paragraph1：Surprisingly,hesawBenstandingtherewithajacketinhisarms.Paragraph2：“Benmusthaveforgottenaboutthecheckinthepocket,”Steventhought.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了史蒂文・格林一生辛勤工作，因未完成大学学业，长期从事体力劳动。随着年龄增长，身体状况恶化，无法再胜任重活。他的孩子们生活贫困，只能给予少量经济支持。为支付日益增长的医疗费用，史蒂文在做门卫之余，还变卖家中物品。一天，邻居本看到他拿着旧收音机去二手店，之后本带着一件夹克来访，留下了一张大额支票，帮助史蒂文缓解经济压力。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1:

Surprisingly,hesawBenstandingtherewithajacketinhisarms.出乎意料的是，他看到本身穿夹克站在门口。本笑着说：“格林先生，最近天气转凉了，我清理衣柜时发现这件夹克，您穿上肯定暖和。”史蒂文心里一暖，忙把本请进屋。本进屋后，随意地打量着房间，留意到桌上摆放的各类药品，眼神中闪过一丝担忧。他询问史蒂文的生活近况，史蒂文虽不想让本担心，只是轻描淡写地说还过得去。本却察觉到史蒂文话语背后的艰难。临走时，本紧紧握住史蒂文的手，真诚地说道：“格林先生，您要是有啥难处，可一定要跟我说。”然后匆匆离开。史蒂文站在门口，望着本离去的背影，心中满是感动。10续写思路分析Para2：“Benmusthaveforgottenaboutthecheckinthepocket,”Steventhought.“本肯定是忘了夹克口袋里的支票。”史蒂文心想。当他打开支票，看到上面的金额时，整个人愣住了。那是一笔足以支付他好几个月医药费的巨款。史蒂文简直不敢相信自己的眼睛，内心五味杂陈。他深知这笔钱对自己意味着什么，可又觉得受之有愧。第二天，史蒂文怀揣着支票来到本的家，想要把支票还回去。本坚决不收，认真地说：“格林先生，这么多年来，您为大家做了太多。现在您有困难，我们帮您是应该的。”史蒂文听后，眼眶湿润，最终他满含感激地收下了这份沉甸甸的善意，深刻体会到善有善报的道理。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现Surprisingly,hesawBenstandingtherewithajacketinhisarms.“Mr.Green,it'sgettingcoldthesedays.Ifoundthisjacketwhilecleaningmycloset.I'msureit'llkeepyouwarm,”Bensaidwithawarmsmile.StevenwasdeeplytouchedandinvitedBenin.Afterenteringtheroom,Bencasuallyglancedaroundandnoticedthevariousmedicinesonthetable.Hiseyesshowedahintofworry.HeaskedStevenabouthisrecentlife.AlthoughStevendidn'twanttoworryBenandjustsaidthateverythingwasokay,Bencouldsensethehardshipbehindhiswords.Beforeleaving,BenfirmlyheldSteven'shandandsaidsincerely,“Mr.Green,ifyouhaveanydifficulties,youmusttellme.”Thenheleftinahurry.Standingatthedoor,StevenwatchedBen'sdepartingfigure,filledwithgratitude.13范文呈现“Benmusthaveforgottenaboutthecheckinthepocket,”Steventhought.Whenheunfoldedthecheckandsawtheamountonit,hewascompletelystunned.Itwasalargesumofmoneythatwasenoughtocoverhismedicalexpensesforseveralmonths.Stevencouldhardlybelievehiseyes,andhisheartwasfilledwithmixedemotions.Heknewwhatthismoneymeanttohim,buthealsofeltthathedidn'tdeserveit.Thenextday,StevenwenttoBen'shousewiththecheck,intendingtoreturnit.Benfirmlyrefusedtotakeitbackandsaidseriously,“Mr.Green,you'vedonesomuchforallofusovertheyears.Nowthatyou'reintrouble,it'sourturntohelpyou.”Withtearsinhiseyes,Stevenfinallyacceptedthisheavy-heartedkindness,deeplyrealizingthatkindnessalwayspaysoff.14升级版范文呈现Surprisingly,hesawBenstandingtherewithajacketinhisarms."Mr.Green,astheweatherturnschilly,Ithoughtthisjacketmightbringyousomewarmth,"Benremarked,agenuinesmilegracinghisface.TouchedbyBen'sthoughtfulness,Stevenwelcomedhiminside.Onceintheroom,Ben'seyescasuallysweptacrossthespace,quicklylandingonthearrayofmedicationsonthetable,hisexpressionbetrayingatingeofconcern.HeinquiredaboutSteven'swell-being,towhichSteven,reluctanttoburdenBen,downplayedhisstruggles.However,Bensawthroughthefacade.Ashepreparedtoleave,BengraspedSteven'shandfirmly,sayingearnestly,"Mr.Green,shouldyoueverneedanything,don'thesitatetoreachout."Withthat,hehurriedoff.Steven,standingatthethreshold,watchedBen'sretreatingform,aprofoundsenseofgratitudeswellingwithinhim.15升级版范文呈现"Benmusthaveforgottenaboutthecheckinthepocket,"Stevenmused.Whenheunfoldedthecheckandbeheldtheamount,hewasrenderedspeechless,hiseyeswideningindisbelief.Itwasasubstantialsum,morethansufficient