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读后续写:硬汉骑手的温柔心讲义读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。IwasinPhiladelphiaforaconferencewhenIsawanadinthehotel.Anearbytheaterwasshowingadocumentary(纪录片)aboutseverallocalanimalsheltersthatwerehelpingtosaveabandoneddogsacrossthecountry.Iloveanimals,andIfeltanurgetogotothisfundraisingevent.However,noneofmyco-workerswouldgowithme,andIwasworriedaboutwalkingonthestreetaloneatnight.Iresignedmyselftospendingtheeveninginmyhotelroom,butassoonasIgotbacktomyroomIfeltrestlessandbored.Thetheaterwheretheeventwastakingplacewasonlyaboutfiveblocksfromthehotel,andtheareaaroundthehoteldidn'tseemparticularlydangerous.So,Idecidedtobraveit.Igatheredupmywalletandroomkeyandsetoff.Itwasalreadygettingdarkandthestreetswerenearlydeserted.Imanagedtofindthestreetthetheaterwason,butwhenIturnedthecorner,Istoppedinshock.Infrontofthetheaterwereagroupofbikers-verybig,tough-lookingbikers.I'veknownlotsofmotorcycleenthusiastsandmostarenicepeople.However,inthiscase,Iwasawomanallalone,inastrangeneighborhood,atnight,andthereweretwentyorsoverylargemen-allwearinginsignia(徽章)thatindicatedtheywereinsomesortofclub-standingbeforeme.Warningbellsbegantosoundinmyhead,andmyheartwaspounding.WasIattherighttheater?HadImisreadthedateoftheevent?AsignoutsidethetheatertoldmethatIwasintherightplaceontherightevening.Nevertheless,IwonderedifIshouldrushbacktomyhotelinsteadofwalkingthroughthatcrowdofbikers.IfinallydecidedthatIwouldbesaferinsidethetheater.Hopefully,thebikerswouldhavegoneawaybythetimethefilmwasover.注意:(1)续写词数应为150个左右;(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.原文解读与续写思路原文讲述了一位热爱动物的女士独自去参加救助动物纪录片的故事。在前往活动的路上,她遇到了一群外形“凶悍”的骑士,这让她感到恐惧和不安。然而,这次经历最终让她感受到人与动物之间的美好联系,并对骑士们有了全新的认识。这个故事的情感转折点在于从“恐惧”到“释然”,再到“感动”。续写时需要抓住以下要点:人物心理:恐惧、犹豫到释然。情节转折:骑士身份反转,从让人害怕到展现他们善良的一面。情感升华:通过骑士的行动传递人性善良和动物保护的主题。主旨点题:升华人与动物和谐共处的重要性。第一段:内心冲突与转折续写开头:Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.情感描写(固定句1)描写主人公看到骑士时的恐惧与紧张。示例:AwaveofpanicsurgedthroughmeasInoticedtheroomwasfilledwithbikers.细节描写(非固定句)展现骑士们的外貌与主人公的观察。示例:Theleatherjackets,heavyboots,andintimidatingstaresmademyheartraceevenfaster.动作链推进(固定句3)通过主人公的动作,推动情节向下一步发展。示例:Clutchingmytickettightly,Iquicklyfoundaseatattheback,tryingtoremainunnoticed.冲突铺垫(固定句4)预示情节转折,暗示骑士们并非主人公想象的那样。示例:ButasIsettledin,Inoticedabikercarefullyadjustingaprojectorandanothergentlypattingasmalldogbyhisside.情感推进(非固定句)主人公从恐惧到疑惑,为转折做铺垫。示例:Theirunexpectedactionsplantedaseedofdoubtinmymind—maybeIhadmisjudgedthem.第二段:情感升华与主题点明续写开头:Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.情节转折(固定句5)揭示骑士的真实身份,带来情感的转折点。示例:NosoonerhadthefilmstartedthanIrealizedthebikerswerepassionateanimalrescuers,dedicatedtosavingabandoneddogs.环境描写(非固定句)描写放映厅温暖的氛围,为情感升华铺垫。示例:Theroomwasfilledwiththesofthumoftheprojector,andthebikerswatchedthefilmwithquietreverence.动作与情感结合(非固定句)通过骑士们的行为展现他们的善良和对动物的热爱。示例:Duringthescreening,onebikercradledatinypuppy,hisroughhandsgentleashefeditfromasmallbottle.结局升华(固定句9)主人公感悟人与动物的和谐,情感得到升华。示例:Bytheendoftheevening,Ifeltawaveofgratitudeandwarmth,realizingthattruekindnessoftencomesinunexpectedforms.主题点睛(固定句10)点明故事主旨,传递动物保护和善良的意义。示例:Thisexperiencetaughtmethatcompassiontranscendsappearancesandthateveryonecanplayaroleinmakingtheworldbetterforanimals.续写范文Ihurriedintothetheater,onlytofindtherewereevenmorebikersinside.

AwaveofpanicsurgedthroughmeasInoticedtheroomwasfilledwithbikers.Theleatherjackets,heavyboots,andintimidatingstaresmademyheartraceevenfaster.Clutchingmytickettightly,Iquicklyfoundaseatattheback,tryingtoremainunnoticed.ButasIsettledin,Inoticedabikercarefullyadjustingaprojectorandanothergentlypattingasmalldogbyhisside.Theirunexpectedactionsplantedaseedofdoubtinmymind—maybeIhadmisjudgedthem.Whenthefilmbegan,Irealizedthatthebikerswereananimalrescuegroup.

NosoonerhadthefilmstartedthanIrealizedthebikerswerepassionateanimalrescuers,dedicatedtosavingabandoneddogs.Theroomwasfilledwiththesofthumoftheprojector,andthebikerswatchedthefilmwithquietreverence.Duringthescreening,onebikercradledatinypuppy,hisroughhandsgentleashefeditfromasmallbottle.Bytheendof

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