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高考英语读后续写语篇练习洗母双手,开启求职与感恩之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Itwastimeforgraduatestohuntforjobs.Themajorityofthemdidn’thaveworkingexperiencefortheyhadspentmostoftheirtimeatschoolstudyingacademicsubjects.Itwasnotuntiltheygraduatedfromcollegethattheyrealizeditwasachallengeforthemtolandjobs.Jimmy,oneofthesejobhunters,wasayoungacademicallyexcellentperson.Oneday,aftermakinggoodpreparations,hewenttoapplyforamanagerialpositioninabigcompany.Inspiteoffiercecompetition,hemanagedtopassthefirstinterview.Whataluckydog!Jimmywasinformedtocomeforthenextroundinafewdays—thelastinterviewforthecompanytomakethefinaldecision.4续写原文Thebigdayfinallycame.Hedressedneatly,thegreytiematchingperfectlythedecentsuit.Bloodrushingtohisfaceandheartpoundingheavily,hetriedtocalmdown,andthentookafewdeepbreaths.Itwashisturn.Theinterviewer,anelegantlady,discoveredfromtheCVthattheyouth’sacademicachievementswereexcellentalltheway,fromthesecondaryschooluntilthepostgraduateresearch.Afterseveralroundsofquestionsrelatedtotheposition,sheasked,“Haveyoueverdoneanypart-timejobs?”“None.”Afterawhile,theintervieweraskedwhopaidforJimmy’sschoolfees.Theyouthansweredinalowvoice,“MyfatherpassedawaywhenIwasoneyearold,soitwasmymotherwhopaidforallmyschoolfees.”5续写原文Shecontinued,“Whatdidyourmotherdo?”“Mymotherworkedasaclothescleaner.”Theladyrequestedtheyouthtoshowhishands.Theyouthshowedapairofhandsthatweresmoothandperfect.Theinterviewerpausedforasecond,leaningagainstthechair,“Haveyoueverhelpedyourmotherwashtheclothesbefore?”Ashamed,Jimmyreplied,“Never.Mymotheralwayswantedmetostudyandreadmorebooks.Furthermore,mymothercanwashclothesfasterthanme.”Shenodded,adding,“Ihavearequest.Whenyougobacktoday,goandcleanyourmother’shands,andthenseemebackheretomorrowmorning.”6段首句Paragraph1:Backhome,Jimmyrequestedhismothertolethimcleanherhands.Paragraph2:Thenextmorning,Jimmywenttotheinterviewer’soffice.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了毕业生求职季,缺乏工作经验成为多数人的求职阻碍。学业优异的吉米应聘一家大公司的管理职位,成功通过初面。终面时,面试官询问吉米的兼职经历、学费支付人及母亲的工作。得知吉米从未帮洗衣工母亲洗过衣服后,面试官要求他回家给母亲洗手,第二天再来。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:
Backhome,Jimmyrequestedhismothertolethimcleanherhands.回到家后,吉米请求母亲让他帮她洗手。母亲正在厨房忙碌,听到吉米的话,手上的动作顿了一下,缓缓转过身,眼中满是诧异。在吉米的再三请求下,母亲放下手中的活儿,来到水槽边。吉米小心翼翼地打开水龙头,将母亲的手轻轻放入水中。当他的手指触碰到母亲那满是褶皱、粗糙干裂的双手时,心中猛地一震。他看到母亲手上一道道深浅不一的伤口,还有厚厚的老茧,这些都是母亲多年辛苦劳作留下的痕迹。吉米的眼眶瞬间湿润了,眼泪止不住地流下来。他轻轻揉搓着母亲的手,内心充满了愧疚,回想起自己这么多年竟从未关心过母亲的艰辛。11续写思路分析Para2:Thenextmorning,Jimmywenttotheinterviewer’soffice.第二天早上,吉米来到面试官的办公室。他的眼睛微微红肿,显然是昨晚情绪波动留下的痕迹。面试官看到他的样子,微微一笑,轻声问道:“昨天给母亲洗手后,你有什么感受?”吉米深吸一口气,努力平复心情,声音略带颤抖地说:“我从未意识到母亲为我付出了这么多。她的双手承载着生活的重担,而我却一直忽略了她的辛苦。通过这次洗手,我不仅看到了母亲的不易,也明白了责任和感恩的重要性。”面试官听完,满意地点点头,说道:“我们公司需要的不仅是有能力的人,更需要懂得感恩和珍惜的员工。恭喜你,你被录用了。”吉米激动得眼眶再次湿润,他知道,这次特殊的面试让他收获的远不止一份工作。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Backhome,Jimmyrequestedhismothertolethimcleanherhands.Hismother,whowasbusyinthekitchen,frozeforamomentandthenslowlyturnedaround,hereyesfilledwithsurprise.AfterJimmy'srepeatedrequests,sheputdowntheworkinherhandsandcametothesink.Jimmycarefullyturnedonthetapandgentlyplacedhismother'shandsinthewater.Whenhisfingerstouchedhismother'swrinkled,roughandchappedhands,hewasshocked.Hesawthedeepandshallowcutsandthickcallusesonhismother'shands,whichwerethemarksleftbyyearsofhardwork.Jimmy'seyesinstantlywelledupwithtears,andtheycouldn'tstopflowing.Hegentlyrubbedhismother'shands,filledwithguilt.Lookingback,herealizedthathehadnevercaredabouthismother'shardshipsovertheyears.14范文呈现Thenextmorning,Jimmywenttotheinterviewer’soffice.Hiseyeswereslightlyred,clearlyasignoftheemotionalturmoilfromlastnight.Theinterviewersawhimandsmiledgently,askingsoftly,“Whatwasyourfeelingafterwashingyourmother'shandsyesterday?”Jimmytookadeepbreath,tryingtocalmhimselfdown.Hisvoicetrembledalittleashesaid,“Ineverrealizedhowmuchmymotherhadsacrificedforme.Herhandscarriedtheburdenoflife,andIhadalwaysignoredherhardwork.Throughthisexperience,Inotonlysawmymother'sdifficultiesbutalsounderstoodtheimportanceofresponsibilityandgratitude.”Theinterviewernoddedinsatisfactionafterlisteningandsaid,“Ourcompanyneedsnotonlycapablepeoplebutalsoemployeeswhoknowhowtobegratefulandcherish.Congratulations,youarehired.”Jimmy'seyeswelledupwithexcitementagain.Heknewthatthisspecialinterviewhadbroughthimfarmorethanjustajob.15升级版范文呈现Backhome,Jimmyrequestedhismothertolethimcleanherhands.Hismother,engagedinkitchenchores,haltedmid-task,hereyeswideninginsurprise.Respondingtohisinsistentpleas,shemovedtothesink.AsJimmydelicatelyturnedonthefaucetandsubmergedherhands,ajoltofshockcoursedthroughhim.Herhands,wrinkled,rough,andmarredbyscarsandcalluses,boretestamenttoyearsoftoil.Overcomewithemotion,tearsstreameddownJimmy'scheeks.Gentlymassagingherhands,hewasconsumedbyguilt,reflectingonhislong-standingobliviousnesstoherstruggles.16升级版范文呈现Thenextmorning,Jimmyenteredtheinterviewer’soffice,hiseyesstilltingedwithredfromthenight'semotionalupheaval.Theinterviewer,observinghisstate,smiledkindlyandinquired,“Whatinsightsdidyougainfromwashingyourmother'shands?”Jimmytookadeepbreath,steadyinghisvoiceashereplied
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