专题13-应用文写作(13)-研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考

研读近十年高考英语满分书面表达聚焦2023高考Part1应用文写作文（十三）1．（2013·陕西卷）假定你是李华。请根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。写作要点：1.做家务的理由；2.做家务的过程；3.你的感受。注意：1.短文词数不少于100；2.开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Iaman18-year-oldmiddleschoolstudent,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Iaman18-yearoldmiddleschoolstudent.Ihavebeenbusywithmystudyandseldomhelpedmyparentswiththehousework.Feelingquitesorryforthat,Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.LastSunday,whenmyparentswentoutshopping,Isuddenlygotanidea:whynotgivetheroomsathoroughcleaning?FirstlyIcollectedallthebooks,newspapersandotherthingsscatteredintheroomsandputtheminplace.ThenIwipedthedustoffallthefurniture.Afterthat,Isweptandmoppedthefloors.Atthisverymoment,myparentscamebackandwerequitesurprisedtoseealltheroomstidyandfloorsshining.MymothergavemeahugandIcouldseesatisfactioninhereyes.TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据写作要点用英语写一篇周记，记述你周末帮助家人做家务的一次经历。【详解】1.词汇积累很少：seldom→rarely开始：begin→start彻底的：thorough→complete惊讶的：surprised→astonished2.句式拓展句式转换原句：TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.拓展句：ThoughIwastired,Ineverfeltsohappy.【点睛】[高分句型1]Feelingquitesorryforthat,Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.（运用了现在分词作状语）[高分句型2]TiredasIwas,Ineverfeltsohappy.（运用了部分倒装结构）2．（2013·江西卷）星光中学（XingguangHighSchool）近期举行了一次登山活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇短文，报道此次活动。内容包括：1．时间与地点：4月10日，大青山（DaqingMountain）；2．活动的过程；3．你对于这次活动的评论。注意：1．词数100左右。2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Inordertoencouragethestudentstotakeoutdoorexercise,ourschoolorganizedamountain-climbingonApril10.Hundredsofustookpartinit.Itwasaniceday.At8:00am,wegatheredatthefootofDaqingMountainandsetoutforthetopinhighspirits.Allthewaywewerechatting,singingandlaughing,enjoyingthefreshairandthebeautifulscenery.Whensomefellbehind,otherswouldcomeandofferhelp.About2hourslater,weallreachedthetop.Bathedinsunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.Theactivitybenefitedusalot.Notonlydiditgetusclosetonatureandgiveusrelaxationfromheavyschoolwork,italsopromotedthefriendshipamongus.Whatawonderfultime!【详解】试题分析：本文要求写一篇报道。报道一次登山活动。故时态使用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。首先写清写作目的，然后是时间，地点，人物，过程，包括如出发，途中，到达目的地等情况的介绍。最后写活动的意义，即对于这次活动的评论(感受)。文章比较容易入题。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【点睛】①高级句型结构的运用，如感叹句Whatawonderfultime及倒装结构notonly...butalso的运用。②好的短语：setoutfor出发,动身，着手做某事inhighspirits情绪高昂fallbehind落后③非谓语动词的运用句式赋予变化，如：Bathedinsunshine,wejumpedandcheeredwithjoy.考点：考查应用文的写作。3．（2013·江苏卷）请根据你对以下两幅图的理解，以“ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords”为题，用英语写一篇作文。参考词：banner(横幅)stump(树桩)你的作文应包括以下内容:1.简要描述两幅图的内容；2.概述你对两幅图中不同做法的理解；3.举例说明两幅图对你的启示。注意：1.可参照图片适当发挥；2.作文词数150左右；3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】ActionsSpeakLouderthanWordsPeoplecelebrateEarthDaydifferently.InPicture1,amanistryingtoputupabanneronalonelytreesurroundedbystumps,butinvain,whilePicture2showsacouplehappilyplantingtrees.Themessageconveyedhereisclear:“Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.”Ourearthissufferingseveredamage.Shouldwejustpaylipserviceortakepracticalmeasurestoprotectit?Theanswerisdefinitelythelatter.Immediateactionsshouldbetaken,likestoppingcuttingdowntrees,tobettertheenvironment.Actionsareimportantinotherfields,too.Insteadofshoutingemptyslogans,itismoremeaningfultodonatebooksandsportsgoodstochildreninneed.Weshouldstrictlyandvoluntarilyfollowtrafficrules,stoppingattheredlightratherthancomplainingabouttrafficjams.Onlywhenwematchourwordswithactionscanwemakeadifferenceinwhateverwehopetoaccomplish.【导语】本篇书面表达属于图画类作文。要求考生以“ActionsSpeakLouderthanWords”为题，简要描述两幅图，概述对两幅图中不同做法的理解，并举例说明图片给予自己的启示。【详解】1.词汇积累传达：convey→transmit肯定地：definitely→certainly改善：better→improve遵守：follow→observe2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Insteadofshoutingemptyslogans,itismoremeaningfultodonatebooksandsportsgoodstochildreninneed.拓展句：Insteadofshoutingemptyslogans,itismoremeaningfultodonatebooksandsportsgoodstochildrenwhoareinneed.【点睛】【高分句型1】InPicture1,amanistryingtoputupabanneronalonelytreesurroundedbystumps,butinvain,whilePicture2showsacouplehappilyplantingtrees.（运用了while连接并列句，表示对比）【高分句型2】Onlywhenwematchourwordswithactionscanwemakeadifferenceinwhateverwehopetoaccomplish.（运用了“only+状语从句”置于句首的部分倒装结构，whatever引导宾语从句）4．（2013·福建卷）孩子的成长和教育是社会热议的话题，现今父母包揽一切、孩子过度依赖等现象十分严重。请阅读下面的漫画，按要求用英文写一篇短文。内容要求：1.描述漫画内容；2.分析漫画所揭示的问题；3.提出你的看法。注意：1.短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；2.考生可适当发挥，使文章内容充实、连贯；3.词数120左右;4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:pavethewayFromthepicture,wecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Fromthepicturewecanseeafamilyofthreewalkingonalongredcarpet.Theson,welldressed,wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet,sweating.Itshowsacommonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies,shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.Parentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandsparenoefforttopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Asaconsequence,childrenbecomesoreliantontheirparentsthattheyhavenoindependentthoughtorcreativeideas.Suchasituationisofgreatconcern.Inmyopinion,overprotectionandtoomuchcareareextremelybadforchildren'sdevelopment.Insteadofdoingeverythingforthem,parentsshouldencouragetheirchildrentoovercomedifficultiesandinspirethemtodevelopbythemselves.Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.【导语】这是一篇图画作文。【详解】这篇书面表达以漫画的形式讲述"以孩子为中心的三口之家，孩子是小皇帝，父母是臣仆"这一社会现象，发人深省。漫画式作文就是通过漫画提供的图像信息写一篇短文，漫画作文就内容而言，可以写观察到的内容，也可以根据合理想象适当进行发挥来补充一些内容；就表达方式而言，可以单纯地理解、说明，也可以在说明中加以描写、叙述。写好漫画作文的要求是：认真审图，确立主题，提炼要点，展开联想或发表感想，变点为句，连句成篇。要达到这些要求，我们就必须认真审图，善于利用图中人物间的关系、人物的对话、人物的活动及所处场所，以及图（表）中的文字说明和标识来提炼要点；要围绕主题展开合理的想象，切忌游离于主题展开不着边际的联想或感想。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:Theson,welldressed,wavesproudlyinthemiddlewhilethefatherbehindbendsforwardtoholdthejacketandthemotherinfrontrollsoutthecarpet,sweating.这句话里面是while引导的并列句。还有Itshowsacommonphenomenonnowadaysthatchildrenarethefocusoffamilies,shoulderingthehopeoftheirparents.这句话里面用了非谓语动词，还有最后一句话Onlyinthiswaycantheygrowuptobeindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.这句话用了倒装句。高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。5．（2013·重庆卷）Amothersaid,“Mysonisalwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwithhisfriends,orinhisroom.Heneverhastimetotalktome.”要求：1)就此材料发表你的看法；2)紧扣材料，有明确的观点；3)词数不少于60；4）在答题卡上作答。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Nowadays,moreandmoreyoungpeoplearealwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwiththeirfriends,orintheirroomsclosingthedoors.Whattheydomaketheirparentsfeeldeepsadandlonely.Inmyopinion,nomatterhowbusywemaybe,weshouldtryourbesttospendmoretimetalkingwiththemandaccompanyingthem.Itisnotjustbecausetheyoncegaveussomuchselflesslove,butit’sourdutytolookafterthemwell.【导语】本篇书面表达属于开放性作文。要求考生对于一段母亲说的话“Mysonisalwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwithhisfriends,orinhisroom.Heneverhastimetotalktome.”就此材料发表你的看法，写一篇作文。【详解】1.词汇积累在我看来：Inmyopinion→asfarasIamconcerned照顾：lookafter→takecareof尽力做：tryourbesttodo→managetodo职责：duty→responsibility2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Nowadays,moreandmoreyoungpeoplearealwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwiththeirfriends,orintheirroomsclosingthedoors.拓展句：Nowadays,moreandmoreyoungpeoplearealwaysonthephone,sleeping,outwiththeirfriends,orintheirroomsclosingthedoors,whichisbecomeaseriousproblem.【点睛】【高分句型1】Whattheydomaketheirparentsfeeldeepsadandlonely.（运用了连接词what引导的主语从句。）【高分句型2】Inmyopinion,nomatterhowbusywemaybe,weshouldtryourbesttospendmoretimetalkingwiththemandaccompanyingthem.（运用了nomatterhow引导的让步状语从句。）6．（2013·安徽卷）假设你校英语社团举办以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动，请你以“OntheWaytoSchool”为题，写一篇英语短文。内容主要包括：1.遵守交通法规；2.注意举止文明。注意：1.词数120左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息；4.短文的题目已为你拟好，不计入总词数________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.Changingthissituationrequiresconsiderableeffortonthepartofeveryone.Asforme,itshouldstartonthewaytoschool.Iwillkeeptrafficrulesinmindalltheway.IfIrideabicycle,I’llalwayskeeptotherightandnevercrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.IfIwalk,I’llneverforgettousethepedestriancrossing.Meanwhile,I’llregarditasmydutytohelpkeepourenvironmentcleanandhealthy.NotonlywillIkeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhere,Iwillalsohelpcleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.Ihopemybehaviorwillmakeadifference.【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“OntheWaytoSchool”为题，写一篇英语短文参加以“讲求文明，从我做起”为主题的征文活动。【详解】1.词汇积累环境：environment→surroundings开始：start→begin责任：duty→responsibility同时：meanwhile→atthesametime2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,causingseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.拓展句：Thesedays,breakingtrafficrulesandlitteringarenotuncommon,whichcauseseriousharmtolifeandtheenvironment.【点睛】【高分句型1】IfIrideabicycle,I’llalwayskeeptotherightandnevercrossaroaduntilthetrafficlightturnsgreen.（运用了if引导的条件状语从句）【高分句型2】NotonlywillIkeepfromlitteringandspittinganywhere,Iwillalsohelpcleanuptheroadsidelitterwheneverpossible.（运用了部分倒装结构）7．（2013·浙江卷）请以“onethingI’mproudof”为题，用英语写一篇100—120个词的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1.记述这件事2.简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示注意：文章的标题已给出（不计词数）.OneThingI’mProudof_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】IstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmatesplayingtabletennis.Amazedbyhowskillfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,Iwatchedthemcarefullytolearntheirtechniques.ThenIkeptpracticinguntilIbecameconfidentenoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayersinmyclass.Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfillourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.Italsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb“Practicemakesperfect.”【导语】本篇书面表达属于记叙文，要求考生以“onethingI’mproudof”为题记述一件自己认为得意的事情。【详解】词汇积累惊奇：amazed→surprised实现：realize→achieve训练：practice→train决心做：bedeterminedtodo=makeupone'smindtodo2.句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Amazedbyhowskillfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.拓展句：IwassoamazedbyhowskillfultheywerethatIwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.【点睛】[高分句型1]IstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.(运用了how引导的宾语从句)[高分句型2]Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealizethatweallcanfulfillourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork.(运用了because引导的原因状语从句以及that引导的宾语从句)8．（2013·湖北卷）请根据以下提示，并结合事例，用英语写一篇短文。Weallknowthat“sticksandstonesmaybreakourbones”,butweshouldalsobeawarethatwordscanhurtpeople,too.注意：①无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；②除诗歌外，文体不限；③文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；④词数为120左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________