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高考英语读后续写语篇练习Jason在唐人街的成长一课1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文“Mom,I’mreadytogo,”calledJason.EverySaturday,JasonlookedforwardtogoingtoChinatowntoshopforfoodbecausehismomlethimpickhisfavoritesnacks:roastporkbunsandbubbletea.ThestreetsinChinatownwerecrowdedwithcarsandpedestrians.Hismothercouldnotfindthesameexoticvegetablesinthelocalsupermarkets,sotheyalwayscameheretoshop.WhatfascinatedJasonwastastyroastpork,eventhewholepigshangingonbighooksinthewindows,theirskinsroastedtoaglisteningbrown.Jason’smouthwouldwaterjustlookingatthem.4续写原文AstheypassedthenewsstandcarryingChinesenewspapersandmagazines,Jasonspottedanoldmansittingonthesidewalk.Hishairwaslong,white,andmessy.Thefacebeneathwaslined,dirty,andunshaven.Frayedandtornclothingwrappedaroundhisthinframe,andinthiskindofcoldweather,heevenworesandals,hisfeetbluewithcold.Hebangedanemptycanagainstthesidewalk.AsJasonwalkedby,hecouldsmellamustyodorandpinchedhisnostrilstogether.TheoldmanreachedoutandtouchedJason’sleftleg.Instinctively,Jasongatheredallhisstrengthtojerk(猛拉)hislegawayandkicktheoldman’shandheavily.Frightened,hehurriedtocatchupwithhismotherwithoutlookingback.“Mom,theoldmantouchedme,”hecried,“Hetouchedmewithhisdirtyhands.It’sdisgusting!Andhesmelledtoo.”5续写原文Jason’smotherglancedbackatthemanwithalookofunderstandingandsaidgently,“Jason,hecan’thelpit.He’shomeless.Hedidn’tmeananyharm.”Mom’swordsmadeJasonlookbackattheoldmanwithregret,whonowwaslookingupatotherpassersby,stillbanginghiscan.Ontheirwayhome,Jasonasked,hisvoicefilledwithconcern.“Whyisthatoldmanhomeless?Wheredoeshesleep?”“Idon’tknow.It’stoughtobehomeless,especiallyinthiscoldweather.Hedidlookquiteweak,”hismotherreplied.Mom’swordsmadeJason’sregretdeepened.Heconfessedhisheavykicktohismother,whoremindedhimthatitwascrucialtoacknowledgehismistakeandtrytomakeupforit.6段首句Paragraph1:Thenextday,withhismother’shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.Paragraph2:Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwithwateryeyes.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了文章讲述了作者在雪storm来临前,送同事的笔记本电脑回家,途中遭遇大雪被困。作者向911求助,之后同事帮忙定位,得知自己在一条叫布维尔巷的道路上。最终一位农民儿子打来电话,农民安迪前来救援。点1:位于续写第一段段首,流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语;点2:位于续写第一段段尾,流畅衔接第二段段首句;点3:位于续写第二段段首,续写衔接第二段段首语;点4:文章结尾升华,给予读者正能量,揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1:Thenextday,withhismother’shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.第二天,在妈妈的陪伴与帮助下,Jason决定弥补自己的过错。他们早早起床,一起动手做了一份热气腾腾的饭菜,还找出家里厚实的毛毯,并特意去买了一双保暖的新鞋。Jason心里满是懊悔,他想起老人冻得青紫的双脚和饥饿的模样。再次来到唐人街那个熟悉的角落,老人依旧蜷缩在那里,Jason深吸一口气,鼓起勇气走上前,真诚地对老人说:“爷爷,对不起,我昨天不该踢您,希望这些能帮到您。”说着,他将准备好的东西递过去。11续写思路分析Para2:Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedatthemwithwateryeyes.听到这话,老人抬起头,眼中泛起了泪花。他颤抖着伸出手,接过Jason递来的东西,声音哽咽地说:“好孩子,谢谢你,爷爷不怪你。”老人狼吞虎咽地吃起叉烧包,Jason看到这一幕,眼眶也红了。从那以后,每个周六,Jason都会雷打不动地来探望老人,陪他聊聊天,给他带来生活用品,用自己的行动传递着温暖,也让自己懂得了尊重与关爱的意义。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Thenextday,withhismother’shelp,Jasondecidedtodosomething.Theygotupearlyandpreparedawarmmeal,foundathickblanketathomeandboughtanewpairofwarmshoes.Fullofregret,Jasonrememberedtheoldman’sbluefeetandhungrylook.ReturningtothefamiliarcornerinChinatown,theoldmanwasstillhuddledthere.Jasontookadeepbreathandsummonedupthecouragetowalkuptohimandsincerelysaid,“Grandpa,I’msorryforkickingyouyesterday.Ihopethesecanhelpyou.”Thenhehandedoverthethings.14范文呈现Hearingthis,theoldmanlookedup,withtearsinhiseyes.HetremblinglyreachedouthishandtotakethethingsfromJasonandsaidinachokedvoice,“Goodboy,thankyou.Grandpadoesn’tblameyou.”Theoldmangobbleduptheroastporkbuns.Seeingthis,Jason’seyesturnedredtoo.Fromthenon,everySaturday,Jasonwouldvisittheoldmanwithoutfail,chatwithhim,bringhimdailynecessities,conveyingwarmthwithhisactionsandlearningthemeaningofrespectandcare.15升级版范文呈现Thenextday,withhismother’sguidinghand,Jasonresolvedtomakeamends.Risingearly,theywhippedupasteamingmeal,unearthedacozyblanketfromhome,andprocuredasnugpairofnewshoes.Regretgnawingathim,Jasonrecollectedtheoldman’sfrostbittenfeetandfamishedvisage.ReturningtothatfamiliarnookinChinatown,theretheoldmanstillcrouched.Takingadeepbreath,Jasonmusteredhiscourageandsteppedforward.“Grandpa,”hesaidsincerely,“I’mtrulysorryformyrashactyesterday.Ihopethesebringyousomecomfort.”Andheprofferedtheofferings.16升级版范文呈现Hearingthis,theoldmanglancedup,hiseyesglisteningwithtears.Trembling,heextendedahandtoacceptJason’sgifts.“Goodboy,”herasped,“thankyou.Grandpaholdsnogrudge.”Astheoldmandevouredthebuns,Jason’seyesmistedover.Fromthenon,everySaturday,likeclock

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