专题13 书面表达（真题过关）-2022-2023学年七年级英语上学期期末考点大串讲（仁爱版）（解析版）

专题13书面表达【真题过关】1．汪曾祺老先生的“家人闲坐，灯火可亲”，让我们感受到和家人一起叙叙家常是一件幸福的事。假如你是王涛，请根据图片和提示向你的笔友Jane介绍你幸福的家庭。Jobs:teacher,…Eatinghabits（饮食习惯）：hamburgers,…Hobbies（喜好）：readbooks,flykites,…Others…注意事项：1）必须包含所有提示信息，可适当拓展；2）意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3）请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名；4）词数70左右（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。DearJane,How’severythinggoing?I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyfamily.Look,thisisaphotoofmyfamily.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WangTao2．现在，周末到郊外野餐已经成为年轻人的一种时尚，它能放松我们的心情，减轻我们的学习压力。假如你是李华，周日你和你的朋友们一起去开心农场野餐，请以GoingforaPicnic为题，写一篇70词左右的短文。内容包括以下几点：GoingforaPicnic时间地点周日，开心农场人物你与好友Tom，Bruce，LucyandLily所带食物面包，果汁……所做事情放风筝，唱歌……感受……提示词：HappyFarm开心农场GoingforaPicnicIt’sSundaytoday.I...____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．学校英语社团为准备新学期纳新，举办“把我说给你听”的活动，鼓励同学们写一篇文章介绍自己，并向英语社团投稿。假如你是李华，请你从以下几个方面进行个人阐述：注意事项：1.词数60词以上；2.必须包含所有内容要点；3.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；4.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4．假如下表是你的好朋友Jim的相关信息，请根据提示内容写一篇英语短文介绍他。词数60左右，可适当发挥。姓名Jim年龄13电话号码079-8846生日6月20日喜欢科目和运动英语、艺术和足球活动学校旅行10月18日足球比赛12月24日—————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————5．假如你是李明，你被班级推荐参加学校举办的“校园之星”评比活动。请你写一篇英文自我介绍，上传到校园微信公众号平台进行展示。内容：1.姓名、班级、年龄、生日等基本信息；2.爱好、特长、最喜欢的学科及喜爱的理由。要求：1.文中不得出现真实姓名和所在学校。2.适当增加细节，使行文连贯，内容充实；3.不少于60词，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Hi,everyone!___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．根据下表提供的信息，写一篇介绍LiHua的文章。NameLiHuaAge13BirthdayDecember2ndNationalityChinaSchoolNo.8MiddleSchoolFavoritefoodfruitsaladsportbasketballsubjectshistoryandEnglishschoolactivities...注意：（1）短文必须包含表中所有内容，可适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；（3）字数：60—80词左右，题目已给出，不计入总词数。Hello,I’mhappytotellyousomethingaboutmybestfriend.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________7．进入初中以后，你一定结交了不少好朋友。请你以Mygoodfriend为题，根据以下内容，介绍你的好朋友。Name:XiangHua

Age:14From:ShandongFamilyMembers:father,mother,sisterBirthday:November14thHobbies(爱好):playsoccer,readbooks…Favoritefood:chicken…Favoritesubject:History…要求:（1）必须包括所给信息，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。（2）词数：60-80。MyGoodFriend____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________8．下学期，你的表弟Andy将要作为交换生到你们班级学习一年，班主任请你在班会课上介绍一下Andy的情况，以便同学们更快地了解他。个人信息Andy，14岁，来自英国；个子高，短头发；擅长所有的功课，喜欢上地理课性格友善，从不捉弄别人活动与饮食1.空闲时间花许多时间阅读，因为……2.为了保持健康，……希望对中国节日很感兴趣，他想在春节时，和人们一起……（举一例春节时中国人喜爱做的事）要求:1.文章必须包含表格中所有信息，并作适当发挥；

2.文中不得出现真实的人名；

3.词数80词左右，文章的开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。Hello,everyone.MycousinAndywillcometoourclassasanexchangestudent.NowIwouldliketotellyousomethingabouthim.

____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．进入初中已经有一个学期了，阳光中学现要求学生对自己做一个公正、客观的评价。假如你是李明，请根据表格提示内容，写一篇自我评价的英语短文。基本情况擅长运动，最喜欢排球；爱好读书，……(原因自拟)；生活习惯健康生活，很少……喜欢穿运动服饰，……(原因自拟)；个性品质乐于助人，能帮助贫困地区的孩子；展望未来新学期，希望……要求：1.须包括所给内容要点，要求语句通顺、意思连贯；2.具体内容可以适当发挥，不要简单翻译；3.词数80词左右，开头与结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。I’mLiMingfromClass3,Grade7.Ilearnalotthisterm.Ilovemyschoollifeverymuch.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Nextterm,Iwill__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________10．假设你是LiHua，请你根据表格提示向你的外国笔友Tom写一封电子邮件介绍你的家乡和你的学校生活，并邀请他到你的家乡来参观。要求字数不少于60个词。家乡概况人们非常友好，名胜多。气候宜人，春秋凉爽，冬天温暖，夏天多雨；校园生活最喜欢的科目；最喜欢的课外活动……注意事项：1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数；2.意思清楚、表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名。DearTom,Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyhometownandmyschoollife.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua11．假如你是李明,你看到了Mike发布在网站上的征笔友(penpal)信息。请根据信息内容,发邮件给他。要求:(1)邮件中不能出现真实姓名、学校等相关信息;(2)不少于70词;(3)可适当发挥。APenPalWantedIlovesports!Soccerismyfavorite.IwanttofindapenpalinChina.Canyoutellmesomethingaboutyourself?Howoldareyou?Whatsportsdoyoulikeandwhy?Whatsportsequipment(用品)doyouhave?E-mailmeatMikelikesChina@.MikeTo:MikeFrom:LiMingDearMike,______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________12．假设你是Steve，今天是星期六，你和同学以及他们的父母一起去森林公园野餐。请根据下图，写一篇70词左右的短文，讲述一下你们星期六的活动。可适当发挥。TodayisSaturday.IgolotheForestParkforapicnicwithmyclassmatesandtheirparents.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________13．假如你是李华，你在红旗中学上学,给你的朋友Frank写一封信，介绍你的近况。

提示：

1.学校的生活忙碌但是有趣，早上8:00上课,下午5:30放学。上午四节课，下午三节课。没有时间看电视和打游戏；

2.最喜欢周四的课，因为周四有你最喜欢的地理和英语，你认为数学有难度；

3.喜欢体育课，最喜欢的运动是排球。

要求：短文应包括提示中的所有内容，并可适当发挥。文中不能出现真实的人名、校名和地名。60词左右。DearFrank,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua14．假如你叫LiHua，住在内乡。请给你的笔友Ken写一封信介绍你自己的情况。内容如下：LiHuaAge12yearsoldLookbigeyes,

smallmouth，blackhairFamilyMother:nurseFather:

teacherMeal(餐，饭)Breakfast:6:30milk,breadandeggLunch:12:10rice,fishDinner:6:45vegetablesandchicken1.要点：1）年龄、长相等；2）家庭成员的介绍；3）一日三餐的介绍。2.要求：1）文中不要出现所在学校的校名和师生姓名；2）词数80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。DearKen,I’mLiHua.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whataboutyou?Couldyoutellmesomethingaboutyourself?Yours,LiHua15．为使学校课后托管服务更加丰富多彩、营造“互帮互学”的英语学习氛围，你校决定成立英语俱乐部（Englishclub），假设你是李兰，想申请加人该俱乐部。请根据以下所给信息，向英语俱乐部负责人王老师写一封自荐信。NameLiLanAge14Class708FavoritesubjectEnglishAdvantages（优势）learnEnglishwell;…..Reasonstoapply（申请理由）wanttomakemorefriends;….要求：（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（2）短文须包含表中的所有信息，可适当发挥；（3）至少补充一条优势和一条申请理由；（4）词数：不少于60词（短文开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。DearMr.Wang,I’mLiLan.IreallywanttojointheEnglishclubinourschool.Nowletmetellyousomethingaboutmyself.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.LiLan参考答案：1．范文DearJane,How’severythinggoing?I’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyfamily.Look,thisisaphotoofmyfamily.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily.Thetallmaninawhiteshirtismyfather.Heisadoctor.Helikeseatingvegetablesandreadingbooks.Mymotherhaslongblackhair.SheisaChineseteacherinaprimaryschool.Shelikeseatingfruits.Andherhobbyisplayingthepiano.Theboyismyme.I’mahighschoolstudent.Ilikeeatinghamburgersandflyingkites.Thegirlwithshortblackhairismysister.Herfavoritefoodisfish.Becauseeatingfishmakeshersmart.Shelikesplayingtheviolinbest.Wehavedifferenteatinghabitsandhobbies,butwe’reahappyfamily.Ilovemyfamily!Yours,WangTao【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对人物的介绍，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“简单介绍幸福的家庭”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“职业、饮食习惯、喜好等”几个方面重点介绍；第三步，书写结语。表达对家庭的爱。[亮点词汇]①nextto挨着②makesmesmart让我聪明[高分句型]Wehavedifferenteatinghabitsandhobbies,butwe’reahappyfamily.（but连接并列句）2．例文：GoingforaPicnicIt’sSundaytoday.IwenttoHappyFarmforapicnicwithmyfriendsTom,Bruce,LucyandLily.Webroughtalotoffood,suchasbread,juice,sausageandsoon.Werodebicyclesalltheway,talkingandlaughing.Ittookus30minutestogetthere.Wetasteddeliciousfoodonthegrass.Weflewkites,sangsongsandplayedgamesthere.Wealsotookalotofphotos.Althoughweweretired,wewerehappy.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为命题材料文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中内容，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍时间地点人物。直奔主题，点出周末到郊外野餐这件事；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。根据表格内容，介绍所带食物以及所做事情即可；第三步，书写结语。谈谈自己的感受。[亮点词汇]①suchas例如②andsoon等等③takephotos拍照[高分句型]①Ittookus30minutestogetthere.（it作形式主语，真正的主语是不定式）②Althoughweweretired,wewerehappy.（Although引导的让步状语从句）3．例文：ThisisMeMynameisLiHua.IamaboyfromClass2,Grade1.Iamtallwithshortblackhairandglasses.Iamoutgoing,soIlikemakingfriends.Iliveahealthylife.Ialwaysgetupearlyandhaveagoodbreakfast.Later,Iridemybiketoschool.It’sgoodexercise.IlistentotheteacherscarefullyandIalwayshandinhomeworkontime.Ilikevegetables,meatandriceforlunch.Theygivemeenoughenergy.Afterschool,Iplaybasketballwithmyfriendsforhalfanhour.Igotobedbefore10:00everynight.Ihavemanyhobbiesandreadingismyfavorite.WhenIreadbooks,timegoesquickly.IlikereadingEnglishbooksverymuch.IhopetojointheEnglishclubnextterm.【详解】1.题干解读：本题是一篇材料作文，从外貌、性格、爱好、生活习惯等方面介绍自己。2.写作指导：本文时态用一般现在时，人称主要用第一人称。写作时可分为三段式，首先介绍自己的姓名、班级、外貌和性格；其次介绍自己的生活习惯；最后介绍自己的爱好。注意行文连贯、主谓一致、逻辑清晰、无语法和拼写错误。4．例文Look!Hereismygoodfriend,Jim.Heisthirteenyearsold.Hisphonenumberis079-8846.HisbirthdayisonJune20th.HelikesEnglishandart.Hethinksthey’reinteresting.Forsports,helikessoccer.Healwaysplayssoccerwithhisclassmates.Thisterm,hehasaschooltripandasoccergame.TheschooltripisonOctober18th.ThesoccergameisonDecember24th.Helikesthemverymuch.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点中的“活动”部分，对两个活动举行的时间要分别介绍。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍Jim的基本信息，如年龄、电话号码和生日；第二步，介绍Jim喜欢的科目和运动；第三步，介绍Jim本学期将参加的活动。[亮点词汇]①phonenumber电话号码②interesting有趣的③playsoccer踢足球④schooltrip学校旅行[高分句型]①Hereismygoodfriend,Jim.（Hereissb.用于介绍某人）②Thisterm,hehasaschooltripandasoccergame.（and连接并列的宾语成分）5．Possibleversion:Hi,everyone!I’mLiMing.I’mfromClass5,Grade7.I’m13yearsoldandmybirthdayisonJuly20th.IamveryhealthybecauseIhavegoodeatinghabitsandIplaysportseveryday.Ilikeplayingbasketball.Ioftenplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesafterschool.It’sexcitingforme!IstudyhardatschoolandmyfavoritesubjectishistorybecauseIthinkit’sreallyinteresting.I’mfriendlytoeveryoneandliketohelppeople,soIhavemanyfriends.Doyouwanttobefriendswithme?【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中自我介绍的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“自我介绍”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“爱好、特长、最喜欢的学科等”几个方面重点介绍自己的具体情况；第三步，书写结语，表达“你想要和我成为朋友吗”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①eatinghabits饮食习惯；②playsports做运动；③likedoingsth喜欢做某事；④befriendlyto对……友好。[高分句型]①IamveryhealthybecauseIhavegoodeatinghabitsandIplaysportseveryday.(because引导的原因状语从句)②Ilikeplayingbasketball.(动名词作宾语)6．例文：Hello,I’mhappytotellyousomethingaboutmybestfriend.HisnameisLiHua.HeisfromChina.Heisa13-year-oldboyandhisbirthdayisonDecember2nd.HestudiesinNo.8MiddleSchoolandheisahard-workingstudent.Hisfavoritefoodisfruitsalad.Heeatsanappleeveryday.Forsports,helikesplayingbasketballbestbecausehethinksit’srelaxingtoplaybasketballwithhisfriends.HistoryandEnglisharehisfavoritesubjects.HecanlearnsomeinterestingstoriesinhistoryclassandhisEnglishteacherisnicetohim.Helikestheschooltripbestbecausehecangooutwithhisclassmates.ThisismybestfriendLiHua.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，并注意适当增加“提示”里面“学校活动”的内容。同时注意本文主语多为第三人称单数，应注意动词第三人称单数形式的正确运用。[写作步骤]第一步，开头已给出，故接着写李华基本信息，包括他的姓名、年龄、国籍、生日及学校。第二步，按照所给提示，写李华最喜欢的食物、运动、科目以及学校活动。第三步，书写结语：“这就是我最好的朋友李华。”[亮点词汇]①likedoingsth.喜欢做某事②benicetosb.对某人友好③likesth.best最喜欢某物[高分句型]①Forsports,helikesplayingbasketballbestbecausehethinksit’srelaxingtoplaybasketballwithhisfriends.（动词搭配：likedoingsth.；“because”引导的原因状语从句；省略“that”的宾语从句）②Helikestheschooltripbestbecausehecangooutwithhisclassmates.（“because”引导的原因状语从句）7．例文：MyGoodFriendIhavemanyfriends,butXiangHuaismybestfriend.Heis14yearsold.HeisfromShandong.Thereishisfather,hismotherandhissisterinhisfamily.HewasbornonNovember14th.Helikesplayingsoccerandreadingbooks.Helikeseatingchicken.Hisfavoritesubjectishistory.Heoftenplaysgameswithme,andheoftenlistenstomusicatnight.Heisagoodboy,sowealllikehim.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中你的好朋友的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“介绍你的好朋友”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“名字、年龄、爱好等”几个方面重点介绍你的好朋友的具体情况；第三步，书写结语，表达“他是一个好男孩，所以我们都喜欢他”的观点。[亮点词汇]①befrom来自；②likedoingsth喜欢做某事；③playsoccer踢足球；④listentomusic听音乐。[高分句型]①Thereishisfather,hismotherandhissisterinhisfamily.(“therebe”句型)②Helikesplayingsoccerandreadingbooks.(动名词作宾语)8．例文：Hello,everyone.MycousinAndywillcometoourclassasanexchangestudent.NowIwouldliketotellyousomethingabouthim.Andyis14yearsold.HecomesfromEngland.Heistallandhehasshorthair.Heisgoodatallhislessons.Helikeshavinggeographyclasses.Heisveryfriendly.Heneverplaystricksonothers.Hespendsalotoftimereadingbooksinhissparetimebecausehethinksreadingmakeshimhappy.Heeatsmorevegetablesandlessmeattokeephealthy.HeisinterestedinChinesefestivals.HewantstoeatdumplingswithusandwatchdragonandliondancesduringtheSpringFestival.That’sall.Thankyouforlistening.【详解】[总体分析]题材：本文是一篇说明文；时态：时态为“一般现在时”；提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意围绕“信息提示”介绍Andy的个人信息、性格、活动和饮食习惯并阐述他的愿望。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍表弟的名字，引入正文；第二步，介绍Andy的个人信息、性格、活动和饮食习惯并阐述他的愿望；第三步，感谢大家的聆听。[亮点词汇]①begoodat擅长②keephealthy保持健康③beinterestedin对……感兴趣[高分句型]①Helikeshavinggeographyclasses.（动名词作主语）②Hespendsalotoftimereadingbooksinhissparetimebecausehethinksreadingmakeshimhappy.（使用because引导的原因状语从句）9．例文：I’mLiMingfromClass3,Grade7.Ilearnalotthisterm.Ilovemyschoollifeverymuch.Iamgoodatsports,andmyfavouritesportisvolleyball.Ioftenplayitattheweekend.Ialsolovereadingbecausereadinghelpsmelearnalot.Iseldomeatsnacksorsweetfood.Ilikewearingsportsclothesbecausetheyarecomfortable.Theyarepopularwithyoungpeople.Iamahelpfulboy.Ioftenraisemoneytohelpthechildreninpoorareas.Nextterm,Iwilldomoresports.IhopeIcanbehealthier.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给表格提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，整体说明自己的个人基本情况；第二步，介绍自己的生活习惯以及个性品质；第三步，最后展望未来。[亮点词汇]①begoodat擅长②lovedoingsth喜欢做某事③bepopularwith受……欢迎[高分句型]①Ialsolovereadingbecausereadinghelpsmelearnalot.（because引导的原因状语从句）②Ioftenraisemoneytohelpthechildreninpoorareas.（动词不定式作目的状语从句）10．例文DearTom,Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmyhometownandmyschoollife.PeopleinAnxiareveryfriendly.Therearemanyplacesofinterestinmyhometown.Theweatherhereisverynice.It’scoolinspringandfall.Andit’swarminwinterbuthotandrainyinsummer.Ihaveabusybuthappyschoollife.Wehavesevenlessonseverydayonweekdays.MyfavoritesubjectisEnglish.AndIlikewatchingEnglishmoviesandplayingbasketballafterschool.Ihopeyoucancometovisitmyhometown.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称和第三人称为主。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己的家乡的情况；第二步，介绍自己的校园生活情况；第三步，最后表达自己的希望和期待。[亮点词汇]①placesofinterest有趣的地方②onweekdays在工作日③afterschool放学后[高分句型]①AndIlikewatchingEnglishmoviesandplayingbasketballafterschool.（and连接两个动名词）②Ihopeyoucancometovisitmyhometown.（省略that的宾语从句）11．例文To:MikeFrom:LiMingDearMike,I’mLiMing.Ireallywanttobeyourpenpal.Letmetellyousomethingaboutmyself.I’m13yearsold.I’mamiddleschoolstudentinHangzhouandI’minGradeSeven.Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily—myfather,mymother,myyoungbrotherandme.Ilikedoingsportsbecauseitcanhelpmekeephealthy,andIalwaysplaysoccerwithmyfriendsafterschool.It’sgreatfun.Ihavethreesoccerballsandtwovolleyballs.Ilookforwardtohearingfromyou!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件：②时态：时态为“一般现在时”：③提示：本文已经给出MIke发布的征笔友的信息，需要认真阅读，找出写作要点，注意不要遗漏要点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍自己，表明态度。从姓名、年龄、学校等方面来介绍自己。第二步，具体介绍自己。从家庭成员、兴趣爱好等方面对自己进行介绍。重点介绍喜欢的运动以及拥有的运动用品。第三步，书面结语。表明想要得到回复的愿望。[亮点词汇]①wanttobe想要成为……②likedoingsports喜欢做运动③helpmekeephealthy帮助我保持健康④playsoccerwithmyfriends和我的朋友们踢足球[高分句型]①Therearefourpeopleinmyfamily-myfather,mymother,myyoungbrotherandme.（Therebe句式表示“有”）12．例文TodayisSaturday.IgototheForestParkforapicnicwithmyclassmatesandtheirparents.Myparentsaresittingonthegroundandtastingdeliciousfood.Theyaretalkingandlaughinghappily.I’mhavingfunnexttothem.Mydancemakesthemlaugh.Tom’sfatherishavingabarbecue.Itsmellsverydelicious.Tomishelpinghim.BobandJanearedancingtothemusic.Peterandhissisteraregoingfishingwithafishingrod.Howhappyweare!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为看图作文；②时态：时态为“现在进行时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给的图片，写一篇作文介绍你们星期六的活动，可适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，整体说明星期六的活动；第二步，根据四张图片具体阐述做了什么。[亮点词汇]①forapicnic去野餐②havefun玩得开心③makesbdosth使某人做某事[高分句型]Howhappyweare!（how感叹句的运用）13．例文：DearFrank，Myschoollifeisbusybutinteresting.Ihave