2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+比比的助人行动与创意+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习比比的助人行动与创意1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文EverySaturday,Bibihungoutathergrandma’slaundryanddry-cleaningstorewhilehermomworked.Bibilovedbeingwithhergrandma,butshewantedtodomorethanjustdrawandread.“HowaboutIwritedownwhatpeoplebringinandpinanumbertoit?”Bibioffered.WithGrandmanearby,shedidfine.Butthenextorderwasanenormousbedspread.Bibicheckeditin,butwhenshewenttoliftitoffthecounter,itwouldn’tmove.Shetriedmovingit,butittoppledoveronher.“I’mOK!”Shegiggledfromunderthesoftmaterial.Grandmaliftedthebedspreadoffherandsmiled.“Whydon’tyoudrawforalittlewhile,”shesuggested.“You’resuchagoodartist”.Bibisighed.“ButIwantedtohelpyou.”Grandmadidn’twanthertohandlethehotpresserortheiron.Shecouldputthestiffcardboardintothereadywashedshirts,butthatwasaboutit.“Whydon’tyoudrawapictureofmorecustomerscomingin?”Grandmajoked.“Maybethatwouldhelp!”4续写原文Bibiwentoutside.Itwasaclearfallday.Thelastleaveswerestartingtheirlazydrifttotheground.Shespottedherbabysitter,Stephanie.Stephaniewaspaintingbiglettersonthewindowofthehardwarestore.“Stephanie!”Bibicalled.“You’regoingtogetintrouble.”Stephanielaughed.“Thehigh-schoolcheerleading(啦啦队)ispaintingwindowsforourfootballgamenextweekend.Someoftheshopownerssaidwecould.”“Doesthatpaintwashoff?”Bibiasked.“Yep.It’sjustcornstarch(玉米淀粉),soap,andfoodcoloring,”saidStephanie.Bibisawotherkidsfromthehighschoolpaintingdesignsonwindowsupanddownthestreet.GO,TIGERSsaidthewindowofthenailsaloninhugeletters.HEARUSROAR!saidthewindowofthemilkshakeshop.“Icanhelpyou!”BibicalledtoStephanie,herheartbeatingfast.“Icandraw!”“Sorry,Bibi,”Stephaniesaid.“I’moutofpaint,andIhavetogethome.Thankyou,though!”Bibiwassodisappointed.ShestaredatGrandma’swindows.Theywerebare.5段首句Paragraph1：SuddenlyanideaburstintoBibi’shead.Paragraph2：Whenshewasfinished,BibiwentinsidetogetGrandma.6Part2题目分析7续写原文分析8文章讲述了比比在奶奶的洗衣店帮忙，因无法搬动大件物品而感到沮丧。她看到高中生在窗户上涂画，想帮忙却被拒绝。后来她想到用玉米淀粉自制涂料在奶奶店窗户上画画。最终完成了一幅漂亮的画，成功帮助奶奶吸引顾客。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点9续写思路分析Para1：SuddenlyanideaburstintoBibi’shead.比比突然想到用玉米淀粉自制涂料。她找来材料，调配好后开始在窗户上画画。她画了一朵大花、太阳和一些快乐的人。10续写思路分析Para2：Whenshewasfinished,BibiwentinsidetogetGrandma.比比完成画后，带奶奶出来看。奶奶看到窗户上的画十分惊喜，称赞比比做得好。比比表示自己想帮奶奶吸引顾客，奶奶很欣慰。11Part3范文呈现12范文呈现SuddenlyanideaburstintoBibi’shead.SherememberedthecornstarchpaintStephaniehadmentioned.Sherushedhome,foundsomecornstarch,soap,andfoodcoloring.Shemixedthemtogetherandgotasmallbowlofpaint.Thenshestarteddrawingonthewindow.13范文呈现Whenshewasfinished,Bibiwentinsidetogetgrandma.Shetookheroutsideandshowedherthewindow.Grandmawassurprisedandhappy.14升级版范文呈现SuddenlyanideaburstintoBibi’shead.RememberingthecornstarchpaintthatStephaniehadtoldherabout,sherushedhomeandgatheredthenecessaryingredients.Withasmallbowlofpaintinhand,shebegandrawingonthewindow.Shepaintedalargeflower,abrightsun,andsomehappypeople,herexcitementfuelinghercreativity.15升级版范文呈现Whenshewasfinished,Bibiwentinsidetogetgrandma.Leadingheroutside,sheshowedherthewindow.Grandmawasbothsurprisedanddelighted.“Oh,Bibi!Thisiswonderful.Itlookssoinviting,”shesaid,hereyesfilledwithpride.Bibismiled,feelingasenseofaccomplishment.“Iwantedtohelpyougetmorecustomers,a