高考英语复习读后续写练习+圣诞前夕的善意传递 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习圣诞前夕的善意传递1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Thelineofcustomerssnakedaroundthecounter(柜台).TherewerejusttwomoreshoppingdaysbeforeChristmas,andmostoftheshoppersinlinewereinpanicmode.Oneofthosecustomerswasmyhusband,Dale.Daleisoneofthosepeoplewhoaretheno-nonsenseshopperswhodependonfastservicebecauseeveryminutecountsasthecountdownbeforeChristmascontinues.Buttheserviceherewasanythingbutfast.Theproblemwastheelderlyladyatthefrontoftheline,whokepttalkinghappilytothesalesgirlworkingatthecashregister.4续写原文“Thissweaterisformygranddaughter,”theladyexplained.“She’sgoingtobeateacher,youknow.Andshe’sdoingverywell.Shehasaveryniceboyfriendwhoisanarchitecturaltechnician.He’sjuststartedajobwithagoodcompany,butyouknow,wehaven’tseenanysignofaringyet.Youngpeopleseemtowaitsolongthesedays.Why,IwasmarriedwithonechildandanotheroneonthewaywhenIwasherage.”Onandonshetalkedasshepainstakinglycountedoutherchange,unawareofthewindingsnakeofcustomersbehindher.Whenshefinallyzippedherpurseshutandpickedupherparcel,theclerkgesturedtothemannextinline.5续写原文“Thankyou,dearie.”Shestartedtomoveslowly,checkingthecontentsofhershoppingbag.Shewasalmosttotheendofthecounterwhensuddenlysheturnedback.“Oops!Excuseme,what’sthisfor?”sheasked,holdingupapieceofpaper.“It’sadiscountcoupon(优惠券)thatwillgiveyou15percentoffyournextpurchasehereatthestore,”repliedthesalesgirl.“Well,thankyou,mydear,butIwon'tbeneedingthis,”shebeamed.“Here,youcanuseitrightnow!”shesaid,handingittothemannextinline.Theman'seyeswidened,andhemumbled(嘟囔)awordofthanksasshewalkedtothedoor.6段首句Paragraph1：Thenanamazingthinghappened.Paragraph2：Thethirdday,unlikethefirsttwotimes,shegavemealittlehalf-smile.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了在圣诞前夕，排队购物的顾客们本因时间紧迫而心情焦急，却因一位老人的举动而发生了改变。老人与收银员开心地聊天，结账后将优惠券送给了后面的顾客。这一行为引发了连锁反应，顾客们依次传递优惠券，原本紧张的氛围变得温馨和谐，大家都感受到了人与人之间的善意。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Thenanamazingthinghappened.在圣诞前夕，购物的人们排着长队，队伍弯弯曲曲像蛇一样绕着柜台。大家都很着急，因为离圣诞节只剩下两天了。我的丈夫戴尔也在队伍里，他一向追求高效快速的购物。然而，前面一位老人却一直在和收银员聊天，丝毫没有意识到后面的顾客正心急如焚。她详细地讲述着孙女的事情，还在慢慢数着零钱。终于她结完账，却又发现了优惠券，把它递给了下一位顾客。11续写思路分析Para2：BythetimethecouponreachedDale,hefeltlikehewaspartofsomethingspecial.接下来神奇的事情发生了，接过优惠券的人并没有自己使用，而是转身递给了后面的人。这个举动在队伍里不断传递，大家都在传递着这份善意。当优惠券传到戴尔手中时，他也被这温馨的氛围感染了。他感受到了人与人之间的温暖，原本焦急的心情也缓和了许多。大家都因为这小小的优惠券，有了不一样的购物体验。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Thelineofcustomerssnakedaroundthecounter.TherewerejusttwomoreshoppingdaysbeforeChristmas,andmostoftheshoppersinlinewereinahurry.Dale,myhusband,wasamongthem,eagertogetthroughtheshoppingquickly.Theelderlyladyatthefrontofthelinewaschattinghappilywiththesalesgirl.Shewasexplainingaboutthesweaterforhergranddaughter,talkingabouthergranddaughter'slifeandboyfriend.Aftershefinallyfinishedcountingherchangeandpickedupherparcel,shenoticedthediscountcouponandpassedittothemannextinline.14范文呈现Thenanamazingthinghappened.Themanwhoreceivedthecouponpasseditontothepersonbehindhim,andthispatterncontinueddowntheline.Eachpersonwhoreceivedthecoupon,insteadofusingitforthemselves,passeditontothenextpersoninline.BythetimethecouponreachedDale,hefeltlikehewaspartofsomethingspecial.Hesmiledandpassedthecoupontothepersonbehindhim,realizingthatthissimpleactofkindnesshadturnedthewholeshoppingexperiencearound.15升级版范文呈现Thelineofcustomerssnakedaroundthecounter.WithonlytwoshoppingdaysleftbeforeChristmas,mostshopperswereinarush.Dale,myhusband,wasnoexception,eagertogetthroughtheshoppingquickly.Theelderlyladyatthefrontoftheline,whowaschattinghappilywiththesalesgirl,seemedcompletelyunawareoftheimpatientcustomersbehindher.Shepainstakinglycountedoutherchangewhilesharingdetailsabouthergranddaughter'slifeandherboyfriend.Aftershefinallyfinishedcountingherchangeandpickedupherparcel,shenoticedthediscountcouponandpassedittothemannextinline.16升级版范文呈现Thenanamazingthinghappened.Themanwhoreceivedthecouponpasseditontothepersonbehindhim,andthispatterncontinueddowntheline.Eachpersonwhoreceivedthecoupon,insteadofusingitforthemselves,passeditontothenextpersoninline.BythetimethecouponreachedDale,hefeltlikehewaspartofsomethingspecial.Hesmiled