作文04 2021年山西卷（满分作文+同类作文+素材积累）-备战2022年中考英语满分作文+万能模板+热点素材

2021年中考满分作文特快专刊真题在线作文04山西卷真题在线（山西省2021年中考英语试题）在我们成长的过程中，会遇到各种各样的选择，选择读一本喜欢的书；选择做感兴趣的事；选择与志趣相投的人交朋友……在选择面前，如何客观、理性，并且遵从自己内心的感受，这是我们应有的处事态度。请根据以上内容，结合图片信息，写一篇英语短文。内容包括：1.从以上提示中选择某个方面，谈谈你对这个选择的观点；2.围绕以上观点，描述你曾经历过的一件事；3.这件事带给你的思考。要求：1.词数不少于80词；2.提示词会仅供参考；3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。WordBANKobjectiveadi.客观的reasonableadj.理性的attituden.态度___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________考题解析考题解析本文是一篇看图作文。描述一件自己感兴趣的事，是如何遵从自己内心的感受，并坚持下来的短文。。根据要表达的内容确定文章中使用的主要人称是第一人称,时态是一般现在时和一般过去时。写作中注意可适当发挥,可适当运用相关连词和副词进行过渡和衔接。满分范文满分范文范文一Thereisnodenyingthatitisimportantforustomakeareasonablechoiceinlife.IamavolleyballfansoIchoosetojointheschoolvolleyballclub,whichisbeneficialtomygrowth.Inmychildhood,Ifellinlovewithvolleyball.ThenwhenIwasinGrade8,Iwaseagertobeamemberoftheschoolvolleyballclub.However,myparentswantedmetofocustimeandenergyonschoolwork.Ihadalongtalkwiththemcalmly.Afterthat,Itrainedhardwithpersistenceintheclubandlearnedwhatthetruemeaningoftheteamworkwas.Meanwhile,IreviewedmyschoolworkaslongasIfinishedtraining.Tomyjoy,Igotasatisfyingresultinthetest.Allthisshowedthatmychoicewasright.Needlesstosay,nomatterwhatthechoiceis,ifitisreasonable,justmakeittofollowyourheart.Onlyinthiswaycanitbringoutthebestinyou.范文二In

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is.名师点评.佳句积累2021年山西省中考英语的书面表达继续其创新的步伐，材料的形式是多选思维，但是熟悉十年来我省命题思路的同仁和考生们不难发现，这种操作手法是延续了“2015年‘最喜欢课堂形式’”的那篇命题的方式，给了“3+......”的选择，让我们从中选择出我们的态度，仔细的学生不难发现，在提示的图画中其右上角有个关键的单词helpful，你们想到了什么？对了，助人为乐孺子牛精神（读到此处，考生们你们是不是乐透了），所以我们当然选择这个角度进行我们本次中考作文的创作了。本文写作中主要采用一般现在时和一般过去时。描述过去的事情要用一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段描述自己的经历；第三段谈谈这件事带来的思考。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。佳句积累Thereisnodenyingthatitisimportantforustomakeareasonablechoiceinlife.【亮点】本句运用句型：Thereisnodenyingthat...“表毋庸置疑的是...”。2.IamavolleyballfansoIchoosetojointheschoolvolleyballclub,whichisbeneficialtomygrowth.【亮点】本句中运用了非限制性定语从句，解释说明前句对我成长的裨益。这类句型值得借鉴学习，能清晰表意，也能使得行文结构更紧密，句型更丰富。3.Afterthat,Itrainedhardwithpersistenceintheclubandlearnedwhatthetruemeaningoftheteamworkwas.【亮点】本句中运用了宾语从句，使得文章句型多样化，表意更清楚。4.Tomyjoy,Igotasatisfyingresultinthetest.【亮点】本句中运用了短语“Tomyjoy...”，用于连接词。类似用法还可将joy改成surprise，表示“让我感到惊讶的是...”。5.Needlesstosay,nomatterwhatthechoiceis,ifitisreasonable,justmakeittofollowyourheart.【亮点】本句中有三个亮点，第一个是连词“needlesstosay”表“不用说”。第二个是“nomatterwhat”,表“无论什么…”，第三个是if引导的条件状语从句，本句值得借鉴学习。6.Onlyinthiswaycanitbringoutthebestinyou.【亮点】本句最大的亮点即为倒装句的运用，使得文章更出彩。7.As

for

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meaning.【亮点】本句有两个亮点，第一个为动名词短语作主语的用法，第二个为短语“of+名词”用于替代形容词的用法。8.From

this

experience,

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the

important

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played

by

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other

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which

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me

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more

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to

know

more

about

our

country,

but

also

makes

me

realize

what

my

value

is.【亮点】本句中有三个亮点，第一个是万能模板“fromthisexperience”表“从这次经历中”，可用于记叙文结尾，用于总结从这次经历中我们学会或者懂得了什么。第二个亮点为非限制性定语从句的运用。第三个即为notonly…butalso的运用，使得文章更加紧凑并有逻辑性。举一反三相似题①中考后，同学们将迎来期盼已久的暑假。这个暑假，你会选择与父母还是朋友同行呢？请根据提示写一篇短文，向校报TravelWorld投稿，选择你喜欢的旅行方式，并阐述理由。TravelwithparentsTravelwithfriends▲safer▲lookafter▲getonbetterwith▲…◆free◆moreinteresting◆developone’sindependence◆…注意:1.根据你选择的旅行方式，将标题补充完整。2.理由必须包括表中你所选择的旅行方式的相应内容，需适当发挥。3.词数：80~100。短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。短文首句：IfIhavethechancetogotraveling,I’dliketotravelwith…Travelingwith_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文一】TravelingwithParentsIfIhavethechancetogotraveling,Iwouldliketotravelwithmyparents.Don’tyouthinkit’ssaferforustotravelwithourparents?Withthehelpofourparents,wewillnotgetlost.Ouritemswon’tbestolenandwewon’tberobbedbyothers,either.Besides,parentscanlookafteruswell,especiallywhenwefallillorgetinjured.What’smore,wecouldspendmoretimewithourfamily.Thebetterwegetonwithfamily,themoreweloveeachother.Lastbutnotleast,parentscouldrelaxthemselvesbytravelingaswell.Giventhereasonsabove,I’dliketotravelwithmyparents.Ithinktravelingwillbemorewonderfulwithmyparents.【参考范文二】TravellingwithfriendsIfhavethechancetogotravelling,Iwouldliketotravelwithmyfriends.First,Idon’tthinktherearesomanychancesforusteenagerstogotravellingwithfriends.Thejourneywillbemoreinterestingwithfriends,becauseweusuallyhavethesamehobbiesandinterests.Second,wearefreetochoosetheplacesofinterestthatwealllike.Third,wehavetolookafterourselveswhenweareontheway.Soit’sgoodchancetodevelopourindependence.Learningtobeindependentwillhelpuswhenwegototheseniorhighschool.What’smore,it’snoteasyforustoseeeachotheraftergraduating.Weshouldcherishthechanceandtimewegettogether.Giventhereasonsabove,I’dliketotravelwithmyfriends.Whowillyougotravellingwith?【考题解析】1.题干解读：该题属于半命题作文写作，内容是假期选择与父母还是朋友出去玩，表格中分别写出了与父母一起去旅行的理由及与朋友一起去旅行的原因。写作时要二选其一，将标题补充完整后，陈述这么选得理由，要包含表格中的提示并进行适当发挥。2.例文点评：这两篇例文分别针对题目中提供的两种选择进行写作，在补充完整标题后，都根据表格中的几点理由展开了陈述，最后都适当发挥补充了自己的理由，文章末尾对自己的观点进行了总结。例文结构清晰，行文连贯，恰当地运用了副词和连词等用以过渡，增强了整篇文章的逻辑关系。3.(1)Possibleversionone高分亮点：高分单词和短语：either；besides；especially；spend；withthehelpof；getlost；lookafter；fallill；what'smore；lastbutnotleast；relaxoneself。高分句型：反问句；宾语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；“the+比较级，the+比较级”句型；I’dliketodosth.。(2)Possibleversiontwo高分亮点：高分单词和短语：so；develop；cherish；above；gotraveling；befreetodosth.；placesofinterest；lookafter；what’smore。高分句型：宾语从句；therebe句型；because引导的原因状语从句；定语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；it’s+形容词+forsb.todosth.；I’dliketodosth.。相似题②命运不是机遇，而是选择。命运不靠等待，而凭争取。某英文网站正在开展以“我的选择”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英文写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你曾经做出的一个选择，以及这个选择对你的影响。提示词语：face,interest,weigh,decideto,masterofmylife提示问题：•Whatchoicedidyoumake?•Whatinfluencedidthechoicehaveonyou?MyChoiceLifeisallaboutchoices._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Lifeisaboutchoices.Destinyisnotamatterofchancebutamatterofchoice.Irealizedthetruthofitfromoneofmypastexperiences.WhenIwasinGrade8,therewasanimportantEnglishcompetition.IfIchosetoattendit,Ineededtoreadpilesofrelevantmaterials,whichwouldtakeupmostofmyleisuretime.However,deepinmyheartIcouldfeelmydesiretochallengemyselfandbroadenmyhorizons.Afterweighingallofprosandcons,Ifinallydecidedtoattendit.OnceImademychoice,Iburiedmyselfinthosebooks,reportsandessays.AlthoughImetwithsomanydifficultwordsandcomplicatedknowledge,Ineversetback.Finally,Igottwoprizesinthecompetition.Itprovedtobeawisechoicelater.Thisexperiencehashadalastinginfluenceonme.Firstofall,IhaverealizedthatIamthemasterofmylifewhoshouldberesponsibleformychoicesanddecisions.Moreimportantly,Icametounderstandsuccessdependsondeterminationandhardwork.OnlywhenIdaretochallengemyselfcouldIhavethecouragetobecomeabetterperson.【考题解析】1.题干解读：文章是一篇话题作文，主要以“我的选择”为主题展开描写。主要是要写出一次具体的选择，同时要写出通过这次的选择对自己产生了哪些影响，要描写的具体详细，要注意文章所用的时态，主要是以第一人称描写，而描写的是自己的一次经历，所以应该用一般过去时描写，要注意语言的连贯性。2.例文点评：文章采取三段描写。第一段总述“生活就是选择。命运不是机会的问题，而是选择的问题”引出下文要说的内容；第二段具体的描写这次的选择经历；第三段描写这个选择对自己的影响。整个文章结构完整，描写的很具体，语言表达准确详实，意思明确易懂，行文流畅。3.高分亮点：短语：oneof…；decideto；setback；dependon；moreimportantly；firstofall；dareto。句型：when引导的时间状语从句；if引导的条件状语从句；which引导的定语从句；although引导的让步状语从句；who引导的定语从句。相似题③人的一生中要做出许多次选择。假设当初选择初中学校时，你和父母意见相左。请根据以下要点，用英语写一篇题为“HowIchosemyschool?”的短文，描述这次选择的经过。词数100---120。文中不得出现真实人名和学校名。要点如下：1.描述这件事情的来龙去脉

①你选择A学校，理由是……；

②你的父母选择B学校，理由是……；

③你是怎么说服父母的？（比如：上网查资料，向亲朋好友求助等等）

2.你对此事的感想或体会

……

注意：短文开头已经为你写好，不计入总词数。Thoughitwasalongtimeago,IstillrememberhowIchosemyjuniormiddleschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Thoughitwasalongtimeago,IstillrememberhowIchosemyjuniormiddleschool.MyparentsandIhelddifferentviewsuponwhichschoolIshouldgoto.IpreferredtochooseSchoolA,thinkingitoffersstudentsmanyafter-schoolactivities.Myparents,however,wouldliketosendmetoSchoolB,whichenjoysgreatfamebuttakes4hourstogotherebytrain.Itriedeverypossiblemeanstopersuademyparents.Afterfindingoutmorepersuasiveinformationonline,Iaskedmyuncletohaveaheart-to-hearttalkwithmyparents.AndIwasluckytowintheirapprovalintheend.Lookingback,Ineverregretit.Onceyousetyourmindonit,youshouldsticktoitandnevergiveup.【考题解析】试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者就怎样选择学校这一问题发表自己的观点，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如IpreferredtochooseSchoolA,thinkingitoffersstudentsmanyafter-schoolactivities.Myparents,however,wouldliketosendmetoSchoolB,whichenjoysgreatfamebuttakes4hourstogotherebytrain.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。考点：考查提纲类作文。相似题④Writeatleast60wordsonthegivensituation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。）石砖和雕像的经历告诉我们，不同的选择会带来不同的结果。生活中，我们也会碰到很多选择。请以“Ichoseto________”为题，结合自身的经历，说说你是怎么做的？你为什么会做出这样的选择？Thefollowingisforreferenceonly●choosetobe/do●makeupmymind●encouragemeto（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】IchosetobeareporterLifeisfullofdifferentkindsofchoices.Differentpeoplehavedifferentchoicesabouttheirfuturejobs.Asforme,Ihavemadeupmymindtobeareporter.BecauseIwouldliketoseedifferentpeopleandIcanmakefriendswithmorepeople.What’smore,Icantellpeoplethetruthaboutsomethingpopular.WhatcanIdotobecomeareporter?Imuststudyhardtoobtainmoreknowledge.And,atthesametime,Iwillwritearticlesformagazinesornewspapers.WhenIfinishhighschool,IamgoingtogotocollegeinBeijing.BecauseIthinkIcanlearnmorethere.Myparentsalsoencouragemetochasemydreambravely.Withtheirsupport,Ibelieveeverythingwil