专题09 书面表达-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（广州专用）

2023广州市中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题速递第二期专题09书面表达一、电子邮件1．（2022·广东广州·广州大学附属中学校考二模）假设你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack想学习汉语，希望你能给他一些建议，请以下列提示信息，写一封电子邮件。1.汉语使用范围广，占全球1/4，汉语难学，但要有信心2.大胆交流，不要怕犯错；多听中文歌曲，多读中文报纸杂志3.其他建议……（请你补充）注意：1.词数：不低于80（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。DearJack,It’ssoexcitingtoknowthatyouareinterestedinlearningChinese.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoursLiHua【答案】例文DearJack,It’ssoexcitingtoknowthatyouareinterestedinlearningChinese.Chineseisthemostwidelyusedlanguageintheword,andalmost25%ofthepopulationintheworldspeakit.Althoughitisnoteasytolearnitwellinashorttime,trytobeconfidentallthetime.Herearesomesuggestions.First,itisagoodideatolistentoChinesesongs.Second,readingChinesenewspaperandchattingwithyourChinesefriendsinChinesearealsoeffectiveways.Aboveall,don’tbe

afraidofmakingmistakes.Trytospeakitbravely.IhopeyoucanhavefuninlearningChinese.Inmyopinion,Ithinkpracticeisthemostimportant.Practicemakesperfect.TrytopractisemoreandyoucanspeakChinesebetterandbetter.Yours,LiHua【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于邮件写作，写作时要按邮件格式写，主要是根据提示内容给他一些学习汉语的建议，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时为主，中心内容按照提示要求分层次来写，需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。在最后还需要给出来除表格提示之外的自己的建议。二、材料作文2．（2022·广东广州·校考三模）学校英语报举行“未来之城”征文活动。请你用英文写一篇短文投稿，介绍你心目中的未来城市，并分享你在未来之城生活的想法。短文需包括下图所以提示内容。注意：1.词数不少于80词；2.文中不得出现考生真实的姓名、地点和所在的学校名词。OurCityoftheFutureWhatwillourcitybelikein2050?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】

OurCityoftheFuture

Whatwillourcitybelikein2050?Ithinkitwillbequitedifferentfromnow.Thelivingenvironmentwillbegreatlyimprovedinthefollowingways.

Thehouseswillbebothgreenandsmart.Everythingwillbemadebyenvironmental-friendlymaterials.What’smore,thehousewillbeconnectedtotheshopsandhospitalssothatyoucanorderallkindsofserviceswithoutgoingout.Mostofthetimepeoplewillworkathomeandtheywillhavefewerworkinghoursbecauseofnewtechnologies.Ifyouwanttogotravelling,therewillbenotrafficjamatall.Youcantakedifferentkindsoftransportations,suchastheflyingbuses:andthedriverlesscars.ThemostexcitingthingforstudentswillbethewidelyuseofE-booksandVRtechnologyatschool.Asaresult,therewillbepaperlessexamsandmorefuninlearning.

Ourcityin2050willbefullofhopeandweshouldworkhardtorealizeit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：根据所给提示介绍你心目中的未来城市，并分享你在未来之城生活的想法。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍未来城市的房子；第二步，介绍未来城市的工作和交通情况；第三步，最后介绍未来的学校。[亮点词汇]①What’smore而且②suchas比如③Asaresult结果④befullof充满[高分句型]①thehousewillbeconnectedtotheshopsandhospitalssothatyoucanorderallkindsofserviceswithoutgoingout.（sothat引导的目的状语从句）②Ifyouwanttogotravelling,therewillbenotrafficjamatall.（if引导的条件状语从句）3．（2022·广东广州·校考二模）你根据如表提示，用英语写一篇短文向校刊投稿，阐述书写的重要性。你的观点在电脑普及时代，书写依然重要你的理由(1)书写是中国传统文化的一个重要组成部分，所以练习书写有助于传承文化；(2)每个人的字迹都有个人意义，例如手写信更能表达情感；(3)……(再自拟至少一个理由加以阐述)[参考词汇]handwriting书法；字迹；书写(不可数名词)；inherit传承(及物动词)TheimportanceofhandwritingNowadaysmanyChinesestudentsnolongerpaymuchattentiontotheirhandwriting.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:TheimportanceofhandwritingNowadaysmanyChinesestudentsnolongerpaymuchattentiontohandwriting.Theybelievetheirkeyboardscandothework.However,Ithinkthathandwritingisstillimportant.Firstofall,handwritingisanimportantpartintraditionalChineseculture.It’simportanttopassonthetraditionalculturetopracticewritingChinesecharacters.GoodhandwritingcanmakeusproudasaChineseandmakeusloveourcountryfurther.Next,there’sacertainmeaninginone’shandwriting.Forexample,somewaysofwritingcanshowfeelingsinwritingletters.Also,writingChinesecharacterscarefullycanhelpyouformahabitoflearningChinesewell.Atlast,agoodhandwritingcanhelpyougetgoodgradesinexamsfromyourexcellentlookofpapers.Allinall,it’severyone’sdutytowritecharacterswellandtakeactiontobegoodatwriting.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，表明自己的观点；第二步，介绍自己认为书写仍然重要的理由。[亮点词汇]①firstofall首先②passon传递③atlast最后[高分句型]①Ithinkthathandwritingisstillimportant（that引导宾语从句）②It’simportanttopassonthetraditionalculturetopracticewritingChinesecharacters（动词不定式作主语）4．（2022·广东广州·校考二模）百年古树，是岁月的见证，更是文化传承的载体。近日，你所在的学校发现一棵有着三百余年历史的古树，饱经沧桑，部分树干已枯萎。作为学校英语校刊的负责人，你向全校师生发出一封英文倡议书，请根据下面表格的提示内容，呼吁大家采取行动保护古树。现状树龄大，易受天气影响、易患病；人类活动，如人类迁徙、砍伐等。意义古树是重要的自然资源，也是历史和文化的标志。保护措施1.合理浇灌，保持土壤湿润；2.请你补充；3.请你补充。注意：1.词数80词左右（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；2.内容必须包括表格的所有要点；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。参考词汇：迁徙migrate

资源resourceDearstudentsandteachers,TodayI’mgoingtotalkabouttheprotectionofancienttrees.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Dearstudentsandteachers,TodayI’mgoingtotalkabouttheprotectionofancienttrees.Thisisanancienttreewithahistoryofmorethan300years.Aftermanyvicissitudes,partofitstrunkhaswithered.Therearetworeasons.Ontheonehand,thisancienttreeisold.Itissusceptibletotheweather.Itiseasytogetsick.Ontheotherhand,duetohumanactivities,suchashumanmigration,logging,etc.Ancienttreesareofgreatsignificance.Itisanimportantnaturalresourceandasymbolofhistoryandculture.Ithinkweshouldprotectitnow.First,waterreasonablytokeepthesoilmoist.Second,carryoutthepreventionandcontrolofdiseasesandpestsofancienttrees.Third,strengthenpublicityandeducationtoraisetheawarenessofthewholepeopletoprotect.Finally,Ihopeallofuscantakeactiontoprotectancienttrees.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：本题给出了部分提示，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中“现状，意义”要点，适当添加细节，并对“保护措施”部分进行补充，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表面写作意图，指出古树的悠久历史；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，重点讲述造成古树现状的原因，古树的意义以及对古树要采取的保护措施；第三步，总结，呼吁同学们积极的保护古树。[亮点词汇]①ontheonehand一方面②ontheotherhand另一方面③asymbolof…一种……的象征④takeaction采取行动[高分句型]①Thisisanancienttreewithahistoryofmorethan300years.(with+名词短语，作后置定语)②Ontheotherhand,duetohumanactivities,suchashumanmigration,logging,etc.(用suchas举例)5．（2023春·广东广州·九年级广州市骏景中学校考一模）请根据表格所给的信息，写出Mary的梦想之路并谈谈你的梦想，写一篇80词左右的短文，开头已给出，不计入总词数。Mary的梦想之路1.出生于一个贫穷的家庭。2.有写作方面的才能。3.18岁有机会上大学。4.英语成绩不好，但不灰心，一直努力。5.最后实现了梦想，成为了作家。我的梦想……我将如何实现梦想1.努力学习2.……Marywasbornin_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Marywasborninapoorfamily.Shelikeswritingbecauseshehasatalentforit.Shehadachancetogotocollegeat18.ShedidnotgetgoodgradesinEnglish,butsheneverlostheartandkepttryingtogetintoagooduniversity.Withhermother’sencouragement,shefinallyrealizedherdreamandbecameawriter.Mydreamistobeateacher.Ihopetohelpthechildreninthepoorareas.I’mgoingtostudyhardtogetintocollege.Iplantolearnhowtogetalongwithchildren.IbelieveIwillbeagoodteacher.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文。②时态：时态为“一般过去时和一般将来时”；③提示：根据提示材料分别介绍Mary的梦想和我的梦想。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍Mary的梦想之路。第二步，介绍我的梦想。第三步，介绍实现梦想的方法。[亮点词汇]①haveatalentfor对……有天赋②keepdoingsth持续做某事③getalongwith与……和睦相处[高分句型]①Shelikeswritingbecauseshehasatalentforit.（because引导原因状语从句）②Mydreamistobeateacher（动词不定式作表语）6．（2022·广东广州·广东广雅中学校考二模）劳动教育培养全面发展的人。假如你是学生会的主席LiHua，你将在校园广播EnglishToday中号召全校同学加入劳动实践活动。请根据以下思维导图，写一篇英语演讲稿。注意:1.短文应包含所有要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯；2.词数80左右，不包含所给的单词；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Dearschoolmates,Doyouthinklaboreducationisanecessaryskillforeveryone?__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ChairmanoftheStudentUnionLiHua【答案】例文：Dearschoolmates,Doyouthinklaboreducationisanecessaryskillforeveryone?Wecanfindtheonlythingweneedtodoathomeisstudying.Weevendon’tneedtodoanyhousework.Thisisbecauseofourlackofthissense.Weareusedtobeinglazyinourfreetime.Infact,doingsomehouseworkorotherlaborpracticeisreallygoodforus.Itcanhelpusbuildstrongerbodiesandmakeushealthier.What’smore,wewillalsobeindependentthroughlaborpractice.So,wecanbenefitalotfromit.Whynotdoit?Atlast,whatIwanttosayisthatweshouldofferhelptoourparentsactively.Maybetheyaretiredfromwork,buttheystillhavetolookafterus.Wecanhelpthemdohousework.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldtakepartinsomecourseslikethis.Wearesupposedtoknowhowhardourparentswork.Besides,whenwearefree,wecantakepartinsportsactivities.Let’stakepartinlaboreducationtogether!ChairmanoftheStudentUnionLiHua【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一篇演讲稿，介绍劳动教育的意义。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍劳动教育的原因，意义以及建议；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。7．（2022·广东广州·执信中学校考三模）在过去五年，广州持续推进黑臭水体治理、污水厂建设、碧道建设等工作，水污染防治取得历史性成就，被评为“国家黑臭水体治理示范城市”。假如你是中学生李华，在端午期间收到外国网友Max的邮件,他对有龙舟民俗的猎德河（TheLiedeRiver）很感兴趣，请你根据以下表格提示，介绍猎德河的今昔变化。状况原因看法过去脏、臭工厂污染、倾倒垃圾请你补充现在水清岸绿，可举办龙舟比赛政府、居民的努力注意:1.词数:80字左右（文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearMax,GreatchangeshavetakenplacetotheLiedeRiverwhichliesinmyhometown,Guangzhou.I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutit._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文：DearMax,GreatchangeshavetakenplacetotheLiedeRiverwhichliesinmyhometown,Guangzhou.I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutit.Inthepast,thewaterintheriverwasverydirtybecauseofthefactorypollutionandtherubbishfromthefactories.Manylivingthingsintheriverdied.Peoplecouldnotlivehappily.Sothegovernmenttookmeasurestostopthefactoriesfrompouringthedirtywaterintotheriver.Peoplealsorealizedthedanger.Theyworkedtogethertodosomethingfortheenvironment.Nowthewaterintheriverisveryclear.Therearemanytreesaroundthebankoftheriver.Theyareverybeautiful.Evensomebirdsflytherefreely.Canyoubelieve?Wecanhaveadragonboatracehere.Wouldyoucometomyhometown?I’msureyouwilllikeit.Atlast,Iwanttosayit’severyone’sdutytoprotecttheenvironment.Ifeveryonedoessomethingforit,thewholeworldwillbeamorebeautifulplace.Hopetocomehere.

Yours,LiHua【详解】题干解读：该文是一封邮件，写作时按照已给邮件格式补充完整。写作时应承接短文开头；按汉语提示用英语叙述猎德河的今昔对比及发生变化的原因；最后陈述自己对环保的一点看法。写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述内容；时态采用一般过去时叙述过去，一般现在时叙述现在的状况；描述今昔对比变化要叙述原因，以此引出作者的观点；可适当补充内容，使文章更流畅。三、书信作文8．（2023春·广东广州·九年级校考一模）初三学生Sandy面临中考，面对父母和老师的期望，以及每天堆积如山的作业感到非常苦恼。昨天她因为看了一小时的电视和妈妈吵架，最后摔门而去。于是她写信给老师倾诉烦恼，请你根据下列提示，以老师Nancy的身份用英语给她写一封回信。要求：不少于100词。提示：1.如何舒缓目前的压力；2.如何安排好每天的学习和休息；3.如何处理与父母的关系。DearSandy,Iamreallygladthatyoucanshareyourproblemsandfeelingswithme._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,Nancy【答案】例文DearSandy,Iamreallygladthatyoucanshareyourproblemsandfeelingswithme.Hereismyadvice.First,it’sagoodchoicetotakeupahobbytohelpyourelaxandreduceyourpressure.Second,youcanmakeplansforyoureverydaylife.Afteryoustudyforabouttwohours,youcantakeawalkoutsideandtrytorelax.Besides,don’tstayuplate.It’snotgoodforyourhealth.Third,neverarguewithyourparents.Youshouldlearntounderstandthemandspendsometimecommunicatingwiththem.Discussyourproblemswiththemandtellthemyourideas.Theywillhelpyoufindbetterwaystosolvethem.Inaword,youwillhaveahappierlifewithlesspressureaslongasyoustudyhardandoftentalkwithyourparents.Yours,Nancy【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态综合使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要结合提示问题，针对Sandy的问题给出建议，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“给出建议”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“如何舒缓目前的压力、如何安排好每天的学习和休息、如何处理与父母的关系”三个方面重点介绍；第三步，书写结语。表达“希望对方有一个更快乐、压力更小的生活”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①share...with...和……分享……②takeupahobby养成一种兴趣爱好③makeplansfor为……制定计划④stayuplate熬夜[高分句型]①Youshouldlearntounderstandthemandspendsometimecommunicatingwiththem.（and连接并列结构）②Inaword,youwillhaveahappierlifewithlesspressureaslongasyoustudyhardandoftentalkwithyourparents.（aslongas引导的条件状语从句）9．（2023·广州·九年级一模）中国传统文化深受世界各国人们的喜爱，而广东则以岭南文化而出名，假如你是李华，你们学校将要举办岭南文化节（LingnanCulturalFestival）活动，你美国的笔友Mike想了解本次活动的细节。请你给他回信，内容包括：（1）时间：下周六上午；地点：学校操场；参加人员：全体师生；（2）介绍岭南文化节的活动（至少两项），注意事项（至少一点）；（3）邀请他通过网络观看和体验本次活动。作文要求：（1）不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。（2）语句连贯，字数80词以上，作文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数也不必抄写在答题卡上。DearMike,Howareyou?I’mgladtohearfromyou.It’sknownthatGuangdongisabirthplaceofLingnanCultureinChina._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Hopeyou’llenjoythefestivalonline.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文It’sknownthatGuangdongisabirthplaceofLingnanCultureinChina.OurschoolisgoingtoholdtheLingnanCultureFestivalonJun.12,2022,whichwillbeheldontheplaygroundoftheschool.Allteachersandstudentswilltakepartintheactivity,andsomesocialgroupswillbeinvitedtoperformfolkcustoms.Therearetwomajorprogramstoholdthisculturalfestival:“musicappreciation”and“Cantoneseoperaappreciation”.ItisworthnotingthatafterthewonderfulCantoneseoperaperformance,theactorswillturnovertothestagewearingoperacosturmes.Weshouldpayattentiontosafetywhenparticipatinginactivities.Youcanwatchandexperiencethisactivitythrough5Gnetwork.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，需写为书信格式；②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；③提示：写作主题已给出，写作时主要包含提示要点写清楚举办信息，在介绍活动时注意围绕文化主题自己展开描写，写作时注意不需抄写开头和结尾内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍文化节举办的时间、地点和参加人员；第二步，具体描写文化节上的活动和注意事项；第三步，邀请Mike通过网络观看。[亮点词汇]①takepartin参加②participatein参加③payattentionto注意[高分句型]①OurschoolisgoingtoholdtheLingnanCultureFestivalonJun.12,2022,whichwillbeheldontheplaygroundoftheschool.（定语从句）②ItisworthnotingthatafterthewonderfulCantoneseoperaperformance,theactorswillturnovertothestagewearingoperacosturmes.（主语从句+时间状语从句）四、日记10．（2023春·广东广州·九年级校考一模）北大校友李华回到母校做了一次题为《为了理想，努力奋斗吧！》的演讲，作为九年级学生，即将初中毕业的你，听了校友的演讲后受到了极大的鼓舞。请写一篇英文日记，为自己制定些学习计划，包括以下要点：1.远离手机和电脑游戏，全身心放在学习上；2.学习计划（请补充2点）；3.业余活动（请补充1点）；4.听了演讲后，你的收获和感受。注意：1.不得透露学校，学生姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。2.字数不少于80字。October10th

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