专题09 书面表达15篇-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（湖北专用）

2023中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（湖北专用）第一期专题09书面表达15篇一、话题作文1．（2022·湖北黄石·统考一模）英语课上，大家针对中学生节食减肥这一话题进行了讨论，请你根据以下要点提示写篇短文，谈谈自己的看法。提示：1.健康比漂亮更重要；2.学生应该以学习为主，不要过于注重外貌和别人的看法；3.可通过多锻炼和改变不良饮食习惯保持健康；4.保持健康的心态。注意：1.短文必须包括所有内容要点，可适当发挥；2.80词左右。（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）参考词汇：dieting节食；appearance外貌；stateofmind心态Quiteafewstudentschoosetoloseweightbydieting.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:Quiteafewstudentschoosetoloseweightbydieting.Inmyopinion,healthismoreimportantthanbeauty.Forastudent,studyingisalwaysthefirstthingtoconsider.Don’tpaymuchattentiontoyourappearanceanddon’tletothers’opinionsinfluenceyournormallife.However,ifyoureallywanttoloseweight,itisagoodideatodoitbygettingmoreexerciseandchangingyourunhealthyeatinghabits.Youshouldalsokeepahealthystateofmind.Itcannotonlyhelpwithyourstudies,butalsohelpyouovercomedifficultiesindieting.Sobehappyeveryday,don’tworrytoomuchaboutweight.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇议论文，要求对中学生节食这一话题谈谈自己的看法；②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；③提示：文章写作提示已经给出，写作时应包含所给提示，另外可以适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步：陈述自己关于健康，学习，锻炼及心态的看法；第二步：文章最后对自己的观点进行总结。[亮点词汇]①inmyopinion依我看②payattentionto关注，注意③appearance外表④overcomedifficulties克服困难[高分句型]①However,ifyoureallywanttoloseweight,itisagoodideatodoitbygettingmoreexerciseandchangingyourunhealthyeatinghabits.（用if引导条件状语从句）②Itcannotonlyhelpwithyourstudies,butalsohelpyouovercomedifficultiesindieting.（并列连词notonly...butalso的使用，使文章具有连贯性）二、材料作文2．（2022·湖北襄阳·统考一模）2021年九月，中国正式开始实施（carryout）了“双减政策”（thedoublereductionpolicy）来减少学生的学习负担（burden），请根据以下要求写一篇文章。1.要点提示：（1）简述你对“双减政策”的看法；（2）结合实际详细讲述下双减后我们的学习和生活各发生了哪些变化；（3）简要谈谈在减负的大环境下，我们如何成为一个优秀的学习者？2.注意事项：（1）90词左右。（开头已给出，不计入词数）（2）行文应连贯流畅。（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名。TheChinesegovernmenthascarriedouttheso-calleddoublereductionpolicysinceSeptember,2021._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文TheChinesegovernmenthascarriedouttheso-calleddoublereductionpolicysinceSeptember,2021.Ithopestoreduceschoolworkburdenonprimaryandjuniorhighschoolstudents.Thepolicycallsforreducinghomeworkandafter-schoolclasses.Inmyopinion,thepolicyisgoodforus.Ourhomeworkisclearlylessthanbefore,andwehaveenoughtimetoprocessnewknowledgenow.Wehavemorechancestodoexperimentsandlearnfromreallife.Thisisamuchbetterwaytolearnthingsthanjusthittingthebooks.Wecanalsospendmoretimetakingpartinclubsandactivities.Althoughwefeellessstressedthanbefore,self-disciplinebecomesthekey.Weshouldbalancetheschoolworkandafter-schoolactivities.Weshouldalsofinishourhomeworkontime.Moreover,listeningtotheteachercarefullyinclassbecomesmoreimportant.Otherwise,wewillfallbehindotherstudents.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，简述对该政策的看法；第二步，详述双减后我们学习和生活发生的变化；第三步，介绍在这样的大环境下，如何成为一个优秀的学习者。[亮点词汇]①carryout实施②inmyopinion在我看来③begoodfor对……有好处④ontime按时[高分句型]①Althoughwefeellessstressedthanbefore,self-disciplinebecomesthekey.（although引导的让步状语从句）②Moreover,listeningtotheteachercarefullyinclassbecomesmoreimportant.（动名词作主语）3．（2022·湖北十堰·统考一模）4月23日在京召开了为期三天的首届全民阅读大会。习主席致信祝贺并强调，希望全社会都参与到阅读中来，形成爱读书、读好书、善读书的浓厚氛围。当前，全市各校正开展好书伴我成长活动。请你根据活动主题并结合表格中所给的信息，以“GrowingupwithGoodBooks”为题，英语写一篇倡议书，向学校同学发出倡议。读书的益处获取更多的知识，提高我们的写作，……存在的现象听音乐、看电视、上网占用了大部分业余时间。发出倡议多读书，读经典好书；向世界传播中国传统文化；……要求：1.必须包含所给的全部要点及内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名。3.字数80—100。GrowingupwithGoodBooksDearclassmates,Readingisveryimportantforus.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：GrowingupwithGoodBooksDearclassmates,Readingisveryimportantforus.Wecangetmoreknowledgethroughreading.Itcannotonlyopenourminds,butalsomakeusclevererandhappier.Ourstudycanbeimprovedifweoftenreadgoodbooks.Themoreweread,themorewewilllearn,andthebrighterourfuturewillbecome.However,somestudentsspendmuchtimeinlisteningtomusic,watchingTVorgoingonlinetoplaygames.Ittakesmuchoftheirsparetime.SoIwouldliketosuggestthateveryoneshouldreadmorebooks,especiallyreadclassicbookssothatwecanspreadourChinesetraditionalculturetotheworld.Let’sstartreadingnow.Andletitbecomeapartofourlife!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇倡议书，属于材料作文写作；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：文章开头以及要点已给出，按照提示要点逐条阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接文章开头，主要采用第一人称来书写，按照提示阐述读书的益处；第二步，根据提示分析读书在学生中普遍存在的现象，可以采用多种句型进行分析；第三步，书写结语，发出倡议，注意语言的的准确性和连贯性。[亮点词汇]①notonly…butalso…不但……而且……②themore…themore…andthebrighter…越多……越多……越明朗……③wouldliketodo想要，愿意做某事[高分句型]①Readingisveryimportantforus.(动名词做主语)②Ourstudycanbeimprovedifweoftenreadgoodbooks.(if引导条件状语从句)③Ittakesmuchoftheirsparetime.(it固定句型)④SoIwouldliketosuggestthateveryoneshouldreadmorebooks,especiallyreadclassicbookssothatwecanspreadourChinesetraditionalculturetotheworld.(sothat引导目的状语从句)4．（2022秋·湖北宜昌·九年级统考一模）发明改变了世界，改变了我们的生活。比如，电视和自行车给我们的生活带来了许多变化和便利。请你以“Inventions”为话题，根据提示写一份报告，先介绍电视和自行车的用途，说说你想发明的东西，并说明其用途或发明的理由。电视机：信息丰富，开阔视野，休闲娱乐自行车：价格便宜，方便出行，有利环保你的发明：其用途或发明的理由。注意：1.报告应包括以上所有提示的信息，但不要逐字翻译，可适当发挥；2.发明的东西可大可小，有其特殊用途即可；3.词数不少于80。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。InventionsGoodmorning,everyone!TodayI’mgoingtotalkaboutinventions.Inventionsarecreatedeverydaybecausepeoplewouldliketomakelifeeasier.Therearefamousinventionslike_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.That’sall.Thankyouverymuch!【答案】例文：InventionsGoodmorning,everyone!TodayI’mgoingtotalkaboutinventions.Inventionsarecreatedeverydaybecausepeoplewouldliketomakelifeeasier.TherearefamousinventionslikeTVandthebicycle.TVprovidesuswithdifferentkindsofinformationsothatwecanknowmoreabouttheworld.Wewatchentertainmentprogramstorelaxourselves.Besides,somelearningprogramshelpuswithourstudy.Thebicycleisveryuseful,too.Wegotoschoolorworkbybike.Itmakesnopollution,whichisgoodforourenvironment.What’smore,bicycleridingisquitegoodforourhealth.It’scheap,too.Thoughtherehavebeenmanygreatinventions,Iwishtoinventakindofpentohelpuswritemorequicklyandneatly.Whenwehaveproblemsindoinghomework,itwilltellushowtosolvethem.That’sall.Thankyouverymuch.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：要求以“Inventions”为话题，结合提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍电视和自行车的用途；第二步，介绍自己想发明的东西，用途和发明的理由；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①providesbwithsth提供某人某物②sothat以便，为了③begoodfor对……有好处④haveproblemsindoing做某事有问题[高分句型]①TVprovidesuswithdifferentkindsofinformationsothatwecanknowmoreabouttheworld.（sothat引导的目的状语从句）②Thoughtherehavebeenmanygreatinventions,Iwishtoinventakindofpentohelpuswritemorequicklyandneatly.（Though引导的让步状语从句）5．（2022秋·湖北·九年级统考一模）父母给予我们生命，哺育我们成长，用无私的爱温暖关怀着我们，请以Dad,Iloveyou或Mom,Iloveyou为标题用英语写一篇短文，表达对父亲或母亲的感恩之情。要点提示：1）在你心中父亲或母亲是怎样的人；2）父亲或母亲常常为你和家庭做些什么；3）你将怎样回报父亲或母亲的付出。写作要求：1）词数90左右；2）根据要点提示适当发挥；3）文中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。参考词汇：dohousework,selfless（无私的）,inmyheart（在我心中）____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Mom,IloveyouEveryonehasapersonhewantstosaythankyoutoinhisdeepheart.Iowemygreatgratitudetomymother.Mymotherisaprimaryschoolteacherwhograduatedfromanormaluniversity.Sheisadevotedmotheraswellasakindandpatientteacher.Iamattendedconsideratelybyhereveryday,especiallythisyearwhenIaminSenior3.Sheoftencooksdeliciousdishesformeandhelpsmecleanupmyroom.What’smore,sheoftenaccompaniesmedeepintothenighteverytimeIamdoingmyhomework.Inaddition,wheneverIgetupsetorloseheart,shewillcomfortmeandencourageme.Iappreciatehermotto“Heavenwillalwaysleaveadooropen.Aslongasyouworkhard,youwilldefinitelysucceed.”NowIsparenoefforttostudyandfocusallmyattentiononmylessonsinordertobeadmittedtoafamousuniversityinthefuture,soIcanrewardmymother.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：本文以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，写作时根据题干中的提示信息向妈妈表达感恩之情，可适当增加细节，突出写作要点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，表示要向妈妈表达感恩之情；第二步，介绍在你心中自己的妈妈是怎样的人；第三步，详细介绍妈妈常常为你做什么；第四步，介绍你将怎样回报妈妈的付出。[亮点词汇]①inaddition而且②sparenoefforttodosth.不遗余力做某事[高分句型]①Mymotherisaprimaryschoolteacherwhograduatedfromanormaluniversity.(who引导的定语从句)②Aslongasyouworkhard,youwilldefinitelysucceed.(aslongas引导的条件状语从句)6．（2022秋·湖北武汉·九年级统考一模）假如你是李欣，你们学校即将开展课后社团活动。请你根据以下提示，为双语校刊的“学生心里话”专栏写一篇英语短文，说明你的报名意向。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。内容要点；1.喜欢手工，想加人DIY社团；2.擅长剪纸，利于放松；3.热爱传统文化，传播中国剪纸艺术；4.希望结交兴趣相同的朋友；5.一至两点个人信息或想法。注意：1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；2.词数：60-80；3内容连贯，不要逐条翻译；4.开头和结尾已给出，不计人总词汇。参考词汇：handworkn.手工

paper-cuttingartn.剪纸艺术

spreadv.传播Iamsohappytolearnthenewsthatwewillhaveclubactivitiesafterclass._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Iamsohappytolearnthenewsthatwewillhaveclubactivitiesafterclass.IdoexpecttojointheDIYclubbecauseIlikedoinghandwork.IamgoodatpapercuttingandIthinkithelpsmetorelaxafterschool.Besidesthat,IalsolovetraditionalChineseculture.Inthefuture,IhopetospreadtheChinesepaper-cuttingart.What’smore,maybeIcanlearntodosomeotherhandwork.IamreallylookingforwardtomeetingmorefriendswhosharethesameinterestsasmeinDIYClub.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，切记不要遗漏写作要点；特别注意，写作时要添加一些个人信息或看法。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山写出你想要加入DIY社团；第二步，根据所给要点，说明你想加入DIY社团的原因。[亮点词汇]①begoodat擅长②helpsbtodosth帮助某人做某事③besides除此之外④what’smore而且⑤lookforwardtodoing期待做某事[高分句型]①IdoexpecttojointheDIYclubbecauseIlikedoinghandwork.（because引导的原因状语从句）②IamreallylookingforwardtomeetingmorefriendswhosharethesameinterestsasmeinDIYClub.（who引导的限制性定语从句）7．（2022秋·湖北武汉·九年级校联考一模）研学旅行是通过集体旅行来开展学习和体验相结合的校外教育活动，深受学生的喜爱。请你给校报英语专栏写一篇短文，介绍学校上周组织到产茶名地“杭州”开展的研学活动。内容要点如下：1.手工采茶，学习泡茶知识，体验当地生活；2.参观附近历史古迹，了解城市的历史文化；3.观看有教育意义的影片，感受城市的变化与发展；4.补充一两点个人看法或感受。注意：1.文中不得透露真实的人名校名；2.80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.内容连贯得体，不要逐条翻译。参考词汇：maketea泡茶；historicalplace历史古迹；educational有教育意义的Thestudytripisakindofschooleducationwhichisheldoutsideandpopularwithstudents.OurschoolalsoorganizedastudytriptoHangzhoulastweek.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Thestudytripisakindofschooleducationwhichisheldoutsideandpopularwithstudents.OurschoolalsoorganizedastudytriptoHangzhoulastweek.Firstly,wewenttopickteainpersonandmadeteabyhandtoexperiencelife.Secondly,afterwevisitedmuseumsaswellashistoricalplaces,weunderstoodChinesehistoryandculturemoredeeply.Finally,wesawsomeeducationalmoviesandfeltthegreatchangesofourcity.Inmyopinion,thestudytripisveryhelpfulforusandwewillbeabletohavemorechancestotakepartinthesekindsofactivities.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏内容要点中的信息，介绍学校组织的到产茶名地“杭州”开展的研学活动。[写作步骤]第一步，引出这次活动；第二步，介绍活动中做了什么，体验并学习到了什么；第三步，介绍自己的看法及感受。[亮点词汇]①inperson亲自②byhand用手③inone’sopinion在某人看来④takepartin参加[高分句型]①Secondly,afterwevisitedmuseumsaswellashistoricalplaces,weunderstoodChinesehistoryandculturemoredeeply.（after引导的时间状语从句）②Inmyopinion,thestudytripisveryhelpfulforusandwewillbeabletohavemorechancestotakepartinthesekindsofactivities.（and连接并列句）8．（2022秋·湖北武汉·九年级统考一模）假设你是王明，你最好的朋友李书豪要转入你班。请你将他介绍给同学们认识。内容要点如下：1.过去安静，现在喜欢和人交流；2.过去常担心考试，害怕让父母失望，现在考试总得高分；3.课下常和同学练习说英语，擅长用英语讲故事；4.对很多高科技产品感兴趣：5.爱喝茶，因为有利健康；6.补充一点李书豪的其他爱好。注：1.文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；2.词数60-80。参考词汇：practicev.练习；letsbdown让某人失望；high-technology高科技_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文NowletmeintroducemybestfriendsLiShuhaotoyou.Heusedtobequietbutnowhelikestocommunicatewithothers.Inthepast,heworriedaboutexamsbecausehewasafraidoflettinghisparentsdown.However,healwaysgetshighmarksintheexamsnow.Afterclass,heoftenpracticesspeakingEnglishwithhisclassmates,sohedoeswellintellingstoriesinEnglish.LiShuhaohasmanyhobbies.Heisinterestedinmanyhigh-technologyproducts.Healsolikesdrinkingteabecauseitisgoodforhealth.Besides,helovesChinesecultureandChinesepeople.Ihopeyoucanmakefriendswithhim.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，兼顾“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生根据提示介绍好朋友李书豪，适当进行发挥并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，点明写作目的；第二步，具体介绍李书豪过去和现在的不同以及他的爱好等；第三步，希望别人也能和他交朋友。[亮点词汇]①usedtobe过去曾经是②communicatewithsb和某人交流③beinterestedin对……感兴趣[高分句型]①Inthepast,heworriedaboutexamsbecausehewasafraidoflettinghisparentsdown.（because引导原因状语从句）②Ihopeyoucanmakefriendswithhim.（宾语从句）9．（2022秋·湖北武汉·九年级武汉武珞路实验初级中学校考一模）未来充满无限可能，科技正在改变一切。假如你是李华，你认为未来还会出现什么更智能的高科技产品呢？你梦想中的最新发明是什么呢？请结合以下提示以“MyDreamInvention”为题写一篇英语文章介绍你梦寐以求的发明——Flyingbicycle。1.飞行自行车由金和橡胶制成，和普通自行车的材料类似；2.可以用于上下班，也可帮助锻炼身体；3.飞行自行车环保节能，安全实惠，但是不足的是空中飞行时间短，速度慢；4.各种创新发明改变了我们的生活，我们也要为建设更美好的未来努力学习；5.补充一两点你的看法。注意：文中不得透露个人真实姓名和学校；词数60~80；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：mentaln.金advantagen.优点saveenergy节能MyDreamInventionInthefuture,therewillbemanygreatinventionsthatcanchangeourlife.Theflyingbicyclewillbemydreaminvention._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Chinaistakingtheleadinsomeways.I’mreallyproudofmycountry.【答案】例文

MyDreamInvention

Inthefuture,therewillbemanygreatinventionsthatcanchangeourlife.Theflyingbicyclewillbemydreaminvention.

Flyingbicyclesaremadeofgoldandrubber,andaresimilartoordinarybicycles.Itcanbeusedforcommutingandcanalsohelpexercise.Flyingbicyclesareenvironmentallyfriendly,energy-saving,safeandaffordable,butwhatisinsufficientisthattheflighttimeintheairisshortandthespeedisslow.Allkindsofinnovationsandinventionshavechangedourlives,andweshouldalsoworkhardtobuildabetterfuture.I’msuretheflyingbicyclewillgointoeveryhomeinthenearfuture.

Chinaistakingtheleadinsomeways.I’mreallyproudofmycountry.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给中文提示，介绍你梦寐以求的发明——飞行自行车。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍飞行自行车的材料以及用途；第二步，介绍飞行自行车的优点和缺点以及这些发明对我们生活的改变；第三步，最后表达自己的看法。[亮点词汇]①bemadeof由……制成②allkindsof各种各样的③workhard努力工作[高分句型]①Butwhatisinsufficientisthattheflighttimeintheairisshortandthespeedisslow.（that引导的表语从句）②Weshouldalsoworkhardtobuildabetterfuture.（动词不定式作目的状语）三、电子邮件10．（2022秋·湖北恩施·九年级统考一模）自从乡村振兴以来，我的家乡发生了巨大的变化。某英文报刊近期正在举办英语征文竞赛，其主题是赞美家乡。假设你是李明，请你根据下面的要点提示，写一篇以MyBeautifulHometown为题的英语短文投稿。提示要点：1.从道路、房屋、教育、医疗和环境中，任选三个主题：2.从你选择的三个主题中，介绍家乡的过去和现在；3.谈你的感想。参考词汇：roads；buildings；education；medicalcare；environment.写作要求：1.短文中不得出现真实人名、校名及其他相关的个人信息；2.必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；3.80词左右，文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数。MyBeautifulHometownDeareditor,Itismygreathonortotellyousomethingaboutmybeautifulhometown.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiMing【答案】[例文]MyBeautifulHometownDeareditor,Itismygreathonortotellyousomethingaboutmybeautifulhometown.Intheolddays,peopleusedtoliveinsmallandbrokenhouses.Butnowmostpeopleliveinapartmentsintallbuildings.Mygrandparentstoldmethattheyhadtotakedesksandchairsfromtheirhomestoschoolandtheclassroomwindowswerebrokenwithnoglass,butnowthemostbeautifulplacesareschools,andtheclassroomsarewideandbright.Theredidn’tusetobeanyhospitalsinthecountryside,andpeoplehadtogoalongwaytoseeadoctor.Nowdoctorscometoeveryfamilytogivephysicalexaminations.Thereisnodoubtthatourhometownwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.Iamproudofmymotherland.Yours,LiMing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为电子邮件；②时态：描述过去的情况用一般过去时，描述现在的情况用一般现在时；③提示：从所给的五个主题中选出三个描述即可，可以适当增加情节使行文连贯，且注意时态的运用。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，开头已给出；第二步，从“道路、房屋、教育、医疗和环境”中挑选三个主题分别阐述过去与现在的区别；第三步，发表感想，家乡会越来越漂亮，对祖国感到自豪。[亮点词汇]①usedto过去常常做某事②moreandmorebeautiful越来越漂亮③beproudof对……感到自豪[高分句型]①Mygrandparentstoldmethattheyhadtotakedesksandchairsfromtheirhomestoschool…（that引导宾语从句）②Nowdoctorscometoeveryfamilytogivephysicalexaminations.（不定式作目的状语）③Thereisnodoubtthatourhometownwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.（that引导同位语从句）11．（2022秋·湖北荆门·九年级统考一模）假如你是黄婷，你的英国笔友Jenny给你发来一封邮件。在邮件中Jenny提及自己在学习中遇到了一些困难，导致她压力很大，经常和父母发生争吵，为此她感到很苦恼。请你根据以下要点提示，给Jenny回复一封邮件，帮助她走出困境。要点：1.和父母进行一次交谈；2.做一些放松身心的活动；3.……要求：1.邮件内容须包含所给要点，可适当发挥；2.提出至少一条自己的建议；3.条理清晰，语句通顺，行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范。4.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)。DearJenny,Thanksforyoure-mail.I’mreallysorrytohearaboutyourproblems.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,HuangTing【答案】例文：DearJenny,Thanksforyoure-mail.I’mreallysorrytohearaboutyourproblems.Yousaidyouhadtroublewithyourschoolwork.Ithinkyoushouldthinkaboutthereasonforitandthenfindthewaytosolveit.Ifyouareslowwhenyoustudy,youcanpracticefinishingthequestionsasmanyasyoucaninanhour.Ifyouhavequestionsyoucan’tunderstand,youmustaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelp.Readingmoreandtakingnotesareallgoodwaystogetgoodgrades.Yousaidyouwerestressed.Relaxyourselfbylisteningtomusicordoingsports.Youcanalsodoanythingyouliketorelax.Sitdownandhaveatalkwithyourparents.Youtellthemyouaretryingyourbesttobebetterandtheyneedn’tworryaboutyou.Ibelievetheycanunderstandyou.Ihopeyoucanbehappysoon.Yours,HuangTing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“要求”中“提出至少一条自己的建议”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，书信问候后，提出听到对方遇到了一些问题很难过；第二步，具体给出解决问题的建议；第三步，书写结语，表达自己的祝福。[亮点词汇]①hadtroublewithsth.在某方面有困难②thinkabout考虑③asksb.forhelp向某人求助④tryone’sbesttodosth.尽最大努力做某事[高分句型]①Ifyouhavequestionsyoucan’tunderstand,youmustaskyourteachersandclassmatesforhelp.（If引导的条件状语从句中包含省略that的定语从句）②Readingmoreandtakingnotesareallgoodwaystogetgoodgrades.（动名词作主语）12．（2022秋·湖北武汉·九年级统考一模）假如你是李明，你的外国网友Rachel在网上看到几幅中国剪纸，对此很感兴趣，故发来邮件询问有关中国剪纸的相关信息，请你根据以下提示给她回复邮件，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。表达要点如下：1.中国剪纸有着1,500多年的悠久历史；2.剪纸一般为红色，有各式各样的形状；3.过春节时人们会把剪纸张贴在门窗上；4.全国各地无论老少都很喜欢，北方人尤其擅长；5.补充一至两点相关个人想法。表达要求：书写整洁、整齐、清晰；语句自然流畅；不得出现真实个人信息；词数80左右。提示词汇：youngorold老少；befondof喜爱；northernpart北方DearRachel,YouwantedtoknowaboutChinesepapercutting.Here,I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutit.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes!LiMing【答案】例文：DearRachel,YouwantedtoknowaboutChinesepapercutting.Here,I’mgladtotellyousomethingaboutit.Chinesepapercuttinghasalonghistoryofover1,500years.Chinesepeople,nomatteryoungorold,arefondofit.AndpeopleinnorthernpartofChinaaregoodatmakingpapercutting.Thepaper,usuallyred,iscutintodifferentshapes,likebirds,flowersandsoon.Thentheyareputupondoors,windowsandwallstocelebratesomethinghappy,especiallyduringtheSpringFestival.Ihopeyou’llcometoseeChinesepapercuttinginpersononeday.Bestwishes!LiMing【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏给出的要点，发电子邮件介绍有关中国剪纸的相相关信息。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点明主题，介绍关于中国剪纸的信息；第二步，介绍剪纸的历史、颜色、形状、用途及受喜欢程度等。[亮点词汇]①wanttodosth.想要做某事②befondof喜欢③begoodat擅长[高分句型]Ihopeyou’llcometoseeChinesepapercuttinginpersononeday.（省略that的宾语从句）13．（2022秋·湖北武汉·九年级统考一模）假如你是李明，远在外地的Jack叔叔及其家人和你约定了元旦期间来武汉游玩。请你给Jack叔叔写封英文电子邮件，告知你的安排。内容要点如下：1.元月1日10:00汉口火车站见；2.酒店已预订好，做地铁前往；3.晚上坐长江游轮，赏美丽武汉；4.第二天游黄鹤楼，东湖骑行；5.补充一两点与旅行有关的信息和想法。注意：1.文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；2.词数：60-80，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：bookv.预订YangtzeRiver长江游轮YellowCraneTower黄鹤楼FROM:LiMing