Unit10Ivehadthisbikeforthreeyears单元主题写作讲义-2024-2025学年人教版八年级下册英语

Unit10I’vehadthisbikeforthreeyears.单元主题写作一、写作思路本单元的写作项目是“个人物品或周围环境”,属于“人与社会”主题范畴,涉及子主题“家乡和社会的变迁;和谐家庭或社区生活”等。常见的写作任务是描述物品承载的记忆、讲述周围事物的变化以及对未来的展望等。二、常用句型1）开头句1.Myfavoritethingfromchildhoodisatoybear.2.Pleaseallowmetointroducemybeautifulhometowntoyou.3.IhavealotoftoysandIlikethetoyrabbitbestofall.2）中间句1.Thetoybearhasleftmesomanysweetmemories.2.It’sspecialtomebecauseIusedtoplaywithitalmosteveryday.3）结尾句1.Wecouldnotonlymakefulluseofoldthings,butalsomakesomemoneyinthisway.2.Ibelieveyouwillfallinlovewithmycityandhaveawonderfultime.4）句子升格1.Idon’twanttopartwiththesetoys.I’mgettingolder.(升格为含though引导的让步状语从句的句子)→Idon’twanttopartwiththesetoysthoughI’mgettingolder.2.I’llkeepitforever.Itcanremindmeofmygrandma.(升格为动词不定式表目的的句子)→I’llkeepitforevertoremindmeofmygrandma.三、写作示例有人说,那些跟随自己多年的旧物件,记述了停留的过往,收藏着经年的故事,诉说着时间的沧桑。有时候,打开整理箱就像打开了记忆的盒子,美好、感动、惊喜……各种滋味涌上心头。假如你是李华,最近你们学校将要举行一次旧杂物义卖(jumblesale)活动来筹集资金帮助贫困山区的小伙伴,你会捐出什么样的物件呢?请根据提示写一篇短文。提示:1.Whatistheobject(物件)?2.Whendidyougetit?3.Howlonghaveyouhadit?4.Isitspecial?What’sthestoryaboutit?…要求:1.文章需包含所提示的内容。可适当发挥,使行文流畅,内容完整;2.80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。I’mreallyexcitedabouttheingjumblesaleinourschool.I’mgoingtotake_____________tothejumblesale.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________谋篇布局1.审题立意①题材:材料作文②人称:第一人称③时态:一般现在时、现在完成时、一般过去时2.写作提纲Onemeaningfulthing物品名称I

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books.3,必背范文基础篇I’mreallyexcitedabouttheingjumblesaleinourschool.I’mgoingtotakeabooktothejumblesale.Ihaveanoldbook,butit’sstillgood.Thatistosay,thereisnopagemissing.Besides,thebookismeaningfulandinterestingandIlikereadingit.I’vehadthebookforthreeyears.Myfriendgaveittomeonmybirthday.Myfriendgaveittomeonmybirthday.It’sspecialtomebecauseIusedtospendmysparetimeonit.What’smore,Ilearnedalotfromitanditmademefallinlovewithreadingbooks.Iregardeditasoneofmybestfriends.Inordertohelpfriendsinpoorareas,Idecidedtotakeitout.四、写作练笔“爱家乡,赢未来”,家乡,承载着我们成长的点滴回忆,是我们所有人的情牵梦挂。家乡,是一个有温度的词,倦鸟归林,鱼翔浅底,落叶归根,都是我们对家乡的渴望,也是生命在追寻着的一种归宿。你记忆里的家乡是什么样子?关于家乡,你有什么美好的经历?这些年,它发生了哪些变化?提示:1.Whatwasyourhometownlikeinthepast?2.Whatstorydidyouhaveinyourhometown?3.Howhasyourhometownchangedovertheyears?要求:1.包含提示内容,可以适当发挥;2.词数不少于80;3.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________参考答案Withthedevelopmentoftheeconomy,therehavebeenalotofchangesinmyhometown,Bengbu,overtheseyears.Inthepast,peopledroppedlittereverywhereandthewaterintheriverwasdirty.Butnow,theenvironmentisimprovedalot.Notonlyaretheroadsbeingwiderandwider,butalsotherearegreentreesandbeautifulflowersonbothsidesoftheroadbecauseofthegovernment’ssupport.However,somethingswillneverchange.Lastyear,myparentsdecidedtogobackforafamilyreunionduringtheSpringFestival.Afteratwohourdrive,we