续写积累3续写积累3激动兴奋续写实战攒钱去埃及讲义-高三上学期英语二轮复习专项

续写积累：单词、词组、句型、实战（攒钱去埃及）DAY3情感细节描写：激动、兴奋单词： excitedadj.激动的，兴奋的→excitedlyadv.激动地，兴奋地→excitementn．激动，兴奋thrilledadj.激动的，兴奋的→thrilln．激动，兴奋；dancev．雀跃词组：toone’sexcitement/thrill令某人激动的是in/withexcitement激动地/兴奋地one’seyessparkle/dance/shine/twinklewithexcitement眼里闪烁着兴奋的光芒tremblewithexcitement激动得发抖beflushedwithexcitement激动得脸红shedtearsofexcitement流下了激动的泪水takeone’sbreathaway令人惊叹句型： 1.Onthejourneytothelake，awaveofexcitement/thrillspreadthroughmybody.(无灵主语句)在去湖边的路上，一股兴奋/激动的情绪在我的身体里蔓延开来。2.Hearingtheexcitingnews，sheshedtearsofexcitement.听到这个激动人心的消息，她流下了激动的眼泪。3.Asitwasthefirsttimethatwehadapicnicintheopenair，ourfaceswereflushedwithexcitement.由于这是我们第一次在户外野餐，我们激动得脸红了。4.EverytimeIarrivedhome，mypetdogwouldgladlygreetme，waggingitstailinexcitement.每次我到家，我的宠物狗都会高兴地迎接我，兴奋地摇着尾巴。5.Breathingthefreshairandsmellingthedeliciousfood，wedancedinexcitement.呼吸着新鲜的空气，闻着美味的食物，我们兴奋地手舞足蹈。相关续写实战：攒钱去埃及——24年3月15日云南省高三统测阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。ItwasJuly2019andmymumRebeccawastakingmeona120kmwalkingholidayfromPortugaltoSpainasaspecialtreatformy10thbirthday.Oneday,whilewalkingalongthecoastalpathstaringoutattheAtlanticocean,IchattedawaytoMum.“WhenLexiturns10,areyougoingtotakeheronatriplikethis?”Iasked,referringtomysevenyearoldsister.MumsaidLexihadalreadyaskedtogotoSvalbardinthenorthofNorwaybecauseshewascrazyaboutpolarbears.AlthoughIwasstillonmyfirstspecialtrip,I'dbeenlearningaboutancientcivilizationsatschoolandknewI'dlovetoseesomerelicsintheflesh.（亲自）SoIcontinuedsaying,“Whydon'tIgotoEgyptwhileyou'reinSvalbardwithLexi?”,addingthatmydad,Olaf,couldtakemethere.“Great,butI'mnotpayingforit.”Mumreplied,chuckling.“That'sfine.I'llpay,"Isaid,“I'llsaveupmypocketmoneyandgetajob.”Sothat'sexactlywhatIdid.ThoughIwastooyoungtodoanyotherpaidwork,Ihadmyownsolution.Istartedsavingmy$10aweekpocketmoney.Also,Iwashedmyparents’carormowedthelawnforextracash.In2020,wemovedtoPerth.Oneday,Isawapamphlet(小册子)intheletterboxadvertisingajobdeliveringcatalogues.WhenItoldMumIwantedtodoit,shetriedtoputmeoff(推迟）theidea,remindingmethattheworkwastiringandtimeconsuming.Butwhenseeingthedeterminationinmyeyes,sheagreedtocallthem.Thankfully,myyoungagedidn'tbotherthemIgotthejob.OnaMonday,amountainofcataloguesweredroppedoffatourhouse,whichshockedmealot.Itoldmyselftocalmdownanddedicatedtowork.Ittookmeninehourstosortthroughthem.Atfirst,Iusedmybikeandcarriedthecataloguesinmybackpacktodeliverthemto430housesinmyarea.Afterseveraldeliveries,Ifounditwasn'tveryefficient.____________Threeandahalfyearslater,Isavedamassive6500dollars,anddadandIflewtoCairo,Egypt.____________续写思路：第一段，着重写发现工作方式低效（itwasn'tveryefficient）后的改进方法。改进方法可以是“我”自己想出来的，也可以是别人（比如家人）建议的。重点写攒够旅费之后到埃及旅行的感受。感受应该结合作者喜欢古代文明（ancientcivilizations）这一点来谈。结局部分，可以适当深化主题以及表示感谢（比如：感谢自己的付出、家人的支持。）范文参考：Afterseveraldeliveries,Ifounditwasn'tveryefficient.Itwasatthispointthatmydadofferedsomeadviceonimprovingmymethodofwork.（强调句）Hesuggestedorganizingmydeliveriesintosections,whichcouldhelpstreamlinetheprocess.（定语从句）Takinghisadvicetoheart,Ibegangroupingmydeliveries,planningmybikerouteseveryweekendwithstrategicprecisiontocoverthemosthousesintheleastamountoftime.（非谓语动词）Itwasn'tlongbeforemyefficiencyimproved.（固定句式）EverycoinIearnedbroughtmeastepclosertothePyramidsandmummiesthatfascinatedmesomuch.（拟人）Threeandahalfyearslater,Isavedamassive$6,500,andDadandIflewtoCairo,Egypt.WeexploredthePyramids,andIwasfinallyabletoseetheancientrelicsinthefleshthatIhadonlypreviouslyknownfrombooksandschoolprojects.（定语从句）Standingbeforethegrandmonuments,Ifeltaprofoundconnectiontohistoryandancientcivilization.（非谓语动词）Myjourneyhadtaughtmethevalueofperseverance.（主题升华）Moreover,Ifeltastrongsenseofgratitudetowardsmydadforhisadvicethathelpedoptimizemyeffortstowardsreachingthisgoal,andtowardsmymomforprovidingmewiththeopportunitytogrowandchallengemyself.（感恩父母）下水文研究Afterseveraldeliveries,Ifounditwasn'tveryefficient.Carryingaheavybackpackandshuttlingacrossthestreetsinmyneighborhood,Iwasstrugglingtobikehard.Exhaustedandhungry,Iwentbackhomelateeveryday.Amountainofcatalogueswasstillthere,whichprovedwhatmymomhadsaidpreviouslywastrue.Theworkwasreallytiringandtimeconsuming.Frankly,IwasnotsurewhetherIcouldmakeit,butthethoughtofsightseeingtherelicsinthefleshwassostrongthatImadeadecisiontodedicatemyselftothework.Threeandahalfyearslater,Isavedamassive6500dollars,anddadandIflewtoCairo,Egypt.ItwasindeedaspecialtripasIhadpaidforitmyself,whichgavemeagreatsenseofachievement.Thankstomymom'ssupport.Ilearnedthevalueofpersistenceandtastedthejoyofefforts.Wanderingthroughtheancientrelicsintheflesh,Iwasfascinatedbythem.DadandIhadagreattimethere,whichimpressedmemuch,butIknewthereweresomanywonderswaitingformetoexploreinthefuture.相关素材积累：古埃及文化的千年华章起源与特征AncientEgyptianCulture:AMillennialChapterofOriginsandCharacteristics在人类文明的浩瀚长河中，古埃及文化宛如一颗璀璨夺目的巨星，闪耀着神秘而迷人的光辉。它的起源与发展，以及独特的文化特征，构成了一部波澜壮阔的历史画卷。Inthevastriverofhumancivilization,ancientEgyptiancultureislikeadazzlingstar,shiningwithmysteriousandfascinatingbrilliance.Itsoriginanddevelopment,aswellasitsuniqueculturalcharacteristics,constituteamagnificenthistoricalpicture.古埃及文化的起源与尼罗河息息相关。尼罗河，这条非洲大陆东北部的母亲河，是古埃及文明诞生的摇篮。每年定期泛滥的尼罗河，为沿岸带来了肥沃的黑色淤泥。TheoriginsofancientEgyptianculturearecloselylinkedtotheNileRiver.TheNile,themotherriverinthenortheasternpartoftheAfricancontinent,wasthecradleofancientEgyptiancivilization.TheNile,whichfloodsregularlyeveryyear,bringsfertileblacksilttoitsbanks.这种天然的肥料滋养了大片的土地，使得古埃及人能够轻松地发展农业。充足的粮食供应不仅保障了人口的繁衍，还促使社会分工逐渐细化。从简单的农耕社群，逐渐发展出了复杂的社会结构。ThisnaturalfertilizernourishedlargetractsoflandandmadeiteasyfortheancientEgyptianstodevelopagriculture.Anadequatefoodsupplynotonlyensuresthereproductionofthepopulation,butalsopromotesthegradualrefinementofthesocialdivisionoflabor.Fromsimplefarmingmunities,plexsocialstructureshavegraduallydeveloped.而且，尼罗河为古埃及提供了便利的交通条件，促进了不同地区之间人们的交流与贸易。各个聚落沿着尼罗河分布，形成了独特的文化带。Moreover,theNileRiverprovidedconvenienttransportationconditionsforancientEgypt,andpromotedtheexchangeandtradebetweenpeopleindifferentregions.ThesettlementsaredistributedalongtheNile,formingauniqueculturalbelt.古埃及位于亚非欧三大洲的连接处，这种优越的地理位置让它成为了文化交流的重要枢纽。在早期发展过程中，古埃及与周边地区相互影响。从西亚引入的先进农业技术和工具，使得农业生产效率大幅提高。AncientEgyptislocatedatthejunctionofthreecontinents,Asia,AfricaandEurope,andthisstrategiclocationmadeitanimportanthubforculturalexchange.Duringitsearlydevelopment,AncientEgyptinteractedwiththesurroundingareas.TheintroductionofadvancedagriculturaltechnologiesandtoolsfromWesternAsiahasledtoasignificantincreaseinagriculturalproductionefficiency.同时，来自其他地区的思想、艺术风格等元素也融入到古埃及文化之中，为其发展注入了新的活力。在这样的环境下，古埃及的城市如雨后春笋般兴起，成为了文化汇聚和发展的中心。这些城市里，有着精美的建筑、繁荣的商业和活跃的思想交流。Atthesametime,elementssuchasideasandartisticstylesfromotherregionswerealsointegratedintotheancientEgyptianculture,injectingnewvitalityintoitsdevelopment.Inthisenvironment,citiesinancientEgyptsprunguplikemushroomsandbecamecentersofculturalconvergenceanddevelopment.Thesecitiesarehometobeautifularchitecture,thrivingmerce,andalivelyexchangeofideas.古埃及文化在发展过程中呈现出了一系列鲜明的特征。在建筑艺术方面，金字塔无疑是最为耀眼的代表。这些巨大的建筑以其精湛的工艺和宏伟的规模震撼着世人。AncientEgyptianculturehastakenonaseriesofdistinctivefeaturesinthecourseofitsdevelopment.Intermsofarchitecturalart,thepyramidisundoubtedlythemostdazzlingrepresentative.Thesemonumentalbuildingshaveamazedtheworldwiththeirexquisitecraftsmanshipandmagnificentscale.例如，胡夫金字塔，它由数百万块巨大的石块组成，石块之间的契合度极高，几乎严丝合缝。建造金字塔不仅需要高超的工程技术，更需要强大的组织能力和人力调配。Forexample,thePyramidofKhufu,whichismadeupofmillionsofhugestoneblocks,andthestonesfittogethersowellthattheyarealmostseamless.Theconstructionofthepyramidrequiresnotonlysuperbengineeringskills,butalsostrongorganizationalskillsandmanpowerdeployment.而狮身人面像则以其神秘的姿态屹立在金字塔旁，融合了法老的威严与神灵的庇佑之意，那巨大的身躯和独特的造型仿佛在向世人诉说着古埃及的传奇。TheSphinx,ontheotherhand,standsbesidethepyramidwithitsmysteriousposture,biningthemajestyofthepharaohwiththeprotectionofthegods,anditshugebodyanduniqueshapeseemtotellthelegendofancientEgypttotheworld.古埃及的文字系统——象形文字，是其文化的重要标志。象形文字以图形为基础，每一个符号都有着特定的含义。有的符号代表具体的事物，如各种动物、工具等；有的则代表抽象的概念。这种文字被广泛应用于宗教文献、历史记录、文学作品等各个领域。通过解读象形文字，我们得以深入了解古埃及人的生活、信仰和思想。ThehieroglyphicwritingsystemofancientEgyptwasanimportantsymbolofitsculture.Hieroglyphsarebasedongraphics,andeachsymbolhasaspecificmeaning.Somesymbolsrepresentspecificthings,suchasvariousanimals,tools,etc.;Othersrepresentabstractconcepts.Thisscriptiswidelyusedinvariousfieldssuchasreligiousdocuments,historicalrecords,andliteraryworks.Bydecipheringthehieroglyphs,wegaininsightintothelives,beliefs,andthoughtsoftheancientEgyptians.宗教信仰在古埃及文化中占据着核心地位。古埃及人是多神论者，他们相信万物有灵，神灵主宰着世间的一切。太阳神拉、冥王奥西里斯、爱神哈索尔等，每一个神灵都有其独特的形象和职能。他们修建宏伟的神庙来供奉神灵，举行盛大的祭祀仪式。ReligiousbeliefswerecentraltoancientEgyptianculture.TheancientEgyptianswerepolytheists,theybelievedthateverythingwasanimisticandthatthegodsruledeverythingintheworld.Ra,thesungod,Osiris,Hathor,thegodoflove,etc.,eachdeityhasitsownuniqueimageandfunction.Theybuiltmagnificenttemplestoworshipthegodsandheldgrandrituals.宗教信仰贯穿了古埃及人生活的方方面面，从出生到死亡，从日常劳作到重大庆典。而且，古埃及人对来世有着强烈的信仰，他们认为死亡并非生命的终结，而是另一段旅程的开始。因此，他们精心制作木乃伊，为死者准备丰富的陪葬品，希望死者在来世能够过上美好的生活。ReligiousbeliefspermeatedallaspectsofancientEgyptianlife,frombirthtodeath,fromdailyworktomajorcelebrations.Moreover,theancientEgyptianshadastrongbeliefintheafterlife,believingthatdeathwasnottheendoflife,butthebeginningofanotherjourney.Therefore,theyelaboratemummiesandpreparerichfunerarygoodsforthedeceased,hopingthatthedeceasedwillbeabletoliveagoodlifeintheafterlife.古埃及的社会制度呈现出鲜明的等级特征。法老作为神在人间的代表，拥有绝对的权力。法老被视为国家的最高统治者，掌控着政治、军事、宗教等一切大权。贵族阶层协助法老进行统治，他们拥有大量的土地和财富，享受着优越的生活。ThesocialsystemofancientEgyptwasdistinctlyhierarchical.Pharaoh,asGod'srepresentativeonearth,hadabsolutepower.Thepharaohwasregardedasthesupremerulerofthecountry,controllingallpolitical,military,andreligiouspowers.Thearistocracyassistedthepharaohinhisrule,andtheyenjoyedaprivilegedlifewithvastamountsoflandandwealth.祭司阶层则在宗教事务中扮演着关键角色，他们负责神庙的管理和祭祀活动。而广大的平民百姓主要从事农业、手工业等生产活动，为整个社会提供物质基础。在社会的最底层是奴隶，他们没有人身自由，承担着最为繁重的体力劳动。Thepriestlycasteplayedakeyroleinreligiousaffairs,andtheywereresponsibleforthemanagementofthetempleandthesacrificialactivities.Thevastnumberofordinarypeoplearemainlyengagedinagriculture,handicraftsandotherproductionactivities,providingthematerialbasisforthewholesociety.Atthebottomofsocietywereslaves,whohadnopersonalfreedomandwereresponsiblefortheheaviestmanuallabor.古埃及文化以其独特的起源和鲜明的特征，在人类历史上留下了浓墨重彩的一笔。它的影响不仅局限于当时的地域和时代，而且对后来的许多文化都产生了深远的启示和借鉴意义，成为了人类文明宝库中永恒的瑰宝。AncientEgyptianculture,withitsuniqueoriginsanddistinctivecharacteristics,hasleftastrongmarkonhumanhistory.Itsinfluenceisnotonlylimitedtotheregionanderaatthattime,butalsohashadfarreachingenlightenmentandreferencesignificanceformanylatercultures,andhasbeeaneternaltreasureinthetreasurehouseofhumancivilization.我们在欣赏和研究古埃及文化的过程中，仿佛穿越时空，与那个古老而伟大的文明进行了一场跨越千年的对话。IntheprocessofappreciatingandstudyingancientEgyptianculture,itisasifwehavetraveledthroughtimeandspacetohaveadialoguewiththatancientandgreatcivilizationthatspansthousandsofyears.相关主题习题衍生：完形填空适应文化冲击，享受埃及旅行Foralmosteverytraveler,cultureshockisunavoidable.Butcultureshockisn'talwaysa1thing.Itcanbeanindicationthatyou'regrowing.Thenew2stretchyourmindabouttheworld—differentlanguages,culturesandcustomsarejustafewwaysatravelcultureshockcan3．Ifyou'reableto4thecultureshock,thenyouwillbeopento5theseforeignexperiences.WhenItraveledtoEgypt,Iknewneithertheirlanguagenorwhattoexpect.AllI6wasit'sconservative.WhenIlanded,IreallyfeltasthoughI'dbeen7toanotherworld.Thebiggestshockformewasthelackof8ontheroad,horsesonthesidetransportinggoods,threepeople9onaonepersonmotorcycle,fourlanesbutsixcarscrowdingin—anything10！Onthefirstnight,somethingfrighteninghappened.Averyloud11voicewentoffatmidnight.Ifelt12forthefirstfewsecondsuntilIrealizeditwastheadhan.Ithengotusedtoitandadmiredthelocalsforthewaythey13theirtimetoensuretheycouldpletetheadhan.Asawoman,another14ofminewasensuringIfollowedtheEgyptiandressstylesanddressed15．Nomatterhowconservativemydresswasthough,Icouldn'thelpbutstandout,especiallywithmybrightredhair!1．AmonB．simpleC．pleasantD．bad2．A.indicatorsB．breakthroughsC．experiencesD．policies3．A.changeB．existC．continueD．spread4．A.adapttoB．markoutC．takeinD．focuson5．A.sharingB．rememberingC．enjoyingD．recording6．A.imaginedB．knewC．neededD．wanted7．A.invitedB．relatedC．attachedD．transported8．A.signsB．vehiclesC．rulesD．lights9．A.relaxingB．arguingC．ridingD．acting10．A.wentB．disappearedC．stoppedD．dragged11．A.foreignB．familiarC．gentleD．nervous12．A.disappointedB．terrifiedC．boredD．embarrassed13．A.ignoredB．limitedC．shortenedD．arranged14．A.fearB．pityC．advantageD．secret15．A.casuallyB．unnaturallyC．respectfullyD．Fashionably原文参考：Foralmosteverytraveler,cultureshockisunavoidable.Butcultureshockisn'talwaysabadthing.Itcanbeanindicationthatyou'regrowing.Thenewexperiencesstretchyourmindabouttheworld—differentlanguages,cultures,andcustomsarejustafewwaysatravelcultureshockcanexist.Ifyou'reabletoadapttothecultureshock,thenyouwillbeopentoenjoyingtheseforeignexperiences.WhenItraveledtoEgypt,Iknewneithertheirlanguagenorwhattoexpect.AllIknewwasit'sconservative.WhenIlanded,IreallyfeltasthoughI'dbeentransportedtoanotherworld.Thebiggestshockformewasthelackofvehiclesontheroad,horsesonthesidetransportinggoods,threepeopleridingonaonepersonmotorcycle,fourlanesbutsixcarscrowdingin—anythingwent!Onthefirstnight,somethingfrighteninghappened.Averyloudforeignvoicewentoffatmidnight.IfeltterrifiedforthefirstfewsecondsuntilIrealizeditwastheadhan.Ithengotusedtoitandadmiredthelocalsforthewaytheyarrangedtheirtimetoensuretheycouldpletetheadhan.Asawoman,anotherfearofminewasensuringIfollowedtheEgyptiandressstylesanddressedrespectfully.Nomatterhowconservativemydresswasthough,Icouldn'thelpbutstandout,especiallywithmybrightredhair!重要词汇知识点：cultureshock文化冲击avoid避免unavoidable不可避免的Indicateindication表明；标示；象征stretch伸展stretch/broadenyourmindexistexistence存在；生存adaptto....适应Conserve保护，保存；节约conservative保守的；landv.降落，着陆thelackofvehicles缺乏车辆foreignvoicewentoff外国人的声音响起admiredthelocals欣赏当地人arrangedtheirtime安排他们的时间anotherfearofmine我的另一种恐惧followedtheEgyptiandressstyles遵循了埃及人的服装风格dressedrespectfully穿着得体Nomatterhowconservative不管怎么保守standout突出衍生：阅读理解1.What