读后续写课件高中英语人教版选择性

高中英语选择性必修第三册复习课程读后续写

Inthislesson,youwill...masterthereadingstrategiesforcontinuationwriting,beingabletoidentifythemaincharactersandanalyzetheirpersonalities,summarizetheplot,andpredictthedevelopmentofthestorybasedonthegivensentences.seekoutthewritingtechniquesintheoriginaltextandapplythemtoyourownwriting,enhancingtheeffectivenessofyourwriting.LearningObjectivesActivity1Warming-upandLead-inHaveyoueverfished?Whattoolsareneededforfishing?Whatqualityisneededforfishing?afishingrodfishinglinehookbaitachairabucketpatienceActivity2Gettingtoknowthecharactersandplot

Ouruncle,wholivedwithus,wasaquietandfriendlyman.Hewasfondofhuntingandfishing,anditwasoneofthepleasuresofouryounglifetojoinhiminhishikingtotheGreatHill,theBrandy-browWoods,thePond,andbestofall,theCountryBrook(小溪).Ofcoursethemostexcitingpartofthehikingwasanafternoonwalkthroughthewoodsandalongthesideofthebrook.Iremembermyfirstfishingtour,asifitwerebutyesterday,andespeciallythewisecautionofmyuncleinthatparticularinstancewhichtakestheformofaproverbofuniversalapplication:“Neverbragofyourfishbeforeyoucatchhim.”AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerel(梭鱼)mostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.Nothingcameofit.“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore.”myunclesaid.I

myuncle.wentonmy

withfirstfishingtour

Ouruncle,wholivedwithus,wasaquietandfriendlyman.Hewasfondofhuntingandfishing,anditwasoneofthepleasuresofouryounglifetojoinhiminhishikingtotheGreatHill,theBrandy-browWoods,thePond,andbestofall,theCountryBrook(小溪).Ofcoursethemostexcitingpartofthehikingwasanafternoonwalkthroughthewoodsandalongthesideofthebrook.

Iremembermyfirstfishingtour,asifitwerebutyesterday,andespeciallythewisecautionofmyuncleinthatparticularinstancewhichtakestheformofaproverbofuniversalapplication:“Neverbragofyourfishbeforeyoucatchhim.”AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerel(梭鱼)mostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.Nothingcameofit.“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore.”myunclesaid.ReadingTip1:Workoutthemaincharactersandthemainideainmind.Activity2GettingtoknowthecharactersandplotDevelopment(Para.5):Climax(Para.5):

Beginning(para.3-4):

Introduction(Para.1-2):

charactersofmyuncle:

①Ouruncle,wholivedwithus,wasaquietandfriendlyman.Hewasfondofhuntingandfishing,anditwasoneofthepleasuresofouryounglifetojoinhiminhishikingtotheGreatHill,theBrandy-browWoods,thePond,andbestofall,theCountryBrook(小溪).Ofcoursethemostexcitingpartofthehikingwasanafternoonwalkthroughthewoodsandalongthesideofthebrook.②Iremembermyfirstfishingtour,asifitwerebutyesterday,andespeciallythewisecautionofmyuncleinthatparticularinstancewhichtakestheformofaproverbofuniversalapplication:“Neverbragofyourfishbeforeyoucatchhim.”③AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.④Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerel(梭鱼)mostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.Nothingcameofit.⑤“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore.”myunclesaid.quiet/friendly/wisesetoffthrewoutthelinewaitedbaitsankmadeastrongpull;broughtupsomeweedscast...butdrewitbackemptygaveupgotencouragedReadingTip2:Combtheplotbasedonthefeeling-actionchain.Activity3WeavingthepossibleplotPara.1:Suddenlysomethingtuggedatmyline.

Para.2:Overcomewithmygreatandbitterdisappointment,Isatdown.

WritingTip1:Use

the“Given-New”Strategytoweavetheplot.WritingTip2:BasetheendingofPara.1onthefirstsentenceofPara2.WritingTip3:Combinetheendingwiththetheme,ifany.(transition&connection)Q1:HowdidIfeelandwhatdidIdo?Q2:WhatdidIfish?Q3：HowdidIfeelwhenIpulleditup?Q4：WhatdidIdo?Q5：DidIreallycatchafish?Q1：Q2：Q3：Q4：Q5：excited;pulledthefishingpoleIsawapickerel.excitedtoldmyuncleNo.HowdidIfeel?WhatwasIthinkingaboutnow?

Whatdidmyunclesayanddo?HowdidItakemyuncle’swordsandwhatdidIdoaccordingly?WhatlessondidIlearn?Whatwastheresult?(ending&theme)

①Ouruncle,wholivedwithus,wasaquietandfriendlyman.Hewasfondofhuntingandfishing,anditwasoneofthepleasuresofouryounglifetojoinhiminhishikingtotheGreatHill,theBrandy-browWoods,thePond,andbestofall,theCountryBrook(小溪).Ofcoursethemostexcitingpartofthehikingwasanafternoonwalkthroughthewoodsandalongthesideofthebrook.②Iremembermyfirstfishingtour,asifitwerebutyesterday,andespeciallythewisecautionofmyuncleinthatparticularinstancewhichtakestheformofaproverbofuniversalapplication:“Neverbragofyourfishbeforeyoucatchhim.”③AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.④Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerel(梭鱼)mostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.Nothingcameofit.⑤“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore.”myunclesaid.Activity4Workingoutthetheme

①Ouruncle,wholivedwithus,wasaquietandfriendlyman.Hewasfondofhuntingandfishing,anditwasoneofthepleasuresofouryounglifetojoinhiminhishikingtotheGreatHill,theBrandy-browWoods,thePond,andbestofall,theCountryBrook(小溪).Ofcoursethemostexcitingpartofthehikingwasanafternoonwalkthroughthewoodsandalongthesideofthebrook.②Iremembermyfirstfishingtour,asifitwerebutyesterday,andespeciallythewisecautionofmyuncleinthatparticularinstancewhichtakestheformofaproverbofuniversalapplication:“Neverbragofyourfishbeforeyoucatchhim.”③AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.④Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerel(梭鱼)mostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.Nothingcameofit.⑤“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore.”myunclesaid.ReadingTip3:Findouttheexpressions

showingthetheme.

Neverbrag(自夸)ofyourfishbeforeyoucatchhimwithpatienceandpersistence（坚持不懈）.Activity5Learningaboutthelanguage

①Ouruncle,wholivedwithus,wasaquietandfriendlyman.Hewasfondofhuntingandfishing,anditwasoneofthepleasuresofouryounglifetojoinhiminhishikingtotheGreatHill,theBrandy-browWoods,thePond,andbestofall,theCountryBrook(小溪).Ofcoursethemostexcitingpartofthehikingwasanafternoonwalkthroughthewoodsandalongthesideofthebrook.②Iremembermyfirstfishingtour,asifitwerebutyesterday,andespeciallythewisecautionofmyuncleinthatparticularinstancewhichtakestheformofaproverbofuniversalapplication:“Neverbragofyourfishbeforeyoucatchhim.”③AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.④Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerel(梭鱼)mostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.Nothingcameofit.⑤“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore.”myunclesaid.Expressionsrelatedtofishing:Tools:Actionsfishingpolefishinglinebaitthrewoutmylinecastoutmylinewaitedanxiouslyforabitemovethebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterthebaitsankmadeastrongpulldrewitbackbroughtupsomeweeds

①Ouruncle,wholivedwithus,wasaquietandfriendlyman.Hewasfondofhuntingandfishing,anditwasoneofthepleasuresofouryounglifetojoinhiminhishikingtotheGreatHill,theBrandy-browWoods,thePond,andbestofall,theCountryBrook(小溪).Ofcoursethemostexcitingpartofthehikingwasanafternoonwalkthroughthewoodsandalongthesideofthebrook.②Iremembermyfirstfishingtour,asifitwerebutyesterday,andespeciallythewisecautionofmyuncleinthatparticularinstancewhichtakestheformofaproverbofuniversalapplication:“Neverbragofyourfishbeforeyoucatchhim.”③AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.④Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerel(梭鱼)mostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.Nothingcameofit.⑤“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore.”myunclesaid.Para.1Suddenlysomethingtuggedatmyline.

Q1.HowdidIfeelandwhatdidIdo?Q2.WhatdidIfish?

Isawapickerel.

Iwasexcitedandpulledthefishingpoleimmediately.

IwasexcitedandImadeastrongpull

ofthefishingpoleand

broughtupapickerel.madeastrongpulldrewitbackbroughtupsomeweedsActivity6Re-writethesentence

③AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.

④Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerelmostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.Nothingcameofit.

⑤“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore,”myunclesaid.ReadParagraph3-5anddiscuss:Howmanyspecialstructuresareusedinthetext?

③AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.

④Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerelmostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.Nothingcameofit.

⑤“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore,”myunclesaid.ReadParagraph3-5anddiscuss:Howmanyspecialstructuresareusedinthetext?

③AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.

④Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerelmostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.Nothingcameofit.

⑤“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore,”myunclesaid.

③AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.

④Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerelmostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.Nothingcameofit.⑤“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore,”myunclesaid.

③AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.

④Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerelmostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.Nothingcameofit.⑤“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore,”myunclesaid.

③AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.

④Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerelmostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.Nothingcameofit.⑤“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore,”myunclesaid.

③AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.

④Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerelmostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.

Nothingcameofit.⑤“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore,”myunclesaid.

③AfterIreceivedthatfirstfishingpolefrommyuncle,Isetoffhappilywithhimtothewoods.Itwasastill,sweetdayofearlysummer;thelongafternoonshadowsofthetreeslaycoolacrossourpath;theleavesseemedgreener,theflowersbrighter,thebirdsmerrier,thaneverbefore.

④Myuncle,whoknewbylongexperiencethepointsthatpickerelmostfrequentlyvisited,consideratelyplacedmeatthemostfavorableone.IthrewoutmylineasIhadsooftenseenothers,andwaitedanxiouslyforabite,movingthebaitonthesurfaceofthewaterliketheleapofafrog.

Nothingcameofit.⑤“Tryagain,”saidmyuncle.Suddenlythebaitsankoutofsight.“Nowforit,”thoughtI.“Hereisafishatlast.”Imadeastrongpull,andbroughtupsomeweeds.AgainandagainIcastoutmylinewithachingarms,anddrewitbackempty.Feelingmyarmshurtingandmyspiritssinking,Iturnedtolookedatmyuncleinawaydeclaringmyintentiontogiveup.“Justtryoncemore,”myunclesaid.非谓语/独立主格从句

/with复合结构

环境描写特殊句式动作链描写人物短对话描写Para.1Suddenlysomethingtuggedatmyline.

Q3.HowdidIfeelwhenIpulleditup?Q4.WhatdidIdo?

Itoldittomyuncle.

Iwasexcitedasitwasapickerel.Excitementbubblingupinsideme,Ican’twaittosharemyvictorywithmyuncle.非谓语/独立主格

从句

短对话+特殊句式Ialmostwentwildwithjoy

when

Iwasgreetedbythepickerel,whichisshimmeringinthebrilliantsunshine,so

Ican’twaittosharemyvictorywithmyuncle.Witharushofemotionsandastrongsenseofdelight,Ican’twaittosharemyvictorywithmyuncle.“Uncle!Look!I’vecaughtafish!”Hardly

hadIbeenenvelopedintheexcitementwhen

Isharedmyvictorywithmyuncle.非谓语/独立主格从句

/with复合结构

环境描写特殊句式动作链描写人物短对话描写With+复合宾语Para.1Suddenlysomethingtuggedatmyline.

Whatwasmyuncle’sresponse?Q5.DidIreallycatchafishasIexpected?

Hewasn’tasexcitedasme,Tomysurprise,herespondedwithanunexpectedcalmness

thatcontrastedsharplywithmyexcitement.“Notyet,”saidmyuncleinasurprisinglycalmvoice.Uponhiswords,therecameasplashinthewater.Iturnedmygazetowardsthesourceofdisturbanceandcaughtsightofthestartledfishshotintothemiddleofthestream.MyheartsankasIrealizedthatmyhookwasleftempty.非谓语/独立主格从句

/with复合结构

环境描写特殊句式动作链描写人物短对话描写Para.1Suddenlysomethingtuggedatmyline.

Tomysurprise,herespondedwithanunexpectedcalmness

thatcontrastedsharplywithmyexcitement.“Notyet,”saidmyuncleinasurprisinglycalmvoice.Uponhiswords,therecameasplashinthewater.Iturnedmygazetowardsthesourceofdisturbanceandcaughtsightofthestartledfishshotintothemiddleofthestream.MyheartsankasIrealizedthatmyhookwasleftempty.“Uncle!Look!I’vecaughtafish!”Hardly

hadIbeenenvelopedintheexcitementwhen

Isharedmyvictorywithmyuncle.Arushofexcitementsurgingthroughme,

Imadeastrongpull

ofthefishingpoleand

broughtupapickerel.Para.1Suddenlysomethingtuggedatmyline.Q1.HowdidIfeelandwhatdidIdo?

①

SoexcitedwasIthatIjerked(vt.急拉)thefishingpoleandhoisted(vt.提起…)itup.(倒装/动作链)②Thebeliefthatitmustbeafishthistimefilledmyheartwithanexhilaratingjoy.Consequently,withoutanyhesitationordelay,Igavethefishingpoleastrongpull.(名词性从句/with结构/原文词汇迁用)Q2.WhatdidIfish?

①Onmyhookwasabeautifulpickerelthatlookedlivelyandvigorous.(倒装/定语从句)

②Iwasgreetedbythesightofabeautifulpickerelwriggling(扭动)

inthewarmsunlight.

Itsshimmeringscales(闪烁的鳞屑)reflectedthevibrantcolorsofnature,captivatingmewithitsbeauty.(非谓语动词/环境描写)Q3.HowdidIfeelwhenIpulleditup?

①Notbeingabletocontainmythrill,Iturnedtowardsmyuncle,myvoicetremblingwithuncontrollableprideasIexclaimed,“Uncle!Look!I’vecaughtafish!”(非谓语/独立主格/人物短对话)Q4.WhatdidIdo?

①Tomysurprise,herespondedwithanunexpectedcalmness

thatcontrastedsharplywithmyexuberance(感情洋溢或慷慨激昂的言行).“Notyet,”saidmyuncleinasurprisinglycalmvoice.(with结