专题06 书面表达（名校模拟+地区真题）-冲刺2023年中考英语必考题型终极预测（杭州专用）

冲刺2023年中考英语必考题型终极预测（杭州专用）专题06书面表达1．（2022·浙江·杭州市保俶塔实验学校二模）假设你叫李华，是一个国际学校的九年级学生。你在浏览学校的学习论坛时发现了一个求助帖，请阅读这份求助帖并针对提出的问题，以AKindSchoolmate的名义写一份回帖提供帮助。要求：1.回帖必须包含所提问题的回复，可适当发挥；2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；3.词数80词左右。SadandWorriedPosted:

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Myproblem

I’vebeenverysadthesedays.AsaGrade9student,I’llhavethehighschoolentranceexaminations(中考)soon.Butyesterday,IfailedmymathtestagainalthoughItriedmybest.Canyouprovideatleasttwogreatwaystoimprovemymathgradesquickly?Andbecauseofmypoormathgrades,someofmybestfriendsevenlaughedatme.Thatmademereallyangry,butIdon’twanttoloseourfriendship.WhatshouldIdo?YourReplyRe:SadandWorried______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．（2022·浙江·杭州市十三中教育集团（总校）二模）假如你是李平，请阅读以下邮件并给美国好友Mike回复一封80词左右的邮件，开头和结尾要得体。To:LiPingFrom:MikeHiLiPing,Howareyou?Wehaven’tseeneachotherforalongtimebecauseofCOVID-19.Iknowyoumighthavetostayathomethissummervacationforthesamereason.Isthereanythingthatyouplantorelaxyourself?Bytheway,youmentionedoneofyourfavoriteChinesetraditionalfestivalslasttimewemet,butIjustforgetaboutit!Whatisit?Howdoyoucelebrateit?Andwhydoyoulikeit?Hopetohearfromyousoon!To:MikeFrom:LiPingHiMike,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing3．（2022·浙江·杭州市风帆中学二模）假如你是李平，请阅读以下邮件后回复，词数80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dearclassmates,Wearegoingtograduatefromourschool.Inthepastthreeyears,ourlovelyteachershavehelpedusalot,soIthinkmaybeweshoulddosomethingtoexpressourthanks.Doyouhaveanysuggestions?Whatactivitiescanwedo?Doweneedtoprepareanygifts?Wouldyouliketohelpwiththepreparations?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,HanMeiDearHanMei,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing4．（2022·浙江杭州·一模）假设你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的邮件，以下是邮件的一部分，请你阅读后回复。注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)回信需包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；(3)文中不得提及真实的人名，校名等相关信息。DearLiPing,Lastmonth,ourschoolcalledonustobehelpersinourlife.Someofmyclassmatesdochoresathomeeverydayduringthismonth.Theythinkit’sgoodtoimprovetheirlifeability.Someofmyclassmatesvolunteerinthecommunity.WhatdoChinesestudentsdofortheirfamiliesandcommunitiesashelpers?Whatdotheylearnfromdoingtheseactivities?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Love,LindaDearLinda,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing5．（2022·浙江杭州·二模）假如你是李平，收到英语口语俱乐部负责人Peter的邮件，请接受邀请并根据该邮件内容作回复。要求：1.邮件中不能出现真实姓名，学校等相关信息；2.词数80左右；3.可适当发挥。DearLiPing,We’regoingtohaveaforum(论坛)thisSaturdayevening.Thetopicis“Sportsmakemeabetterperson”.Ihearyou’rereallygoodatsportsandhopeyoucanjoinus.Bytheway,whatsportdoyouoftenplayandhowoftendoyoudoit?Howdoesthesportchangeyou?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou!PeterSmith,PresidentofEnglish-speakingClub________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing6．（2022·浙江杭州·二模）假定你是李平，最近收到来自意大利的交换生Tony的电子邮件。请你阅读后回复。注意：1.词数80左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数：2.回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺：3.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。DearLiPing,Howareyouthesedays?I’msoexcitedtogotoHangzhouasanexchangestudentsoonandwecanmeetagain!AndIwanttoknowmoreaboutthecity.CouldyoupleasetellmesomethingaboutHangzhou?WhatdoyouthinkofHangzhou?Isthereanywhereinterestingoranythingdelicious?Bytheway,whatcanIbringbackasgiftswhenI’mleaving?Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,TonyDearTony,__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiPing7．（2022·浙江杭州·一模）假定你是张华，收到加拿大笔友Harry的来信，获悉他在废物利用制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件给他回复。词数：80左右。HiZhangHua,Howiseverythinggoingwithyou?IamgladtotellyouthatI’vejustwonthefirstprizefromtheHelpSaveOurPlanetSociety!Iloverecycling.Whatdoyouthinkofrecycling?DopeopleinChinarecyclethings?Canyoushareanyexampleswithme?Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Allthebest.Yours,HarryDearHarry,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ZhangHua8．（2022·浙江杭州·一模）假定你是李平，请阅读你的笔友Lucy的邮件并回复。词数80词左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearLiPing,How’sitgoingthesedays?I’mhavingagreattimeinShanghaiforthetwo-monthexchangeprogram.It’sagreatplacetovisitandthere’sjustsomuchtoseeanddohere.LastnightIwenttoaChinesemusicconcert.Ipreferquietandtraditionalmusic,sotheconcertsuitedmejustfine.Doyoulikemusic?Whatkindofmusicdoyoulikebest?Tomorroweveningmyhostfamilyistakingmetotheirlittledaughter’sbirthdayparty,butIamnotsurewhatIamexpectedtodobeforetheparty.ShouldIprepareagiftoranything?Ifso,whatcanIchooseasthegift?WhatelsecouldIdotomakethepartymoreinteresting?Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Allthebest,Lucy____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（2022·浙江杭州·一模）假如你是李华，请阅读以下来自交换生Sam的邮件，并根据问题给出回复。词数80词左右。From:SamHiLiHua,Howareyou?I’mveryexcitedbecauseit’snearlytimeformyvisittoyourcountry.Mybagisready,soI’llseeyousoon!What’stheweatherlikeinyourcountryatthemoment?It’sverycoldandwethere.I’dliketobringapresentforyourfamily,tothankthemforbeingmyhostfamily.Doyouhaveanyideas?Itcan’tbetoobigbecauseithastogoinmybag.Seeyousoon.SamTo:SamHiSam,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua10．（2022·浙江杭州·二模）假定你是王华，在英语学习交流活动中，你收到上海笔友John的来信，请你根据来信进行回复。DearWangHua,Ihavestayedathomeforabout50daysbecauseofCOVID-19（新冠）.It’ssoboringtohaveclassesonlineeveryday.AndIfinditdifficulttounderstandonlineclasses.Also,relationsbetweenmyparentsandIhavebecomedifficult.Wearguealot.Ialwaysfeelboredandnervous.WhatshouldIdo?Pleasewritetomesoon.Yours,JohnLee注意：1.词数80左右；2.不能透露个人真实信息；3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJohn,________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,WangHua参考答案：1．例文

Iknowfromtheletterthatyouareworriedaboutyourmathgrades.Nowletmetellyouwhattodo.

First,youshouldlikeit.Interestisthebestteacher.Whateveryoudo,youshouldlikeit.Secondly,ifyouhaveanyquestionsbutyoudon’taskyourteachersorfriends,Ithinkyouarewrong.Youshouldalwaysaskquestions.Ifyoudothis,youwillmakegreatprogress.Inaddition,youandyourclassmatesformastudygrouptodiscusstogether.Inthisway,Ithinkyouwillimprovemathscoresquickly.Asforwhatyousaidthatthestudentslaughedatyou,itmaybeyourownfeelingofgreatpsychologicalpressure.Youshouldcommunicatewithyourclassmatesandaskthemmorequestions.Throwawayyoursadnessandworry,andbehappy.Ithinktheywillhelpyou.

Ihopethesesuggestionsarehelpfultoyou.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给求助帖的内容，针对其问题，以AKindSchoolmate的名义写一份回帖提供帮助。[写作步骤]第一步，说明自己会帮助对方解决问题；第二步，具体阐述如何帮助对方解决问题。第三步，最后表达自己的希望。[亮点词汇]①beworriedabout担心②Inaddition此外③Asfor至于[高分句型]①Ifyoudothis,youwillmakegreatprogress.（if引导的条件状语从句）②Ithinkyouwillimprovemathscoresquickly.（省略that的宾语从句）2．例文HiMike,

Iamgoingwellthesedays.IhavetostayathomebecauseofCOVID-19.IusuallywatchnewsonTVtolearnmoreaboutthesituation.Moreover,Iformahealthyeatinghabitanddoexerciseregularly.SometimesIplaycomputergamestorelaxmyself.

ImentionedthatIlikeSpringFestivallasttime.Nowletmeintroduceittoyou.ItusuallyfallsonJanuaryorFebruary.Peoplealwayshaveabigdinnertogether.TheywatchTVprogramsuntilmidnight.Dumplingsaretheirfavouritefood.Atmidnight,peoplecanletofffireworks.IlikeitverymuchbecauseIcangetredpocketsfromrelatives.What’syourfavoritefestival?

Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiPing【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一封邮件作文。向Mike介绍自己疫情期间的生活以及最喜欢的节日。2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主。分为三段式：第一段介绍自己疫情期间的生活以及放松方式；第二段介绍自己喜欢的节日以及原因；最后一段期待对方的回信。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。3．例文DearHanMei,Thanksalotforplanningthis!Theteachersdidhelpmealotwithmystudy,soIthinkit’snecessarytodosomethingtoshowourgratitude.Inmyopinion,agraduationpartymightbeagreatidea.Wecandecorateourclassroomandinviteallourteachersthere.Asforthegifts,Idon’tthinkitneedstobetooexpensiveaslongasweputtrueheartinit.Whataboutpresentingthemflowerswiththank-youcards?Besides,wecanshootavideototelltheteachershowgratefulweare.AndIwouldlovetohelpwiththevideoshootingandediting.Pleasetellmeifyouneedfurtherhelp.Yours,LiPing【详解】1.题干解读：本文主要是围绕邮件中的问题展开，给出相关的建议，可适当增加细节。2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段重点描述为了感谢老师应该举办什么样的活动以及应买什么样的礼物，并表明自己愿意帮忙；第三段进行总结。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。4．例文DearLinda,Iamverygladtohearfromyourletter.NowletmetellyouaboutwhatChinesestudentsdohouseworkfortheirfamiliesandwhytheydovolunteerwork.MostChinesestudentsoftenhelptheirparentswithhousework.Asstudents,theythinkdoinghouseworkcannotonlycultivatetheirindependence,butalsoletthemlearnhowtotakecareofthemselves.Bydoinghousework,theycanunderstandthemeaningoffairness.Theylearnthatlivingtogethermeanssharingchores.Italsoshowstheirlovefortheirfamilies.What’smore,someofmyclassmatesvolunteerinthecommunity.Theynotonlylearnhowtohelpthem,butalsogetthesatisfactionofhelpingothers.Ihopetohearfromyousoon.Yours,LiPing【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据邮件的内容，给Linda写一封回信；注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称来行文，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为四段，第一段引出话题；第二段介绍学生们做家务的情况；第三段介绍做志愿活动的情况；第四段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。5．例文DearPeterSmith,IamgladtoreceiveyourinvitationandIwouldliketojoinyou.IlikedifferentkindsofsportsandIamgoodatplayingbasketball.Ioftenplaybasketballwithmyfriendsafterschooloratweekends.Iusuallyplayitthreeorfourtimesaweek.Playingbasketballchangedmealot.IusedtobeshyandshortandIoftengottheflu.MyparentsadvisedmetoplaybasketballandIdecidedtohaveatry.Halfayearlater,Iwashealthierandtallerthanbefore.IammoreoutgoingnowandImakealotoffriends.Iamlookingforwardtotheforum.Yours,LiPing【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据PeterSmith的邮件问题进行回复。注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来行文，时态综合使用一般现在时和一般过去时。作文可分为三段，第一段就对方的邀请表示感谢并说明自己是否会去参加；第二段介绍自己做什么运动以及运动的频率，讲述运动如何改变了自己；第三段收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。6．例文DearTony,Thanksforyourmail.Howareyou?I’mgladtohearthatyouwillcometomyhometown.I’dliketointroducemyhometowntoyou.MyhometownisinHangzhou,ZhejiangProvince.ItislocatedinthesoutheastofChina.You’dbettertakeacamerasothatyoucantakesomephotos.Hangzhouisverybeautiful.WestLakeisthemostfamousplace.Itattractsmanyvisitorseveryyear.Whenyoucome,I’llshowyouaroundit.AndIwilltakeyoutotastethespecialsinHangzhou,suchasWestLakeFish,DongpoPorkandsoon.Hangzhouisfamousforsilk.Youcanbuyitforyourparentswhenyougobackhome.Ithinkyouwillhaveagoodtimehere.I’mlookingforwardtoyourcoming.Yours,LiPing【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以李平的名义写一封邮件，针对Tony提出的几个问题需要一一回答，不要遗漏要点，可适当拓展细节。2.写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称叙述；时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主；文章主要介绍杭州的位置、风景、美食以及特产。在写作时要保持主谓一致性，做到无标点符号和语法错误。7．例文DearHarry,Congratulations!HowgladIamtoshareyourgoodnews!Ithinkrecyclingishelpfulinoursociety.Andinthefutureitwillplayanmoreimportantroleinourdailylife.PeopleinChinaalsorecyclethings.Wealwaysusesomeuselessplasticbottlestoplantflowers.It’sreallybeautifulandfunny.Somepeoplewillselltheuselesstextbooksforrecycling.Bydoingthis,theycannotonlygetsomemoney,butplayaroleinprotectingenvironment.Hopingyou’llmakegreaterprogress.YoursZhangHua【详解】1.题干解读：本文属于应用文写作，写作时要按照邮件格式书写。在写作的开头首先要祝贺他获奖；第二段介绍对废物利用的看法，以及在中国人们是怎么进行废物利用的；第三段希望他取得更大的进步。2.写作指导：写作时态采用一般现在时和一般将来时；人称上以第一人称和第三人称为主。文章叙述要条理清晰，语言完整，无语法和书写错误。8．例文:DearLucy,It’sgoodtohearfromyou.Everythinggoeswellwithmehere.I’msogladtohearthatyouarehavingagreattimeinShanghai,andhavealreadyenjoyedawonderfulChinesemusicconcertthere.Ilikemusic,too.Ilikeclassicalmusicbestbecauseitcanmakemehappyandrelaxed.Asforthebirthda