专题09：书面表达-2023年广东省广州市11区中考英语一模及名校模拟试题分类汇编（解析版）

专题09：书面表达2023年广东省广州市11区中考英语一模及名校模拟试题分类汇编（解析版）一、书信作文1．（2023·广东广州·海珠区统考一模）在“共建美丽多彩校园”活动中，校长鼓励全校学生为此活动提建议。假设你是九年级学生王华，请根据以下提示，写一封信给校长，跟他谈谈学校存在的问题和你的建议。注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；2.词数80词左右（信件的基本格式和开头已给出，不计入词数）；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearHeadmaster,IamastudentofGrade9.Iamexcitedtoparticipateinthe“BuildingaBeautifulandColourfulCampusTogether”activity.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Respectfully,WangHua【答案】例文DearHeadmaster,IamastudentofGrade9.Iamexcitedtoparticipateinthe“BuildingaBeautifulandColourfulCampusTogether”activity.First,Iwouldliketotalkabouttheproblemsofourcampus.Theschoolroadsarenotveryclean,andtherearenotenoughtreeswhichcanprovideshadeinsummerandmaketheschoolmorebeautiful.Inaddition,therearefewafter-schoolactivitiesforustotakepartin,whichcanhelpusoutofthestressofhardstudy.What’smore,somefacilitiesandequipmentatschoolareold,suchascomputersandprojectors.Herearemysuggestions.Firstofall,Ihopethatwecandosomethingtomaketheenvironmentmorepleasantandbeautiful,suchasplantingmoretrees,repairingschoolbuildingsandimprovingschoolroads.Secondly,organizemoreafter-schoolactivities,suchaslecturesandcompetitionssothatwecanhavemoreopportunitiestoshowourtalentsandabilities.Itcanalsohelpusrelaxourselves.Lastbutnotleast,updatetheteachingandclassroomequipmentinordertoimprovetheeffectofteachingandlearning.Iwillfeelveryhappyifmyadviceistaken.Ihopeourcampuswillbemorebeautifulandcolourful.Respectfully,WangHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封书信。②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。③提示：文章为第一人称，介绍学校的问题，然后提出改进意见。思维导图描述完整，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，提出学校存在的问题；第二步，提出改进意见；第三步，总结并表达希望。[亮点词汇]①takepartin参加②Inaddition除此之外③What’smore另外④Lastbutnotleast最后但是也是最重要的⑤Firstofall首先⑥inorderto为了[高分句型]①therearenotenoughtreeswhichcanprovideshadeinsummerandmaketheschoolmorebeautiful.（限制性定语从句）②Inaddition,therearefewafter-schoolactivitiesforustotakepartin,whichcanhelpusoutofthestressofhardstudy.（非限制性定语从句）③Iwillfeelveryhappyifmyadviceistaken.（条件状语从句）④Firstofall,Ihopethatwecandosomethingtomaketheenvironmentmorepleasantandbeautiful,suchasplantingmoretrees,repairingschoolbuildingsandimprovingschoolroads.（宾语从句）⑤Secondly,organizemoreafter-schoolactivities,suchaslecturesandcompetitionssothatwecanhavemoreopportunitiestoshowourtalentsandabilities.（目的状语从句）2．（2023·广东广州·荔湾区统考一模）假如你是李华，你想向外国笔友Tom介绍一位对你影响深远的老师。请根据以下提示，用英语写一封信。注意：1.请围绕所给的提示合理发挥；2.词数80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；3.不得透露学校、真实姓名及任何个人信息，否则不予评分。DearTom,Throughmylifeinjuniorhighschool,oneofmyteachersplaysaveryimportantrole.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whatdoyouthinkofmyteacher?Howaboutyours?LiHua【答案】例文：DearTom,Throughmylifeinjuniorhighschool,oneofmyteachersplaysaveryimportantrole.SheismyEnglishteacherMissZhao.MissZhaoisawarm­heartedladywithacharmingsmileonherface.ItisherwhohelpedmemakeprogressinmyEnglish.IrememberthatmyEnglishwasverypoorwhenIenteredmiddleschool.IwassoworriedandupsetbecauseofmypoorEnglish.Luckily,sheknewmysituationanddecidedtohelpmelearnEnglish.Withherhelp,myEnglishimprovedalot.ThisisMissZhao,anexcellentteacherwhomadeadeepimpressiononme.Imadeupmymindtobeapersonlikehertocontributetooursociety.Whatdoyouthinkofmyteacher?Howaboutyours?LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应从“难忘经历”和“成长启示”两方面来介绍对自己影响深远的老师。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍这位老师是谁；第二步，介绍成长经历；第三步，给出成长启示；第四步，收尾（已给出）。[亮点词汇]①helpsb.dosth.帮助某人做某事②becauseof因为③makeupone'smindtodosth.下定决心做某事[高分句型]①ItisherwhohelpedmemakeprogressinmyEnglish.（强调句）②IrememberthatmyEnglishwasverypoorwhenIenteredmiddleschool.（that引导宾语从句；when引导时间状语从句）二、电子邮件3．（2023·广东广州·南沙区统考一模）假设你是初中生李华，为了让更多人了解中国传统文化，学校将举办中国传统文化展，请你给外教Mr.Smith写一封邮件，邀请他参加。邮件内容应包括：1、时间、地点；2、活动目的；3、活动内容：学习各地语言、欣赏文学艺术、了解传统节日、体验传统技术、品尝传统美食（请选择其中2项活动）；4、希望Mr.Smith参加。要求：1、80词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；2、涵盖要求的内容并适当拓展。DearMr.Smith,IamLiHua.IamwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheTraditionalChineseCultureFairinourschool.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua【答案】例文：DearMr.Smith,IamLiHua.IamwritingtoinviteyoutotakepartintheTraditionalChineseCultureFairinourschool.ItwillbeheldattheArtCenterthisFridayafternoon,from2p.m.to5p.m.SincethiseventaimstohelpmorepeoplelearnaboutthetraditionalChineseculture,thestaff,allthestudentsandtheirparentsaswellasanyoneinterestedinitarewelcome.Atthefair,theChinesepaintingwillbeexhibited.Whatismore,youwillbeabletoexperiencehowtomaketheChinesepapercuttinganddoughtoyduringthefair,whichIamsureyouwillbeimpressedsomuch.IthinkthesetraditionalskillscannotonlyhelpyouunderstandourtraditionalChineseculturemuchbetterbutdefinitelyfeeltheuniquebeautyofit.Ifyou’reinterested,pleasecomeandenjoyit.AndI’dbegladtoofferanyhelp.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestwishes,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：以“一般将来时态”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生在写作时要注意把活动的目的、时间、地点及外教能有哪方面的收获表达清楚。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，介绍自己并发出邀请；第二步，阐述具体的活动安排，例如活动的时间、目的、地点及活动安排；第三步，书写结语，期待回复并接受邀请。[亮点词汇]①aimtodo目的在于某做某事②aswellas和；也③offeranyhelp提供任何帮助[高分句型]①SincethiseventaimstohelpmorepeoplelearnaboutthetraditionalChineseculture,thestaff,allthestudentsandtheirparentsaswellasanyoneinterestedinitarewelcome.（since引导的原因状语从句）②IthinkthesetraditionalskillscannotonlyhelpyouunderstandourtraditionalChineseculturemuchbetterbutdefinitelyfeeltheuniquebeautyofit.（“notonly…butalso…”句型）4．（2023·广东广州·从化区统考一模）假设你是李华，你在国外的笔友Tom对中国的传统节日非常感兴趣，他来信询问有关情况。请你根据下面的提示和要求，给他回一封电子邮件，介绍一个你最喜欢的中国传统节日。内容包括：1.节日的名称和时间；2.节日的传统习俗（请至少补充2点）；3.节日的感受和意义。注意：1.80词左右（开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数）；2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯；3.信中不得出现真实人名和校名。DearTom,Iamgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.LetmeintroducemyfavouriteChinesetraditionalfestivaltoyou.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whatdoyouthinkofthisfestival?I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文:DearTom,Iamgladtoreceiveyoure-mail.LetmeintroducemyfavoriteChinesetraditionalfestivaltoyou.ItistheDragonBoatFestival,whichhasalonghistory.ItisinmemoryofagreatancientpoetQuYuan.ItisscelebratedonthefifthdayofthefifthmonthaccordingtotheChinesecalendar.Onthatday,peoplealwayseattastyricedumplingsandwatchexcitingdragonboatracestocelebrateit.Insomeplaces,peoplealsodrinkrealgarwinetoprotectthemselvesfromillness.Inmyopinion,theDragonBoatFestivalisahistoricandmeaningfultraditionalfestival.Whatdoyouthinkofthisfestival?I’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.

Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：这是一篇电子邮件，为说明文；②时态：一般现在时；③提示：介绍最喜欢的传统节日，包括：时间、习俗、感受、意义等。注意主题必须是中国传统节日。[写作步骤]第一步，描写端午节的时间和意义；第二步，描写端午节的传统习俗；第三步，描写端午节的感受。[亮点词汇]①inmemoryof为了纪念②accordingtotheChinesecalendar按照农历③protectthemselvesfromillness保护自己不生病④ahistoricandmeaningfultraditionalfestival一个具有历史意义的传统节日[高分句型]ItistheDragonBoatFestival,whichhasalonghistory.（定语从句）5．（2023·广东广州·天河区统考一模）假如你是李华，学校将接待一批国际交换生，请你为学校拟一封邮件，向交换生们推荐两项有关中国文化的交流活动，给出理由，并提供一些建议。注意：1.词数80—120个左右(文章开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数，请根据要点提示适当发挥)2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Dearexchangestudents,Welcometoourschool!Tomakeyourvisitmorepleasantandmeaningful,_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Wearelookingforwardtoyourarrival!Yours,LiHua【答案】例文Dearexchangestudents,Welcometoourschool!Tomakeyourvisitmorepleasantandmeaningful,herearesomeamazingactivitiesforyou.TolearnaboutChinesetraditionalculture,takingourancientpoetryclassisthetopchoice.Whilereadingthepoems,youmayfeelthatyouaremeetingpeoplefromthepastandexperiencingtheirlife.Itisevenmorewonderfulifyouwearsometraditionalclotheslikehanfuandtrytobehavelikethem,whichhelpsyouunderstandtheirlifebetter.TomeetmodernGuangzhou,IstronglyrecommendyoutotakeatripbyridingasharedbicyclealongthePearlRiver.Asoneof“thefourgreatinventions”inmodernChina,sharedbikesareconvenientenoughtotakeyouanywhere,anytime.Touringwithabike,youcanenjoynotonlythenaturalbeautyalongtheriver,butalsosomefamouslandmarksaroundZhujiangNewTown.Bytheway,remembertotakeyourmobilephone,asusingsharedbicyclesneedsscanningwithamobilephone.Wearelookingforwardtoyourarrival!Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文。②时态：以一般现在时为主。③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当增加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]①第一步，补全开头，交代出写作目的，介绍几个活动给对方；②第二步，分别从校内和校外两个方面来介绍活动；③第三步，总结全文，表示对于对方到来的期待。[亮点词汇]①learnabout学习关于……②trytodo尝试做某事③recommendsbtodosth推荐某人做某事④notonly…,butalso…不但……，而且……⑤bytheway顺便说一下[高分句型]①Whilereadingthepoems,youmayfeelthatyouaremeetingpeoplefromthepastandexperiencingtheirlife.(while引导的时间状语从句)②Itisevenmorewonderfulifyouwearsometraditionalclotheslikehanfuandtrytobehavelikethem,whichhelpsyouunderstandtheirlifebetter.(if引导条件状语从句，which引导定语从句)三、讲稿6．（2023·广东广州·越秀区统考一模）假如你是李华，你们学校开展了“阳光互助小组（TheSunshineMutualAidTeam）”活动。下周，你们将迎来英国的教育交换学生参观学习。你将作为代表发言，向他们介绍这项活动，并邀请他们参加。你的发言稿需要包括以下要点：注意：1.字数：100词左右（短文的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数）。2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Dearall,Welcometoourschool!IamheretodaytointroducetheSunshineMutualAidTeam._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyouallforlistening!【答案】例文1：Dearall,Welcometoourschool!IamheretodaytointroducetheSunshineMutualAidTeam.TheSunshineMutualAidTeamiswarmlywelcomedinourschool,solotsofstudentsareinterestedinit.Inthisteam,wecanchooseourgroupmembersfreelyandtakepartintheactivitieswithfourstudentsinagroup.Atthebeginningofeachmonth,weusuallymakeplansforstudying.Besides,wediscussingroupsonceaweeksothatwecanhelpourgroupmemberstosolvetheirdifficultproblems.Asagroupmember,Ifinditmeaningfultojoinintheseactivities.Infact,Ibenefitalotfromthem.Atfirst,it’shelpfulformetoimprovemyefficiencyofstudying.What’smore,Igetmorechancestomakefriendswithdifferentstudents.Comeandjoinus!Iamsurethatyouwillbenefitalot.Thankyouallforlistening!例文2：Dearall,Welcometoourschool!IamheretodaytointroducetheSunshineMutualAidTeam.ItissohelpfulforusthatIcan’twaittotellyouallthedetails.Fourstudentschoosetobeinagroupaccordingtoourownwill.Atthebeginningofeachmonth,wegatheraroundtomakeasuitablestudyplanforourgroup.Eachweek,agroupdiscussionisorganizedtohelpallthememberssolvetheproblemswemeetduringthestudy.Inmyopinion,thisactivityisagreatsuccess.Itnotonlyhelpsusstudyinamoreefficientway,butalsogivesusachancetocommunicatebetterwithourfriends.Itisalsoawonderfulwaytolearnfromeachother.Wereallyhopethatyoucanjoinusandshareyourlearningmethodwithus.Istronglybelievethatwillbenefitallofus.Thankyouallforlistening!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇发言稿；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏讲述自己的收获，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图，简单进行介绍，“阳光互助小组很受欢迎，可以自由选择组员”。第二步，具体阐述写作内容，主要描述“活动内容”中的“月初制定学习计划”、“每周一次小组讨论解决问题”，并对“自己的收获”进行补充，可以“提高学习效率”、“有更多的机会和不同的学生交朋友”。第三步，邀请参加阳光互助小组，强调“可以从中受益匪浅”。[亮点词汇]①iswarmlywelcomed受到热烈欢迎②areinterestedinit对它感兴趣③Atthebeginningofeachmonth在每个月初④finditmeaningfultojoinintheseactivities发现参加这些活动有意义[高分句型]①TheSunshineMutualAidTeamiswarmlywelcomedinourschool,solotsofstudentsareinterestedinit.（so连接两个并列句，第一个并列句中应用被动语态）②Besides,wediscussingroupsonceaweeksothatwecanhelpourgroupmemberstosolvetheirdifficultproblems.（sothat引导结果状语从句）7．（2023·广东广州·黄埔区统考一模）为迎接疫情后来校交流的外国学生，你校现准备举办一场“最美文化交流使者”选拔活动。假如你是李华，你准备参加。请写一份英语竞选演讲稿。内容包括：备注：参考词汇：1.election

竞选2.theBestAmbassadorofCulturalExchange最美文化交流使者要求：1.80词左右；可适当发挥；2.演讲稿内容合理、完整；句子及篇章结构准确、连贯；3.不得透露真实学校、姓名等个人信息，否则不予评分。Goodmorning,dearladiesandgentleman.I’mLiHua._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________PleasesupportmeandIwillneverletyoudown.【答案】例文Goodmorning,dearladiesandgentleman.I’mLiHua.NowIamspeakingfortheelectionoftheBestAmbassadorofCulturalExchangeinourschool.First,Iamgoingtointroducemyselfbriefly.Myclassmatesandteachersalwaysseemeasacheerfulfriendorresponsiblehelper.Ifyourunintomeatschool,youwillbeimpressedbymywarmsmileandkindnesstoothers.Afterclass,IenjoywatchingEnglishmoviesandreadingbooks,soIknowalotaboutforeignculture.Iamanoutgoingstudent.AndIcanspeakfluentEnglishsoIamnotafraidofchattingwithforeigners.IfIamelected,IplantoinvitetheexchangestudentstoexperienceChineseculturebyteachingthemtomakepaper-cutting,drawingChinesepaintings,etc.Moreover,IhopetoinvitethemtomyhomesothattheywillbeabletoknowbetteraboutChinesefamilylife.PleasesupportmeandIwillneverletyoudown!【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据题干中的提示内容写一份英语竞选演讲稿，可适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，表示自己要竞聘最美文化交流使者；第二步，介绍自己的基本信息；第三步，介绍自己的优势第四步，介绍自己作为最美文化交流使者要做什么。[亮点词汇]①seesb.as...把……当作……②runinto偶然遇到③beafraidof害怕[高分句型]①Ifyourunintomeatschool,youwillbeimpressedbymywarmsmileandkindnesstoothers.(if引导的条件状语从句)②IenjoywatchingEnglishmoviesandreadingbooks,soIknowalotaboutforeignculture.(so连接的并列句)③IhopetoinvitethemtomyhomesothattheywillbeabletoknowbetteraboutChinesefamilylife.(sothat引导的目的状语从句)四、材料作文8．（2023·广东广州·番禺区统考一模）你校将举办读书分享会，学校英文报以“MyFavouriteBook”为题向学生征稿。请根据以下思维导图的内容提示用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍你最喜欢的书。MyFavouriteBookWhatbook?—nameofthebook—writerWhatisitabout?—mainidea—maincharactersWhydoyoulikeit?…（atleasttworeasons）注意：1.可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；2.词数80词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入词数）；3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。MyFavouriteBookIhavereadsomefantasticbooks._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】范文

MyFavouriteBook

Ihavereadsomefantasticbooks.OfallthebooksIhaveread,IloveADreamoftheRedMansionsmost.ItismyfavoritenotbecauseitwaswrittenbyCaoXueqin,afamousnovelistinQingDynasty.Rather,Ideeplyvaluethebookandhavereaditover10times.Firstly,forthemovinglovestorybetweenJiaBaoyuandLinDaiyu.Besides,ifgivenenoughpatienceanddevotion,thenovelwillalsorevealtheriseanddeclineofafamousroyalfamilytoitsreaders.WhatIalsoenjoyaboutthebookisitslanguageandwritingstyleofCaoXueqin,whichhadaprofoundeffectonthewritersofhistimesandlatergenerations.

Allinall,ADreamoftheRedMansionshaswonmyheartandIamconvincedthatitdeservesyourstoo.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍你最喜欢书的名字；第二步，介绍书中的基本故事；第三步，最后说明你为什么喜欢它。[亮点词汇]①besides而且②allinall总而言之③winone’sheart赢得某人的心[高分句型]①OfallthebooksIhaveread（省略that的定语从句）②ifgivenenoughpatienceanddevotion,thenovelwillalsorevealtheriseanddeclineofafamousroyalfamilytoitsreaders.（if引导的条件状语从句）9．（2023·广东广州·增城区统考一模）劳动(labor)是日常生活不可或缺的部分，每位同学都积极参与劳动锻炼。请根据下面提示，写一篇英语短文，介绍你们小组四人的劳动情况，需包括以下要点。成员LucyMikeAliceYou劳动项目做家务照顾宠物狗种蔬菜(请补充)时间每周末每天暑假(请补充)地点家里公园农场(请补充)好处锻炼身体提高责任感表达爱意(请补充)注意：1.不少于80词(短文开头已给出，不计入词数)；2.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。It’swell-knownthat“Laboristhemostglorious(光荣的)”.Everyoneinourgrouplikeslaboring.

__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文It’swell-knownthat“Laboristhemostglorious(光荣的)”.Everyoneinourgrouplikeslaboring.Atourclassmeting,wesharedourlaborexperiencewithourgroupmembers.InLucy’ssparetime,shecleansthefloorsathomeeveryweekend.Cleaningthefloorislikedoingexercise.Shethinksitcanhelpherbuildastrongerbodyandmakeherhealthier.Mikelikeshispetdogverymuch.Henotonlyfeedsthedogeverydaybutalsowalksitintheparkafterdinner.Inthisway,hebuildsuphisresponsibility.InAlice’sopinion,shewouldliketogrowvegetablesduringsummervacationinthefarm.Sheregardsitasagoodwaytoshowlovetoothers.Asforme,IcookmealsformyparentswhenIamfreebecauseIaminterestedincooking.Cookingcanbringmesatisfaction.Laborisagoodwayforteenagerstodevelopindependence.Let’stakeactiontotakepartinlabor.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍Lucy、Mike和Alice的劳动情况；第二步，介绍你自己的劳动情况；第三步，最后做总结。[亮点词汇]①notonly...butalso不但……而且②inone’sopinion在某人看来③asfor至于[高分句型]①Cleaningthefloorislikedoingexercise.（动名词作主语）②IcookmealsformyparentswhenIamfreebecauseIaminterestedincooking.（when引导的时间状状语从句和because引导的原因状语从句）10．（2023·广东广州·花都统考一模）上个月，你校举办了“我的成长”的英语主题分享。请你写一篇英语短文，汇报你们小组四人的分享内容，需包括以下要点。注意：1字数：80词左右(短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数)。2不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Hello,everyone!Wehadasharingsessionon“Myprogress”lastmonth.Hereiswhatwesharedinourgroup.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Hello,everyone!Wehadasharingsessionon“Myprogress”lastmonth.Hereiswhatwesharedinourgroup.FangFangsharedherexperienceaboutstudy.Shehasgoodlearninghabitsnowandshegetsgoodgradesnow.SunLeisharedhisexperienceaboutvoluntarywork.Hehelpsothersinneedandhegoestotheoldpeople’shouseeveryweekend.ZhaoYunsharedhisexperienceaboutenvironmentalprotection.Herecyclesoldthingsandusesthemoneytohelpchildreninpoorareas.Asforme,Isharedmyexperienceaboutexercise.ItakeexercisethreetofourtimesaweekandIamhealthierthanbefore.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态综合使用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；③提示：要求根据提示内容，以“我的成长”为主题进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出下文对小组分享内容的汇报；第二步，具体介绍四个人的成长。[亮点词汇]①getsgoodgrades取得好成绩②helpsothersinneed帮助有需要的人③usesthtodosth用……做④thanbefore比以前[高分句型]Hehelpsothersinneedandhegoestotheoldpeople’shouseeveryweekend.（and连接并列句）11．（2023·广东广州·白云区统考一模）?(至少一个活动)?(至少一个活动)......?(至少一个活动)......1.词数80词左右(信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数)I'mgladtohearthatwearegoingtodosomesocialpracticeinsummerholiday.Here'swhatIsuggest.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：DeartheStudents’Union,I’mgladtohearthatwearegoingtodosomesocialpracticeinsummerholiday.Here’swhatIsuggest.StudentsinGrade7arestillyoungandlessexperienced,theycanvisittheoldpeople’shome.Theycanhelptheolddosomecleaningandtalkwiththemsothattheywon’tfeellonely.Inthesummerholiday,manypeoplewillgotothelibrarytoreadandborrowbooks.ThestudentsofGrade8cangotheretohelpsortoutthebooksandguidereaderstofindthebookstheywant.AsforstudentsinGrade9,it’stheirlastsummerholidayinjuniorhighschool,sotheycandosomethingmoremeaningful.Theycangotoacountrysideprimaryschool,wheretheycanplaywiththestudentsandgivethemsomelessons.Whatmeaningfulactivitiestheseare!I’msurewe’llenjoythem.LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主；③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点提示——各年级所对应的活动及其理由，注意正确拼写单词，避免出现语法错误。[写作步骤]第一步，开门见山，直接表明建议信的主旨大意；第二步，详述七、八和九年级各自可参加的活动及其理由；第三步，书写结语，统一评价以上所建议的活动。[亮点词汇]①sortout分类②guidesb.todosth.引导某人做某事③asfor至于[高分句型]①Theycanhelptheolddosomecleaningandtalkwiththemsothattheywon’tfeellonely.（sothat引导目的状语从句）②Theycangotoacountrysideprimaryschool,wheretheycanplaywiththestudentsandgivethemsomelessons.（where引导非限制性定语从句）③Whatmeaningfulactivitiestheseare!（what引导的感叹句）12．（2023·广东广州·中大附中一模）.现在的学校都越来越重视劳动对个人健康成长的影响。本周，中大附中将举办主题为“巧手升华智慧，共享成就卓越”的劳动周。假如你是学生会主席John，你将在校园广播EnglishToday中号召全校同学们参加劳动周活动以及加入到日常的劳动实践中来。请根据以下所给的思维导图写一篇英语演讲稿。注意：1.短文应包括所有要点，可以适当发挥，使文章连贯。2.词数80左右。3.不得透露班级、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Dearschoolmates,doyouthinklaboreducationisanecessaryskillforeveryone?________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ChairmanoftheStudentUnionJohn【答案】例文：Dearschoolmates,doyouthinklaboreducationisanecessaryskillforeveryone?Wecanfindthattheonlythingweneedtodoathomeisstudying.Weevendon’tneedtodoanyhousework.Thisisbecauseofourlackofthissense.Weareusedtobeinglazyinourfreetime.Infact,doingsomehouseworkorotherlaborpracticeisreallygoodforus.Itcanhelpusbuildstrongerbodiesandmakeushealthier.What’smore,wewillalsobeindependentthroughlaborpractice.So,wecanbenefitalotfromit.Whynotdoit?Atlast,whatIwanttosayisweshouldofferhelptoourparentsactively.Maybetheyaretiredfromwork,buttheystillhavetolookafterus.Wecanhelpthemdothehousework.Lastbutnotleast,weshouldtakepartinsomecourseslikethis.Wearesupposedtoknowhowhardourparentswork.Besides,whenwearefree,wecanjoininsportsactivities.Let’stakepartinlaboreducationtogether!ChairmanoftheStudentUnionJohn【解析】详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：提示已给出，写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。适当添加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，承接开头，点明主题，表明大部分学生缺乏劳动意识、懒惰；第二步，表达劳动好处；第三步，提出劳动建议，比如帮家人分担家务、参加体育活动；第四步，呼吁大家一起劳动。[亮点词汇]①necessary有必要的②lackof缺乏③beusedtodoing习惯于④infact事实上⑤what’smore更重要的是⑥lookafter照顾⑦Lastbutnotleast最后但同样重要的是⑧besupposedtodo应该做某事⑨takepartin参加⑩Besides另外⑪joinin参加[高分句型]①Wecanfindthattheonlythingweneedtodoathomeisstudying.（宾语从句：由that引导宾语从句；定语从句：由that引导定语从句修饰先行词theonlything，其中that已省略）②Atlast,whatIwanttosayisweshouldofferhelptoourparentsactively.（主语从句：由what引导主语从句；表语从句：由that引导表语从句跟在is后，其中that已省略）③Maybetheyaretiredfromwork,buttheystillhavetolookafterus.（状语