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浙江省强基联盟2024-2025学年高三上学期10月联考英语试题原文分析读后续写原文审读多篇范文呈现解题思路分析读后续写可积累文本1、

原文审读：第二节（满分25分）Ahigh-pitchedscreamstoppedLauraDouglasinhertracks.Spinningaroundonthenarrowdirtpath,shethoughtthathercousinCassiewasindanger.Instead,Cassiewaskneedeepinflowersthatcoveredthemeadow（草地）likeaquilt."Cassie!Youscaredmetodeath!"Laurascolded,hervoiceechoingthroughthemeadow."Iamsorry,"Cassie,absorbedinherphotography,didn'tnoticethethickfogrollingin,consumingthenearbymountains."Notagain!"Lauracomplained,hereyesshiftingtotheapproachingclouds."Wegottago!"Cassie'sfocusremainedonhercamera,capturingtheshort-livedbeautyofthemoment.Lauratiedaredscarfaroundherhair,"Let'sgobacktothecampsite."Thegirlsquicklyrandownthewindingpath,themeadownowcoveredbyathickfogandasteady,coldrain.Theroadturnedslippery,andtheyhadtomoveslowlytoavoidslidingdown."It'sdangerous!Weneedshelternow!"Cassiescreamedafteraloudcrackofthunder,thestorm'sstrengthincreasingrapidly.Laura'skeeneyesfoundasmallcaveintherockface,partlyhiddenbyoverhangingbranches.Itwasn'tmuch,butitofferedachancetoescapetherain."Cassie,overhere!"Lauracalledout,hervoicebarelycarryingoverthewind.Cassie,wetandshaking,stumbledtowardstheplaceofLaura'svoice.Assheapproached,shecouldseetheshelter.Itwasn'tperfect,butitwasbetterthannothing."Smartthinking,Laura,"Cassiesaid,herteethchattering（打颤）withcoldasshepressedherbackpackclosetoherchest.Thebackpack,atoughandwaterproof（防水的）model,hadbeenagiftfromherfather,anexperiencedhikerwhohadinsistedonitsnumerouspocketsandsectionsforemergencysupplies.Littledidtheyknow,hisadvicewouldproveinvaluableonthisday.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。P1:"Checkyourbackpack,"Laurainstructed,hervoicebeinghopeful.P2:Asnightfell,thestormfinallybegantodiedown.2、

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衔接点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；衔接点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；衔接点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；衔接点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。可积累词汇：1.stop(someone)in(one's)tracks

意思:使某人突然停下来，通常因为惊讶、恐惧或其他强烈情感。

常见搭配:-stopsomeoneintheirtracks（使某人突然停住）

例句:-Thesightofthehugespiderstoppedherinhertracks.-Thenewsstoppedhiminhistracks.2.narrow(adj.)

意思:狭窄的，有限的。

常见搭配:-narrowescape（侥幸逃脱）-narrowpath（狭窄的小路）narrowview（狭隘的视角）

例句:-Theywalkedcarefullyalongthenarrowdirtpath.-Shehadanarrowescapefromtheaccident.可积累词汇：3.knee-deep(adj.)

意思:膝深的，浸没至膝的；也可以形容陷入某事的程度。

常见搭配:-knee-deepin(something)（在某物中膝深，形容陷入某事之中）

例句:-Thechildrenwereknee-deepinsnowastheyplayed.-Sheisknee-deepinworkandcan'ttakeabreak.4.scare(v.)

意思:使惊吓，使害怕。

常见搭配:-scaresomeonetodeath（把某人吓得要死）

-scaredstiff（吓呆了）

例句:-Theloudnoisescaredmetodeath.-Hewasscaredstiffwhenhesawthesnake.可积累词汇：5.absorb(v.)

意思:全神贯注于，吸收。

常见搭配:-absorbin(something)（专注于某事）

-absorbinformation（吸收信息）

例句:-Shewascompletelyabsorbedinherbookanddidn’thearthephonering.-Plantsabsorbwaterfromthesoil.6.rollingin(v.phrase)

意思:涌入，进来（通常形容雾气、云层、潮水等大面积地缓慢涌来）。

常见搭配:-fog/clouds/tidesrollingin（形容自然现象的进入）

例句:-Thefogstartedrollinginfromtheocean,makingithardtosee.-Darkcloudswererollingin,signalingastorm.可积累词汇：7.steady(adj.)

意思:稳定的，持续的。

常见搭配:-steadyrain（持续不断的雨）-steadyimprovement（稳步改善）-steadyhand（稳定的手，形容镇定）

例句:-Thesteadyraincontinuedthroughouttheafternoon.-Hisgradeshaveshownasteadyimprovementthissemester.8.slippery(adj.)

意思:滑的，容易打滑的。

常见搭配:-slipperyroad（滑路）-slipperyslope（指局势可能迅速恶化的过程）

例句:-Theroadbecameslipperyaftertherain.-Thecompanyisonaslipperyslopetowardsbankruptcy.可积累词汇：9.crackofthunder(n.phrase)

意思:雷声巨响，形容突然的雷声。

常见搭配:-crackoflightning/thunder（形容雷电的响声或闪电）

例句:-Aloudcrackofthundershookthehouse.-Wejumpedatthesuddencrackofthunderoverhead.10.overhanging(adj.)

意思:悬垂的，悬挂在上方的。

常见搭配:-overhangingbranches（悬垂的树枝）

-overhangingcliff（悬崖峭壁）

例句:-Wetookshelterundertheoverhangingbranches.-Thehousewasbuiltnearanoverhangingcliff.可积累词汇：11.presscloseto(v.phrase)

意思:紧贴，靠近。

常见搭配:-pressclosetosomeone（紧紧靠近某人）

例句:-Thechildpressedclosetohismotherduringthethunderstorm.-Thepuppypressedclosetoitsownerforcomfort.12.proveinvaluable(v.phrase)

意思:被证明是无价的、非常有价值的。

常见搭配:-proveinvaluabletosomeone/something（对某人或某事证明非常有价值）

例句:-Hisadviceprovedinvaluableduringthecrisis.-Thehikinggearprovedinvaluableinthestorm.以下是文章中的高考语法现象解释，并附上适用于读后续写的例句。1.现在分词作状语

解释:现在分词可以表示伴随动作、时间、原因、结果等。它与主句的主语一致。

例句:-Spinningaroundonthenarrowdirtpath,shethoughtthathercousinwasindanger.（时间状语，表示同时发生的动作）

-Absorbedinherphotography,shedidn’tnoticethethickfogrollingin.（原因状语，表示因为摄影入迷导致没注意）-Holdingherbreath,shewaitedforthethunderstormtopass.-Runningasfastastheycould,thegirlsescapedtheincomingstorm.2.独立主格结构

解释:独立主格结构是由一个名词或代词加分词、形容词、副词、介词短语等构成，用来补充说明一个情况，主语与主句不同。

例句:-Hervoiceechoingthroughthemeadow,Laurascoldedhercousin.-Themeadownowcoveredbythickfog,thegirlshadtomoveslowly.-Thesunsetting,theydecidedtosetupcampforthenight.-Herheartracing,sheopenedthedoortothedarkroom.3.动词不定式作目的状语

解释:动词不定式常用于表示目的，放在句中或句末。

例句:-Thegirlsrandownthepathtoavoidslidingdown.-Theyfoundacavetoescapetherain.-Sheturnedoffthelightstosaveenergy.-Heranfastertocatchthelastbus.4.过去分词作状语

解释:过去分词表示被动或完成的动作，用作状语时，通常表示原因、条件或时间。

例句:-Consumedbythefog,themountainswerebarelyvisible.（原因状语，表示山脉被雾气吞没）

-Hiddenbyoverhangingbranches,thecaveofferedsomeshelter.（条件状语，表示树枝遮挡）-Frightenedbythesuddennoise,shequicklyhidbehindthedoor.-Exhaustedfromthelonghike,theyfinallyreachedthetopofthemountain.5.强调句型

解释:强调句型用于强调句子中的某个成分，结构为“Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who...”

例句:-ItwasCassiewhoscaredLaurawithherscream.-Itwasasmallcavethatofferedthemachancetoescapetherain.-Itwashisdeterminationthathelpedhimsucceed.-Itwasatthatmomentthatsherealizedthetruth.

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词汇整理1.fumbled-词性:动词

-词义:笨拙地处理或做某事，通常指手忙脚乱地寻找或抓住。

-近义词:grope,mishandle,stumble-联想词:drop,grasp,awkward-例句:-Hefumbledinhispocketforthekeys.-Shefumbledwiththelockbeforefinallyopeningthedoor.词汇整理2.compartment-词性:名词

-词义:隔间，分隔的空间或部分。

-近义词:section,division,chamber-联想词:cabin,box,container-例句:-Sheputherphoneintheglovecompartmentofthecar.-Eachcompartmentinthesuitcaseisdesignedforspecificitems.词汇整理3.rummaged-词性:动词

-词义:翻找，通常指迅速而杂乱地寻找某物。

-近义词:search,rifle,digthrough-联想词:explore,scatter,uncover-例句:-Herummagedthroughhisbag,lookingforhiswallet.-Sherummagedinthedrawerforapen.词汇整理4.ragedon-词性:短语动词

-词义:（风暴、战斗等）持续激烈地进行。

-近义词:continueviolently,storm,persist-联想词:fight,war,storm-例句:-Thestormragedonforhours,causingwidespreaddamage.-Thebattleragedon,withnoendinsight.词汇整理1.fumbled-词性:动词

-词义:笨拙地处理或做某事，通常指手忙脚乱地寻找或抓住。

-近义词:grope,mishandle,stumble-联想词:drop,grasp,awkward-例句:-Hefumbledinhispocketforthekeys.-Shefumbledwiththelockbeforefinallyopeningthedoor.词汇整理5.beam-词性:名词/动词

-词义:-（名词）光束，光线；（动词）微笑，发光。

-近义词:shine,glow,radiate-联想词:ray,smile,light-例句:-Abeamofsunlightenteredtheroom.-Shebeamedwithprideafterreceivingtheaward.词汇整理6.diedown-词性:短语动词

-词义:（强度、力量等）逐渐减弱，消退。

-近义词:subside,diminish,easeoff-联想词:calm,settle,fade-例句:-Thewindbegantodiedownaftersunset.-Theexcitementaroundtheeventeventuallydieddown.词汇整理7.drizzle-词性:名词/动词

-词义:毛毛雨，小雨；下毛毛雨。

-近义词:sprinkle,lightrain,mist-联想词:rain,shower,moisture-例句:-Theforecastsaidtherewouldbealightdrizzlethisafternoon.-Itstartedtodrizzlejustasweleftthehouse.词汇整理8.reprieve-词性:名词/动词

-词义:缓刑，暂缓；（动词）暂缓某事的实施。

-近义词:delay,postponement,suspension-联想词:pardon,relief,stay-例句:-Theprisonersweregrantedareprievefromexecution.-Therainprovidedatemporaryreprievefromtheheat.词汇整理9.shivering-词性:动词（现在分词）

-词义:颤抖，因寒冷或害怕而发抖。

-近义词:trembling,shaking,quivering-联想词:cold,fear,shudder-例句:-Hewasshiveringfromthecoldwind.-Shestoodoutside,shiveringasthesnowfell. 词汇整理10.driftedinto-词性:短语动词

-词义:漂进，缓缓进入某状态或地方。

-近义词:floatinto,wanderinto,moveslowlyinto-联想词:glide,flow,slip-例句:-Theboatdriftedintotheharbor.-Sheslowlydriftedintosleep.词汇整理1.seepedinto-词性:短语动词

-词义:渗入，逐渐进入（液体、气体或感情等）

-近义词:permeate,infiltrate,leakinto-联想词:soak,absorb,penetrate-例句:-Waterslowlyseepedintothebasementaftertheheavyrain.-Fearseepedintohermindasthestormintensified.词汇整理2.crackling-词性:名词/形容词/动词（现在分词）

-词义:发出噼啪声，通常指火焰燃烧时的声音

-近义词:popping,snapping,sizzling-联想词:fire,burn,spark-例句:-Thefirewascracklinginthefireplace,givingtheroomawarmglow.-Sheheardthefaintcracklingofleavesunderfoot.词汇整理4.faintly-词性:副词

-词义:微弱地，模糊地

-近义词:slightly,weakly,dimly-联想词:barely,softly,gently-例句:-Shecouldfaintlyhearthesoundofmusiccomingfromthedistance.-Thestarsshonefaintlyinthenightsky.词汇整理5.exhaustion-词性:名词

-词义:精疲力竭，极度疲劳

-近义词:fatigue,tiredness,weariness-联想词:stress,drain