人教版八年级 英语 下册《Unit 6 Pets Writing》课件

Unit6PetsModule3AnimalsWriting教学目标1.掌握议论文的体裁特点。2.掌握议论文的写作方法：

提出观点、论证观点、总结观点。3.能够从框架、内容、连贯性方面评价和修改文章。1.Leading-inWhichoneisthebestpet?Why？cutefaithfulcolourfulquietlovelyindependent……KeepingapetdogOpinionReasonsSupportingdetails1.cute2.learnresponsibility3.faithful&bringhappinessnicetoholdwonderfultogrowupfeed,trainandplaywiththemlearntocareforothersConclusionagoodidea1.Leading-inArgumentation(议论文)Thestructureof

anargumentationOpinionConclusion.........1.Leading-inReason1Reason2…SupportingdetailsSupportingdetailsDaniel:Dogsmakethebestpets.2.Pre-writingOpinionIsitconvincing(有说服力的)enough?DanielTheoutlineof

anargumentationConclusion2.Pre-writingSupportingdetailsReasons…Daniel’swritingFindoutthesupportingdetails.Dogsmakethebestpets

Ithinkthatdogsmakethebestpets.

Firstly,dogsarelovely.Ienjoyplayingwiththem.It’spleasanttoholdtheminourarms.

Secondly,dogsarefaithful.TherewasonceafaithfuldoginJapan.Oneday,hisownerdiedsuddenlyofaheartattack.Thedogdidnotknowitandkeptonwaitingforhisownereverydayformanyyears,untilhedied.

Thirdly,walkingadogcanhelptheownerstayhealthy.Ifyoukeepapetdog,youneedtowalkiteveryday.So,youaredoingexercise.

Forthesereasons,Ibelievethatdogsmakethebestpets.HowdidDanieldevelopsupportingdetails?personalexperienceastoryoranexample3.anexplanation(解释说明)…enjoy/love/befondof…It’s

adj.

(forsb.)todoTherewasoncea…If…,…2.Pre-writingDaniel’swritingDogsmakethebestpets

Ithinkthatdogsmakethebestpets.

Firstly,dogsarelovely.Ienjoyplayingwiththem.It’spleasanttoholdtheminourarms.

Secondly,dogsarefaithful.TherewasonceafaithfuldoginJapan.Oneday,hisownerdiedsuddenlyofaheartattack.Thedogdidnotknowitandkeptonwaitingforhisownereverydayformanyyears,untilhedied.

Thirdly,walkingadogcanhelptheownerstayhealthy.Ifyoukeepapetdog,youneedtowalkiteveryday.So,youaredoingexercise.

Forthesereasons,Ibelievethatdogsmakethebestpets.2.Pre-writingHowdidDanielmakehiswritingcoherent(连贯性)?表达观点：Ithinkthat…Ibelievethat…inmyopinion,…分点论述：firstly,

…secondly,…/what’smore,…/besides,…thirdly,…/finally,…逻辑连词：因果：so,…/forthesereasons,

并列：…and…

转折：…but…/…though……Betty:Goldfishmakethebestpets.Betty’sopinion3.While-writing1.colourfulandbeautiful2.quietReasons1.Goldfisharecolourfulandbeautiful.2.Goldfisharequiet.Practice:choosingsupportingdetailsa.Theydon’tbite,barkorscratch.b.Ownersshouldchangewaterandfeedgoldfishcarefullyeveryday.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Withloveandpatience,nothingisimpossible.”c.Atankofgoldfishcanaddcolourtoyourroom.d.Yourneighbourswon’tcomplain.3.While-writinge.It’senjoyabletowatchtheircolourandmovement.f.Accordingtoastudy,goldfisharethefirstpetsforalmost80%ofchildren.ReasonsGoldfishmakethebestpets.Goldfisharethebestpets.OpinionConclusiong.Accordingtoastudy,goldfisharethefirstpetsforalmost80%ofchildren.3.While-writingWelearnhowtobepatientbykeepinggoldfish.It’spopularforchildrentokeepgoldfishaspets.Otherwaystodevelopsupportingdetails:asaying(commonsense常识)fact(number,..)Whatreasonsdotheysupport?b.Ownersshouldchangewaterandfeedgoldfishcarefullyeveryday.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Withloveandpatience,nothingisimpossible.”MorereasonsMoreSupportingdetails3.While-writingSummary:Howcanyoudevelopsupportingdetails?Youcan1.describepersonalexperience:…enjoy/love/befondof…It’sadj.(forsb.)todosthtellastoryorgiveanexample:Therewas

once

…giveanexplanation:If…,…4.useasaying(commonsense):Astheoldsayinggoes,…5.useafact:Accordingto…

个人的经历举例子解释说明名人名言事实3.While-writingPractice:developingsupportingdetailsBetty:Goldfishmakethebestpets.ReasonsKeepinggoldfishisnotexpensive.Accordingtoastudy,itonlycostsaround275dollarsayeartokeepagoldfish.It’smuchcheaperthankeepingadog,whichcoststhousandsofdollars.Goldfishareoneofthecheapestpets.Tips：Youcantalkabout:personalexperienceastoryoranexampleanexplanationasaying(commonsense)afact(number,…)Ifyouliveinaflatanddon’thavelargespaces,youonlyneedtobuyatankforyourgoldfish.SupportingdetailsHelpBettycompleteherwritingMakeherwritingbetter-organizedandmorereadable.3.While-writingGoldfishmakethebestpets.Goldfisharecolourfulandbeautiful.

It’senjoyabletowatchtheircolourandmovement.Atankofgoldfishcanaddcolourtoyourroom.IthinkthatgoldfishFirstly,goldfishGoldfisharequiet.Theydon’tbite,barkorscratch.Yourneighbourswon’tcomplain.Welearnhowtobepatientbykeepinggoldfish.Ownersshouldchangewaterandfeedgoldfishcarefullyeveryday.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Withloveandpatience,nothingisimpossible.”表达观点：Ithinkthat…Ibelievethat…inmyopinion,…分点论述：firstly,

…secondly,…/what’smore,…/besides,…thirdly,…/finally,…Secondly,goldfishFinally,weGoldfisharethebestpets.Ibelievethatgoldfish,andaSo,your逻辑连词：因果：so,…/forthesereasons…,

并列：…and…

转折：…but…/…though……Forthesereasons,Summary:Awell-organizedargumentationIthinkthatgoldfishmakethebestpets.Firstly,goldfisharecolourfulandbeautiful.It’senjoyabletowatchtheircolourandmovement,andatankofgoldfishcanaddcolourto

your

room.Secondly,goldfisharequiet.Theydon’tbite,barkorscratch.So,yourneighbourswon’tcomplain.Finally,welearnhowtobepatientbykeepinggoldfish.Ownersshouldchangewaterandfeedgoldfishcarefullyeveryday.Asanoldsayinggoes,“Withloveandpatience,nothingisimpossible.”Forthesereasons,Ibelievethatgoldfisharethebestpets.Havea

structure：

anopinion

reasonssupportingdetailsaconclusionDevelopsupportingdetails：

personalexperienceastoryoranexampleanexplanationasaying(commonsense)afact(number,…)Uselinkingwords：

表达观点

分点论述

逻辑连词

4.Assignment_______makethebestpets.?Assignment:以“________makethebestpets”为题，写一篇议论文。Step1:MakeanoutlinelovelyholdcatsinourarmscanbeleftathomealoneflatcatchmiceJason:Catsmakethebestpets.independenthelpful…OpinionReasonsSupportingdetailsStep2:Writethefirstdraft.Ithinkthatcatsmakethebestpets.Firstly,catsarereallycute.It’ssocomfortabletoholdtheminourarms.Catsareindependent.Catscanbeleftaloneathome.Catslikestayinginlittleboxes.Theydon’tneedlargespaces.Theyareperfectpetsforflats.Finally,catsarehelpful.Theycancatchmice.Forthesereasons,Ibelievethatkeepingcatsaspetsisagoodidea.…………+details+detailsStructureopinion3reasonssupportingdetailsconclusionSupportingdetailspersonalexperienceastoryoranexampleanexplanationasaying(commonsense)fact(number,…)Linkingwords表达观点分点论述逻辑连词Step3:Evaluatethefirstdraft.…^IthinkthatcatsmakethebestpetsFirstly,catsaresocutethattheycandriveawaysadness.It’scomfortabletoholdtheminourarms.Andaccordingtoastudy,pattingcatscanlowerthelevelofstressandbloodpressure.What’s

more,catsareindependent.Theycanbeleftaloneathome.And,catslikestayinginlittleboxes,sotheydon’tneedlargespacesorbewalkedoutside.Ifyouliveinaflat,catsareyourbestchoice.Finally,catsarehelpfulmembersofthefamilybecausetheyaregreathunters.Ifyou

keep

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cat,miceandotherinsectswillbeawayfromyourhouse.Forthesereasons,Ibelievekeepingcatsaspetsisagoodidea.Step4:Polishthedraft.structurestrongsupportingdetailslinkingwordsafactexplanationsIthinkthatcatsmakethebestpetsFirstly,catsaresocutethattheycandriveawaysadness.It’scomfortabletoholdtheminourarms.Andaccordingtoastudy,pattingcats

canlowerthelevelofstressandbloodpress