读后续写“自我成长”类范文12篇 讲义-2024届高考英语作文复习专项

读后续写“自我成长”主题12篇

八第Q一篇4ttj

WhenIwasinmiddleschool,mysocialstudiesteacheraskedmetoentera

writingcontest.Isaidnowithoutthinking.Ididnotlovewriting.Myfamilycame

fromBrazil,soEnglishwasonlymysecondlanguage.Writingwassodifficultand

painfulformethatmyteacherhadallowedmetopresentmypaperonthesinkingof

theTitanicbyactingoutaplay,whereIplayedalltheparts.Noonelaughedharder

thanhedid.

So,whydidhesuddenlyforcemetodosomethingatwhichIwassuretofail?

Hisreply:"BecauseIloveyourstories.Ifyou'rewillingtoapplyyourself,Ithink

youhaveagoodshotatthis.^^Encouragedbyhiswords,Iagreedtogiveitatry.

IchosePaulRevere'shorseasmysubject.PaulReverewasasilversmith（车艮匠）

inBostonwhorodeahorseatnightonApril18,1775toLexingtontowarnpeople

thatBritishsoldierswerecoming.Mystorywouldcomestraightfromthehorse's

mouth.Notabrilliantidea,butfunny;andunlikelytobeanyoneelse'schoice.

Whatdidthehorsethink,ashespedthroughthenight?Didhegettired?Have

doubts?Didhewanttoquit?Isympathizedimmediately.1gottired.Ihaddoubts.I

wantedtoquit.But,likeReveredhorse,Ikeptgoing.Iworkedhard.Icheckedmy

spelling.Iaskedmyoldersistertocorrectmygrammar.Icheckedoutahalfdozen

booksonPaulReverefromthelibrary.Ievenreadafewofthem.

WhenIhandedintheessaytomyteacher,hereadit,laughedoutloud,and

said,“Great.Now,writeitagain.']wroteitagain,andagainandagain.WhenIfinally

finishedit,thethoughtofwinninghadgivenwaytotheenjoymentofwriting.IfI

didn'twin,Iwouldn'tcare.

Pl:A先卬weeZslater,whenIalmostforgotthecontest,therecamethe

P2:1toteacher'sofficeaft"theawardpresematiern.

范文：

P】：A炎坡weekslai",whe几Ialmostforgotthecontest,the%camethe

•Onthatseeminglyordinaryday,myteachersuddenlyinformedmethatIwon

thesecondprizeandtherewouldbeanawardpresentationforthewriting

contestwinners.Itwasreallyadelightfulsurprise.

•Whenthedayfinallyarrived,Ifoundmyselfstandingamongagroupof

talentedwriters.Aseachwinnerwascalledtothestage,applauseandcheers

filledtheair.

•Walkinguptoreceivemyaward,Ifeltasurgeofprideandaccomplishment,

knowingthatmyhardworkanddedication/devotion/commitmenthadbeen

recognized.

P2:Iwenttoteacher'sofficeaftertheawardpresentation.

•Onseeingme,hegavemeasincerecongratulationandsharedhisjoyinseeing

mesucceed.

•Iexpressedmyheartfeltappreciationforpushingmebeyondmycomfort

zone,forbelievinginmyabilitytotellstories,andforexploringmylovefor

writing.Itwasamomentofdeepconnectionandmutualrespect.

•Thatday,Ilefttheofficewithasenseofconfidencetocontinuepursuingmy

passionforwriting,andtheknowledgethatwithdetermination/persistence,

eventhemostdifficultandpainfulchallengescouldbeconquered.

最终自测：

4上卬weekslater,Ialmostforgotthecontest、therecamethe

。在那个看似普普通通的一天，我的老师突然告诉我，我获得了二等奖，还

会有一个获奖者的颁奖典礼。这真是一个令人愉快的惊喜。

e当这一天终于到来时，我发现自己站在一群才华横溢的作家中间。当每个

获胜者都被召集到舞台上时，空气中弥漫着掌声和欢呼声。

©走上去接受我的奖项，我感到一阵骄傲和成就，因为我知道我的努力工作

和投入已经得到了认可。

[wetomyteacher'sofficeafleriheaward"esentation.

令见到我，他向我表示了衷心的祝贺并分享了他看到我成功的喜悦。

令我表达了我衷心的感激，他推动我走出了舒适区，他相信我讲故事的能力，

他探索我对写作的热爱。这是一个深深联系和相互尊重的时刻。

令那天，我离开了办公室，带着一种继续追求我对写作的热情的自信，并知

道通过决心/坚持，即使是最困难和痛苦的挑战也可以被克服。

第二篇

BobandIhungoutthewholesummer,runninginthefield,swimminginthelake

andexploringeverywherejoyfully.

Itwasatypicalsummerafternoon.Bobsuggestedweskipalanguagelessonto

playbasketball.Aha!Iwouldshowmydefense,lay-upsandthree-pointshooting.I

lovedtoexplore,Ilovedsports,andIlovedbasketballmost.IbelievedIwouldbethe

nextLeBronJames.

ButmypassionforsportscametoasuddenstopwhenIbeganexperiencing

extremebackpainlaterthatday.Afterseveralvisitstodoctors,finallyIwastoldthat

aspine（脊柱）surgerywasnecessary.Unfortunately,thesurgeryaccidentally

damagedmyspinalcord（脊髓）.Iwasinthewardhangingfacedowntorelievethe

pressureonmyspine.

Afterfour-monthrehabilitationtraining（康复训练）inhospital,realityslowlyset

in-Iwasunabletowalkagain.Icouldn'tbelievethisshouldhavehappenedtome,

thatitwasn'tpossibletorecover,thatIwouldn'tbecomeafamousbasketballplayer,

thatmylifeasIhadknownit,wasover.Myfuturewouldbechainedtoawheelchair.

Iwasjust16yearsold!

Backhome,Ilearnedhowharditwasgoingtobetogetaroundinawheelchair.I

withdrewfrommyfriendsandmybasketball.AtBob'srepeatedinvitation,Iagreed

togotoourregularswimminghole.Unabletomakeitdowntheriverbankalone,T

wastooproudtoaskforhelp.WhenIfinallyrealizedmypridewouldkeepmeaway

frompeopleandsportsIloved,IletBobcarrymeonhisbacktotheriver'sedge.

Allowingotherstohelpwasaturningpoint.Irealizedmyattitudewasthe

biggestbarrierIhadtoface.HowcouldIexpectotherstoseemypotentialifIdidn't

seeitmyself?HowcouldIrealizemybasketballdreamifIwithdrewintomyself?

Pl:Oneday.Bobtookmetoawheelchairbasketballgame.

P2;WithBob'sencouragement,IdecidedtohaveaZAJatmydream.

范文：

Paral:Oneday.Bobtookmeioawheelchairbasketballgame.

•Itwasaneye-openingexperienceforme.AsIwatchedtheplayerscontrolling

theirwheelchairswithincrediblespeedandprecision,myadmirationfor

themgrew.Theydisplayedalevelofdeterminationandresiliencethat

inspiredme.

•Bobtoldmethateverythingdependedonmyownattitudetowardsmy

disability,thatphysicallimitationsdidn'thavetobeaharriertopursuingmy

dreams,andthattheloveforlifecouldtriumphoveranydifficulty,

•Hiswordsignitedasparkwithinme.

•••

Para2:WithBob'seficourageinent,/decidedtohaveatryatdream.

•Insteadofwithdrawingintomyself,IfocusedonwhatIcouldachieve.

Throughendlesstrainingandfirmcommitment,Ibegantoadaptmyskillsto

theworldofwheelchairbasketball.

•Itwasn'taneasyjourney,butwitheachmilestoneIreached,myconfidence

improved,andIrediscoveredmypassionforthegame.

•Isetoffonanewchapterofmylife,provingtomyselfandtheworldthata

positiveattitudecanconqueranyobstacle.

最终自测：

Cheday,Bobtookmetoawheelchairbasketba/l父ame.

令这对我来说是一次大开眼界的经历。当我看着球员们以令人难以置信的速

度和精确度控制他们的轮椅时，我对他们的钦佩不断增多。他们表现出了

一种激励着我的决心和韧性。

令Bob告诉我，一切都取决于我自己对残疾的态度，身体上的限制不一定是我

追求梦想的障碍，对生活的爱可以战胜任何困难。

令他的话在我心中点燃了一股火花。

WithBob勺encouYcigeme*Idecidedtohaveatryatmydream.

令我没有退缩，而是专注于我所能实现的目标。通过无尽的训练和坚定的承

诺，我开始让我的技能适应轮椅篮球的世界。

令这不是一个简单的旅程，但随着我每达到一个里程碑，我的信心都提高了,

我重新发现了我对比赛的热情。

令我开始了我人生的新篇章，向自己和世界证明，积极的态度可以克服任何

障碍。

第三篇

They'dbeenplanningthisforever.Fromherbirth,mostlikely.Mya'smother,

Helenalovedhostingparties.AndAuntBeatricelovedbirthdays.Together,they'd

makeherSweetSixteenahundredtimesbigger,bolder,andbrighterthanitneededto

be.Theyselectedathemeeveryyearandstucktoit.Herfourteenthhadbeenthe

“SnowWhite,,andherninthhadbeenthe“Frozen”.Theynevertoldherwhatthe

themewasthedaybefore.She'djustwakeupherbirthdaymorning,abrandnew

birthdayoutfit（——套月艮装）laidneatlyonherdresser（anoutfitrelatedtothetheme,of

course)andshewouldopenherdoortoseetheadventurethatlayaheadofherthat

day.

Myahadafewguessesastowhatthisyear'sthemewouldbe.Aplayonthe

words"SweetSixteen“waslikely—acandythemedparty,perhaps?Butshe'dhada

bakingpartyafewyearsago—andHelenawasanythingbutrepetitive.Myadidn't

haveanyinterestincars,soshedoubtedasports-carpartywasonthemenu.She'd

triedtolookthroughhermother'spurchasehistoryonline,buthermotherhadbeen

carefulenoughtodeleteeverythingrecent.Sotheonlyclueleftwasthebirthday

outfitshewouldreceivethenextmorning.

May1st,Myawoke.Thebrightsunlightbeggedhereyestoopenandsheloved

thedaythatherbirthdaytookplace.ItwasalwaysniceoutonMay1standitnever

rained.Thismorningwasnodifferentthanherpreviousbirthdays.Shesatupinher

bedandlookedtoherdresserbeforeslippingoutofbedandinspectingtheoutfit.She

unfoldeditandhelditagainstherbody,seeinghowitwaslike.Itreacheddown,just

abovetheankle.Myadressed,eyedherselfinthemirrorandfounditwasnotso

muchaprettyoutfitasshehadreceivedbefore.Itwastotallyoneforblue-collar

workers!

Paral:Suddenly,herihemghtswereimerri卬tedbyaknock.

Para2：everythingdone,herfacesheme卬asweeZsmile.

范文：

Paral：Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.

•Itwasmumandaunt,whoweredressedinthesameoutfitastheypreparedfor

Mya."Readyforthisyear'sthemeparty,littleblue-collarworker?”Theylooked

herdirectintheeyeswithhighexpectancy.

•NeverhadMyaexpected/anticipatedsuchathemebirthdayparty.Concealing

herdisappointment,shemanagedtoforceasmilewithgreateffort.Inching

herway,Myafollowedmumandaunttoarosegarden.

•Uponarrival,bloomingrosescameintohersight,releasingapleasant

fragrance.Momrevealedtoherthattheirjobwastoremovetheweedssothat

theroseswouldgrowmoreluxuriant.Thoughunwilling,Myarolledupher

sleevesandbentdowntopulltheweedsoutrowafterrow.

Para2：Witheverythingdone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.

•ExhaustedasMyawasaftertidyingupandweedingtherosegarden,shefeltan

unprecedentedsenseofaccomplishmentandjoysurgingthroughher.

Severaldropsofsweattricklingdownherredandpinkcheeks,sheturnedto

MumandAunt:"Thisisnotbad.AndIfeelI'vegrownupenoughtohelpyou

withsomething.^^

•Auntsteppedclose,moppingthesweatfromMya'sforeheadwhileMum

pulledMyaintoherarmsandplantedabigkissonherforehead.

•ThesuninMaywasstillshiningbrighter.Staringatthewell-keptgarden,Mya

couldnothelpbutexclaim,“Thisisthebestbirthdaypartyever.”

最终自测：

Paral：Suddenly,herthoughtswereinterruptedbyaknock.

今是妈妈和阿姨，她们穿着和给米娅准备的一样的衣服。”准备好今年的主题

生日会了吗，小蓝领工人?”她们满怀期待地直视着她的眼睛。

令米娅从来没有预料到这样一个主题生日聚会。掩饰自己的失望，她竭力强

颜欢笑。米娅慢慢地走着，跟着妈妈和阿姨来到了一个玫瑰园。

令一到，盛开的玫瑰就进入了她的视线，散发出令人愉悦的香味。妈妈向他

透露她们的工作是除草，这样玫瑰花才会长得更茂盛。米娅虽然不愿意，

但还是卷起袖子，弯下腰，一排又一排地拔掉杂草。

Para2：Witheverythingclone,herfaceshonewithasweetsmile.

今虽然在清理完玫瑰园的杂草后，米娅筋疲力尽，但她感到一种前所未有的

成就感和快乐涌遍全身。几滴汗顺着她红扑扑的脸颊流下来，她转向妈妈

和阿姨:“这真不错。我觉得我已经长大了，可以帮你们做点事儿了。”

。阿姨走上前，擦去米亚额头上的汗水，妈妈把米娅抱在怀里，在她额头上重

重地吻了一下。

。五月的日头依然炙热。看着精心打理过的花园，米娅不禁呼喊道:“这是有史

以来最好的生日派对。“

第四篇

OnSaturday,wegatheredatthehalltowitnesstheawardceremonyforthe

seniorscouts（童子军）.Receivinganawardonsuchadaywasagreathonorforany

scout,andalldesiredtobethescoutselectedtogivethesummaryoftheyear's

activitiesfortheassociation.

Iwasnottheoneselectedtogivethesummaryandforthat,Iwasgrateful.Icould

hardlystandinfrontofalargecrowdtomakeaspeech,butSeancould.Hewas

selectedtodothehonorbecausehewasthePresidentoftheBoyScouts.Myjobwas

muchsimpler.BeingtheVice-President,1wasverymuchbehindthescenes,content

toensurethateverythingwasinsmoothrunningorder.

Itwasanhourtogobeforetheceremonybegan,and1hadputthefinishing

touchestothestage.Walkingdownthestage,Isawmyteammatesinastateof

panic（恐慌）.Whentheysawme,theyrantometotellmethatSeanmetwithatraffic

accidentandwouldnotmakeittotheawardceremony.Someoneelsehadtogivethe

summary.Allofthemlookedhopefullyatme,andIcouldfeelmykneesbeginningto

collapse.

Alltheirargumentsagainstmyunwillingnesswerereasonable.Ihadacopyofthe

speechaswellasthebenefitofhavingseenSeanrehearse（排练）it.Iwasthe

Vice-Presidentandthereforeshouldtakehisplace.Finally,Iwasfirmlytoldnotto

turnitdownanylongerandtheysaidthattheywereconvincedthatIwoulddothe

rightthing.Isankdownontothefloor,totallyshockedbythesituation.

IknewIwasnotaconfidentspeaker,andthethoughtofpresentingasummaryin

frontofsomanydistinguishedguestshorrifiedme.Tothinkthatthefameofthe

scoutswouldtakeabeatingbecauseofme!Theburdenofresponsibilitytroubledme

greatly.

Buttherewasreallynowayoutofthesituation.Intheend,Iquicklyrehearsed

thespeechandgotreadytogoonstageforthepresentation.Ilookedcalm,butinside

Iwasatrembling.Althoughtheykeptencouragingme,Istillfeltveryworriedthat

mypoorperformancewouldcostustheopportunitytowinanaward.Soonafter,I

wascalledtodothepresentation.Havingbutterfliesinmystomach,Iwalkedonto

thestage.

Buttherewasreallynowayoutofthesituation.

41stoodonthestage,heartbeatviolently.

范文：

P】:Buttherewasreallyttowayofthesiiitaiion.

•Feelingitmyresponsibilitytobeconfrontedwiththereality,intheend,

Iadjustedmyselfpromptly,gotdownto

rehearsingthespeechandwasreadytogoonstageforthe

presentation.

•ThoughIappearedcalmandcomposed,tensioncamefloodingovermeinside.

Withmyteammates7encouragingwords,Istillfeltveryworried

thatmypoorperformancewould

costustheopportunitytowinanaward.

•Notlongafter,Iwascalledtodothepresentation.Havingbutterflies

inmystomach,I

walkedontothestage.

P2:As/stoodcmthesZage,〃2yheartbeatviolenHy.

•Myfaceturningpaleandmymindgoingblank,

IcouldnotrememberwhatIwas

supposedtoutter.

•WhenIwasatalosswhattodo,Isawmyteammatescasttrustfullooksatme,

whichrelievedmealot.ItwasthenthatIrealizedIshouldtrymy

bestforourteam.

•Notfeelinglikesittingonpinsandneedlesanymore,Ireorganizedmythoughts,

andproceededtospeakintothemicrophone.WhenIwasfinished,allmy

teammates

stoodup,theaudienceburstingintothunderousapplause.

最终自测：

Buttherewasrea/lynowayoutofthesituation.

令觉得有责任面对现实，最终，我迅速调整了自己，开始着手排练演讲，准备

上台做表演。

令尽管我显得镇定自若，但紧张情绪涌上了我的内心。有了队友们鼓励的话，

我仍然非常担心我糟糕的表现会让我们失去获奖的机会。

今不久之后，我就被叫去做演讲。我很忐忑地走上了舞台。

AsIstoodonthestage,刀2yheartbeatviolenHy.

今当我站在舞台上时，我的心怦怦直跳。脸色苍白，头脑一片空白，我不记得

我应该说些什么了。

令当我不知所措怎么做时，我看到我的队友们信任地看着我，这让我松了一口

气。就在那时，我意混到我应该为我们的团队尽最大的努力。

令不再感到坐立不安了，我重新组织了我的思想，继续对着麦克风讲话。当我

完成后，我所有队友都站了起来，观众席中爆发出了雷鸣般的掌声。

第五篇

Thoughhisfather,grandmothers,uncles,auntsandcousinswereallgoingtobe

there,itwouldbethefirsttimeforHasan,athoroughlypampered（娇生惯养的）child,

tobewithouttheconstantmotheringofhishelicoptermother.

AtfirstHasantriedtoemotionallyblackmail（要挟）hismotherintonotgoing,

butaftershepromisedtobringbackhisfavoritetoysandcandies,heunwillinglylet

hergo.

Whenhewenttodropoffhismotherattheairport,hehadtearyeyesashe

wonderedhowhewasgoingtosurvivewithoutherforthenexttwoweeks.Although

hefeltlikecryinglikeababy,hewastooembarrassedtocryoutloud.Butwhenhis

fatherhuggedhim,Hasancould'tstopcryinginhisarms.Whentheyreturnedhome,

Hasan,whohadalwaysbeentoldbyhimotherwhattodo,nowhadnoonetotell

himtowashhishandsorfinishhisdinner.Thoughhewasveryupsetabouthis

mother'sleaving,suddenlyhealsorealizedthepotentialforpartying,awayfromhis

mother'sdiscipline（管教）.Therewouldbenochecksorbalances.Hecouldstayup

late,eatjunkfoodandusetheInternettohisheart'scontent.

Backfromschool,hewouldthink,"Homework?I'llmakethemostofmy

freedomandhavesomefuninstead!,9Hasanstartedtostayuptillhecouldnolonger

stayawakeandthenwokeupwithalotofdifficultyatseveninthemorning,barely

makingittoschoolontime.Butafterafewdays,hispartyingstartedcatchingup

withhim.Inschool,hewasbarelymanagingtostayawake.Thingsstartedgettingout

ofcontrol.Hishomeworkremainedundone.Hefailedhistests.Hefeltweakfrom

eatingonlyjunkfood.

Oneday,histeacherfinallydemandedtoknowwhatwasgoingonwithhim.

Theteacher'swordssankintohisbrainandmadesensetohim.

范文：

Oneday,histeacherfinallydemandedio/mowwhatwasgoingcmwithhim.

UnabletofigureoutwhyHanson'sonce-promisingschoolperformancehadtakena

nose-dive,hecalledHasantohisofficeandinquiredaboutitwithconcern.Head

droopingandtonguetied,Hasanstammeredoutwhathadhappenedrecently.Upon

hearingHasan'sreply,theteacherutteredindisbelief,"Hasan,youareruiningyour

bodyandsoulandevenyourfuture.Truefreedomcomesfromself-disciplineand

responsibilityratherthanindulgenceinyourowndesire.Youneedtotakeyour

responsibilityforattendingyourself.,,

Theteacher'swordssankintohisbrainandmadesensetohim.

Nowherecognizedtheconsequenceofhisrecklessbehaviorandneededtomake

amendswithoutdelay.Fromthatdayon,determinedtogetbackontrack,heassigned

timeforstudy,setupasleepingtimeandsaidnoiojunkfoodandcomputergames.

Gradually,hebecameactiveinclassandimprovedhistestscores,whichsuiprised

hisfatherandteacheralot.Thisexperiencewaslikeawake-upcall,always

remindinghimthatdisciplineandresponsibilitymatteredmostinhislife.

最终自测：

Oneday,histeacherfinallydemandedtoknowwhatwasgoingonwithhim.

令因为不明白汉森曾经很有希望的学校表现为什么急转直下，他把哈桑叫到自

己的办公室，关切地询问此事。

令垂着头，舌头打结般，哈桑结结巴巴地说出了最近发生的事情。

。听到哈桑的回答，老师难以置信地说：“哈桑，你正在毁掉你的身体和灵魂，

甚至你的未来。真正的自由来自于自律和责任，而不是对你自己欲望的放纵。

你需要承担起责任好好照顾自己。”

Theteacher飞wordssankEtohisbrainandmadesensetohim.

令现在，他认清了自己鲁莽行为的后果，需要立即弥补赎罪。

令从那天起，他决心回到正轨，分配了时间学习，安排了睡觉时间，对垃圾食

品和电脑游戏说不。渐渐地，他在课堂上活跃起来，提高了考试成绩，这让

他的父亲和老师非常惊喜。

令这段经历就像一个警钟，一直提醒他，纪律和责任在他的生活中是最重要的。

第八篇

Istillrememberthedaywhenwedecoratedthehouse.Iwastenanditwastwo

weeksbeforeChristmas.Iwaslookingforwardtomypresents.SinceI'mthe

youngestinthefamily,allofthefamilymemberswouldgivemeagiftonewayor

another.Sometimesitwasacookieorahugbutitwasalwaysthere.Iwastheonly

centreofattentionanditwasfeelinggood.

MyunclesusuallywouldaskmewhatIwantedbeforeChristmasandthatyearI

knewwhatIwanted.ItwasthespaceshipIsawintheads.Iwasdreamingofopening

abiggiftbox,anditwasthere.ButthatyearitcameinawaythatIwasn'texpecting.

ItwastwoweeksbeforeChristmas.Justtwoweeks.Shecouldn'twait.Mydear

mothertoldmyfatherthatitwastime,andthenwewenttothehospital.Afteran

hour,theytoldmethatIhadasisternow.But1didn'twantasister.Iwanteda

spaceship.Thenextfewdayswentsofast.Noonewascaringaboutme.Everyone

wastalkingaboutherandIknewthatmylifeisnevergoingtobethesameever

again.Iwasn'treadytogrowup,tobeabigbrother.Butitjusthappenedinan

instant.

OnthedaybeforeChristmas,everyonewasinourhome,talkingonlyaboutmy

newbornsister.Myfamilywasbecominghers.Evenmyunclesdidn'taskme

anythingaboutthegift.ShestoleeverythingI'deverhad,mylifeandmypresents.

Thinkingaboutthis,Icriedtosleep.Ihadanightmare（噩梦）andwokeupatthe

middleofthenight.Shadowswereallaroundme,andIwasdefenselessandsoweak.

Iranintomyparents9bedroombutcouldn'twakeupmypoorparentswhowerejust

toowornout.Iwasstandingneartheirbed,tryingnottocrywhenIsawher.Shewas

av/akeandlookingatmewithherbigeyesinhersmallbed.

Paragraph1Suddenlyalongshadowcameintothebedroomandshestarted

Paragraph2:Afte『havingcomfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.

范文：

Suddenlyalongshadowcameintothebedroomandsheslaved（匚¥山*.

■Feelingpanicatfirst,Ithenrealizedthatitwasjustacarpassingby.Butshefelt

uneasy,hermouthwide-opened,armswaving,andlegskickingintheair.

■Ithoughtshemightbescaredtoo,soIheldoutmyhandtoholdhers,pattingher

onthebackwiththeother.Ievenmovedabitclosertoherlittlebed,whispering

myfavouritesongtoherears,justasmymumdidwhenIgotscared.

■Surprisingly,sheseemedtounderstandmeandstoppedcrying.Lookingintoher

bigeyes,Ibreathedasighofrelief,somethingmeltinginmyheart.

A/ierhavingcoinforiedher,someihings/ow/ychanaedinside

•Thesenseoflonelinessfadedawayandwasreplacedbytheresponsibilityof

beinganelderbrotherandthebondbetweensiblings.Eventhoughherarrival

tookoverthecentreofthewholefamilyinitially,shestartedtobecomethecentre

ofmyattentiontoo.

■Withhercuteroundfaceandsparklingeyes,shealsowonmyloveandcarefor

her.Ilookedaroundandfoundmyparents,awake,smilingatmewithmistyeyes.

■Withashadowofahappyfamilycastonthewindow,Ifeltmylittlesisterwas

thebestgiftI'deverreceived.

最终自测：

Suddenlya10ngshadowcameintothebedroomandshestartedcrying.

令一开始我很恐慌，然后我意识到那只是一辆路过的车。但她感到不安，张

大了嘴巴，挥舞着手臂，双腿踢着。

令我想她可能也会害怕，所以我伸出手握她的手，用另一只手拍她的背。我

甚至离她的小床更近了一点，对着她低声唱着我最喜欢的歌，就像我害怕

时我妈妈所做的那样。

令令人惊讶的是，她似乎听懂了我，也不再哭了。我望着她的大眼睛，松了

一口气，有什么东西在我的心中融化了。

Afterhavingcomfortedher,somethingslowlychangedinsideme.

令孤独感消退了，取而代之的是作为哥哥的责任和兄妹之间的纽带。尽管她的

到来最初接管了全家人的中心，但她也开始成为我关注的中心。

令她那可爱的圆脸和闪闪发光的眼睛，也赢得了我对她的爱和关心,我环顾

四周，看见了我的父母，醒着，泪眼朦胧地对我笑。

令窗户上投着幸福家庭的影子，我觉得我妹妹是我得到过的最好的礼物。

第七篇

Thetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywere

planningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhenthey

broughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchicken

porridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.

JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.

Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairs

quietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.Theyputsomericeinto

apotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggs

intoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintothe

eggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.

EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoo

hotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothe

sinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoit

cookednicely.

ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.The

nextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,

Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.Jenna

toldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheponidge.But

Jeffshandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhis

handincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceof

breadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.

Pl:Asthelookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.

P2:Theca门，iedihebreakfastupstairsandwokeiheirmotheri(p.

范文：

PI:Asthetwi〃slookedaroimdthemindisappoinhnem,iheirfaiherapDeared.

•"Dad,sorry,wemadethekitchensuchamess."Jeffmurmured,lowering

hisheadinshame.

•Takingaglanceatthekitchenandthedownheartedkids,fatherfetchedthe

medicineboxandappliedsomemedicinetoJenna'shand."Nevermind.Let'sdo

itagainbeforeyourmumwakeup.”

•Potcleaned,thetwinsrepeatedthesameprocess,butthistimeunderthe

patientguidanceoftheirfather.SoonthedeliciousandinvitingFrenchtoast

andchickenporridgewereready.

P2:ThefwinscarriedthebreakfastuDstairsandwokeiheirmother

•Beforeshecouldutteraword,JennaandJeffexclaimedinchorus,"Happy

Mother'sDay!Thankyousomuchforwhatyoudidforusandthankyoufor

beingour

•Asenseofdelightdeprivingherofallpowerofutterance,Momhuggedthe

twinstightly,tearsofjoywellingupinhereyes.

・"Ifitweren'tDad'shelp,wecouldn'tfinishit;7Jennaadded.Atthistime,father

camefrombehind,steppedforwardandthrewhisarmsaroundthem.

•Theyfeltblissfulasiftheywereinpossessionofeverything.Indeed,love

shouldbemadeknowntolovedones.

最终自测：

Pl:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,[heirfatherappeared.

令.“爸爸，对不起，我们把厨房弄得一团糟。”杰夫羞愧地低下头，喃喃地

说。

令看了一眼厨房和沮丧的孩子们，父亲拿起药盒，把一些药涂在詹娜手上。

“没关系。让我们在你妈妈醒来之前再做一次吧。”

令洗了锅，双胞胎重复了同样的过程，但这次是在他们父亲的耐心指导下。

很快，美味而诱人的法式吐司和鸡粥就准备好了。

P2:Thetwinscarriedihebreakfastupstairsandwokeiheirmotherup.

令妈妈还没来得及说话，詹娜和杰夫就齐声喊道：“母亲节快乐！非常感谢您

为我们所做的一切，也非常感谢你是我们的妈妈。”

令高兴得说不出话来，妈妈紧紧地拥抱着双胞胎，喜悦的泪水从眼里涌出。

e“要不是爸爸的帮助，我们也做不完。”詹娜补充说。这时，父亲从他们身后

上前一步，伸出双臂搂住他们。

令他们感到幸福，好像他们拥有了一切。的确，爱应该让你所爱的人知道。

第八篇

Therearelotsofchancesinfrontofus.Whetheryoucanseizethemornot

dependsonthechoicesyoumake.ThisremindsmeofonechoiceImadeduringmy

childhood.

Twotickets.Onlytwoticketstothefinalbasketballgame.

ThreepairsofeyesfocusedontheticketsinDad'sout-stretchedhand.Mike,the

oldest,askedthequestionrunningthrougheveryone'smind,“Onlyoneticketforus

three?But,Dad,whichofuswillgowithyou?”Avery,theyoungest,repeatedthe

questionquietly.IaskedDadiftherewasanychancetogetmoretickets.Imightbe

themiddlesister,butIwasjustaseagerasmybasketball-crazybrothersforanight

outwithDad.Dadsaidhe'dgottheticketsfromafriendandtherewereonlytwo

available.

Seeingthatnoneofuswouldgiveupthechance,Dadtoldushewouldchoose

whichofthethreeofusdeservedtogobythefollowingmorning.

Thenextmorning,wehurriedintothekitchenandlookedforDad,onlytofind

thathehadgoneout.WeweretoldtogetstartedonourSaturdaycleanupassoonas

wefinishedbreakfast.Mikecomplainedthathecouldn'tconcentrateonchoreswith

thegameamereelevenhoursaway.Heslurpedthelastofhismilk,grabbedthe

basketballandheadedtowardsthebackdoor.Averydashedafterhisbrother.BeforeI

realizedit,thedoorsnappedshut.IglancedoutthewindowandsawMikepract