专题09 书面表达-2023年中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递（上海专用）

2023上海中考英语逆袭冲刺名校模拟真题特快专递第五期专题09书面表达一、话题作文1．（2023·上海虹口·统考一模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）下列是学校征集的模范学生的其中四条标准，你最认同哪一条？为什么？请举例说明。注意：1.文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。3.请选择一条填在横线上作为标题。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文BehonestAsweknow,honestyisveryimportant.Itisoneofpeople’sgoodqualities.PeopleneedhonestyandIhopeeveryoneishonestandtrusting.Lastterm,mybestfriendwantedtocopymyhomeworkbecauseheplayedcomputergamesuntilmidnightandhadnotimetodohishomework.ButIthoughtitwasagainsthonesty,soItoldhimnottocopymyhomeworkandIwouldhelphimnexttime.Honestyisquiteanimportantqualitytoaperson.SoIthinkasamodelstudent,hemustbehonest.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：本文首先要选择其中一条标准，并通过举例说明，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出话题，表示诚实是很重要的，并讲述为什么诚实很重要；第二步，通过举例说明诚实的重要性；第三步，书写结语。[亮点词汇]①oneof……之一②playcomputergames玩电脑游戏[高分句型]①PeopleneedhonestyandIhopeeveryoneishonestandtrusting.(and连接的并列句)②Lastterm,mybestfriendwantedtocopymyhomeworkbecauseheplayedcomputergamesuntilmidnightandhadnotimetodohishomework.(because引导原因状语从句)二、材料作文2．（2023·上海长宁·统考一模）Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Mysuggestionsforthenewschoolmates”(请根据下面的提示，以“给新同学的建议”为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)度过了几年的初中学习生活，你终将面临毕业，而马上又会有新的同学即将进入你上过的初中。请根据你的亲身体验写封短信给这些新同学，给他们提一些学习生活方面的建议，如：学习方法、参与活动、业余生活、师生关系、课后作业等等。短信的开头2句已提供。(注意：文中不得出现任何姓名、校名以及其他标志性的具体信息，否则不予评分。)MysuggestionsforthenewschoolmatesDearfellowschoolmates,Welcometoourschool.AsI’mleavinghereforaseniorhighschool,I’dliketowriteafewlinesofsuggestionsforyou…__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【答案】例文Dearfellowschoolmates,Welcometoourschool.AsI’mleavinghereforaseniorhighschool,I’dliketowriteafewlinesofsuggestionsforyou.Inyourschoollife,youshouldpreparewellforeachlesson.Inclass,youmustlistentotheteachercarefully.Andyoushouldalwaysbefriendlytoyourclassmatesandteachers.Besides,it’simportantforyoutodoyourhomeworkonyourown.Inyourdailylife,yououghttokeepahealthydiet.Also,it’snecessaryforyoutoexercisealot.Youcantakeactivepartinallkindsofactivities.Andyoushouldlearntomakegooduseofyourtime.Ihopeyouwillhaveawonderfulschoollife.Yours,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍对新同学各方面的建议；第二步，结尾总结。[亮点词汇]①befriendlyto对……友好②allkindsof各种各样的③preparewellfor准备好[高分句型]Also,it’snecessaryforyoutoexercisealot.（It固定句型）3．（2023·上海·九年级一模）三人行，必有我师焉。在我们的成长过程中，一定有这样一位“老师”，他们的某种品质让我们佩服，他们的某个行为让我们赞叹，或者他们说的某句话给予了我们力量……每个人都有长处，如果我们能善于发现他人的长处，借此来弥补自己的短处，那么我们将变得更加优秀。请按以下要求，写一篇短文。内容须包含以下要点：1.Whoisyour“teacher”?2.Whatdidhe/shedo?3.Whathaveyoulearnedfromhim/her?要求：1.80~120词；2.文中不出现真实的人名、校名。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Justastheoldsayinggoes,“Whenthreearewalkingtogether,Iamsuretofindteachersamongthem.”MybestfriendLucyissucha“teacher”whotaughtmetheimportanceofplanningahead.Lastsummer,LucyandImadeanappointmenttogoclimbingafterfinishingourhomework.ThinkingIstillhaddaystofinishit,Ikeptputtingoffdoingmyhomework.Asaresult,LucyfinisheditaheadoftimewhileIhadtoomuchhomeworktodo.IhadtobreakmypromiseandapologizetoLucy.Althoughshefeltdisappointed,sheexpressedherunderstandingandadvisedmetomakeaplanahead.Insteadofgoingclimbing,shevolunteeredinaparkatlast.Ihavelearnedifweplanaheadandcarryoutourplansaccordingly,westillhaveplentyoftimetogetthingsdoneanddomoremeaningfulthings.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作提示已给出，要围绕写作提示进行写作，并可以适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题，使用提示中所给的谚语“三人行，必有我师焉”，交代写作目的；第二步，介绍自己难忘的经历；第三步，介绍从这次经历收获了什么。[亮点词汇]①makeanappointment预约②putoff推迟③breakmypromise违背诺言④plentyof大量的[高分句型]①Asaresult,LucyfinisheditaheadoftimewhileIhadtoomuchhomeworktodo.（while引导的比较状语从句）②Ihavelearnedifweplanaheadandcarryoutourplansaccordingly,westillhaveplentyoftimetogetthingsdoneanddomoremeaningfulthings.（if引导的条件状语从句）4．（2023·上海·九年级一模）你的学校正在开展主题为“Themostbeautifulvolunteer”的征文活动，请写一篇文章介绍一位志愿者，以及她/他的事迹。文章内容可以包含以下几个问题：1.Whoishe/she?2.Whatdidhe/shedo?(Whatdoeshe/shedo?)3.Whatcanyoulearnfromhim/her?注意：1.短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheMostBeautifulVolunteerLiHongisapolitegirl.Sheisbothkindandpatient.Sheisahelpfulvolunteer.Atschool,sheisalwaysreadytohelpteachersandclassmates.Atweekends,shetakespartinalotofactivities.Sheoftendoessomecleaninginthestreet.Besides,shegoestothelibrarytohelpcarrybooks.Also,shelooksafteroldpeopleinthenursinghome.WeallthinkLiHongissuchanexcellentgirlthatweshouldlearnfromher.We’dliketorecommendherforTheMostBeautifulVolunteer.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中对这位志愿者的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，表明写作意图。借用“写一篇文章介绍一位志愿者，以及她/他的事迹”来引出重点介绍的内容；第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“品质、所做的事、对她的评价等”几个方面重点介绍这位志愿者的具体情况；第三步，书写结语，表达“我们想推荐她成为最美志愿者”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①bereadytodosth.乐意做某事；②takepartin参加；③lookafter照顾；④nursinghome养老院。[高分句型]①WeallthinkLiLeiissuchanexcellentboythatweshouldlearnfromhim.（such...that引导的结果状语从句）②Manyvolunteerscometothelibrariestodotheserviceafterwork.(动词不定式作目的状语)5．（2023·上海·九年级一模）每个人在人生旅途中总会遇到过困难，遭受挫折。在你遇到的那些困难和挫折时，是否也有那么一个人曾经启发你、引领你笑着面对困境，努力战胜困难。请根据表格提示内容，选择其中一个对象（老师，同学，父母或者其他人）写出你们之间的故事。Whatdifficultiesyoumetfailtheexam,loseconfidence,feellonely…Whohelpedyouteachers/friends/parents/strangers...Howdidhe/shehelpyouencouraged,offersuggestions…Whathaveyoulearnedbepositive,brave,confident...要求：1.包含所有要点，不逐字翻译，围绕要点适当发挥；2.书写规范、工整，条理清晰；3.文中不得出现真实人名、地名、和校名等；4.词数：100左右。首句供参考：Lookingbacktomypastlife,I’llneverforget…___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文:Lookingbacktomypastlife,I’llneverforgetmyfriendTomwhoalwaysencouragesmewhenIwanttogiveup.Onedayonahotafternoon,weweregoingtohaveaPEtest,whichIwasnotgoodatit.Whentheteststarted,Iwasalreadyoutofenergy.SoIranmuchmoreslowlythanmyclassmates.Justatthemoment,IheardTomsaid,“Comeon!Youcandoit.Neverquit.”SuddenlyIfeltthewarmthfromthebottomofmyheart.Istartedtotrymybesttofollowhim.Atlast,Ipassedthetest.WithoutTom’sencouragement,Iwouldn’tdoitsuccessfully.AndIalsolearnedthatkeepworkinghardandneverquit.Doubtlessly,you’llsucceed.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点；注意行文连贯、条理清晰，无语法使用错误。[写作步骤]第一步，开篇点题；第二步，围绕要点进行介绍，具体包括遇到的困难、他/她是如何帮助你等方面；第三步，阐述自己从这次经历中学习的东西。[亮点词汇]①lookbackto回顾②giveup放弃③begoodat擅长④tryone’sbesttodosth.尽某人最大努力做某事[高分句型]①I’llneverforgetmyfriendTomwhoalwaysencouragesmewhenIwanttogiveup.（who引导的定语从句）②weweregoingtohaveaPEtest,whichIwasnotgoodatit.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）③AndIalsolearnedthatkeepworkinghardandneverquit.（that引导的宾语从句）6．（2023·上海·统考一模）中国的茶是世界上最受欢迎的饮品之一，假如你叫李华，你的学校正在举行用英语讲好中国故事的比赛，请围绕茶的历史、种类、加工、饮茶、益处等方面，根据下面的思维导图，以“ChineseTeaCulture”为题，写一篇英语短文。要求：1.语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；2.短文应包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥，不要逐字翻译；3.词数80左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。ChineseTeaCultureGoodmorning!Ladiesandgentleman.MynameisLiHua.Iamhappytosharemytopicwithyouhere.Chineseteaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksintheworld._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________CometoenjoyChineseteaculture.Maybe,youwilllikeit.【答案】例文ChineseTeaCultureGoodmorning!Ladiesandgentleman.MynameisLiHua.Iamhappytosharemytopicwithyouhere.Chineseteaisoneofthemostpopulardrinksintheworld.Chinesepeoplehavelikeddrinkingteasinceancienttimes.Teahasahistoryofover4000yearssincetheChinesebegantogrowanddrinktea.TherearemanykindsofteainChina,suchasgreentea,blacktea,oolongteaandsoon.LongjingTeaisfamousallovertheworld.Peopleuseteapotsorteacupstodrinktea.Theyaremadeofceramics.Drinkingteaisgoodforhealth.It’ssaidthatgreenteacanpreventcancer.Whenyouaretired,acupofteacanhelpyourelax.CometoenjoyChineseteaculture.Maybe,youwilllikeit.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文；②时态：本文采用“一般现在时”；③提示：要求包含所有提示内容，并适当发挥。[写作步骤]第一步，具体阐述茶的历史、种类、加工等；第二步，阐述喝茶的好处；第三步，表达希望。[亮点词汇]①manykindsoftea很多种茶②andsoon等等③allovertheworld全世界[高分句型]①Drinkingteaisgoodforhealth.（动名词作主语）②It’ssaidthatgreenteacanpreventcancer.（主语从句）③Whenyouaretired,acupofteacanhelpyourelax.（when引导时间状语从句）7．（2022春·上海金山·九年级校考一模）Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myviewsononlinestudy”(以“在线学习之我见”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)随着在线学习模式的开启，你对在线学习的态度是什么？你在线上学习的过程中有什么经验可以向大家分享？请结合自己或他人在线学习的经历，谈谈你对这个话题的看法。（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：MyviewsononlinestudyThisspringournewtermdoesn’tcomeontimebecausetheepidemicbrokeout.Wehavetolearnonlineathome.WehavelessonsfromMondaytoFriday.Classesbeginat7:30andendat4:00everyday.WestudyMath,English,Chinese,PhysicsandPE.Duringonlinelearning,therearemanyproblems.Somestudentsthinkthatthiskindoflearningmethodisveryfreshandcanstimulatetheirinterestinlearning.Iftheymeetproblemsinlearning,theycanasktheteacherforhelpintime.Butsomeotherstudentsthinkit’snotgoodbecausetheycan’tconcentrateonlearningandtheycannotstudyascarefullyasinclass.Whentheirparentsgotowork,theyfeellonelyathomealone.Asforme,IlikelearningathomebecauseIneedn’tgetupearly.Ihavemoresleeptime.Iwon’thurrytoschool.ButImissmyschool,myteachersandmyclassmate.Ilookforwardtomeetingthemsoon.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作中需要回答额问题已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容提示”中的要点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍在家在线学习的经历；第二步，分享同学在线学习的经验和看法；第三步，表达自己对在线学习的看法。[亮点词汇]①stimulate激发②concentrateon专心于……[高分句型]①Somestudentsthinkthatthiskindoflearningmethodisveryfreshandcanstimulatetheirinterestinlearning.（that引导的宾语从句）②Whentheirparentsgotowork,theyfeellonelyathomealone.（when引导的时间状语从句）三、电子邮件8．（2023·上海徐汇·统考一模）Writeatleast60wordsaccordingtothegivensituation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）。假设你是Joe，你校校报正在通过邮件评选最受欢迎的一个栏目（section）。备选栏目如下：·Schoolsports·Wordgamesandcrosswordpuzzles·Schoolclubs·BookorFilmreviews·Poemsbystudents请给校报写封邮件，谈谈你的选择，并简要说明理由。注意：1.信中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearEditor,I’mgladtohearthatyouareselectingthemostpopularsection.Fromthepointofmyview,myfavoriteoneistheSchoolsports.Thereareseveralreasonswhichcanaccountformyopinionasbelow.Firstofall,everyteenagerhashisownsportsidol.Inthiscolumn,wecangetthelatestsportsinformationintime.Secondly,inthiscolumn,wecanoftengetsomesportssuggestions,whichwillhelpstudentstoarrangesportsreasonablyduringschool.Yours,Joe【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：要求根据题目要求谈谈你喜欢的栏目及原因。不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。[写作步骤]第一步，首先介绍校报正在通过邮件评选最受欢迎的一个栏目的消息；第二步，谈谈你最喜欢哪个栏目；第三步，谈谈你选择这个栏目的理由。[亮点词汇]①Fromthepointofmyview在我看来②Firstofall首先③helpsbtodosth帮助某人做某事[高分句型]①I’mgladtohearthatyouareselectingthemostpopularsection.（宾语从句）②Thereareseveralreasonswhichcanaccountformyopinionasbelow.（定语从句）四、看图作文9．（2023·上海杨浦·统考一模）LastFriday,Marywenttothenightmarket.Lookatthepicturesandwriteastoryinatleast80wordsonthetopicLuckyMary(上周五，Mary去了夜市。请根据图片提示，以《幸运的玛丽》为题，写一篇不少于80个单词的短文)写作提示及要求：①下列词汇你在写作的过程中可能会使用到：dartn.飞镖，teddybearn.玩具熊，gamestand游戏摊位。②关注图片传递的信息与图片之间的关联，适当增加对话或内心独白。③写作内容中不得出现真实姓名和校名。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：LuckyMaryLastFriday,Marywenttothenightmarket.Whileshewaswalkingaimlessly,shesawagamestandplayingdarts.Theprizewasateddybear.Marylikedthisteddybearverymuch.Shespenttenyuanplayingwithdarts.Playingthisgamewasnottoodifficultforher.Intheend,allthreeofherdartswerehit.Thegamestandownerwassurprised.Marywontheteddybear.Shewenthomewiththeteddybearhappily.How