专题10 书面表达（解析版）

专题10书面表达（2023•江苏连云港•中考真题）走进江苏，游历各地。众多外国友人暑期将参加“GoJiangsu”旅游活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图片及文字提示，以“WelcometoLianyungang”为题写一篇英语短文，邀请他们走进家乡连云港，品山海文化，游大圣故里。注意：（1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；（2）文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；（3）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。WelcometoLianyungangI’mLiHuafromLianyungang,Jiangsu.I’dliketorecommendmyhometowntoyou.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：WelcometoLianyungangI’mLiHuafromLianyungang,Jiangsu.I’dliketorecommendmyhometowntoyou.Lianyungangliesinthenorth-eastofJiangsu.It’sfamousformanyplacesofinterest.HereyoucanvisitHuaguoMountain,thehomeoftheMonkeyKing.YoucanalsogototheSumaBaytoenjoythebeautifulsea.It’scoolinsummer.Moreover,Lianyungangisacitywithrichculture.Localpeoplearefriendlyenoughtohelpyou.Remembertotryourlocalfood.I’msureyouwillenjoyit.Don’tmissLianyungangwhenyouattend“GoJiangsu”.Welcometoourhometown.We’relookingforwardtomeetingyousoon.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥，使文章连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，整体说明连云港的地理位置以及著名的景点；第二步，介绍连云港丰富的文化和当地的人们以及食物；第三步，最后邀请大家来连云港做客。[亮点词汇]①befamousfor因……而著名②moreover而且③lookforwardtodoing期待做[高分句型]Don’tmissLianyungangwhenyouattend“GoJiangsu”.（when引导的时间状语从句）（2023•江苏扬州•中考真题）为丰富校园生活，弘扬中华优秀传统文化，近期你校校报英语专栏举行了GettingclosetotraditionalChineseculture征文活动，请根据表格中的内容提示写一篇英语短文，向此专栏投稿，介绍中国传统手工艺（handicraft）风筝的历史、特征及其文化重要性，并分享你的看法。KitesHistoryMozi,intheWarringStatesperiodCharacteristicsmaterialsformakingkites:…shapesofkites:…Culturalimportancekites:●atraditionalChinesehandicraft●…kiteflying:●apopularoutdooractivity…●theWorldKiteCapital:Weifang,ShandongProvince…Yourideas…要求：（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；（3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。KitesKiteshaveahistoryofabout2,300yearsinChina._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：KitesKiteshaveahistoryofabout2,300yearsinChina.ThekitewasinventedbyamancalledMoziintheWarringStatesperiod.Hemadeabirdoutofwood.Itwasthefirstkiteinhistory.Later,hisstudentLuBanusedbambootomakekites.DuringtheEasternHanDynasty,withtheinventionofpaper,peoplebegantousepapertomakekites.Kiteshavealsobeguntotakeondifferentshapes,suchasairplanes,eaglesandsoon.TheWorldKiteCapitalisWeifang,ShandongProvince.Therearemanygrandkitecompetitionsheldthereeveryyear.Peopleallovertheworldwanttogothere.Flyingkitesisdeeplylovedbypeople.Itisaverypopularoutdooractivity.Everyweekend,Icanseemanypeopleflyingkitesinthepark.Theyplayhappily.Butthekitesweflynowareallboughtfromstores.Fewpeoplemaketheirownkites.IbelievethatasatraditionalChinesehandicraft,kitesshouldcontinuetobepasseddown.WeshouldprotecttraditionalChinesehandicrafts.【详解】[总体分析]①

题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②

时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③

提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍风筝的历史情况以及特点；第二步，介绍风筝的文化特点以及如今风筝的发展情况；第三步，最后提出自己的观点。[亮点词汇]①

withtheinventionofpaper随着纸的发明②

takeon呈现③

allovertheworld全世界[高分句型]①

IbelievethatasatraditionalChinesehandicraft,kitesshouldcontinuetobepasseddown.（宾语从句）②Butthekitesweflynowareallboughtfromstores.（定语从句）（2023•江苏苏州•中考真题）HappyHomeClub本期的主题是“HowtomakeSuzhoumorebeautiful”，你打算以“Startingfrommeandnow”为题向中外朋友介绍你的想法，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括：（1）触动你的一件事情；（2）这件事给你的启示；（3）你的倡议。注意：（1）词数：100左右。（2）内容完整（照抄阅读语篇不得分）（3）文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。Startingfrommeandnow__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：StartingfrommeandnowLastweekend,Iwenttothecityparkwithmyclassmates.Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.Wefeltverysadaboutthat.Thecityisourhome,soweshouldtryourbesttokeepthecityclean.Firstofall,weshouldprotectourenvironment.Don’tthrowrubbisharoundorspitanywhere.We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.Second,wearesupposedtobefriendlyandhelpfultoothers.Third,weoughttoobeythetrafficrules.Don’tridetoofastorplayonthestreet.Lastbutnotleast,remembertosaveenergy.Turnoffthelightsandtapsintime.Aslongaswetryourbestandstartingfrommeandnow,IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；③提示：要求根据题干中的提示介绍如何让自己的家乡变得更美，适当增加细节。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍触动你的一件事情以及这件事情给你的启示；第二步，为了使苏州变得更美，介绍你的倡议；第三步，书写结语。表达“希望家乡会更美丽”的愿望。[亮点词汇]①differentkindsof各种各样的②besupposedtodosth.应该做某事③remembertodosth.记得做某事④intime及时[高分句型]①Whenwegotthere,wewereamazedthatthereweredifferentkindsofrubbishontheground.（when引导时间状语从句）②We’dbetterplantmoretreestomaketheairclean.（“sb.hadbetterdosth.”表建议的句型）③IbelieveSuzhouwillbecomemoreandmorebeautiful.（宾语从句）（2023•江苏无锡•中考真题）青少年在成长过程中会遇到各种问题，为此《21世纪英文报》开设了TeensTalk专栏，倾听读者的心声，并由“少年之友”SigmundFriend予以回复。假设你是李华，最近也遇上了些烦心事，请给该专栏发一封英文邮件，讲述你的烦恼并寻求建议。注意事项：（1）邮件内容须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；（2）词数在100左右，邮件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；（3）邮件中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称。DearMr.Friend,I’mwritingtoyouabouttheproblemI’mfacingatthemoment.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】例文：DearMr.Friend,I’mwritingtoyouabouttheproblemI’mfacingatthemoment.ThesedaysI’mnothappy.Ialwaysarguewithmyparents.Theyonlycareaboutmyschoolwork.Thesummerholidayiscoming.Theyplantochooselotsofafter-schoolclassesforme.ButIdon’twanttotaketheseclassesanddon’twanttobesobusy.I’minterestedinpainting.Ijustwanttotakepaintinglessonsduringtheholiday.Theydisagreewithme.Idon’tknowwhattodo.AndhowcanIimprovetherelationshipwithmyparents?Canyougivemesomeadvice?I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourssincerely,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；②时态：时态为一般现在时；③提示：根据要求讲述自己的烦恼。注意不要遗漏要点。[写作步骤]第一步，点明自己遇到了问题。第二步，讲述自己的烦恼并寻求建议。第三步，书写结尾。[亮点词汇]①arguewith和某人争吵②careabout关心③takepaintinglessons上绘画课[高分句型]①Thesummerholidayiscoming.（现在进行时表示将来的动作）②Idon’tknowwhattodo.（疑问词+动词不定式）（2023•江苏徐州•中考真题）假定你是李华。你班交换留学生Simon即将返校，他对“校园科技周”非常感兴趣，他写了一封邮件向你询问相关信息，请你根据邮件内容和所给提示写封回信。注意：1.词数90左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.邮件需包括所给要点，可适当增加细节，使内容完整通顺；3.邮件中不得泄露个人信息；4.请按照如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。HiSimon,I’mveryhappytotellyouaboutourSchoolTechnologyWeek.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’msureyouwillenjoytheTechnologyWeek.LiHua【答案】例文：HiSimon,I’mveryhappytotellyouaboutourSchoolTechnologyWeek.ItwillbeheldintheNo.2buildingintwoweeks.TherearemanydifferentkindsofactivitiesintheWeek.First,youcanwatchsciencefictionfilmslikeTheWanderingEarth.Second,somestudentswilltellstoriesaboutscientistslikeDengJiaxian.What’smore,ourschoolwillsharethelatestnewsabouttechnologyandshowcreativeideasaboutrobots.Youarecrazyaboutrobots,right?Great,therearesomesmartrobotshowsyoucantakepartinhere.Thenyoucanseeandexperiencehowexcellenttheyare.I’msureyouwillenjoytheTechnologyWeek.LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，根据开头，介绍科技周开始的时间；第二步，根据Simon的问题提示，介绍科技周的活动；第三步，介绍Simon感兴趣的机器人活动。[亮点词汇]①differentkindsof不同种类的②takepartin参加[高分句型]Thenyoucanseeandexperiencehowexcellenttheyare.（感叹句作宾语）（2023•江苏宿迁•中考真题）“双减”政策推行之后，中学生的学习及生活发生了很大的变化。为了达成“五育”并举的培养目标，你校开展了丰富的延时服务课程并鼓励学生参与志愿服务。某报社想了解这方面的情况。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示写一封英文邮件进行简单介绍。延时服务参加各种各样的课程，比如音乐、篮球等；……（你的情况）志愿服务帮助他人解决问题；……（举例说明）你的收获提升能力，更加自信；……（补充1-2点）注意事项：1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。DearEditor,Iamgladtotellyousomethingabouttheafter-schoolservicesinourschoolandthevoluntaryworkwedo.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes,LiHua【答案】例文DearEditor,Iamgladtotellyousomethingabouttheafter-schoolservicesinourschoolandthevoluntaryworkwedo.Ourschoolprovidesvariousafter-schoolservices,suchasmusic,basketball,andmore.IenjoytakingpartintheartclubwhereIcanexpressmycreativity.Inadditiontotheseservices,wealsohaveopportunitiesforvoluntarywork.Byhelpingotherssolveproblemsandassistingincommunityserviceevents,wegainvaluableexperienceanddevelopimportantskills.Throughtheseactivities,Ihavegainedconfidenceandimprovedmyabilities.Ibelievethattheseexperienceswillbenefitmegreatlyinthefuture.Bestwishes,LiHua【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍学校的课后服务和志愿工作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，引出对课后服务和志愿工作的介绍；第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从课后服务和志愿工作两个方面重点介绍；第三步，表达自己的收获。[亮点词汇]①suchas例如②takepartin参加③Inadditionto另外④inthefuture在未来[高分句型]①Byhelpingotherssolveproblemsandassistingincommunityserviceevents,wegainvaluableexperienceanddevelopimportantskills.（动名词作宾语）②Ibelievethattheseexperienceswillbenefitmegreatlyinthefuture.（that引导的宾语从句）（2023•江苏泰州•中考真题）泰州是著名的教育之乡。你的英国朋友想了解泰州的教育，想请你用英语介绍一下，你列出如下提纲：1.良好的教育环境（校园美丽，名人众多……写1-2点）；2.优秀的老师；3.自己的学习表现。要求：1.包含所有要点，表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，可适当拓展；2.不得使用真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息；3.词数100左右。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文IamproudtobeastudentinTaizhou.Thereisagoodeducationalenvironment.Thecampushereisbeautiful,andtherearemanycelebrities,suchasHuYuan,WangAnshiandsoon.Therearealsomanylibrariesandfamousuniversities.Theteachersherearealsoexcellent.Mostofthemareteacherswhograduatedfromfamousuniversities,andsomeevenreturnedfromstudyingabroad.Theyhaveadvancedteachingmethodsandteachingideas.Theyalsoproducealargenumberofexcellentstudents.Inadditiontolearningculturalknowledge,Ialsojoinmanyclubs,suchasbasketballclub,chessclub,dancingclubandsoon.HereInotonlylearnculturalknowledge,butalsolearnalotoflifephilosophy.【详解】[总体分析]①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容介绍泰州的教育，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。[写作步骤]第一步，介绍泰州良好的教育环境；第二步，介绍优秀的老师；第三步，介绍自己的学习表现。[亮点词汇]①beproudof为……感到自豪②graduatefrom毕业于③alargenumberof许多[高分句型]①Mostofthemareteacherswhograduatedfromfamousuniversities,andsomeevenreturnedfromstudyingabroad.（who引导的定语从句）②HereInotonlylearnculturalknowledge,butalsolearnalotoflifephilosophy.（notonly...butalso...连接并列结构）（2023•江苏镇江•中考真题）假如你是李华，你们学校整理出一块空地，将用于拓宽学生活动和实践的空间。校英语报登载了校方初拟的两种方案，就这块空地建设文化角还是菜园征求意见。请根据提示给校报写一封信谈谈你的想法和建议。ACultureCornerAVegetableGarden●displayartworks●shareideasandfeelings●holdactivities（fashionshows,…）●developasenseofbeauty●…●workwithclassmates●learnfarmingskills●harvestvegetables（tomatoes,…）●formthehabitoflabour（劳动）●…要求：1.所写内容必须包括一种方案的所有信息，可适当发挥；2.对你所选择的方案说明理由，并对其提出建议；3.文章不少于90词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。DearSir/Madam,I’mhappytohearthatthereisanemptyareainourschoolforbuildingaCultureCorneroraVegetableGarden.Inmyopinion,it’sbetterto______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________