【课件】读后续写课件-2024-2025学年高一英语上学期作文复习专项

ContinuationWriting读后续写LearningObjectiveslearntoanalysetheplotofthegivenpassage

Usethetwogivensentencesandsomestrategiestooutlinepossibleplots.Finisha100wordscontinuationwritinginclass

读后续写25分，提供一段350词左右的语言材料(多为故事类文章或夹叙夹议类文章)，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语进行续写，为其补充一篇150词左右，与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节合理和结构完整的短文。高考题型概述评分标准读后续写5大步骤（3读＋2写）Step1:Readforthebasicinformation

(when,where,who,what,how,why)Step2:Readforthemainplot,emotionandthemeStep3:ReadforthelanguageStep4:Inferthe

development(theplot,thegiventwosentences)Step5:Continue

andpolishthestory(therequirementsandcriteria)读基本信息读主要情节,找隐含主题

读文章所用语言特点、写作风格根据续写段落开头，推断故事发展走向(紧扣主题)完成续写(根据要求)＋润色(根据评分标准)阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成篇完整的短文。"Timetogetup.It'syourbirthday."Alexopenedhiseyesandlookedup.Hisparentswere

standingnexttohisbedholdingabreakfastmuffin（松饼）."Youcandoanythingyouwant

today,"

saidhismum.Hejumpeduptogetdressedasquicklyashecould,alreadyimaginingwhatkindofdayhewouldhave

atthebeach.Hehadalwaysdreamedaboutplayinginthesandandjumpinginthewaves.llenearlytripped（绊倒）asherandownthestairsonhiswaytothekitchen.Alex'sdadaskedhimwhathewantedtodotoday."Thebeach,"heshoutedwithjoy.Theexpressiononhismum'sfacechangedfromjoytosadness.Sheknewtheoneplacethatherhusbandwouldnotgowasthebeach.WhenhehadbeenayoungboyofAlex'sage,hehadaterrifyingexperienceat

thebeach.Alex'sdadshookoffhisinitial（最初的）shockofhearinghisson'splan."Howaboutwegotothezooinstead?"hesuggested."Thebeachisovertwohoursaway."“ButDad,IvewantedtogotothebeachmyWHOLELife，”Alexpleaded（央求）•"Son,I'msorry,butwearenotgoingtothebeachandthat'sfinal."Theyendedupdrivingtothezoo.Itwasanexcitingday,butAlexcouldnotgetthebeachoutofhismind.Helongedtobuildasandcastle,swimintheoceanandchasetheincomingandoutgoingwaves.ThebeachseemedlikethebestplaceonEarth.Overthenextfewweeks,hedreamedaboutitalmosteverynight.Anyfreemomenthehadwasspentfillinghisroomwithpicturesanddrawingsofbeaches.Herepeatedlypleadedwithhismumtohelphimconvincehisdadtotakethemtothebeach.Eachtimesheexplainedthattheycoulddootherthingsasafamily,justnotthebeach.Onenight,Alexreceivedwhathethoughtwasgoodnews.Hisdadwasgoingonathree-daybusinesstripthenextday."Thisisanopportunity,"hethoughttohimself.注意：续写词数应为150个左右。Thenextmorning,seeinghisdadgetintothetaxi,Alexrantohismother._________________Hourslater,asAlexlookedoutofthefrontwindowofthecar,hiseyeswidenedandhisjawdropped._________________step1ReadforbasicinformationWho

When

Where

What

Why

How....Alexhisparents

Alex’sbirthdayoverthenextfewweeksonenightathome

Alexwantedtogotothebeachbuthisfatherrefused.

WhenhisfatherhadbeenayoungboyofAlex'sage,hehadaterrifyingexperienceat

thebeach.Inwhatorderisthematerialdeveloped?Becauseofhisfather’sterrifyingexperience,hisparentsrefusedhisplan.

DevelopmentBeginningAlexwantedtogotothebeachashisgift.

Climax?EndingHIsfatherhadabusinesstrip.Laterdevelopment1._______

happy

2.__________

3.___________

hopefuldisappointedexciteddisappointed4.___________

hopefulstep2ReadforplotandemotionTheyendedupdrivingtothezoo,butAlexstilldreamedaboutgoingtothebeachstep3Readforlanguageusefulphrasesgetdressed

dreamabout/of

endup

onone’swayto

longto

step4InferthedevelopmentThenextmorning,seeinghisdadgetintothetaxi,Alexrantohismother._________________Hourslater,asAlexlookedoutofthefrontwindowofthecar,hiseyeswidenedandhisjawdropped._________________

DidAlexgotothebeach?Howdoyouknow?Thenextmorning,seeinghisdadgetintothetaxi,Alexrantohismother._________________persuade\requesthismothertothebeachhismotheragreed

HowdidAlexpersuadehismothertoagreehisrequest?Alex’saction\words--hismother’sreactionHourslater,asAlexlookedoutofthefrontwindowofthecar,hiseyeswidenedandhisjawdropped._________________Whatmadehimsurprised?Whatdidhedoandhesaywhenhemetthesurprise?Alex’saction\words--hisfather’sreactionEnding---正能量hisfatherovercamehisfearTheyhadahappytimethatdayAlexrealizedhisdreampresentation作品展示Thenextmorning,seeinghisdadgetintothetaxi,Alexrantohismother.

Helookedathismothereagerlyandpleaded:"Mum,Ireallywanttogotothebeach.Please!"体现渴望与期盼Alex'smotherknewthat

goingtothebeachwasherson'sdream,butshedidn'twanttodoitwithouttellingherhusband.Alexsawhismother'shesitationandthensaid,"Mum,Dadisnotathome,sohedoesn'thavetoworryaboutgoingtothebeachwithus."WithAlex'spersuasion,hismotherfinallyagreedtotakehimtothebeach.Hourslater,asAlexlookedoutofthefrontwindowofthecar,hiseyeswidenedandhisjawdropped.Itwashisfatherwhowaswaitingforthem.强调句Whenthecarstopped,hequicklygotoutofthe

carandrushedtohisfather,动作描写askinganxiously,"D