高三英语一轮复习读后续写思路写作课件

高考读后续写

ContinuationWritingII

learningobjectives(1)knowthebasicelementsofthegivenpassage;(2)masterthestepsofwritingacontinuationwriting;(3)writeagoodendingtothepassage.1.beconsumed/overwhelmedwithguilt

深感内疚2.beashamedofoneself

为自己感到羞愧3.guiltiswrittenalloverone’sface

满脸愧疚4.lower/hang/dropone’sheadinembarrassment

尴尬地低下头5.Burdenedbyasenseofguiltn.懊悔；悔恨；自责；1.Janethoughtregretfully,withtearswellingupinhereyes.简后悔地想，眼里涌出了泪水。2.Iwasovercomebyawaveofguiltandwordsfailedtoexpressmyregret.我被一阵内疚所压倒，言语无法表达我的遗憾。3.Filledwithguilt,IrushedouttoapologizetoTom.我满怀内疚，冲出去向汤姆道歉。候课记背

读后续写:

提供一篇350词以内的材料，要求考生依据材料内容、所给段落开头语及所标关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。（满分25分）01原文一致原则内容要前后衔接，上下连贯，语言表达风格一致。02曲折性原则凡是故事都应有跌宕起伏，其中人物会遇到困难或问题，但最终能解决。03正能量原则故事内容一定要正能量，弘扬社会主义核心价值观。如迷路了但最终一定回到了家；失败了或遇到困难了，但最终一定成功了；吵架了但最后一定是言归于好，和睦相处；犯错了，最后一定会改过自新，重新做人；贼逃了，最后一定是绳之以法，等。三大原则Writing（续写故事）Predicting（预测发展）Reading（读取信息）Polishing（润色定稿）细节:

动作，情感（感受），对话，

表情，独白，外貌，环境，…过渡:then,but,therefore,however,unfortunately,obviously,infact,tohisjoy,nextday,…丰富的句子结构:with复合结构,非谓语动词“V-ing/-ed/todo”做状语，never,so等引导的倒装句,三大从句，It形式主语句，虚拟语气….

无语法拼写错误,词汇、句型的打磨升级。情感连贯,符合逻辑,衔接自然,与原文融洽度高logical+vivid+coherent+correct写作思路与步骤Reading（读取信息）Basicinformation(基本信息):who;when;where;what;why;how第一段（逆向思维）：结合原文，由第一段首句和第二段首句推出故事情节，列出要点第二段:结合上文，根据第二段首句展开内容，列出要点Tips:1.充分利用原文提示，回扣原文2.动作，情感（感受），对话，表情，环境3.积极的、正能量的、温暖的新高考卷Writing五步曲一个主题：故事的完整性（思路不要偏，不要天马行空的想象）两个关键：两端首句关键词

三个衔接：情节之间的衔接，情节越简单越好，推进要简洁四个细节：动作+心理+情感+对话（环境）五个注意：逻辑、时态、词汇、句式、书写Afewyearsago,thecompanyIworkedforsentmywifeandmetoliveinNewYorkforayear.I’vealwayslovedrunning,soIwasreallyhappywhenIfoundoutIlivednexttoCentralPark.ThismeantthateverymorningIcouldgoforarunbeforeIwenttowork.Becausealotofpeoplehadtoldmetobecarefulofrobbers(抢劫犯)inthepark,sousuallyIdidn’ttakeanythingwithme.HowcouldtheyrobmeifIdidn’thaveanything?Butonemorning,mywifegavemea$10billandaskedmetobuysomebreadontheway.Itwasabeautifulmorningandtheparkwasquietwithveryfewpeoplewalkingorjogging(慢跑)around.WhileIwasrunningthroughthepark,anotherjoggerknockedintome.Heapologizedandcontinuedrunning.Forawhile,Ididn’tthinktoomuchofit.However,whenInoticedthewidepathwhereIwasrunning,Ithoughtitwaskindofstrange.Thewarningofrobbersintheparkoccurredtome.“Itcouldhavebeenarobber!”Isuddenlybecamealarmed(警惕的),soIcheckedmypocketandfoundthatthemoneywasmissing.

Step1Reading

Withoutthinkingtwice,Iranafterthatjogger.Ifinallycaughtupandheldhimbythearm.Ishouted,“Givemethe$10bill!Now!”Iamnotusuallyahot-headed(性急的)person,butIgotreallyangrythistime.Icouldn’tbelievetherobberywasactuallyhappeningtome.Filledwithanger,Ishookmyfistathim.Thisseemedtofrightenhim.Hequicklyputhishandinhispocketandgavemethemoney.Thenheranawayasfastashecould.Iboughtthebreadandwenthome.AssoonasIgothome,Icouldn’twaittotellmywifemystory.“Youwon’tbelievewhathappenedtome,”Istartedwithpride.Sheimmediatelystoppedme,“Iknow,youleftthemoneyforthebreadonthekitchentable.”abeautifulmorning

WhenWhereCentralPark；homeWhoI,mywife，anotherjoggerMainIdeamywifegavemea$10billandaskedmetobuysomebreadontheway......WhatWhyBecausealotofpeoplehadtoldmetobecarefulofrobbers(抢劫犯)intheparkHowSheimmediatelystoppedme,“Iknow,youleftthemoneyforthebreadonthekitchentable.”

Step1Reading

Para1:Lookingatthemoneyonthetable,Istoodthere,shocked.Para2:Forseveraldays,Iwaitedatthesamespot(地点).

Tip1:第一段（逆向思维）：结合原文，由第一段首句和第二段首句推出故事情节，列出要点第二段:结合上文，根据第二段首句展开内容，列出要点Tip2:充分利用原文提示,回扣原文(词汇、细节）Tip3:从人物的动作，情感（感受），对话，表情等展开预测。Tip4:升华主题，主旨(落脚点）应该是积极的，温暖的，正能量的

Step2Predicting(预测发展)

作者深感内疚——决定找机会对那个人道歉——再次去到公园但没有找到那个人等到了那个人——道歉和归还了十美元——升华主题：了解真相之前判断一个人还为时过早Lookingatthemoneyonthetable,Istoodthere,shocked.Iwasconsumed/overwhelmedwithguilt我深感内疚.“HowcouldIbesorudetohimwithoutknowingthetruth?”Istillremembered

that

terrorwaswrittenalloverhisface

whenIscaredhimawaylikeamonster当我像个怪兽一样吓跑他时，他满脸恐惧.Ideterminedtofindachancetoapologizetohim我决定找机会向他道歉.Thenextmorning,Igotupandwenttotheparkasusual像往常一样去到公园,butnotforjogging.Ijusthungaround到处晃悠,attemptingtocomeacrosshim,butinvain尝试偶遇他，但是徒劳无功.Forseveraldays,Iwaitedatthesamespot.Buttomydisappointment,hedidn'tturnup令我失望的是，他没有出现.ItwasalmostaweeklaterbeforeIfinallyspottedhimagain我最终再次发现了他.I,the“robber”,gavethe$10billbacktohimandsaidsorrytohimagainandagain.Fortunately,heforgavemeforwhatIhaddonetohim幸运的是，他原谅了我对他做的事情andsaid,“Oh,itdoesn'tmatter.”Manyyearshavepassed,butIwasstillovercomebyawaveofshame我被一阵羞愧所压倒.FromtheexperienceIhavelearnedthatitistooearlytojudgeapersonbeforeyouknowthetruth.Lookingatthemoneyonthetable,Istoodthere,shocked.Iwasconsumed/overwhelmedwithguilt深感内疚.“HowcouldIbesorudetohimwithoutknowingthetruth?”Istillrememberthatterrorwaswrittenalloverhisface满脸恐惧whenIscaredhimaway

likeamonster像个怪兽一样吓跑他.Ideterminedtofindachancetoapologizetohim向他道歉.Thenextmorning,Igotupandwenttotheparkasusual,butnotforjogging.Ijusthungaround到处晃悠

,attemptingtocomeacrosshim,butinvain徒劳无功.For