Unit 4 Natural disasters-【同步写作课】高一英语单元写作深度指导（人教版2019必修第一册）

必修第一册Unit4单元写作指导与演练WriteaSummary单元写作早知道写作任务本单元的写作任务是写一篇文章概要。概要写作是新高考写作的题型的类型之一。其中高考改革试验区在2018年11月和2019年6月分别实施过两次。除了这两次之外，到2023年6月，概要写作都没有再使用过。但是概要写作作为高考设题的一种形式，并没有明确排除。同时，对文章进行概要写作是英语学习的一个重要方面，对帮助学生理解文章的框架，结构和主旨有很重要的意义，因此在平时的学习中，我们还是要重视概要写作。概要写作要求概要写作的考查目标是：1.对原文主旨及要点的理解和呈现情况;2.概括要点时应用语法结构和词汇的准确性;3.概要文章上下文的连贯性。概要写作方法1.准确理解文章结构和主旨。概要写作的关键是把握文章的结构和主旨。考试所提供的文章，一般是结构比较清楚的议论文或说明文。此类文章的特点是中心突出，结构明确。文章各个段落的设置要以主旨为中心，因此，从整体来理解文章，准确把握文章的主旨和结构是概要写作的关键。2.以自然段为基础概括要点。概要写作的实质就是概括自然段的主要内容。一般来讲，一个自然段自成一个要点。以自然段为基础概括要点就是概要写作的关键所做。当然，以自然段为基础概括并不是说一个自然段一定是一个要点。也有可能几个自然段说明一个要点，或一个自然段包含数个要点。所以，判断其要点的呈现情况，最关键的还是要理解文章。3.抓住主要信息，忽略次要细节。说明文和议论文为了表达观点和说明信息，首先会有主要观点，事实或论点。而后根据需要辅以具体的支持性的细节性的信息，如例举数字，举例等。在概要写作中，我们要呈现关键信息，忽略补充和辅助信息。如，4.利用高频词和核心词概括要点。概要写作的文章主旨明确，核心内容突出。因此，文章会出现意义比较集中的高频词或核心词。在阅读文章的时候，要善于发现核心词和高频词。这些词汇是概要的基础和核心。5.使用正确的时态。概要写作的体裁一般是说明文和议论文。其目的是介绍和论证，因此内容都是事实或论点，所以其时态一般都使用用一般时或完成时，慎用过去时。同时，一定要注意时态的一致性。6.注意句式和语法结构的丰富性。概要写作对考生表达的书面化程度要求比较高，因此要注意写作时使用丰富的语言形式。可以酌情选择使用从句，非谓语等结构。但句子结构不可过长，也不要刻意使用太过复杂的句子结构。句子之间也要注意使用合适的连接词。连接词的使用以合适简洁为主，不要生硬。尽量避免如firstly,secondly,thirdly这样的连接词。注意掌握正确的写作程序：认真阅读原文，掌握原文的段落主旨，并标出文章的高频词，核心词。整体理解文章的结构。确保对文章各个段落之间的理解逻辑合理。写出各段的基本段意。并再次比较各段的逻辑关系是否合理。对各段的要点进行美化。使用非谓语动词，定语从句，名词性从句等进行润色。综合整个文章，在合适的地方使用关联词。认真誊写到答题卷。常用表达1．Thisarticle/passagemainlytellsus...2．Thispassagemainlydealswith/discusses/explores...3．Thisarticlefocusesonthe...4．Inthispassage(about...)，theauthor...5．Thispaperprovides/givesanoverviewof...6．Theauthorbegantheessay/passagebytelling/presenting...8.First/Firstly/Inthebeginning/Inthefirstpart，theauthorargues/explains/mentions/states/pointsout(that)．..9．Secondly/Next/Furtheron/Then/Inthenextpart/Inthemainpart，theauthorgoesonwith...10．Finally，theauthorstressesthat...本单元写作要求同学们能用所学的有关概要写作的知识给第50页的文章写一篇概要写作。内容表述结构设计第一部分介绍地震发生前的现象。Forseveraldays,strangethingsoccurredinthecountrysideofnortheasterHebei.此部分一般用一个句子即可。第二部分为地震的具体信息，包括地震发生的时间以及造成的危害。Thecitywasgreatlyaffectedandnearlydestroyed.Manypeoplewerekilledorinjured.可以用简单句，复合句，非谓语等结构对多个信息进行综合。第三部分为重建的描述。Soldiersandmedicalworkersarrivedtofindsurvivorsandhelpthepeoplewhohadlosteverything.Withstrongsupportfromthegovernmentandthetirelesseffortsofthepeople,anewTangshanwasbuilt.此处可以用过渡句引出下面的内容。具体内容表述可以用多种句式结构，注意句式结构不要重复。【小试牛刀】Forseveraldays,strangethingsoccurredinthecountrysideofnortheasterHebei.Then,on28July1976,anearthquakehitTangshancity.Thecitywasgreatlyaffectedandnearlydestroyed.Manypeoplewerekilledorinjured.Therescueworkbegansoonafterthequakes.Soldiersandmedicalworkersarrivedtofindsurvivorsandhelpthepeoplewhohadlosteverything.Withstrongsupportfromthegovernmentandthetirelesseffortsofthepeople,anewTangshanwasbuilt.阅读下面短文.根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。（2019年6月高考改革试验区卷)Parentseverywherepraisetheirkids.JennBerman,authorofTheAtoZGuidetoRaisingHappyandConfidentKids,says,“We’vegonetotheoppositeextremeofafewdecadesagowhenparentstendedtobemorestrict.”Bygivingkidsalotofpraise,parentsthinkthey’rebuildingtheirchildren’sconfidence,when,infact,itmaybejusttheopposite.Toomuchpraisecanbackfireand,whengiveninawaythat’sinsincere,makekidsafraidtotrynewthingsortakeariskforfearofnotbeingabletostayontopwheretheirparents’praisehasputthem.Still,don’tgotoofarintheotherdirection.Notgivingenoughpraisecanbejustasdamagingasgivingtoomuch.Kidswillfeellikethey’renotgoodenoughorthatyoudon’tcareand,asaresult,mayseenopointintryinghardfortheiraccomplishments.Sowhatistherightamountofpraise?Expertssaythatthequalityofpraiseismoreimportantthanthequantity.Ifpraiseissincereandfocusedontheeffortnottheoutcome,youcangiveitasoftenasyourchilddoessomethingthatdeservesaverbalreward.“Weshouldespeciallyrecognizeourchildren’seffortstopushthemselvesandworkhardtoachieveagoal,”saysDonhue,authorofParentingWithoutFear:LettingGoofWorryandFocusingonWhatReallyMatters.“Onethingtorememberisthatit’stheprocessnottheendproductthatmatters.”Yoursonmaynotbethebestbasketballplayeronhisteam.Butifhe’soutthereeverydayandplayinghard,youshouldpraisehiseffortregardlessofwhetherhisteamwinsorloses.Praisingtheeffortandnottheoutcomecanalsomeanrecognizingyourchildwhenshehasworkedhardtocleantheyard,cookdinner,orfinishabookreport.Butwhateveritis,praiseshouldbegivenonacase-by-casebasisandbeproportionate(相称的)totheamountofeffortyourchildhasputintoit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________审题本文的要求是对一篇有关表扬孩子方法探讨的议论文写一篇概要写作。写作时要注意：1．文体：议论文的摘要。2．时态：文章论述的是客观现实的问题，因此以一般过去时为主。3．人称：为了让我们的论述更有亲和力，应以第一人称为主体时态。谋篇文章第一段指出过度的表扬不利于孩子的成长。第二段认为不表扬孩子也不利孩子的成长。第三段指出了表扬的重点是要关注过程而非结果。第四段更进一步陈述我们要表扬孩子的努力过程，不必太过关注结果。在概要写作中要包含以上内容。遣词造句【核心词汇】1.praise表扬2.oppositeeffects相反的结果3.focusonprocess关注过程4.product结果5.regardlessof不管，不顾【连词成句】1.过度的表扬对孩子有负面对影响。Toomuchpraiseorpraiseinawrongwaymayhaveoppositeeffectsonchildren.2.我们的表扬要聚焦于过程而不是结果。Ourpraiseshouldfocusonprocessratherthanproduct.3.我们要以正确的方式表扬我们的孩子。Weshouldpraiseourkids’effortinaproperway.【句式升级】1.根据文章对第一句话进行信息拓展。Expertsbelievethattoomuchpraiseorpraiseinawrongwaymayhaveoppositeeffectsonchildren.2.对第三句进行高级句式提升。Whatweshouldpraiseisourkids’effortinaproperway,regardlessoftheresult.组句成篇根据原文内容，用适当的过渡词语和必要的扩展信息，写出一篇80词左右的概要写作。Expertsbelievethattoomuchpraiseorpraiseinawrongwaymayhaveoppositeeffectsonchildren.(要点1）Ontheotherhand,nopraisealsodoesharmtokids’development.(要点2）Togainbestresult,ourpraiseshouldfocusonprocessratherthanproduct.(要点3）Therefore，whatweshouldpraiseisourkids’effortinaproperway,regardlessoftheresult.(要点4）Writing1阅读下面短文.根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。It’sareallygoodideatovisitcollegesbeforeyouapplybecausetheirwebsitescanallstarttolookandsoundthesame.Nothingwillgiveyouthesenseofwhatitwillactuallybeliketoliveonacollegecampus(校园)likevisitingandseeingforyourselfthedorms,classroomsandathleticequipmentand,ofcourse,thestudents.Itseemsalittlecrazyoncesenioryearhitstofindthetimetovisitcollegecampuses,anditcanalsobepriceyiftheschoolsyouareapplyingtohappentobemorethanacarrideaway.Butkeepinmindthatyouaremakingadecisionaboutthenextfouryearsofyourlife,anddoalltheresearchyoucantomakesureyouaremakingtherightone.There’snoexcusenottovisittheschoolsinyourlocalarea.Infact,alotofcollegeapplicationsevenaskifyouhavevisitedcampus,andobviously,ifyouliveacrossthecountrythatwon’tbeasmuchofapossibility,butifyoulivenearby,gocheckitout!Ifcampusvisitsaren’tgoingtohappenbeforeyouapply,attheveryleastyoushouldfindsometimebetweenapplyingandgettingyouracceptanceletterstovisittheschoolsyou’dliketoattend.Itcansaveyoualotofheartacheifyouruleoutnowthethingsthatyoudon’tlikeaboutcertaincampuses,thingsthatyouwouldn’tknowunlessyouactuallyvisit.Now,iftimeandmoneyaremakingitimpossible,thencheckouttheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLive.It’sachancetochatonlinewithadmissionsofofficers,students,andcollegecounselors(顾问),anditwon’tcostyouapenny!Youcanregisterforitsonlinecollegefairat.Whilevisitinganonlinecollegefaircan’ttaketheplaceofanactualcampusvisit,itcanbeaveryusefultoolthatalongwithallyourotherresearchwillhelpyoumakeaninformeddecisionaboutwhichcollegesoruniversitiesyou’dliketoattend.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】Itisawisechoiceforastudenttopayapersonalvisittothecollegeyouareapplyingto，especiallytheonesthatareclosetoyou.Inorderavoidbeingregret,youshouldatleastvisitthecollegeyoudecidedtoattend.Ifalltheaboveisnotaffordable,itwillbehelpfultosearchtheonlinecollegefairsatCollegeWeekLivewhereyoucangetnecessaryinformationneeded.Writing2.阅读下面短文.根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Withbusylives,itcanbehardtofindtimetovolunteer.However,thebenefitsofvolunteeringcanbeenormous.Themoreyouvolunteer,themorebenefitsyouwillexperience.Ofcourse,volunteeringdoesnothavetoinvolvealong-termcommitmentortakeahugeamountoftimeoutofyourbusydays.Givinginevensimplewayscanhelpthoseinneedandimproveyourhealthandhappiness.Itbringsyoubenefitsinanumberofways,butitdoesn’thavetotakeoveryourlifetobebeneficial.Oneofthebetter-knownbenefitsofvolunteeringistheimpactonthecommunity.Volunteeringallowsyoutoconnecttoyourcommunityandmakeitabetterplace.Evenhelpingoutwiththesmallesttaskscanmakearealdifferencetothelivesofpeople,animals,andorganizationsinneed.Andvolunteeringisatwo-waystreet.Itcanbenefityouandyourfamily.Dedicatingyourtimeasavolunteerhelpsyoumakenewfriends,expandyournetwork,andboostyoursocialskills.Volunteeringprovidesmanybenefitstobothmentalandphysicalhealth.Almosteveryonehastofightagainststress,anger,andanxiety.Thesocialcontactaspectofhelpingandworkingwithotherscanhaveaprofoundeffectonyouroverallpsychologicalwell-being.Nothingrelievesstressbetterthanameaningfulconnectiontoanotherperson.Workingwithpetsandotheranimalshasalsobeenshowntoimprovemoodandreducestressandanxiety.Volunteeringcanalsoadvanceyourcareer.Ifyou’reconsideringanewcareer,volunteeringcanhelpyougetexperienceinyourareaofinterestandmeetpeopleinthefield.Evenifyou’renotplanningonchangingcareers,volunteeringgivesyoutheopportunitytopracticeimportantskillsusedintheworkplace,suchasteamwork,communication,problemsolving,projectplanning,taskmanagement,andorganization.Youmightfeelmorecomfortablestretchingyourwingsatworkonceyou’vedevelopedtheseskillsinavolunteerpositionfirst.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】Bydoingvolunteeringwork,youcangiveahandtothosewhoareinneedofhelpanditdoesn'trequireagreatdealoftimeandenergy.Itnotonlyprovidehelptotheothersbutalsohelpsyoumakenewfriendsandimproveyoursocialskills.Itisalsogoodforyourmentalandphysicalhealth.Throughvoluntarywork,youcanalsoimproverelatedskillsandpromoteyourcareerdevelopment.Writing3.阅读下面短文.根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Feelinghungry?Ifyou'refeelingstarved,whatistheeasiestwaytosatisfyyourhunger?Manyofuswillreachforatakeawaymenuandordersomedeliciousbutpossiblyunhealthyfood.Andourincreasinglybusylifeaddstoourneedtobuyready-madefoodonthegoordeliveredtoourhome.Eatingoptionsareendless,andnewtechnologymeanswecanfeedourdesireatthepushofabutton.Takeawaydeliveryappsmakeorderingfoodquickandconvenient.Thisisespeciallythecaseduringtherecentcoronaviruscrisis,whenpeoplestuckathomewithnothingtocookorlackedtheskillstoprepareamealforthemselves.It'scalculatedthatintheUKalone,peopleeatthreemilliontakeawaymealsaday,andthethreebiggestdeliveryappstogetherofferachoiceof100cuisinesfrom60,000restaurants.AmeliaBrophy,HeadofUKDataProductsatYouGov,toldtheBBCthatitsresearch“suggeststhatthefrequencyoftakeawaysorderedisexpectedtoincreaseinthefuture."It'snowonderwearetempted（诱惑）toskipthegroceryshopping,avoidthekitchen,andtuckinto（大口吃）somethingthatsomeoneelsehasprepared.Butorderingadeepcrustpizza,aspicycurryoraboxofnoodles,cancomeatapricebothfinanciallyandtoourhealth.Eatingtoomuchprocessedandunhealthyfastfoodhaseffectonobesityandtheriskofdevelopingcertaindiseases.Childrenandadolescentswhoeatfastfoodatleastthreetimesaweekaremorelikelytodevelopeczema,accordingtoonestudy.Eczemaisaskinconditionthatcausespatchesofitchyskin.Ofcourse,reducingsalt,sugarandfatisonewaytomaketakeawayfoodhealthier.Yet,that'sfarfromenough.Thebestadviceyoumightwanttotakeistofindarecipebookandtrymakingyourownmeal.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】Withthefastpaceofmodernlife,busypeopletendtoordertakeawayfoodwhenhungry.Widefoodchoicesandeasyorderingaremakingitmoreandmorepopular.However,takeawayfoodactuallycostsusalotfinanciallyandalsodoesgreatharmtoourhealth.Althoughreducingsalt,sugarandfatcanmaketakeawayfoodalittlehealthier,youarestillstronglyadvisedtocookingyourmealsbyrecipe.Writing4.阅读下面短文.根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Aroundtheworld，musictherapy(疗法）isbeingusedtotreatdifferentmedicalconditionsandillnesses.Someofthewayspeopleusemusictherapyaretoreducepain,suchasin

childbirthorduringcancertreatments,ortostimulatebrainactivityafteraninjury.Music

therapyhasalsobeensuccessfulinaidingchildrentoovercomedisabilities.Childrencan

movetheirbodieswiththemusicandstampalongtothebeat.Whyismusicausefultherapy?Beingcomfortingandrelaxing，musicstimulatesourbrains.Werespondtothesoundsofmusicemotionallyandphysically.Thecomplexityof

music(thedifferenttempos,rhythms，melodiesandharmonies)provokes(激发）thebiggest

response.Thus,classicalmusicismosttypicallyusedfortherapiesduetocomplexsounds

andpatterns.Althoughraporhiphopmightbefuntolistento,ifsunlikelythatsuchstylesof

musicwouldproducethesamekindoftherapeuticeffect.Playingamusicalinstrumentrather

thansimplylisteningtomusiccanalsobetherapeuticforsomepeople，helpingrelievestress

andanxiety.Havescientistsbeenabletoprovethatmusiccanhealdiseases?Musichasbeenshowntoreducepainbyincreasingthereleaseofendorphins(内啡肽）.Endorphinsarethe

body'snaturalpainkillers,andwhenwelistentomusic,ourbrainsrespondbyreleasingthese

naturalpainkillers.Ithasalsobeenknowntocontributetothebraindevelopmentofthe

babieswhohavejustbeenbornandevenbabiesstillinthemother'swomb.Certaintypesof

musichavealsobeenfoundtolowerbloodpressureandslowaperson’sheartrate.Many

peoplearehopefulthatmusiccouldreplacetheneedforsomemedicinesthatarenormally

usedtotreatcertainillnesses.Atpresent,musictherapyisusedinavarietyofsettingssuchas

hospitals,rehabilitationcenters,nursinghomes,daycares,andschools.Althoughmusictherapyisnotyetconsideredamainstreamtreatment,itisrecognizedmoreandmoreasausefuladditiontotraditionaltreatment.Sonexttimeyouarefeelinglow

orstressedout,putonsomerelaxingmusicandletthemusichealyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】Musictherapyisausefulwaytotreatvariousillnessesworldwide，especiallyforchildren.Thereasonisthatcomfortingmusicorplayingmusicalinstrumentscanactivateourbrainandhelpease

pressureandanxiety.Musichasalreadybeenprovedtogeneratepositiveeffectsof

reducingpain,developingthebabies’brain,loweringbloodpressureandslowingheartrate.Thoughmusictherapyisnotadoptedwidely,itisregardedasaneffectivehelpertotraditionaltreatmentWriting5.阅读下面短文.根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Ifyouplantolearnaforeignlanguage,youmightthinkit'sgoingtobereallychallenging.You'veprobablyheardalotoftalksabouthowit'seasiertolearnlanguagesasayoungchild,andthatlearningasanadultcanbedifficult.Youmightevenknowfriendsorfamilymemberswhohavetriedtolearnaforeigntongueandfailed.That'sbecausetheyaresurroundedbythefailure.We'reheretocheeryouupwithsomegoodnewsandinspireyoutogetstarted.Canyoulearnlanguagesatanyage?Scientistsarealwayslearningabouthumanbrain.Decadesago,expertsbelievedthatthebraindevelopedduringchildhoodandthenstayedthatwayforlife.However,modernstudieshaveshownusthatthebrainhastheabilitytocontinuallyformnewneural(神经系统的)connectionsthroughoutadulthood.A2010Swedishstudytestedtwogroupsofpeople,oneintherangeofage21through30andanotherbetween65and80.Surprisingly,theyfoundnosignificantdifferencesinneuroplasticity(神经可塑性).Inotherwords,thissuggeststhatit'spossibleforyoutolearnnewthingsatanyage.Researchalsosuggests.thatlearninglanguagesthroughoutadulthoodimprovestheadultbrainingeneral.Ina2012Chinesestudy,expertslookedatagroupofadultswhowerelearningMandarin(普通话)overanine-monthperiod.Theyfoundthattheseadultsshowedimprovementinthepartofthebrainthatallowsneuralcellstocommunicate.Thebetteryourneuralcellscommunicate,theeasieritwillbeforyoutolearnnewthings.Whymayadultshaveaneasiertimelearning?Childrenmighthaveanaturallyhighdegreeofneuroplasticity,butthatdoesn'tmeanlearningisnecessarilyeasierforthem.Infact,adultbrainshaveanumberofgreatqualitiesthat,mightactuallymakelearningeasier,especiallyifyoutakeadvantageoffreelanguagelearningappslikeMondly.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】Itiscommonlythoughtthatlearningaforeignlanguageisreallyhardforadults.Butmodernstudieshaverevealedthatageisnotthelimitationtolearninginadulthood.Moreover,learningthroughoutadulthoodcanactivatebrainneuralcells,greatlybenefitingthebrain.Actually,adultslearnmoreeasilythankids,fortheirbrainshavemanycharacteristicsthatarebeneficialtolearning.Writing6.阅读下面短文.根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Anoldsayinggoesthatanearneighborisbetterthanadistantcousin.Thissayinghasfullyprovedthatneighborsaresosignificantinourlife.Inthepast,neighborshelpedoneanotherbuildhousesandclearfields.Theycouldoffertimelyhelpwhensomeonewasintrouble.Familiesdependedononeanotherforfriendshipandentertainment.Theysharedhappinessandsorrowfromtimetotime,whichbroughtaharmoniousatmosphere.However,nowadays,lackofcommunicationandinteractionbetweenneighborsisanorm.Closerelationshipbetweenneighborsisnotcommoninourcities.Afamilymaynotevenknowtheotherfamiliesthatlivenextdoortothem.WeliveinanageofmachinesandtheInternet,andeachfamilyhaveitsowncar,TVset,andwashingmachine.Peoplenolongerdependonneighborsasmuchastheyoncedid.MachinesandtheInternetkeeppeopleapart.Inourgrandparents’time,womenmetwhiletheyhungoutthewashing,andmenstoppedandtalkedwhiletheymowedtheirlawns.Today,theycan’thearanythingabovethenoiseoftheirpowerlawnmowers.Andwomenstayinsidewiththeirelectricaldryers.ChildrenareinsidewatchingtheirfavoriteTVshowsorplayingcomputergames.Istheideaofbeingagoodneighborold-fashioned?In1965,apowercuthitNewYorkCity,andmanythousandsofpeoplewerelefthelpless.Suddenlyeveryonesharedthesameproblem,andthelargestcitybecameagroupofeightmillionneighbors.Peoplewithcarsofferedridestothosewalking.Otherpeoplehelpeddirecttraffic.Trappedinelevators,peopleplayedwordgamesandhelpedkeepeachotheringoodspirit.Intimesoftrouble,peoplestilldependononeanother.Astimegoeson,peoplemayonceagainfeelthatbeingagoodneighborisimportant.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【佳作欣赏】Neighborsplayanimportantroleinourlife.(要点1）Inthepast,neighborshelpedoneanotherandlivedaharmoniouslife.（要点2）Admittedly,owingtodevicesandtheInternet,neighborsdriftapart,resultinginlittlecontactbetweeneachothernow.（要点3）Nevertheless,undergoingapowerfailureenabledresidentsinNewYorkCitytobecomeneighbors,andtheyassistedandencouragedoneanother,whichillustratesthesignificanceandpopularityofbeingagoodneighbor.（要点4）Writing7.阅读下面短文.根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Childrenarestartingtocarrycellphonesatyoungerages.Inarecentstudy,22%ofkidsinprimaryschoolreportedhavingtheirowncellphonecomparedwith60%oftweensand84%ofteens.Likemanyparents,youmaywonderwhetheryourchildisreadyforacellphone.Asyoumightimagine,therearedifferentattitudestowardsit.Manyparentsconsidersafetyasthemainreasonforgivingtheirchildacellphone.Theywanttobeabletoreachtheirchildwhenevertheyneedto.Theyalsowanttogivetheirchildthesecurityofbeingabletoreachthemwheneverheneedsto.Thisisespeciallytrueifyourchildishomealoneafterschoolorwalkshomealone,saysBarbaraGreenberg,PhD,aclinicalpsychologistinFairfieldCounty,CT.However,ifyourchildhasacellphone,hehasaccesstowebsitesthatmaybeinappropriate.Hemayseecontentthatisviolentandcouldberelatedtodeathorsex."Lotsofkidshavefantasiesintheirmindaboutthingstheydon'tunderstand,"Greenbergsays.There'salsotheissueofinadequatesleep,Greenbergsays."Kidswithcellphonesarelikelytostayawakelat