读后续写6大靓丽开头绝招和高分副词的使用+专项训练-2025年高考英语写作常考题型专项突破（解析版）

专题16读后续写6大靓丽开头绝招和高分副词的使用+对点精练

Lookingaroundhimcautiously,heslippedintotheroomandsoftlyclosedthedoor.他小心翼翼地环顾四周，溜进

了房间，轻轻地关上门。

Feelingdisappointed,Janehadtostayaloneforanothernight.简感至U失望，不得不再呆——夜。

Feelingrefreshed,shecontinuedtowalkalongthestreamtofindthewayout.她感到神清气爽，继续沿着小溪散

步，寻找出去的路。

第二招：形容词短语开头

Curioustoknowwhatwasinside,hetiptoedintothedarkcave.他好奇地想知道里面是什么，踮着脚尖走进了黑

暗的洞穴。

Unabletosayaword,hewasrootedtothespot.一句话也说不出来，他就楞在了原地。

Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.突然，一只小兔子跳到了我的马前。

AfraidthatImighthurtthelovelysmallcreature,Iautomaticallyletoutacrytostopmyhorse.我害怕我会伤害

这个可爱的小生物，我自动发出一声喊叫来阻止我的马。

文章给的提示句是：Wehadnoideawherewewereanditgotdark.我们不知道自己在哪里，天变黑了。

Exhaustedandhungry,Iwonderedifwecouldfindourwayback.我又累又饿，想知道我们能不能找至U回去的

路。

第三招：副词开头

Carefully,hesteppedoverallthebrokenglass他小心翼翼地踩过了所有的碎玻璃。

Joyfully,heskippedupthestreet.他很高兴地跳过了街道。

Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.立亥！J,一片黑暗笼罩着森林。

第四招：对话或独白开头

："Let'sseewhogetstherefirst!,?Rachelshouted,asshepedaledfastandzoomedpastJenny.“让我彳门看看谁先至!j

那里去！”瑞秋一边叫着，一边飞快地蹬着车从珍妮身边冲过去。

"Getintothecar."PaulshoutedatMac.“上车！”保罗对麦克喊道。

第五招：背景描写

Wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway（我们开车穿过了几个州，沿途看到了

很多好风景。）

Ilookedoutofthecarwindow,windingrivers,loftymountains,sunnybeachesanddeepvalleys,holdingme

entirelyintheirfascination.

我望着车窗外，蜿蜒的河流，高耸的山脉，阳光明媚的海滩和深邃的山谷，完全吸引了我的注意力。

第六招：行为描写

Furrystartedwagginghistailandrunningaroundincircleswhenhesawhismastertakingaleashoutfromthe

drawer.Furrywasallreadyforhiseveningwalk.

当他看到他的主人从抽屉里拿出一条皮带时，Furry开始摇，绕着圈跑。Furry准备好了晚上的散步。

Dadexchangedaglancewithme.WhynotcamptosatisfyMom?爸爸和我相互看了一眼。为什么不露营来满

足妈妈？

对点精练==汉译英

第一招：非谓语开头

1.听到外面的吵闹声，她悄悄地打开窗户往外看。

,shecautiouslyopenedthewindowandpeekedout.

2.感到紧张，他深吸了一口气，然后走进了面试室。

,hetookadeepbreathandthenwalkedintotheinterviewroom.

第二招：形容词短语开头

1.困惑不解，他再次审视了这个问题。

,heexaminedtheproblemonceagain.

2.对于即将到来的旅行充满兴奋，他开始收拾行李。

________________________________,hebegantopackhisluggage.

第三招：副词开头

1.耐心地，老师一遍又一遍地解释这个复杂的概念。

,theteacherexplainedthecomplexconceptoverandoveragain.

2.突然，一道闪电划破了夜空，接着是一声巨响。

,aflashoflightningcutthroughthenightsky,followedbyaloudcrash.

第四招：对话或独白开头

L“我们一定要赢这场比赛！”队长在比赛前鼓舞士气。

thecaptainexclaimed,boostingtheteam'smoralebeforethegame.

2.“请保持安静，”图书管理员轻声说，希望读者们不要说话。

thelibrarianwhispered,hopingthereaderswouldstoptalking.

第五招：背景描写

1.我们乘坐火车穿越了乡村，沿途看到了美丽的田野和宁静的村庄。

Wetookthetrainthroughthecountryside,seeing.

2.夜幕降临，街道上的路灯开始亮起，给城市增添了一种温馨的气氛。

Aseveningfell,thestreetlightsbegantoglow,.

第六招：行为描写

1.看到他的朋友在操场上挥手，汤姆立刻跑过去加入他们。

Seeinghisfriendwavingontheplayground,.

2.注意到门后有动静，她迅速转身，准备面对任何可能的危险。

答案：Noticingamovementbehindthedoor,sheanypossibledanger.

答案：

第一招：非谓语开头

1.听到外面的吵闹声，她悄悄地打开窗户往外看。

Hearingthenoiseoutside,shecautiouslyopenedthewindowandpeekedout.

3.感到紧张，他深吸了一口气，然后走进了面试室。

Feelingnervous,hetookadeepbreathandthenwalkedintotheinterviewroom.

第二招：形容词短语开头

1.1.困惑不解，他再次审视了这个问题。

Puzzledandunsure,heexaminedtheproblemonceagain.

2.对于即将到来的旅行充满兴奋，他开始收拾行李。

Eagerabouttheupcomingtrip,hebegantopackhisluggage.

第三招：副词开头

1.耐心地，老师一遍又一遍地解释这个复杂的概念。

Patiently,theteacherexplainedthecomplexconceptoverandoveragain.

2.突然，一道闪电划破了夜空，接着是一声巨响。

Suddenly,aflashoflightningcutthroughthenightsky,followedbyaloudcrash.

第四招：对话或独白开头

1.“我们一定要赢这场比赛！”队长在比赛前鼓舞士气。

"Wemustwinthismatch!'*thecaptainexclaimed,boostingtheteam'smoralebeforethegame.

2.“请保持安静，”图书管理员轻声说，希望读者们不要说话。

"Pleasekeepquiet,"thelibrarianwhispered,hopingthereaderswouldstoptalking.

第五招：背景描写

1.我们乘坐火车穿越了乡村，沿途看到了美丽的田野和宁静的村庄。

Wetookthetrainthroughthecountryside,seeingbeautifulfieldsandpeacefulvillagesalongtheway.

1.夜幕降临，街道上的路灯开始亮起，给城市增添了一种温馨的气氛。

Aseveningfell,thestreetlightsbegantoglow,addingawarmatmospheretothecity.

第六招：行为描写

3.看到他的朋友在操场上挥手，汤姆立刻跑过去加入他们。

Seeinghisfriendwavingontheplayground,Tomimmediatelyranovertojointhem.

4.注意到门后有动静，她迅速转身，准备面对任何可能的危险。

答案：Noticingamovementbehindthedoor,shequicklyturnedaround,readytofaceanypossibledanger.

高分副词使用

第一组高分副词

(有些单词在中文中意思差不多，在英文中还是有差异的，请同学们多查看英语解释和常用搭配。)

1.轻轻地;悄悄地(walk/closethedoor)quietly

2.轻轻地(sway/tremble)slightly

3.轻轻地softly(rain/wind)/gently(notviolently)

4.温柔地；和蔼地mildly/gently

5.谦虚地modestly

6.沉默地speechlessly/dumbly

7.感激地gratefully

8.迅速地swiftly

9.坚定地firmly/determinedly

10.勇敢地bravely

11.热情地；热烈地warmly

12.和蔼地kindly

13.渴望地；热切地eagerly

14.害羞地；内向地shyly

15.仔细地closely

16.专心地attentively

17.舒服地comfortably

18.考虑周到地；体谅地considerately

19.故意地deliberately

20.慷慨地generously

21.凶猛地；凶狠地；愤怒地fiercely

22.怀希望地hopefully

23.仁慈地mercifully

24.快乐地；愉快地

(smile)/brightly/cheerfully

25.绝望地；拼命地desperately

26.大声地loudly

27.友好地；礼貌地pleasantly

第一组高分副词的运用

1.Shegrinnedatme（害羞地）,hereyessparkling.

【答案】shyly

2.Theaudiencelistenedtothelecture.（专心地）

【答案】attentively

3.Hewas（故意地）tryingtoupsether.

【答案】deliberately

4.Thedetectivewatchedhim（仔细地）,waitingforareply.

【答案】closely

5.Hewastreated.（仁慈地）

【答案】mercifully

6.'Morning!,shecalled.（快乐地）

【答案】cheerfully/brightly

7.Ifyou'reallsitting（舒适地），thenHlbegin.

【答案】comfortably

8.Pleasegive（慷慨地）totherefugeefund.

【答案】generously

9.'Willtherebeanyfoodleftover?1heasked•（满怀希望地）

【答案】hopefully

10.Hetreatseveryoneequallyand.（体谅他人地）

【答案】considerately

11.Helookedround（拼命地）forsomeonetohelphim.

【答案】desperately

12.Hewalked（迅速地）towardshomedownthedarkstreet.

【答案】swiftly

13.Shesmiled.（愉快地）

【答案】brightly

14.'Tildothedishes,,9hesaid.（友好地；礼貌地）

【答案】pleasantly

15.（勇敢地）hewentintotheburninghouse

【答案】Bravely

16.Thetreesswayed（轻轻地）inthebreeze.

【答案】gently

17.Forafewsecondsshegazed（沉默地；一■声不啃地）athim.

【答案】silently

18.Terrygreetedthevisitor.（热情地）

【答案】enthusiastically

19."OfcourseIdon'tmind/sheanswered.（和蔼地；温柔地）

【答案】kindly

20.They're（渴望地）awaitingthebigday.

【答案】eagerly

21.Hestoodupsoundlesslyand（沉默地；一声不啃地）andglidedacrossthehallwayandthrougha

door.

【答案】silently

22.Heswayed（轻轻地）,asifabouttofall.

【答案】slightly

23.'Icanmanage,'shesaid.（坚定地）

【答案】firmly

24.11wasjustlucky,*hesaid.（谦虚地）

【答案】modestly

25.Theauthors（感激地）acknowledgeyourfinancialsupport.

【答案】gratefully

26.Rosashutthedoor.（轻轻地）

【答案】gently

27.Musicplayed（轻轻地）inthebackground.

【答案】softly

28.Thedoglookedather（凶孑艮地）.

【答案】fiercely

第二组高分副词

1.有礼貌地politely

2.真诚地sincerely

3.熟练地skilfully

4.欲睡地sleepily

5.伤心地sadly

6.宽容地tolerantly

7.考虑周到地、若有所思地thoughtfully

8.温顺地meekly

9.偷偷地（meet/leave）secretly

10.默默地silently

11.自信地confidently

12.耐心地patiently

13.自豪地proudly

14.热心地；热情地；非常感兴趣地enthusiastically

15.尽情地；由衷地；发自内心heartily

16.同情地sympathetically

17.赞美地；钦佩地admiringly

18.紧紧地tightly

19.小心谨慎地cautiously

20.好奇地curiously

21.严肃地；认真地seriously

22.痛苦地（身体）painfully

23.非常伤心地;痛苦地；悲痛地（心理）;sorrowfully

24.非常伤心失望地;怨恨地；bitterly

第二组高分副词的运用

1.Robynswallowed（痛苦地）.

【答案】painfully

2.'Whathaveyougotinthere?1Felixasked（好奇地）.

【答案】curiously

3.'CanIhelpyou?*sheasked（礼貌地）.

【答案】politely/pleasantly

4.'Alotofdamagehasalreadybeendone,*hesaid（悲痛地）.

【答案】sorrowfully

5.Weare（真诚地）gratefulforyourhelp.

【答案】sincerely

6.It'stimewetalked___________（严肃地）aboutourrelationship.

【答案】seriously

7.'Allright；saidNeil（温顺地），

【答案】meekly

8.Hecomplained（非常伤心失望地）abouthisexamgrades.

【答案】bitterly

9.Hestared（若有所思地）outthewindow.

【答案】thoughtfully

10.Hecanplaysoccer（熟练地）.

【答案】skilfully

11,Shelayonthesofa（恢恢欲睡地）.

【答案】sleepily

12.Wasshe（严重地）hurt?

【答案】seriously

13Hehad（考虑周到地）broughtwithhimsomefoodtoshare.

【答案】thoughtfully

14.Hereactsrather（容忍地）towardhisson'sjuvenilebehavior.

【答案】tolerantly

15.Hughlaughed（尽情地）atthejoke.

【答案】heartily

16Thechildren（偷偷地）wenttothemovieswhentheyweresupposedtobeatthelibrary.

【答案】sneakily

17.Theydiscussedthequestion-------------------（热心地、热烈地）•

【答案】enthusiastically

18.Wewelcomedher____________（热情地）•

【答案】warmly

19.Hesat（一言不发地）bythebed

【答案】silently

20.Carlasmiled（自信地）atthecameras.

【答案】confidently

21.Hewaited（耐心地）forKatherinetospeak.

【答案】patiently

22.Helookedathisprofessor（钦佩地）.

【答案】admiringly

23.She（自豪地）displayedherprize.

【答案】proudly

24.Thegovernmentresponded（谨慎地）tothemove.

【答案】cautiously

25.Helistenedtoher（同情地）andcomfortedher.

【答案】sympathetically

第三组高分副词

1.拼命地；发疯般地（work/run）crazily=likecrazy

2.随意地；漫不经心地；粗心大意地；马虎地carelessly

3.随意地；漫不经心地casually

4.狂跳（heart）beatwildly

5.欢呼cheerwildly

6.急切地四处张望lookwildlyaround

7.（态度）冷淡地coldly

8.猛烈地；剧烈地（shake/tremble/shiver）violently

9.无助地helplessly

10.尴尬地;难为情地awkwardly/embarrassedly;

11.笨拙地clumsily

12.茫然地blankly

13.贪婪地greedily

14.不情愿地reluctantly/unwillingly

15.怀疑地doubtfully

16.激动地、兴奋地excitedly

17.迟钝地；呆笨地dully

18.绝望地；无望地hopelessly

19.憎恨地hatefully

20.后悔地；遗憾地regretfully

21.粗鲁地；无礼地rudely

22.不安地；紧张地uneasily/restlessly/nervously

23.粗暴地（push/grabbedsb）roughly

24.严厉地（punish/say）severely/sternly

25.固执地stubbornly

第三组高分副词的运用

1.Hisheartwasbeating（疯狂地）•

【答案】wildly

2.Shenoddedherhead（呆呆地），thinkingaboutsomethingelse.

【答案】dully

3.Aftermuchthought,we（不情愿地）agreed.

［答案］reluctantly/unwillingly

4.“Well,whatcanIdoforyou?”heasked（冷淡地）•

【答案】coldly

5.Shewasrushingaround（拼命地）tryingtoputoutthefire.

【答案】madly/wildly

6.Shethrewhercoat（随意地）ontothesofa.

【答案】carelessly

7.Annastared（茫然地）atthewall.

【答案】blankly

8.Theywaitedthere（不安地）foralongtime.

【答案】uneasily/restlessly/nervously

9.Severalpeoplehavebeen（猛烈地）attackedinthesubway.

【答案】violently

10.Tmverysorryaboutyoursister,'hesaid-------------------（难为情地）•

【答案】awkwardly/embarrassedly

11.Martyalwaysbumpedintothings--------------------（笨拙地）.

【答案】clumsily

12.XImustdie,'hesaid（绝望地）•

【答案】hopelessly

13.Hegrabbedthebottleanddrank（贪婪地）.

【答案】greedily

14.'Stopbehavinglikeafool!!shesaid--------------------（严厉地）•

【答案】severely/stemly

15.Theywatched（无助地）astheirhomewentupinflames.

【答案】helplessly

16.Geraldshookhishead（怀疑地）•

【答案】doubtfully

17.Theaudiencecheered（欢呼）•

【答案】wildly

18.1wasstilltrembling（居U烈地）•

【答案】violently

19.Someonehad（粗心大意地；马虎地）leftawindowopen,

【答案】carelessly

20.6Youwillgetpunishedoneday,9hesaid（憎恨地）,

【答案】hatefully

21.Hepushedher（粗暴地）outoftheway.

【答案】roughly

22.'Idon'tcare,'shesaid（固执地）.

【答案】stubbornly

23.Shelooked（急切地）aroundforanescape.

【答案】eagerly

24.'Whatdoyouwant?*sheasked（粗鲁地）•

【答案】rudely

25.Peoplehadgatheredandweretalking（兴奋地）・

【答案】excitedly

26.(遗憾地),wedonothavetimetocontinuethisdiscussionnow.

【答案】Regrettably

第四组高分副词

1.犹豫不决地hesitantly

2.不耐烦地impatiently

3.无怜悯地；残忍地mercilessly/cruelly

4.闷闷不乐地moodily；unhappily

5.虚弱地；微弱地weakly

6.生气地angrily

7.害怕地；恐惧地(runaway/scream)fearfully

8.羡慕地；嫉妒地enviously

9.焦虑地、不安地、担忧地anxiously

10.有力地；坚定地firmly

11.担忧地；着急地worriedly

12.出乎意料地；意外地unexpectedly

13.困惑地confusedly

14.忠诚地；一心一意地devotedly

15.赞美地；钦佩地admiringly

16.失望地disappointedly

17.高兴地delightedly

18.感兴趣地interestedly

19.满意地contentedly

20.匆忙地hurriedly

21.疲