2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+少年逐梦：从自卑走向舞台之光+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习少年逐梦：从自卑走向舞台之光1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhenIwasaboy,IalwaysworeturtleneckshirtsbecauseIwassosensitiveandshy.Iworkedhardtoearnexceptionalmarksandalwaystriedtobehavewell.Iwasyoungerthaneveryoneelsebecausemygoodmarkshadallowedmetoskipsecondgrade,butthisaddednothingtomyalreadylowself-confidence.WhenIwas14,myparentsdivorced(离婚).Imovedinwithmydadinanewneighborhood,buthewasalwayssobusyandhadlittletimeforme.Itseemedtheonlytimeheeverspoketomewastobedemandingorcritical.Ibegantohatecominghomefromschooleveryday.Isankfurtherintomylowself-esteem(自尊心)andwasoverwhelmedwithfeelingunappreciatedandalone.4续写原文Oneday,myauntcalled.Thisseemedlikeamiracle(奇迹)tome.AuntGinetteusuallyonlycalledonceayear,onmybirthday.Shesaidshehadjustseensomeyoungteenagersparticipateinapublicspeakingcontest,andshethoughtIshouldtryit,too.ShetoldmeshefirmlybelievedIcouldperformonstageliketheotherkidssinceshehadseenmedoskits(幽默小品)forthefamilyatChristmas.Iwasalittlesurprised.Me?Onstage?Inapublicspeakingcontest?Iwashesitant.ButAuntGinettewassoconfidentandseemedreallyserious.Feelingherstrongbelief,Iwentagainstalloddsandagreedtoenterthecontest.5续写原文Allthatwinter,twiceaweekafterdinner,Itookthreedifferentbusesforthethree-hourround-triptopracticeinVilled’Anjou,wherethecompetitionwouldtakeplace.Althoughmydadreallydidlovemeandwantedthebestforme,hedisapprovedofthisnewdream,fearingitwouldtakeawayfrommyhomeworktimeandimpactmyacademicperformance.ButIremainedatopperformerinschoolandnevermissedaday.6段首句Paragraph1：Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.Paragraph2：WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－hewassoproud.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文中的“我”因成绩好却性格内向且年幼于同学，本就缺乏自信，14岁时父母离婚，与忙碌且严苛的父亲生活，更加深了“我”的孤独与自卑。一次，许久未联系的姑姑打来电话，鼓励“我”参加演讲比赛，这让“我”十分意外。在姑姑的坚定劝说下，“我”克服内心的犹豫答应参赛。整个冬天，尽管父亲不支持，“我”仍坚持每周两次往返三小时去练习。这次经历成为“我”改变的契机，让“我”在追求梦想的道路上迈出勇敢一步，也为“我”从自卑走向自信开启了新的篇章。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.我站在后台，心像一只被困在牢笼里的小鹿般狂跳不止。双手不自觉地反复拉扯着衣角，眼睛紧盯着舞台上的一举一动，脑海中不断回响着这四个月来练习的每一个字、每一个停顿和每一处情感的起伏。周围的一切喧嚣似乎都渐渐远去，只剩下自己紧张而急促的呼吸声。我深知，这个夜晚对我来说意义非凡，它是我这几个月努力的见证，也是我突破自我的关键时刻。我一遍又一遍地在心里给自己打气，试图压下那几乎要将我吞噬的紧张感，等待着上台的那一刻。11续写思路分析Para2：WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－hewassoproud.WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－hewassoproud.当我结束演讲，台下掌声雷动的那一刻，我慌乱地在人群中寻找着父亲的身影。终于，我看到了他，他的脸上洋溢着我从未见过的光彩，那眼中闪烁的光芒如同夜空中最璀璨的星辰。一瞬间，过去所有的委屈、孤独和不被理解都烟消云散。我快步走向父亲，他紧紧地抱住了我，没有过多的言语，但那有力的拥抱传递着他深深的爱意与自豪。在这一刻，我明白了，这段艰难的旅程不仅让我找到了自信，也修复了我和父亲之间那看似遥远的关系，我知道，未来的路或许依旧充满挑战，但我已不再是从前那个自卑怯懦的少年。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.Standingbackstage,myheartwaspoundinglikeawilddeertrappedinacage.Unconsciously,Ikeptfidgetingwiththehemofmyclothes,myeyesfixedoneverymoveonthestage,whilethewords,pauses,andemotionalnuancesIhadpracticedoverthepastfourmonthsechoedceaselesslyinmymind.Allthehustleandbustlearoundmeseemedtofadeawaygradually,leavingonlymyrapidandnervousbreathing.Iwaswellawarethatthisnightwasofgreatsignificancetome.Itwasatestamenttomyeffortsduringthesemonthsandacrucialmomentformetobreakthroughmyself.Irepeatedlypsychedmyselfup,tryingtosuppresstheoverwhelmingnervousnessthatthreatenedtoengulfme,asIawaitedmyturntostepontothestage.14范文呈现WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining－hewassoproud.ThemomentthethunderousapplauseeruptedafterIfinishedmyspeech,Isearchedfranticallyformyfather'sfigureamongthecrowd.Finally,Isawhim.HisfacewasbeamingwitharadianceIhadneverwitnessedbefore,andthesparkleinhiseyeswaslikethebrighteststarinthenightsky.Inaninstant,allthepastgrievances,loneliness,andmisunderstandingsvanishedintothinair.Iquicklywalkedtowardsmyfather,andhehuggedmetightly.Therewerenoexcessivewords,butthatpowerfulembraceconveyedhisdeeploveandpride.Atthismoment,Iunderstoodthatthisarduousjourneyhadnotonlyenabledmetofindmyconfidencebutalsorepairedtheseeminglydistantrelationshipbetweenmyfatherandme.Iknewthattheroadaheadmightstillbefullofchallenges,butIwasnolongerthetimidandself-abasedteenagerIusedtobe.15升级版范文呈现Fourmonthslater,thebignightarrived.Standingnervouslybackstage,withmyheartthumpingwildlylikeacagedbirdlongingforfreedom,Itriedtosteadymybreath.Thehoursofpracticeoverthepastmonthsflashedthroughmymind,eachcarefullycraftedwordandintonationbeingengraveddeeply.ItwasnotuntilIheardmynameannouncedthatIsnappedoutofmytranceandsteppedontothestage.16升级版范文呈现WhenIsawmyfather’sface,hiseyeswereshining—hewassoproud.NeverhadIexpectedsuchanexpressionofsheerpridefromhim.Therehestood,amongthecheeringcrowd,hisfiguretallandfirm.Itwasthismomentthatmadealltheeffortsworthwhile.Thejourneythathadbeenfraughtwithself-doubtandobstaclesnowseemedlike