高考英语复习读后续写练习+暑假乡下：镜子碎后的抉择 课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习暑假乡下：镜子碎后的抉择1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文Thelong-awaitedsummervacationfinallycame,andIimmediatelyheadedforGrandpa’scountrysidehomewithexcitement.IwaslookingforwardtoseeingGrandpaandplayingwithmybestfriend,Steve,hissmartdog.Lifeinthecountrysidewasgreat.IenjoyedGrandpa’stastyvegetablesoupandhadalotoffunplayingwithSteve.Weexploredthewoods,chased(追逐)birds,andtriedfishingbythestream,laughingallthewhile.Oneday,Grandpawenttothefarmtogetfreshpumpkinsandtomatoesforabigdinner.Whilewaitingforhimtocomeback,Ifeltabitbored.4续写原文“Steve,let’shavesomefun!”Ideclared,andwithawag(摇摆)ofhistail,heexcitedlyagreed.Ourgameofhide-and-seekfilledthehousewithlaughter.“Youcan’tcatchme!”Ilaughed,hidingandrunningawayfromSteve.ButStevewassosmartthathecouldalwaysfindme,whetherinthebedroomorthecupboard.However,whilewewerehavingfun,somethingunexpectedhappened.Suddenlytherewasaloudcrashinthelivingroom,breakingthecalmlikeastonedisturbingaquietpond.ItturnedoutthatIaccidentallyknockedoveramirrorwhileplaying.Themirror,onceneatandprettyonthetable,wasnowbrokenpiecesonthefloorbecauseofourplayfulgame.5续写原文MyheartpoundedasIlookedatthemess.Thewindblewthroughtheopenwindow,makingthecurtainswavinginthewind,whichupsetmeevenmore.Ididn’tknowwhattodowiththebrokenmirror.ShouldItellGrandpaortrytohidewhathadhappened?Ithoughtaboutit,andSteveloweredhisears.Itseemedthathealsorealizedthatwehadmadeahugemistake.“Whatshouldwedo,Steve?”Iaskedquietly,tryingtofindcomfort.Itwasatoughdecision,andIfeltreallyguilty.Admittingthemistakeseemedhard.SuddenlyIhadanidea—maybeIcouldputtheblameonStevealone.6段首句Paragraph1:WhenGrandpareturnedandcamein,helookedsurprisedwhenhesawthebrokenmirror.Paragraph2:Atdinner,thejoyofhavingGrandpa’svegetablesoupwasnowmixedwithregret.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文中讲述了暑假，“我”怀着激动的心情前往乡下爷爷家，与爷爷和他的聪明狗狗史蒂夫度过了欢乐时光，一起探索树林、追鸟、钓鱼。一天爷爷去农场，“我”和史蒂夫玩捉迷藏时，不小心撞碎了客厅的镜子。看到镜子破碎的瞬间，“我”内心充满慌张与愧疚，不知如何是好，甚至还产生了将过错归咎于史蒂夫的念头。故事展现了“我”在乡村的快乐假期突遇意外状况，以及“我”在犯错后的复杂心理，让读者不禁好奇“我”最终会如何抉择，是否能勇敢面对自己的错误。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Paragraph1:WhenGrandpareturnedandcamein,helookedsurprisedwhenhesawthebrokenmirror.WhenGrandpareturnedandcamein,helookedsurprisedwhenhesawthebrokenmirror.爷爷的身影刚出现在门口，他的目光便被地上那堆破碎的镜片吸引住了。我站在一旁，心像敲鼓一样“砰砰”直跳，偷偷瞥向爷爷，只见他微微皱起眉头，眼睛里满是疑惑与惊讶。空气仿佛瞬间凝固，我紧张得连呼吸都放轻了，两只手不停地揪着衣角，大脑飞速运转，想着是不是应该现在就坦白一切，可又害怕爷爷的责备。史蒂夫似乎也感受到了紧张的气氛，悄悄地躲到了桌子底下，只露出半个身子，不安地看着爷爷。11续写思路分析Paragraph2:Atdinner,thejoyofhavingGrandpa’svegetablesoupwasnowmixedwithregret..Atdinner,thejoyofhavingGrandpa’svegetablesoupwasnowmixedwithregret.餐桌上，原本香气扑鼻的蔬菜汤此刻在我口中变得索然无味。我低着头，机械地用勺子搅动着碗里的汤，心里全是对镜子的愧疚。爷爷像往常一样，往我碗里夹了一块南瓜，笑着问我今天过得怎么样，声音里听不出一丝生气。我抬头看了爷爷一眼，又迅速低下头，嗫嚅着回答“挺好的”，可心里却像被一块大石头压着，沉重得喘不过气来。后悔的情绪在心中蔓延，我多希望时间能倒流，让我在玩闹的时候小心一点，不犯下这样的错误。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现WhenGrandpareturnedandcamein,helookedsurprisedwhenhesawthebrokenmirror.Themomenthesteppedthroughthedoorway,hiseyeswereimmediatelydrawntotheshatteredpiecesscatteredacrossthefloor.Istoodthere,myheartpoundingviolently,stealingfurtiveglancesathim.Hisbrowsknittedslightly,andhiseyeswerefilledwithastonishmentandbewilderment.Theairseemedtofreezeinaninstant.IwassonervousthatIscarcelydaredtobreathe,myhandsfidgetingwiththehemofmyshirtasmymindraced,debatingwhetherIshouldconfessrightthenandthere,yetdreadingtheimpendingscolding.Steve,too,seemedtosensethetenseatmosphereandquietlyslunkunderthetable,onlyhalfofhisbodyvisible,peeringuneasilyatGrandpa.14范文呈现Atdinner,thejoyofhavingGrandpa’svegetablesoupwasnowmixedwithregret.Atthediningtable,theonce-deliciousvegetablesoupnowtastedblandinmymouth.Ihungmyheadlow,mechanicallystirringthesoupinmybowlwithaspoon,mymindconsumedwithguiltoverthebrokenmirror.Grandpa,asusual,placedapieceofpumpkininmybowlandaskedwithasmilehowmydayhadbeen,hisvoicebetrayingnohintofanger.Iglancedupathimbrieflybeforequicklyavertingmygazeandmumblingahalf-hearted"Fine."Butinside,Ifeltasifaheavystonewereweighingmedown,makingithardtobreathe.Thefeelingofregretspreadthroughme,andIwishedwithallmyheartthatIcouldturnbacktimeandhavebeenmorecarefulduringourplaytime,soasnottohavecommittedsuchablunder.15升级版范文呈现WhenGrandpareturnedandcamein,helookedsurprisedwhenhesawthebrokenmirror.Nosoonerhadhecrossedthethresholdthanhisgazewasrivetedonthefragmentedmirrorthatlaystrewnacrossthefloorlikeajigsawpuzzleundone.Standingthere,myheartthumpingwildly,Ipeekedathimnervously.Hisbrowsknittedinconsternation,astonishmentpaintedvividlyacrosshisface.Theairhungheavy,asiftimeitselfhadpaused.Steve,sensingthetautatmosphere,hadcreptbeneaththetable,onlyhisquiveringtailprotruding.16升级版范文呈现Atdinner,thejoyofhavingGrandpa’sv