高考英语复习读后续写练习+从陌生隔阂到温情转变的邻里故事课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习从陌生隔阂到温情转变的邻里故事1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文WhenSamandIwerefirstmarried,welivedinaquietneighborhood.Acrossthestreet,therewasabighousewithasix-foothighhedge(树篱)thatblockedallbutasmallpathtoitsyard.Itwasclearthatourneighborswantedprivacyandweren’tinterestedinany“neighborly”behavior.Samhaddiscoveredthatabrotherandsisterlivedinthehouse.Thehousebelongedtothesister,andthebrotherhelpedaroundthehousewiththingslikegettingthemailandsettingtherubbishcansoutonthedaywhentherubbish-collectingtruckwouldcome.Thesisterandbrotherwerebothveryold.AndweconsideredthemunfriendlybecausetheyhadcalledthepolicewhenSamplayedmusicwithhisbandinouryardoneafternoon.4续写原文Notrealizingitwaswewhowereinthewrong,wethoughtourneighborscausedtroubletoouralreadydifficultlife.Atthetime,SamandIwerequiteshortofmoney.WefeltsadwhenChristmaswasaroundthecorner.ItwasourfirstChristmasasamarriedcouple,andwedidn’thavemuchmoneytocelebrateit.Therewerenogiftsorparties.Wedidn’tevenhaveanyspecialholidaytreatstoshareathome.“IwishwecouldhaveenoughgoodstuffonChristmasDay.WhenIwasakid,myfamilywouldalwayshavecheese,meat,cookies,candies,etc.Italwaysfeltlikeafeast(盛宴)tomeasakid,”ItoldSam.IunderstoodthatChristmaswasn’tallaboutnicethings,butitjustdidn’tfeellikeChristmaswithonlyafewfoods.Samseemedtofeelthesameway.“Thingswillgetalotbetternextyear,”hesaid,tryingtobecheerful.5续写原文ThreeweeksbeforeChristmas,wegottoknowour“unfriendly”neighbor,thebrother,hadabaddiseaseandpassedaway.Onemorningafterthat,wenoticedourneighbor—thetinysisterMary—tryingwithallherstrengthtopullherrubbishcanstotheroadsidealone.Shelookedsoweakandlonely.6段首句Paragraph1：Samcouldn’tstanditandrushedtoher,saying,“MayIhelpyou?”Paragraph2：Whenweansweredthedoor,therewasnobodybutabigbagofgoods.7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文中讲述了婚后的“我”和山姆住在一个宁静街区，对面邻居家有高大树篱，看似拒人于千里之外，还因山姆乐队演奏报过警，这让“我”俩觉得他们不友好，加上经济拮据，首个圣诞节也过得寒酸。“我”向山姆回忆儿时丰盛的圣诞美食，满是遗憾。然而，圣诞节前三周，邻居哥哥病逝，姐姐玛丽独自艰难地拖垃圾桶，显得虚弱又孤独。此前的隔阂与误解在这一瞬间开始消融，“我”和山姆对这位曾经“不友好”的邻居有了新的认识，也预示着邻里关系将发生转变，故事在这种微妙的氛围中留下了温情的伏笔。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Samcouldn’tstanditandrushedtoher,saying,“MayIhelpyou?”山姆看到玛丽如此艰难，心中一紧，再也忍不住了。他毫不犹豫地快步冲过去，脸上带着关切的神情，大声说道：“玛丽，我来帮你吧！”玛丽有些惊讶地抬起头，眼中闪过一丝犹豫，但在看到山姆真诚的目光后，微微点了点头。山姆接过垃圾桶，轻松地将它拖到了路边，玛丽在一旁静静地看着，眼神里透露出一丝感激。随后，山姆陪着玛丽回到她家门口，简单聊了几句，玛丽的脸上渐渐有了些许笑容，仿佛坚冰开始融化。山姆离开时，玛丽轻轻地说了声“谢谢”，这声谢谢让山姆心里暖暖的，也让他决心以后要多多关照这位孤独的邻居。11续写思路分析Para2：Whenweansweredthedoor,therewasnobodybutabigbagofgoods.圣诞节的清晨，阳光透过窗户洒在我们脸上，我和山姆被一阵敲门声吵醒。我们迅速起身，整理好衣服去开门，满心期待着会是怎样的一个惊喜。当门缓缓打开，却发现门口空无一人，只有一个大大的袋子放在地上。我们好奇地将袋子拿进屋，打开一看，里面装满了各种各样的美食，有鲜嫩的奶酪、喷香的肉类、精致的饼干，还有五彩斑斓的糖果。我们惊讶地对视一眼，心中满是疑惑和感动。是谁在这个特别的日子给我们送来了这样一份珍贵的礼物？突然，山姆像是想到了什么，他望向对面玛丽的家，眼神里透露出一丝了然和温情，我也瞬间明白了，这份礼物一定是玛丽送来的。这一袋礼物不仅仅是食物，更是一份珍贵的心意，它化解了过去的所有不愉快，让我们真切地感受到了邻里之间那份温暖的情谊在这个寒冷的冬日里悄然绽放。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现WitnessingMary'sfrailfigurestrugglingwiththeheavyrubbishcans,Sam'sheartwasfilledwithcompassion.Unabletobearthesightanylonger,hedashedacrossthestreetwithoutamoment'shesitation.AsheapproachedMary,hisfaceshowedgenuineconcernandhesaidinawarmvoice,"MayIhelpyou?"Marylookedup,abitstartledbySam'ssuddenappearance.Foramoment,therewashesitationinhereyes,butuponseeingthekindnessandsincerityinSam'sgaze,shenoddedslightly.Samthentookholdoftherubbishcanswitheaseandhauledthemtotheroadside.Marywatchedquietly,aglimmerofgratitudeshininginhereyes.Afterward,SamaccompaniedMarybacktoherdoorstep,andtheyexchangedafewwords.Slowly,afaintsmileemergedonMary'sface,asiftheicebetweenthemhadbeguntothaw.WhenSamleft,Marywhisperedasoft"thankyou",whichwarmedSam'sheartandstrengthenedhisresolvetolookoutforthislonelyneighborinthefuture.14范文呈现OnChristmasmorning,thesunlightfilteredthroughthewindowandgentlywokeSamandme.Wewererousedfromoursleepbyaknockatthedoor.Hastilygettingoutofbedandstraighteningourclothes,werushedtothedoor,filledwithanticipationofwhatsurprisemightawaitus.Asthedoorcreakedopen,toourastonishment,therewasnooneinsight.Instead,alargebagsatontheground.Curious,webroughtthebaginsideandopenedit.Toouramazement,itwasfilledwithallsortsofdelicioustreats-freshcheese,savorymeats,delicatecookies,andcolorfulcandies.Weexchangedalookofsurpriseandwonder,ourheartsfilledwithquestionsandgratitude.Whocouldhavesentussuchapreciousgiftonthisspecialday?Suddenly,Samseemedtohaveanidea.HelookedtowardsMary'shouseacrossthestreet,andtherewasaglimmerofrealizationandwarmthinhiseyes.I,too,immediatelyunderstoodthatthisgiftmusthavecomefromMary.Thisbagofpresentswasnotjustfood;itwasaprecioustokenofkindnessthatdissolvedallthepastunpleasantnessandmadeustrulyfeelthewarmbondofneighborlyfriendshipblossomingonthiscoldwinterday.15升级版范文呈现ItwasachillymorningwhenSamcaughtsightofMary,whowaswrestlingwiththerubbishcans,herfeebleframeseeminglyonthevergeofbeingoverpoweredbytheweight.Unabletoenduresuchaheart-wrenchingsceneanylonger,Sam,withasurgeofkindnessfloodinghisheart,boltedtowardsher."MayIhelpyou?"heinquired,hisvoicelacedwithgenuineconcern.Mary,takenabackbyhissuddenapproach,hesitatedforasplitsecond.However,itwasthesinceritygleaminginSam'seyesthatconvincedhertonodeversoslightly.WithSamtakingchargeofthebinseffortlessly,Maryfollowed,hereyesnowshimmeringwithatingeofgratitude.Astheyreachedherdoorstep,afewwordswereexchanged,andloandbehold,afaintsmilecreptontoMary'sface,asifthefrostyrelationshipbetweenthemhadstartedtothawunderthewarmthofSam'sact.LittledidtheyknowthatthiswasjustthepreludetoaheartwarmingChristmassurprise.16升级版范文呈现Christmasmorningarrived,bathingourhumbleabodeinasoft,goldenglow.Suddenly,aknockatthedoorshatteredthestillnessoftheroom.Rousedfromourslumber,wehastenedtothedoor,ourheartspoundingwithanticipation.Andthe