2024年中考英语写作游览古都西安的作文讲义

2024年中考英语写作游览古都西安的作文

范文一

StarsintheAncientCapital

Lastsummervacation,myfamilyandIdecidedtogotoXi'an.Asweall

know,Xi*anisknownforitshistoricalculture.Itisnotonlyanancientcapitalof

thirteendynasties,butalsooneofthemostfamousancientcapitalsinthe

world.OneofmyfavoritepartsofthetripwasvisitingtheTerracottaArmy,which

aretheburialclayfigurinesofQinShiHuang.Theyweresomuchmore

wonderfulthanIhadimagined!Eachfigurinehasauniqueface,andthewhole

armyisconsideredasoneofthewondersoftheworld.Anotherhighlightofthetrip

wasgoingtotheGrandTangDynastyEverbrightCity.Thepeople,thefood,and

theattractionswereallincredible.IttrulyshowcasesourChinesehistoryand

culture.WcalsoclimbedMountHua,theWestMountainoftheFiveSacred

Mountains.

TheHuaxianationalitywasoriginallyformedandlivedaroundMountHua,

andnameditsterritoryasHua.The"Hua"inZhenghuaandHuaxiaisderived

fromMountHua.Sinceancienttimes,MountHuahasbeenknownas"the

NumberOnePrecipitousMountainintheWorld”.Overall,Xi*anisacitythat

integratesnaturallandscapesandhistoricalculture.

Whetheryoueheretoexperiencethehistoryandcultureortotastethefood,

itwon'tdisappointyou.

范文二

StarsintheAncientCapital

Duringlastsummer'svacation,myfamilyandIembarkedonajourneytothe

historiccityofXi'an.Renownedforitsrichhistoricalculture,Xi'anstandsasan

enduringtestamenttoChina*spast,havingservedasthecapitalforthirteen

dynasties.

WhatfascinatedmethemostwasthemagnificentTerracottaArmy.These

lifesizeclayfigurines,craftedtoaepanyQinShiHuanginhisafterlife,exceeded

allmyexpectations.Eachstatuepossessesadistinctivefacialexpression,earning

themthemonikerntheEighthWonderoftheWorld.n

OuradventurealsotookustothevibrantGrandTangDynastyEverbrightCity.

Thelivelyatmosphere,deliciouscuisine,andcaptivatingattractionsoffereda

glimpseintothegloryofTangDynastyChina.Furthermore,weascendedMount

Hua,oneoftheFiveSacredMountains,renownedforitsbreathtakingcliffsand

challenginghikingtrails.

LegendhasitthattheHuaxiacivilizationoriginatedaroundMountHua,naming

theirterritory'Hua'.Theword'Hua'inboth*Zhenghua'and'Huaxia'tracesitsroots

backtothismajesticmountain.Historically,MountHuahasgarneredthe

reputationofbeingtheworld*ssteepestmountain.

Inconclusion,Xi'anisacitywherenaturalbeautyandhistoricalrichness

coalesce.Whetheryou'reseekingtoimmerseyourselfinChina*sprofoundhistory

andcultureorsavoritsculinarydelights,Xi'anpromisesanunforgettable

experience.

探访古都西安

去年暑假，我和家人踏上了前往历史名城西安的旅程。西安以其丰富的历史

文化而闻名，是中国过去的永久见证，它曾是十三个朝代的首都。

最让我着迷的是壮观的兵马俑。这些真人大小的陶俑，是为了陪伴秦始皇死

后的世界而制作的，超出了我的所有期望。每个雕像都有独特的面部表情，

使它们赢得了“世界第八大奇迹”的绰号。

我们的冒险还带我们去了充满活力的大唐不夜城。那里热闹的氛围、美味的

美食和迷人的景点，让人一窥唐朝中国的辉煌。此外，我们还攀登了华山，

它是五岳之一，以惊险的悬崖和具有挑战性的徒步旅行路线而闻名。

传说华夏文明起源于华山周围，他们的领土被命名为“华工无论是“振华”还是

，,华夏，，中的，华，字，都可以追溯到这座雄伟的山峰。历史上，华山被誉为世界

上最陡峭的山。

总之，西安是一个自然美景和历史底蕴融合的城市。无论你是想沉浸在中国

深厚的历史文化中，还是想品尝美食，西安都会给你带来难忘的体验。

范文一与范文二：优化改写理由供参考

1/'Duringlastsummer'svacation,myfamilyandIembarkedonajourneytothe

historiccityofXTan「将原先的开头调整为更流畅、更吸引人的叙述方式，

通过“embarkedonajourney”这样的表达增加了故事的动态感。

2.€tRenownedforitsrichhistoricalculture,Xi*anstandsasanenduringtestament

toChina'spast,havingservedasthecapitalforthirteendynasties.Whatfascinated

methemostwasthemagnificentTerracottaAnny.”在整篇文章中增加了语言

的丰富性,如使用“Renownedfor”替代“knownfor""enduringtestament^^

替代“ancientcapitar,/'magnificentTerracottaArmy”替代简单的"Terracotta

Army”等，以提升文章的文采。

3.在描述兵马俑时,加入了“lifesizeclayfigurines,craftedtoaepanyQinShi

Huanginhisafterlife”这样的细节，使描述更加生动具体。

4Furthermore,weascend