2025届高考英语复习读后续写练习+法国小镇上的追船还包之旅+课件

高考英语读后续写语篇练习法国小镇上的追船还包之旅1题目分析读后续写题目再现范文呈现努力方向2Part1题目呈现3续写原文RaceatRiver’sEdgeWhenwearrivedinTournus,mycousinGabrielandIparkedourbikesandwalkedtothetownsquare.We’djustridden33kilometers,andwewerestarving.WeplannedtogetlunchandthenridebacktoMacon,asmallcityinFranceontheSaÂneRiver.IwasspendingthesummertherewithGabriel’sfamily.Itwasmarketday.Localsarebusyfillingtheirbasketswithgroceries.Touristshuntedforsouvenirs.GabrielandIboughtalong,thinloafofbreadandsomecheeseI’mobsessedwith.Ittastesawesome.Asweate,InoticedagirlwearingaUSABasketballT-shirt.Shesmiledatus.BasketballisbiginFrancetoo.YoucanevenwatchNBAgamesonTV.ThegirlstoppedtoshopwithsomeonethatIguessedwashermombecausetheylookedsomuchalike.4续写原文Isawthemagainbytheriver.Theysatonabenchenjoyingtheirsnacksinfrontofalong,narrowriverboatnamedVoyageur,whichhaddocked(停靠码头)earlier.Thentheyboardedtheboat.Itwaspreparingtoleave.Astheshipstartedtopullaway,Ispottedacolorfulshoppingbagonthebench.Thegirlhadleftit!Ilookedup.Somepassengersweregatheringontheupperdeckoftheriverboat,includingthegirlandhermom.IheldupthebagandwavedittogettheirattentionwhileGabrielcalledtothem.Whenthegirlnoticedthebag,sheopenedhermouthinsurprise.Butherfacefellastheboatstartedtopullawayfromthedock.Shedidn’tthinkshe’dgetherstuffback.5续写原文“Maybewecanthrowittoher,Hugo!”Gabrielsaid.“It’stoolight,”Isaid.“Itwouldendupintheriver.Wehavetofindawaytoreturnit!”Runningalongsidetheboat,Gabriellearnedfromasailorthattheboat’snextstopwasMacon—ourdestinationaswell.“Doyouthinkwecankeepup?”Iasked.Gabriellaughed.“We’reabouttofindout!”6段首句Paragraph1：Ithrewthebagovermyshoulder,andwesetoff.Paragraph2：WefinallygottoMacon,thinkingwe’dfailed,whenGabrielsuddenlyshouted,“Iseethem!”7Part2题目分析8续写原文分析9文章讲述了“我”和表哥加布里埃尔骑行33公里到达图尔尼后，在集市买了食物充饥，期间注意到一个穿美国篮球T恤的女孩。之后在河边，女孩和母亲登上名为“旅行者”号的船离开时落下一个购物袋。船开动后，“我”和加布里埃尔发现女孩在船上且意识到包落下了。由于包太轻扔不过去，又得知船的下一站是“我们”要回的马孔，于是两人决定沿着河岸追赶船只，试图将包归还给女孩，一场充满意外与挑战的还包之旅就此展开，他们也踏上了未知能否成功的追船征程。点1：位于续写第一段段首，流畅衔接前面的记叙文和第一段段首语；点2：位于续写第一段段尾，流畅衔接第二段段首句；点3：位于续写第二段段首，续写衔接第二段段首语；点4：文章结尾升华，给予读者正能量，揭示和强调主题。情节构建的重点10续写思路分析Para1：Ithrewthebagovermyshoulder,andwesetoff.我把包挎在肩上，和加布里埃尔一起沿着河岸朝着马孔的方向奋力骑行。我们的呼吸急促而沉重，汗水不停地从额头滚落，双腿也因长时间的运动而逐渐酸痛乏力，但我们丝毫不敢停歇。一路上，我们既要留意脚下崎岖的道路，又要紧紧盯着前方河面上渐渐远去的“旅行者”号，生怕跟丢。尽管疲惫不堪，但归还女孩购物袋的决心让我们咬牙坚持，与船并行的每一刻都充满了紧张与期待。11续写思路分析Para2：WefinallygottoMacon,thinkingwe’dfailed,whenGabrielsuddenlyshouted,“Iseethem!”我们最终抵达了马孔，满心以为追不上船归还计划已经失败，心情无比失落。就在这时，加布里埃尔突然大声喊道：“我看到她们了！”我猛地抬起头，顺着他手指的方向望去，果然看到女孩和她的妈妈正站在不远处的岸边。一瞬间，沮丧的情绪一扫而空，我们急忙朝着她们跑去，手中紧紧握着那个购物袋。女孩看到我们后，脸上露出惊喜与感动的神情，我们将购物袋递还给她，她连声道谢，而我们也因为成功归还物品，内心满是成就感和温暖。12Part3范文呈现13范文呈现Ithrewthebagovermyshoulder,andwesetoff.Withdeterminationburninginoureyes,GabrielandIpedaledfuriouslyalongtheriverbank,chasingaftertheVoyageur.Thewindwhippedpastourfaces,makingitdifficulttohearanythingbutthepoundingofourheartsandthewhirringofthebicyclewheels.Thepathwasuneven,andwehadtododgerocksandpotholeswhilekeepingoureyesfixedontheboat.Mylegswerealreadyachingfromthelongrideearlier,butthethoughtofreturningthegirl'sbagspurredmeon.Wepassedbypatchesofgreeneryandtheoccasionalfisherman,butourfocusremainedunshaken.Aswerode,Icouldfeeltheweightofthebagonmyshoulder,areminderofourmission.14范文呈现WefinallygottoMacon,thinkingwe’dfailed,whenGabrielsuddenlyshouted,“Iseethem!”Exhaustedanddisheartened,Ihadalmostgivenuphope.Butathiswords,myheadsnappedup,andtheretheywere,thegirlandhermother,standingonthedock.Asurgeofenergycoursedthroughme,andwequicklydismountedourbikesandrushedtowardsthem.Thegirl'seyeswidenedinsurpriseandthenfilledwithgratitudeaswehandedherthebag.Shethankedusprofusely,andwegrinnedateachother,knowingthatoureffortshadbeenworthit.Inthatmoment,thewearinessofthelongridevanished,replacedbyasenseofaccomplishmentandsatisfactionthatwarmedourhearts.15升级版范文呈现Ithrewthebagovermyshoulder,andwesetoff.Heartsaflamewithdetermination,GabrielandIspedalongtheriverbank,thewindhowlingpastusasifurginguson.Ourlegs,alreadyfatiguedfromtheprior33-kilometerride,pumpedwithrenewedvigor.Theunevenpathbeneathourwheels,litteredwithrocksandpotholes,failedtodeterus;instead,itwasasiftheverythoughtofthegirl'slostbagpropelledusforward.16升级版范文呈现WefinallyreachedMacon,crestfallenandconvincedofourfailure.Then,outoftheblue,Gabrielexclaimed,"Iseethem!"Itwasatthatmomentthatasparkofhopereignitedwithinus.Thereonthedockstoodthegirlandhermother.Witharushofadrenaline,wehastenedtowardsthem.Thegirl'seyeswidenedinastonishmentandgratitudeaswereturnedthebag.Itwasnotjus