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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。WhenIwas46,myhusbandJerrysuggestedthatIgoskiingwithhim,promising,“Youwillloveit!Thisisjustthefirststep.”“Notonmylife!YouknowIcan’tstandbeingcold.”Ididn’tmentionmyfearofchairliftsandheights.“Yougoandhavefun,sweetheart!”So,Jerrywentskiingwithhisnephewandothernewskiers.Moretripsfollowedwithincreasingexcitement.Yet,Icouldn’tignoretheirgenuinejoyinskiingnorthepositivechangesinJerry.Ibegantofeelguilty.Didn’tIowesomethingtothissportandtomyhusband?Shouldn’tIatleasttryit?“What?”myfriendsaskedinsurprisewhenIsaidIwasconsideringskiing.“You’re46yearsold!You’regoingtobreakaleg.”Thoughtheyreflectedmyownfears,Itookupmycouragetotakemyfirststep.ItoldJerryImighttryskiing.Thus,heimmediatelyplannedatripjustforthetwoofus.Thoughfilledwithfear,Icouldn’thidemyexcitementaswedrovetoCalifornia’sBigBearMountainResort(度假胜地).Aftercheckingin,Jerry’sblueeyessparkled(闪光)ashesignedmeupforthenextday’sbeginnerclass.Thefollowingmorning,afterfittingmewithrentalskiboots,leadingmetotheinstructor,andkissingmequickly,Jerryrushedtothenearestskilift.Istoodinastraightlinewithalltheotherbeginners,likeducksinarow,andlistenedtotheskiinstructor.Lastinlineattheupperend,Itriedtoappearinvisibleuntiltheunthinkablehappened:Ilostmybalanceandfell.Itriedtofollowinstructions,butmyfeet,whichIcouldn’tfeel,refusedtocooperate.Icouldonlyturninonedirection—left.Worse,Icouldn’trememberwhattodowithmyskiswhenIneededtostop,soIjustfellover.AndIkeptforgettingtherule:“Neverpointyourskisdownhillwhentryingtogetup.”Onetime,Ijustlaythere,exhausted.“Ihateskiing!”Iwhispered,finallygettingupright.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Sensingthiswasmyfirstandlastskitrip,Jerrydidthebestthinghecould.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bytheendoftheskiseason,Ihadovercomeallmyfears.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意:46岁的“我”因怕冷且害怕缆车和高处而拒绝丈夫杰瑞去滑雪的提议,但看到丈夫滑雪时的快乐和积极变化后,在朋友的惊讶声中决定尝试。到了加州大熊山度假村,“我”在初学者课程中状况百出,不是摔倒就是无法控制滑雪板,甚至一度心生厌恶。伏笔以及回应:伏笔1:“我”最初坚决拒绝滑雪,与后文决定尝试形成反差,续写中“我”会因某些事改变想法并坚持滑雪。伏笔2:朋友们对“我”滑雪的惊讶反应,凸显滑雪对“我”的挑战性,续写中“我”会克服困难证明自己。伏笔3:杰瑞独自滑雪时的兴奋,为他鼓励“我”滑雪并在后续给予帮助做铺垫,续写中他会继续推动“我”进步。伏笔4:“我”在初学者队伍中的糟糕表现,预示后续会有成长转变,续写中“我”会逐渐掌握滑雪技巧。伏笔5:“我”对滑雪的抱怨,与最终克服恐惧形成对比,续写中“我”会爱上滑雪并有所感悟。续写要点:第一段:情感线:沮丧与感动交织,因自己的失败而沮丧,因杰瑞的陪伴而感动,有放弃又有不甘。故事线:杰瑞放弃自己的滑雪乐趣,来到“我”身边,耐心地陪着“我”练习最基础的动作。他不断地给“我”讲解技巧,鼓励“我”不要害怕摔倒,还亲自示范正确姿势。在杰瑞的帮助下,“我”虽然还是会犯错,但逐渐有了一些信心,不再那么抗拒滑雪。第二段:情感线:自豪与感慨,为自己克服恐惧而自豪,对滑雪和生活有了新的感悟,充满热情。故事线:“我”开始主动挑战一些小坡度,能够较为熟练地控制滑雪板停下来和转弯。不仅能跟上初学者课程的进度,还尝试了更高级一点的滑道,享受滑雪的速度与激情。意识到只要勇敢尝试,就能突破自我,对未来充满期待,决定继续滑雪。主旨升华句:“Ageisneverabarriertonewadventures;itisthespiritofdeterminationthatpavesthewayfortheconquestoffears.”(年龄从来不是新冒险的障碍;是决心的精神为战胜恐惧铺平道路。)“Inthefaceofself-doubt,thesupportofalovedonecanbethecatalystthattransformshesitationintounwaveringcourage.”(面对自我怀疑,爱人的支持可以成为将犹豫转化为坚定勇气的催化剂。)“Theslopesoflifearefilledwithchallenges,butitisthroughperseveranceandthewillingnesstolearnthatweascendtonewheights.”(人生的斜坡充满挑战,但正是通过毅力和学习的意愿,我们才能攀登到新的高度。)“Fearisbutapassingshadowthatdissipatesinthelightofdeterminationandthewarmthofencouragement.”(恐惧只是一片短暂的阴影,会在决心的光芒和鼓励的温暖中消散。)“Takingthatfirststepintotheunknown,nomatterhowdaunting,isthepreludetoasymphonyofself-discoveryandgrowth.”(踏入未知的第一步,无论多么令人畏惧,都是自我发现和成长交响曲的前奏。)写作示范一:Sensingthiswasmyfirstandlastskitrip,Jerrydidthebestthinghecould.Helefthisbelovedslopesandcametomyside.Heheldmyhandsandwalkedmethroughthebasicmovementsagainandagain.Withinfinitepatience,heshowedmehowtocontrolmyskisandkeepmybalance.Hiswordsofencouragementfilledmyears,andhispresencebesidemegavemethestrengthtokeepgoing.IstartedtofeelaglimmerofhopethatmaybeIcoulddothis.Bytheendoftheskiseason,Ihadovercomeallmyfears.Iwasabletoglidedowntheslopeswithconfidence,makingsmoothturnsandstops.IevenjoinedJerryonsomeofthemoreintermediateruns.Irealizedthatthekeytosuccesswasnottobeafraidoffailure.Skiinghadbecomenotjustasportbutametaphorforlife.Iwasreadytofaceanynewchallengesthatcamemyway,knowingthatwithdeterminationandthesupportoflovedones,Icouldovercomeanything.写作示范二:Sensingthiswasmyfirstandlastskitrip,Jerrydidthebestthinghecould.Heabandonedhisownskiingtimeandfocusedonme.Hedemonstratedthecorrectposturesoverandover,andwhenIfell,hewasrighttheretopickmeup.Hetoldmestoriesofhisowninitialstruggleswithskiingtomakemefeelbetter.Hisloveanddedicationgraduallymeltedmyfrustration.Ibegantomimichisactionsmoreaccuratelyandfeltmyskillsimproving.Bytheendoftheskiseason,Ihadovercomeallmyfears.Iwasnolongertheclumsybeginner.Icouldskidowntheslopesindependently,feelingthewindinmyhair.Ihadconqueredmyfearofheightsandchairlifts.Iunderstoodthatsometimeswehavetostepoutofourcomfortzonestodiscoverourtruepotential.Thisnewfoundconfidenceinskiinghadalsoseepedintootheraspectsofmylife,makingmemoreeagertoembracechangeandgrowth.【答案】Sensingthiswasmyfirstandlastskitrip,Jerrydidthebestthinghecould.Hesuppliedmewithfood.Wisely,heblamedmyinstructorandpromisedprivatelessons.Thenextmorning,Ifellinlovewithmy
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