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读后续写:一次超速相遇,一生华丽转变讲义读后续写阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。Twoyearsago,20-year-oldRutledgewasdrivingonherwaytoworkwhenshesawthebluelightsflashingbehindher.Fromtherearmirrorofhercar,shenoticedapoliceofficercominguptoher.Asshepulledovertothesideoftheroad,herheartbeatupinherearswithanxiety,becausesheknewshehaddonethewrongthingatthewrongplaceandtime.Brown,apoliceofficer,approachedandintendedtogiveheraspeedingticket.Rutledgeacknowledgedhermistakeandexpressedthatshewasverysorry.Andthen,shetoldBrownthatshewasbroke,anddidn'thavethemoneytopayaspeedingticket.Mostpeoplehaveastoryabouttalkingtheirwayoutofaticket,andBrownhasprobablyhearditallbefore.Butwhatwashisresponse?Hedidn'tchargeherforthespeedingticket.Instead,heaskedRutledgetohaveatalkwithhimabouthersituation.WhatRutledgedidn'tknowwasthatitwouldbeoneofthebestthingsthateverhappenedtoher.Theirtalkwentonforabout10to15minutes,justsittinginthecar.RutledgetoldBrownthatshewasstuckinadead-endjobanddidn'tknowwhattodo.Then,theytalkedaboutdifferentcareerchoices.Tohiscredit,BrownprovidedguidanceandmotivationtoRutledge.HehelpedRutledgefigureoutwhereshewasgoinginthefuture.Afterthetalk,theirconclusionwasthatRutledgewouldmakeagreatnurse.Ifonecanbelieveit,Brownevenconvincedherthatsheshouldapplyforanursingschool.Atlast,Brownletheroffwithjustawarning.“Promisemeyou'llgotoanursingschool.SlowdownandIwon'tgiveyouaticket,”hesaid.注意:1.续写词数应为150左右;2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。AssoonasBrownleft,Rutledgewaslostinthought.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Twoyearslater,RutledgeinvitedBrowntohergraduationceremony.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________主旨大意:文章讲述了年轻女孩Rutledge因超速被警察Brown拦下,因没钱交罚单向其坦白困境,Brown不仅未开罚单还与她深入交谈并引导她走向护理职业道路,最终Rutledge成功毕业并感恩Brown的故事,展现了一次偶然相遇带来的人生转变以及善意引导的巨大力量。伏笔:Rutledge表示自己没钱交罚单且处于困境,为后文Brown深入了解她情况并给予职业引导埋下伏笔。续写要点:第一段续写要点围绕Rutledge在Brown离开后的思考与行动展开,比如思考Brown话语、决心改变并付诸行动准备申请护理学校等。第二段续写要点着重描写毕业时Rutledge与Brown的重逢场景,包括Rutledge的感恩表现以及Brown的欣慰之情等。情节变化:从Rutledge被警察拦下面临罚单处罚的困境,到因与Brown的交谈获得职业新方向,再到努力学习后成功毕业,情节实现了从低谷到转变再到收获的变化。情感变化:Rutledge最初被拦下时的焦虑,转变为与Brown交谈后的思考与决心,最后毕业时是对Brown的感激;Brown则从执法者的严肃到给予引导的耐心,再到看到Rutledge毕业的欣慰。主题升华句:1.Truekindnessislikealighthouseinthestormyseaoflife,guidinglostsoulstoaharborofhope.真正的善良就像人生暴风雨中的灯塔,指引迷失的灵魂抵达希望的港湾。2.Anunexpectedactofcarecanbethekeythatunlocksthedoortoalifefullofpossibilities,changingdestiniesforever.一个意外的关怀之举可能成为开启充满可能性人生之门的钥匙,永远改变命运。3.Thepowerofahelpinghandreachesbeyondthepresentmoment,paintingabeautifullandscapeofthefutureforthosewhoreceiveit.援助之手的力量超越当下,为接受者描绘出未来的美丽画卷。4.Asimpleactofkindnessisnotjustagesturebutasparkthatcansetoffachainreactionofpositivetransformationinsomeone'slife.一个简单的善举不只是一种姿态,更是能在某人生活中引发积极转变连锁反应的火花。5.Inthetapestryoflife,athreadofkindnesswovenbyonecancreateawholenewpatternofsuccessandfulfillmentforanother.在生活的织锦中,一个人编织的善良之线可为他人创造出全新的成功与满足图案。范文:TheFirstVersionAssoonasBrownleft,Rutledgewaslostinthought.Shereflectedonhowherlifehadbeenstagnantanddirectionlessuntilthismoment.Withanewfoundsenseofpurpose,shewastednotime.Shesoughtadvicefromfriendsandfamilyaboutnursingschools,andevenreachedouttocurrentnursingstudentsforinsights.Sheworkedhardtosavemoneyfortuitionandstudieddiligentlytoimproveheracademicskills.Twoyearslater,RutledgeinvitedBrowntohergraduationceremony.Theauditoriumwasfilledwiththecheersofproudfamiliesandfriends.WhenRutledgesawBrown,hereyesglistenedwithtearsofgratitude.“YougavemeachancewhenIwasatmylowest.Yourbeliefinmemadeallthedifference.”Brownfeltaprofoundsenseofsatisfaction.Thisencounterdemonstratesthatalittlekindnesscanhaveahugeimpact,likeapebblecreatingripplesinapond,changingthecourseofsomeone'slifeandinspiringthemtoreachfortheirdreams.TheSecondVersionAssoonasBrownleft,Rutledgewaslostinthought.Sherealizedthatthiswasacrossroadsmoment.Shestartedtocutbackonunnecessaryexpensesandfocusonhergoal.Sheusedherfreetimetovolunteeratlocalclinicstogetafeelforthenursingprofession.Sheovercameherfearsandinsecuritiesonebyone.Twoyearslater,RutledgeinvitedBrowntohergraduationceremony.Shewalkedacrossthestagewithconfidence.Aftertheceremony,shefoundBrowninthecrowdandgraspedhishands.“Ican'texpresshowgratefulIam.Youwerethelightinmydarktunnel.”Brownwasoverjoy

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