读后续写+喵声之谜：卡莉解开干草棚的秘密+讲义 高三上学期第二次月考英语试题

阅读下面材料，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。SweatdrippedfromCallie’sfaceasshehelpedherbigbrotherBriggsloadhaybales(捆)ontothemachine.Themachinemadeloudnoisewhileitcarriedthebalesuptothehayloft(干草棚),whereCallie’sdadpiledthemup.AllwasquietwhenCalliewentinsidetofeedthehorses.Butasshefilledthewaterbucket,shethoughtsheheardafaintmeow(猫叫声)fromthehayloft.Sheclimbedthestepstotheloftandlistened.Thesoundseemedtobecomingfrombehindthebales.SherantogetherdadandBriggs.Briggscockedhishead,“It’scomingfromoutside”,hedetermined.“Justabirdinatree.”Callie’sdadagreed.“Probablyamockingbirdoracatbird,”hesaid.“Howdoyouknowforsure?”Calliesaid.“Iguesswe’vejustgotbetterearsthanyou,”Briggsjoked.ButCalliewasn’tconvinced.Shecheckedthehayloftagainaftersupper.“Areyoustuckinthere,kitty?”shesaid,pressinganeartothebales.“Meow!”cameasadcry.Callieracedbacktothehouse.“Ihearditagain,Dad!Willyoupleaselistenoncemore?”“It’sokay,Callie,”herdadsaid,comfortingher.“I’llgoandtakealook.”Afewminuteslater,hepokedhisheadintoCallie’sroom.“TheonlythingIheardouttherewasamockingbird,”hesaid.“Soyoucanstopworrying.”“OK,Dad,”Calliesaid.Butshewokeinthenightthinkingaboutwhatshe’dheard.Whatifakittenwastrappedbehindthebales?Shelayonherback,wonderingwhattodo.Finally,shechangedintojeansandasweatshirt,andthenwalkedquietlyintoBriggs’sroom.“Ineedyourflashlight(手电筒).”shewhispered.“Huh?”Briggswasconfused.“Ineedittofindthekitten,”Callieexplained.“I’llbecareful”Briggshuffed.“Youaresostubborn!”“You’rethebest,”Calliesaid.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头已为你写好。Paragraph1:Shegrabbedtheflashlightandrushedtothehayloft___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:ThankstoBriggs’shelp,thelastheavybalewasmoved,revealingatiny,frightenedkitten.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意：Callie在农场帮忙干活时听到干草棚传来猫叫声，可爸爸和Briggs都认为是鸟叫声。Callie始终坚信有小猫被困，晚上她决定去寻找，向Briggs借手电筒后再次前往干草棚。故事山分析：开场：Callie劳作时听到疑似猫叫，家人却不以为意。上升：Callie多次听到叫声，家人均否定，她仍不放弃并决定夜探干草棚。高潮：未确定，需续写揭示是否真有小猫及后续情况。下降：无结局：未完成，待续写。五处伏笔及回应：伏笔：Callie多次听到猫叫声且坚信有小猫被困。回应：续写中真的找到小猫。伏笔：家人判断是鸟叫且否定Callie的想法。回应：可写找到小猫后家人的反应及对Callie的认可。伏笔：Callie向Briggs借手电筒。回应：续写中Briggs可能会来帮忙或在后续有相关情节体现他对手电筒用途的关心。伏笔：干草棚里有干草堆。回应：小猫被困在干草堆后，搬开草堆才能发现小猫。伏笔：Callie担心小猫安危，晚上难以入眠。回应：续写中可描述找到小猫时Callie的欣慰与喜悦。续写要点：第一段：Callie拿着手电筒在干草棚仔细寻找，描述她寻找的过程，如搬开一些小的干草捆，四处查看等，但未找到小猫，此时可能遇到一些困难，如手电筒光线不足或干草棚内有其他阻碍。第二段：Briggs来帮忙，搬开最后一个重草捆发现小猫，描写小猫的状态以及Callie和Briggs的反应，如Callie的心疼、Briggs的惊讶与愧疚，最后可写他们带小猫回屋并告知家人。情感线：Callie从最初的疑惑、不被理解的委屈，到坚持寻找时的坚定，再到找到小猫时的喜悦与欣慰，还有对小猫的怜爱。Briggs从最初的不以为意、些许不耐烦到看到小猫后的惊讶与愧疚。故事线：Callie拿着手电筒进入干草棚开始寻找小猫。她在干草棚内仔细倾听声音来源，挪动小干草捆。遇到困难，如光线不够亮或干草棚内环境复杂。Briggs来到干草棚帮忙。他们合力搬开最后重草捆发现小猫。他们带小猫回屋并向家人说明情况。主旨升华句：Persistencealwayspaysoff,leadingustothetruthandkindness.（坚持总会有回报，引领我们走向真相与善良。）Truecompassionmakesuslistentothefaintestcriesandtakeaction.（真正的同情心使我们能听到最微弱的呼喊并付诸行动。）Don'tletothers'doubtsdimyourdeterminationtodotherightthing.（不要让他人的怀疑磨灭你做正确之事的决心。）Inthepursuitofhelpingtheweak,ourownheartsarealsowarmed.（在帮助弱者的过程中，我们自己的内心也会被温暖。）Sometimes,thesmallestvoicecanleadtothegreatestdiscoveryoflove.（有时，最微弱的声音能带来最伟大的爱的发现。）写作示范一：Paragraph1:

Shegrabbedtheflashlightandrushedtothehayloft.Thebeamoflightcutthroughthedarknessassheclimbedthesteps.Shestartedmovingthesmallerbales,onebyone,herheartpounding.Shecalledsoftly,“Here,kitty,kitty.”Butallsheheardwastherustlingofthehay.Theflashlight'slightseemedtofadeinthevastnessoftheloft.Shepushedon,determinednottogiveup,evenassweatbeadedonherforehead.Paragraph2:

ThankstoBriggs’shelp,thelastheavybalewasmoved,revealingatiny,frightenedkitten.Itsfurwasmattedanditcoweredinthecorner.Callie'sheartmeltedinstantly.Shescoopeditupgently,whisperingsoothingwords.BriggslookedatthekitteninamazementandthenatCalliewithahintofguilt.“I'msorryIdidn'tbelieveyou,”hesaid.Calliejustsmiled.Theycarriedthekittenbacktothehouse,andwhentheytoldtheirdad,hewasbothsurprisedandproudofCallie'sperseverance.写作示范二：Paragraph1:

Shegrabbedtheflashlightandrushedtothehayloft.Onceinside,sheshonethelightaround,theshadowsdancingonthewalls.Shesearchedcarefully,herearsstrainingforthemeow.Shegotonherkneesandpeeredunderthebales,buttherewasnosignofthekitten.Thehayloftwasfilledwiththesmellofdriedgrassandthefaintechoofherownmovements.Shebegantofeelabitdiscouragedbutkeptgoing.Paragraph2:

ThankstoBriggs’shelp,thelastheavybalewasmoved,revealingatiny,frightenedkitten.Itblinkeditsbigeyesinthesuddenlight.Calliegaspedwithdelightandcarefullypickeditup.Thekittennuzzledintoherpalm.Briggschuckled,“Well,youwereright.”Calliehuggedthekittencloseandsaid,“Let'sgetyoucleanedupandsomefood.”Theytookthekitteninside,andCallie'sdadwasastonished.Heapologizedfornotbelievingher,andCalliesaiditdidn'tmatter.Now,allthatmatteredwastakingcareofthelittlerescuedlife.【答案】Onepossibleversion:Shegrabbedtheflashlightandrushedtothehayloft.Herheartpoundedasshequietlyenteredandaimedtheflashlighttowardsthehayloft.Callieclimbedupthestepsandthencrawledtowardsthehaybalestowhereshe’dheardthecry.“Areyouinthere?”shecalled.Andthereitwasagain-afaint,desperatemeowbehindthebales!Determinedtofindthesource,shebegantomovethehaybales,which,however,weretooheavyforhertolift.Justwhenshewasataloss,she