（高考英语作文炼句）第66篇译文老师笔记

PAGEPAGE11.展现诚实正直和责任感的公司更容易吸引那些有眼光的求职者.因此,这些公司能够从范围更广的潜在雇员中挑选出最具有才能的员工,这些员工拥有的技能可以进一步提升公司的利润.Companiesthatdemonstrateintegrityandresponsibilityaremore

appealingto

(1.对……有吸引力)discriminating

(2.有眼光的)jobseekers.Therefore,suchfirmswillbeabletochoosefrom

awiderrangeof

(3.范围更广的)prospectiveemployeesandthusselectthemosttalentedindividualswiththeskillsneededtofurtherenhancecorporateprofits.

1-对……有吸引力appealingtosb

词典释义：appealing[ə'pi：.lɪŋ]

adjective

■attractiveorinteresting

有吸引力的;有感染力的;有魅力的;令人感兴趣的

•Theideaofnothavingtogetupearlyeverymorningisrather

appealing

(to

me).每天不用早起,这(对我)很有吸引力.•Hehadanicesmileandan

appealing

personality.他的微笑非常迷人,个性也充满魅力.

外刊例句：Thedeathsofseveralunarmedblackmenatthehandsofpoliceofficersandtheensuingbacklashseemtohavemadepoliceworklessappealing.

()几位手无寸铁的黑人死在了警察手上,这事随后引发了民众抗议,在此影响下,警察工作更加令人不感兴趣了.

替换表达：attractive

tosb

2-有眼光的discriminating

词典释义：discriminating1.ADJ-GRADED能被表示程度的副词或介词词组修饰的形容词

有识别力的;有鉴赏力的;敏锐的

Someone

whois

discriminating

hastheabilitytorecognizethingsthatareofgoodquality.•More

discriminating

visitorsnowtendtoshunthearea.更有鉴别力的游客现在往往避开该地区.

外刊例句：Retailersfeelthepinchas

discriminating

shoppersshowtheirincreasingpower.()因为眼光独到的顾客影响力越来越大,零售商日渐手头拮据.

替换表达：discerning

3-范围更广的awiderrangeof

词典释义：range

●●●●○1.N-COUNT可数名词

(同类事物的)一系列,一连串

A

rangeof

thingsisanumberofdifferentthingsofthesamegeneralkind.•Awide

range

ofcoloursandpatternsareavailable...各种颜色和样式都有.

•Thetwomendiscusseda

range

ofissues...那两个人讨论了一系列问题.

•The

range

includeschestsofdrawers,tablesandwardrobes.该系列包括五斗柜、桌子和衣橱.

外刊例句：Thegovernmentclaimstowant

awiderrangeof

peopletocontributetoitspolicy-making.Butitsreluctancetopaythemstandsintheway.()政府声称希望更多群众参与到政策制定中,不过它却不愿支付他们钱,这就阻碍了人们的参与.

替换表达：a

broaderrangeofsomething

学生错误表达：awiderscopeof点评：scope是指"(学科、活动、书籍等的)范围”,例如：Afulldiscussionofthatissueisbeyondthescopeofthisbook.对那个问题进行全方位的讨论不在本书范围之内.不可以用scope来指"人”.

Therefore,suchfirmswillbeabletochoosefromawiderrangeofprospectiveemployeesandthusselectthemosttalentedindividualswiththeskillsneededtofurtherenhancecorporateprofits.

[分析]本句的主干是suchfirmswillbeabletochoosefromawiderrangeofprospectiveemployeesandthusselectthemosttalentedindividuals,其中,主语是suchfirms,谓语有两个,分别是willbeabletochoosefrom和(willbeableto)select,它们的宾语分别是awiderrangeofprospectiveemployees和themosttalentedindividuals,在第二个宾语之后是一个介词短语withtheskillsneededtofurtherenhancecorporateprofits作定语,修饰individuals,而在该介词短语中,过去分词短语neededtofurtherenhancecorporateprofits作定语,修饰theskills.

2.我们必须要对自己的人身安全、心理健康和工作负责.不然就会与我们的求生本能背道而驰,而且会限制我们关爱亲友的能力.Wemusttakeresponsibilityforourownphysicalsafety,

emotionalwell-being

(1.心理健康)andprofessionallife.Doingotherwisewouldnotonly

runcounterto

(2.与……背道而驰)our

survivalinstincts(3.求生本能),butalsoprecludeourabilitytocareforfriendsandlovedones.

1-心理健康emotionalwell-being

词典释义：

well-being[ˌwel'bi：.ɪŋ]

(also

wellbeing)

noun

uncountable

■thestateoffeelinghealthyandhappy

幸福;安康

•Peopledoingyogabenefitfromanincreasedfeelingof

well-being.练瑜伽的人内心的幸福感会不断增强.

外刊例句：Aleadingprivateschoolheadteacheryesterdaywarnedofthe"disastrousimpact"ofmarriagebreakdownonchildren'seducationand

emotionalwell-being,asheurgedsocietytoreverseits"selfishandself-indulgentattitudes".

()一所顶尖私立学校校长昨天向人们警告了婚姻破裂对于儿童学业和心理健康的毁灭性影响,并呼吁社会成员要扭转其"自私自利、自顾自己的人生态度”.

替换表达：psychological/mental

well-being

2-与……背道而驰runcounterto

词典释义：runcountertosthadverb

~tosth

intheoppositedirectiontosth;inoppositiontosth

逆向地;相反地;反对地：

Thegovernment'splans

runcounter

toagreedEuropeanpolicyonthisissue.

政府的计划违反了有关这个问题已协商好的欧洲政策.

外刊例句：Buttheconsequencesoften

runcounterto

popularpreferences：theFrenchmightfindthemselvesbarredfromsupportingaFrench-languagefilmindustry,forexample.

()不过结果却往往与大众偏好相反：例如,法国可能发现自己无法支持法语电影公司.

替换表达：beagainst/becontraryto

3-survivalinstincts求生本能

词典释义：

instinct['ɪn.stɪŋkt]

noun

countable

or

uncountable

■thewaypeopleoranimalsnaturallyreactorbehave,withouthavingtothinkorlearnaboutit

本能,直觉

•Allhis

instincts

toldhimtostaynearthecarandwaitforhelp.他的直觉告诉他要留在车旁、等待救援.•[+

to

infinitive]Her

first

instinct

was

to

run.她的第一反应是逃跑.•Itis

instinct

thattellsthebirdswhentobegintheirmigration.是本能让鸟类知道何时开始迁徙.•figurative

Bobseemsto

have

an

instinct

for

(=isnaturallygoodat)knowingwhichproductswillsell.鲍勃好像能凭直觉知道哪些产品有销路.

外刊例句：MrSalehhasabetterflairfortheatricsthanmostoftheregion'sotherrulers-for-life,buttheir

survivalinstincts

arejustaskeen.

()萨利赫可能比该地区的其他终生统治者更能以夸张行为引人瞩目,不过他们的求生本能都是那么强烈.

3.虽然拥有大量的财富并不是成功的前提,但这并不意味着财富和成功不能共存.比尔盖茨和沃伦巴菲特都是亿万富商,他们不仅通过公正、合法的手段创造了财富,而且拥有良好的人际关系,对他们所从事的事业充满激情.Althoughhavingalargefortuneisnot

aprerequisitefor

(1.……的前提)beingsuccessful,thisdoesnotmeanthatwealthandsuccesscannotcoexist.BillGatesandWarrenBuffettareallbillionairebusinessmenwhonotonlyhavemadetheirfortunes

throughfairandlegitimatemeans(2.通过公正、合法的手段),butalsoenjoygoodrelationshipswithothersandhaveapassionfortheendeavorsinwhichthey

partake(3.从事、参与).

1-……的前提aprerequisitefor

词典释义：prerequisite[ˌpri：'rek.wɪ.zɪt]

formal

noun

countable

■somethingwhichmustexistorhappenbeforesomethingelsecanexistorhappen

先决条件,前提,必备条件

•Passingawrittenexamisa

prerequisite

fortakingtheadvancedcourse.通过笔试是学习进阶课程的前提.•Publicsupportisa

prerequisite

for/to

thesuccessofthisproject.大众支持是这一计划取得成功的必备条件.•Theyhadtoagreetocertainconditionsasa

prerequisite

of

being

lentthemoney.他们不得不同意一些条件才能借到钱.

外刊例句：Thatis

aprerequisitefor

anysortofengagementandanyhopeoffuturesales.()未来可否销售,所有参与类型都以此为前提.

替换表达：precondition

学生错误表达：thepremiseof点评：premise是指声明、假设等成立的前提,例如：Theideathatthereislifeonotherplanetsisthecentralpremiseofthenovel.其他星球存在生命这一观点是这部小说的主要前提.它不可以用来指做成某事的前提条件.

2-通过公正、合法的手段throughfairandlegitimatemeans

词典释义：legitimateUK

[lə'dʒɪt.ɪ.mət]

US

[-'dʒɪtˌ-]

adjective

ADVANCED

■allowedbylaw

合法的,正当的,法律允许的

•Thearmymustgivepowerbacktothe

legitimate

government.军队必须将权力交还给合法政府.

ADVANCED

■reasonableandacceptable

合理的,可接受的,得到认可的

•Heclaimedthattherestaurantbillwasa

legitimate

businessexpense.他声称饭店帐单是一笔合理的业务开支.

means[mi：nz]

pluralnoun

METHOD

方法

IMPROVER

■amethodorwayofdoingsomething

方法,手段

•Theyhadno

means

of

communication.他们没有通讯方法.•Weneedtofindsomeother

means

of

transportation.我们需要找其他交通工具了.•Wemustuseevery

means

atourdisposal.我们必须把我们所能采用的各种方法都用上.•Shetriedtoexplain

bymeans

of

signlanguage.她试图用手语来解释.•Thereisno

means

of

tracingthedebtatall.根本无法追查这笔债.•Thefamily

had

no

means

of

support(=wayofgettingmoney).这家人没有收入来源.

外刊例句：Forexample,astatementthatJapantookpossessionofKoreain1910by

legitimatemeans

nowreadsthatitwasannexedbyforce.

()例如,关于日本在1910年以合法途径夺得朝鲜统治权的声明,现在读起来就是：日本武力侵略了朝鲜.

3-从事、参与partake

词典释义：partake

UK

[pɑ：'teɪk]

US

[pɑ：r-]

(partook,partaken)

verb

intransitive

TAKEPART

参与old-fashionedor

formal

■tobecomeinvolvedwithortakepartinsomething

参加,参与

•Shewashappyto

partake

in

thefestivities.她很乐意参加庆祝活动.

外刊例句：However,thepublic'schanceto

partake

inthepresidentialproducemaniamayfacesomeoppositionfromcommuters.

()然而,公众有机会参与到总统选举狂潮,但这可能会迎来一些路人的反对声音.

替换表达：pursue

4.鉴于从过去的错误中汲取经验教训对于我们的日常生活很有价值,我们要努力做到对自己诚实并磨练我们的分析和规划能力,这一点至关重要.虽然这些能力并不能让我们永不犯错,但它们结合在一起可以帮助我们避免犯相同的错误,让我们在通往成功的道路上稳步前行.Giventhattheabilitytolearnfrompastmistakescanproveinvaluableinoureverydaylives,itisimportantthatwestrivetobehonestwithourselvesand

honeouranalyticalandplanningskills(1.磨练我们的分析和规划能力).Whilethesequalitiescannotmakeus

infallible(2.永不犯错的),theircombinationcanhelpustoavoidmakingthesamemistake,andkeepus

movingsteadilyforward

(3.稳步前行)onthepathtosuccess.

1-磨练我们的分析和规划能力honeouranalyticalandplanningskills

词典释义：

analyticalUK

[ˌæn.ə'lɪt.ɪ.kəl]

US

[-'lɪtˌ-]

(formal

analytic)

adjective

■examiningorlikingtoexaminethingsverycarefully

分析的;善于分析的

•Hehasavery

analytical

mind.他善于分析问题.•Somestudentshaveamore

analytical

approach

tolearning.有些学生的学习方法更具分析性.

外刊例句：Candidateswithmanagementconsultancybackgroundsoftenfindthattheirfirststepintoacorporateenvironmentisinastrategy,businessreengineeringorin-housecorporatefinancerole,exploitingthestrong

analyticalandplanningskills

thathavebeenbuilt.

()具行政管理咨询背景的候选人常常发现,他们多以策略、产业重组或内部公司财政角色来进入公司,能运用到其原来已掌握的高超分析规划能力.

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